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Ease of Eve.
Calm the night comes
She covers me so, delicate
soft, within quilted throw
do we take what it knows
call it knowledge, form a prose
these that tickle dance fancy
well...
They the night call owned
I breathe deeply serene
several swathed settled secrets
Bring the ease and eaves to sentries
while Wilde walks to heaven
with child's eyes, singing
never truer, has smiles adorned
the blank, making faceless
a thing of remain, gifts
is what we call this, lifted
into spirit, with energy in glisten
A night grows darker, still
but alight inside, candled
upon the sill, as I gaze
out my window, happily
to see, faces upon tomorrows
friends upon the eve
in eaves of our existence
we gather as we leave
creating paintings
Others breathe
She covers me so, delicate
soft, within quilted throw
do we take what it knows
call it knowledge, form a prose
these that tickle dance fancy
well...
They the night call owned
I breathe deeply serene
several swathed settled secrets
Bring the ease and eaves to sentries
while Wilde walks to heaven
with child's eyes, singing
never truer, has smiles adorned
the blank, making faceless
a thing of remain, gifts
is what we call this, lifted
into spirit, with energy in glisten
A night grows darker, still
but alight inside, candled
upon the sill, as I gaze
out my window, happily
to see, faces upon tomorrows
friends upon the eve
in eaves of our existence
we gather as we leave
creating paintings
Others breathe
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Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 2:42pm
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29th Apr 2013 4:07pm
Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 4:17pm
Beautiful! I love the first and last stanza the most. An exquisite piece!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 4:36pm
Thank You Dear Red always appreciate Your comments:)
Twas a quick write waking in the middle of the night to try to lull the comfort back:)
Twas a quick write waking in the middle of the night to try to lull the comfort back:)
Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 4:45pm
You're dotted around everywhere on my
reading list and when I need a little bit
of 'uplifting' I go through them.
Your imagery is breath-taking and of a
strength that I could only dream of writing
with.
I would quote my favorite bit,
but I can't choose one.
Very well written- as always- Soul :)
reading list and when I need a little bit
of 'uplifting' I go through them.
Your imagery is breath-taking and of a
strength that I could only dream of writing
with.
I would quote my favorite bit,
but I can't choose one.
Very well written- as always- Soul :)
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 6:26pm
:) You are TOO GENEROUS AND TOO KIND Dear Scribbler and humble me so!!!
I am Astounded and grateful You like my paltry writes!!!
I am Astounded and grateful You like my paltry writes!!!
Re: Ease of Eve.
Anonymous
29th Apr 2013 6:21pm
A very beautiful write that evokes soul....strider
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 6:28pm
Thank You Strider, I'm humbled!!!
Always appreciate the read Kind Sir!!!
Always appreciate the read Kind Sir!!!
Re: Ease of Eve.
29th Apr 2013 6:26pm
this is such a serene write Soul..so very lovely and delicately woven..thank you..peace Crim :)
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29th Apr 2013 6:29pm
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Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 00:26am
I am assuming the reference to Wilde is Oscar and not Kim. :) There is wonderful, subtle depiction of nature's joys which makes this piece for me.
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30th Apr 2013 2:13am
Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 00:30am
Soul, what a wonderful beautiful visual... a tapestry of poetic vision woven from your pen
Thank you for sharing
much love
G
Thank you for sharing
much love
G
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 2:15am
Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 4:35am
YOU MY FRIEND HAVE A REMARKABLE WAY WITH WORDS...THIS WAS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL
FIRE
FIRE
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 4:40am
HA!!!! Caught Ya!!! tit for tat Girly-Q I wuzza jus visiting YOU!!! Great Minds Dear Fire!!!
Thank You for such Kind words--Deeply Humbled
Thank You for such Kind words--Deeply Humbled
Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 6:52am
Sometimes your work is indescribable!
You're just that AMAZING, Soul!
This was AWESOME! :)
You're just that AMAZING, Soul!
This was AWESOME! :)
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 2:04pm
Awwww You Bless me with such kind words Dear Rain--Thank You is not deep enough!!!
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Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 9:43am
absolutely love this!!! so many great lines-I just have to say it's ALL great :-)
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re: Re: Ease of Eve.
30th Apr 2013 2:07pm
Awwww that Means Mucho Much coming from You Dear Miki!!!
I'm Humbled by Your kind words!!!
I'm Humbled by Your kind words!!!
Re: Ease of Eve.
1st May 2013 6:43am
You Sir are a conjurer of words. Soul the sorcerer casting spells upon us. Very much enjoyed thanks mate.
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1st May 2013 2:06pm