Poetry competition CLOSED 25th November 2019 5:22pm
WINNER
Ely (E.A.Rothwell)
Ely (E.A.Rothwell)
RUNNER-UP:
summultima
why do people go to war?
Life’s an Atom Eternal: battlefield of buzzing electrons… (warringly captured) unto "Om” nucleus liberations
life's
an eclipsingly closing in
coll(i/u)sive stage- bulging
profusive in discordant
no(d/t)es of tangled
deceitful strings.... still
puppeteering
us- inching
innards
unto
punctured pa(u)pered
posturelessly dissolving
destinies.
“NOW..
…ARISE. AWAKE. STOP NOT”
- rings inner warring
reinforces
(re)birthing: the
volcanic dawning
suns
-DARING WARRING AVATAR
“Liberate from Fears
Know the Contempt & Injustice meted out
Rise to the ace of mutinous Revolution
Bear, Raise the Weapon of it all
As if you bare it All
In the raging face of War”
the third eye
Om Shiva Om
raging red
(s/r)oaring fire
forever high
-THEM. NEUTRALISE
whitens...
an ashen clad
liberation
p.s: condensed version of posted poem titled -'3 Song of The WAR CRIES, in quite Red Accentual FireBlood (Re)Births (with timeless excerpts of Bhagavad Gita)'
life's
an eclipsingly closing in
coll(i/u)sive stage- bulging
profusive in discordant
no(d/t)es of tangled
deceitful strings.... still
puppeteering
us- inching
innards
unto
punctured pa(u)pered
posturelessly dissolving
destinies.
“NOW..
…ARISE. AWAKE. STOP NOT”
- rings inner warring
reinforces
(re)birthing: the
volcanic dawning
suns
-DARING WARRING AVATAR
“Liberate from Fears
Know the Contempt & Injustice meted out
Rise to the ace of mutinous Revolution
Bear, Raise the Weapon of it all
As if you bare it All
In the raging face of War”
the third eye
Om Shiva Om
raging red
(s/r)oaring fire
forever high
-THEM. NEUTRALISE
whitens...
an ashen clad
liberation
p.s: condensed version of posted poem titled -'3 Song of The WAR CRIES, in quite Red Accentual FireBlood (Re)Births (with timeless excerpts of Bhagavad Gita)'
War
Why do people go to war?
Hell if I know, it's all the
same old mess, money
and women, oil and
whatever else there is to
fight over these days. As
long as I'm left off the
bloodshed's list I can live
with whatever the
circumstances are. I have
enough problems to worry
about these days than what
a few certain individuals are
trying to claim these days. I
guess I'm the same way, I'll
go to war over a woman
any day of the week, but it
all depends on the girl I
suppose.
Why do people go to war?
Hell if I know, it's all the
same old mess, money
and women, oil and
whatever else there is to
fight over these days. As
long as I'm left off the
bloodshed's list I can live
with whatever the
circumstances are. I have
enough problems to worry
about these days than what
a few certain individuals are
trying to claim these days. I
guess I'm the same way, I'll
go to war over a woman
any day of the week, but it
all depends on the girl I
suppose.
Related submission no longer exists.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/365675-november-25-2019/
I understand the rules, simple enough for a 5 year old to understand. I did use some words not in every 5 year olds vocabulary but I really wanted to enter because I liked the finished product. Thanks
I understand the rules, simple enough for a 5 year old to understand. I did use some words not in every 5 year olds vocabulary but I really wanted to enter because I liked the finished product. Thanks
war on earth
“And there was war in heaven. Michael and His angels fought against the dragon,
and the dragon and his angels fought back. But he was not strong enough,
and they lost their place in heaven.” – Revelation 12:7, 8 NIV
The devil started war on earth
When Eve and Adam ate the fruit.
That serpent did not tell the truth:
He wanted them to doubt God’s worth.
Though Adam tried to blame Miss Eve,
The two had disobeyed God’s rule.
Their lives could not again be cool,
For they had sadly been deceived.
Because of Satan’s big, fat lie,
The pair was from the Garden sent
Till they were ready to repent:
The soul that sins shall surely die!
Although the sin that Adam did
Distresses people everywhere,
Forgiveness waits for those who hear:
Do not the things that God forbids!
© Copyright 2019 November 25
♫
and the dragon and his angels fought back. But he was not strong enough,
and they lost their place in heaven.” – Revelation 12:7, 8 NIV
The devil started war on earth
When Eve and Adam ate the fruit.
That serpent did not tell the truth:
He wanted them to doubt God’s worth.
Though Adam tried to blame Miss Eve,
The two had disobeyed God’s rule.
Their lives could not again be cool,
For they had sadly been deceived.
Because of Satan’s big, fat lie,
The pair was from the Garden sent
Till they were ready to repent:
The soul that sins shall surely die!
Although the sin that Adam did
Distresses people everywhere,
Forgiveness waits for those who hear:
Do not the things that God forbids!
© Copyright 2019 November 25
♫
Written by cabcool
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Apples and Oranges
What is war?
Well, it's like an Oreo
and chocolate chip cookie
arguing over whose chocolate tastes better
because they're different;
or, an apple and orange
fighting for control
of the fruit bowl
But why?
Because each one thinks
they’re the fruitiest of the lot
Are they?
Tell me what you think
I think they make me sad
‘cause I like them all so much
See how smart you are?!
Can I have a banana now?
~
Well, it's like an Oreo
and chocolate chip cookie
arguing over whose chocolate tastes better
because they're different;
or, an apple and orange
fighting for control
of the fruit bowl
But why?
Because each one thinks
they’re the fruitiest of the lot
Are they?
Tell me what you think
I think they make me sad
‘cause I like them all so much
See how smart you are?!
Can I have a banana now?
~
Written by Ahavati
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
JohnnyBlaze, AspergerPoet56, monkeyman, Sky_dancer, nutbuster, Ahavati, inechoingsilence, Poetic_Strength, Tallen, Trouble_Loves_Me, butters, Kingvirky, Kinkpoet, sunsettown, Indie, Marks, PoetsRevenge, Ely, Stoney223, snugglebuck, alcedoathis
Thank you to the following members for voting:
JohnnyBlaze, AspergerPoet56, monkeyman, Sky_dancer, nutbuster, Ahavati, inechoingsilence, Poetic_Strength, Tallen, Trouble_Loves_Me, butters, Kingvirky, Kinkpoet, sunsettown, Indie, Marks, PoetsRevenge, Ely, Stoney223, snugglebuck, alcedoathis
congratz Ely (E.A.Rothwell) for the win, would love to thank host adored poet friend cold_fusion (hope you are doing well dear, wishing health & peace) for a timely & thoughtful comp. ... striking reads all throughout by everyone who entered.. thanks to you lovely DUs who voted & Web Mistress for the results. glad to be mentioned as runner-up. Light & Love ev DUz 
Thank you, fuze (cold fusion) for holding this comp...and thanks to all who read and voted...
and last of all, thank you to all the things others who participated and made the contest even more worthwhile... many hugs for you all...Ely
and last of all, thank you to all the things others who participated and made the contest even more worthwhile... many hugs for you all...Ely
