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Serene with Serenity
A silent morning
Before the sun rays blast
lone dew falling
down to the lake water
ripples that grow
nudging water lilies
a frog that stares
without a croak
serenity
rose flower nodding
to gentle zephyr’s whisper
a butterfly that passes
pauses for a kiss
a glow worm curled
under a spotted toadstool
a leaf falling down
a caterpillar on a leaf
a gentle coo of pigeons
sighing wind
serenity
Serene
I sit
Watching serenity.
Before the sun rays blast
lone dew falling
down to the lake water
ripples that grow
nudging water lilies
a frog that stares
without a croak
serenity
rose flower nodding
to gentle zephyr’s whisper
a butterfly that passes
pauses for a kiss
a glow worm curled
under a spotted toadstool
a leaf falling down
a caterpillar on a leaf
a gentle coo of pigeons
sighing wind
serenity
Serene
I sit
Watching serenity.
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15th Aug 2013 10:40am
Re: Serene with Serenity
15th Aug 2013 11:47am
Serene indeed Grace, beautiful imagery and write.
All the best in the comp.
All the best in the comp.
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15th Aug 2013 11:52am
Re: Serene with Serenity
Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 12:01pm
You have made serenity in just reading this poem.
Thank you for a serene read.
Good luck in the comp!
Thank you for a serene read.
Good luck in the comp!
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re: Re: Serene with Serenity
15th Aug 2013 2:43pm
Re: Serene with Serenity
15th Aug 2013 3:39pm
Ah yes My dear grace your signature is all over this I can almost see you serenely sitting in this piece.
Red
Red
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15th Aug 2013 3:55pm
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15th Aug 2013 4:32pm
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16th Aug 2013 00:24am
Re: Serene with Serenity
15th Aug 2013 6:37pm
So very Beautiful Dear Grace-Indeed works like this are truly Masterful!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
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re: Re: Serene with Serenity
16th Aug 2013 00:25am
Re: Serene with Serenity
17th Aug 2013 4:01am
You crafted a poem with mental visuals for the senses. You are so very good at this depiction of your surroundings in nature. I almost felt like I was there.
Much love
G
Much love
G
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17th Aug 2013 8:27am