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Savage daughter
Anne-Ri909
Joined 5th Aug 2023
Forum Posts: 3
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 3
Poetry Contest Description
write to the given song and theme
Karen Kahan, also known as Wyndreth Berginsdottir, wrote this song in the 1990s, inspired by her Norse heritage and Heathenry (Norse/Germanic paganism)
Original lyrics
Savage Daughter
I am my mother's savage daughter
The one who runs barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
I am my mother's savage daughter
I will not cut my hair
I will not lower my voice
My mother's child is a savage
She looks for her omens in the colors of stones
In the faces of cats, in the falling of feathers
In the dancing of fire
In the curve of old bones
I am my mother's savage daughter
The one who runs barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
I am my mother's savage daughter
I will not cut my hair
I will not lower my voice
My mother's child dances in darkness
She sings heathen songs
By the light of the moon
And watches the stars and renames the planets
And dreams she can reach them
With a song and a broom
I am my mother's savage daughter
The one who runs barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
I am my mother's savage daughter
I will not cut my hair
I will not lower my voice
We are all brought forth out of darkness
Into this world, through blood and through pain
And deep in our bones, the old songs are waking
So sing them with voices of thunder and rain
We are our mother's savage daughters
The ones who run barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
We are our mother's savage daughters
We will not cut our hair
We will not lower our voice
We are our mother's savage daughters
The ones who run barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
We are our mother's savage daughters
We will not cut our hair
We will not lower our voice
We are our mother's savage daughters
The ones who run barefoot
Cursing sharp stones
We are our mother's savage daughters
We will not cut our hair
We will not lower our voice
my current favorite version is by Ekaterina Shelehova
you will need to find the song yourself because I can not post the link yet
due to the status\rules of being a new member
one poem per poet
minimum of 50 words
no erotica
title your works
new writes only
get your savage boots on
enjoy
Jordan
D.O.C.
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D.O.C.
Thought Provoker
13
Joined 4th May 2022Forum Posts: 245
The Former Heir Apparent
"Breast cancer is the second leading cause of cancer death in mothers --
as well as daughters."
-- a savage ethics
unforgivable
*
Here all your fat
full stored below
in puckered buttocks
bright-scarred belly
dimpled hips and thighs
though eons past
the blades disposed of
both your mammaries
sliced off
garbaged
time enough before my birth
my angel ribbon pin a princess Pepto Bismol pink
the yard sale to a buck translated
on my being resurrected not
from off the slab
to walk and
thrive.
You dead old pear --
up till my own death
secreted in the lump of frog-eyed rot
I used to peel your skin
oh
so
slow.
as well as daughters."
-- a savage ethics
unforgivable
*
Here all your fat
full stored below
in puckered buttocks
bright-scarred belly
dimpled hips and thighs
though eons past
the blades disposed of
both your mammaries
sliced off
garbaged
time enough before my birth
my angel ribbon pin a princess Pepto Bismol pink
the yard sale to a buck translated
on my being resurrected not
from off the slab
to walk and
thrive.
You dead old pear --
up till my own death
secreted in the lump of frog-eyed rot
I used to peel your skin
oh
so
slow.
Written by Jordan
(D.O.C.)
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Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17001
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17001
I am Dryad
a child of the earth
a flower of the soil
a voice of the air
a gossamer
breathing air
an amoeba
no reflections
nothing
I am Dryad
I exist not.
a flower of the soil
a voice of the air
a gossamer
breathing air
an amoeba
no reflections
nothing
I am Dryad
I exist not.
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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SageRoyale
Sage R.
Joined 15th Nov 2021
Forum Posts: 5
Sage R.
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 5
i have no cry.
my eyes, they speak
of a smile unwavering
for i know what you don't
i have no cry.
through all my chittering
of a land that i love
that i own and you don't
i have no cry.
the sun is my mother
she bathes and burns me
i see her, you won't
i have no cry.
one day i will shine
like my mother alive
bland clouds like you don't
i have no cry.
i need not to speak
of my prideful freedom
that i have and you don't
i have no cry.
battle cries for naught
when your enemy is deaf
i hear it, you won't
i have no cry.
my eyes, they speak
of a smile unwavering
for i know what you don't
i have no cry.
through all my chittering
of a land that i love
that i own and you don't
i have no cry.
the sun is my mother
she bathes and burns me
i see her, you won't
i have no cry.
one day i will shine
like my mother alive
bland clouds like you don't
i have no cry.
i need not to speak
of my prideful freedom
that i have and you don't
i have no cry.
battle cries for naught
when your enemy is deaf
i hear it, you won't
i have no cry.
Anonymous
Medinda
Forum Posts: 93
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 22nd Aug 2018Forum Posts: 93
My Savage Daughter
She was my first born
The one that I looked upon
With a perfect apgar score
No one else before
Was as good as her
Named after my
Grandmother
Just perfect
In every way
That could be
She was better than me
And I thanked God
That she wouldn't be
Anything like me
And I still believe
That she's better than me
With her Bachelor's degree
And her husband who seems
To love her
More than I ever could
More than her step dad
Ever would
Be able to
Because we weren't good
Enough for her
But that's okay
Because someday
She will see and
She'll understand
That we did everything
That we could
That we tried and
That that's not a lie
And we loved her
More than anything
That we could ever buy
I just hope she sees
The truth
Someday
The one that I looked upon
With a perfect apgar score
No one else before
Was as good as her
Named after my
Grandmother
Just perfect
In every way
That could be
She was better than me
And I thanked God
That she wouldn't be
Anything like me
And I still believe
That she's better than me
With her Bachelor's degree
And her husband who seems
To love her
More than I ever could
More than her step dad
Ever would
Be able to
Because we weren't good
Enough for her
But that's okay
Because someday
She will see and
She'll understand
That we did everything
That we could
That we tried and
That that's not a lie
And we loved her
More than anything
That we could ever buy
I just hope she sees
The truth
Someday
Written by Medinda
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Kinkpoet
Forum Posts: 1069
Tyrant of Words
11
Joined 9th May 2019Forum Posts: 1069
Wild Child
seeking refuge evading no one in flickering light of smoldering hearth
dreaming in contrasting shadows
unshorn tresses adorned with twigs and leaves
words uttered without hush of whispers
prowling stalking beside tiger woman
partaking of feast shared with cougar and lynx
member of the pack neither alpha nor omega
energized revitalized by sunbeam caresses
elder trees display cryptic ciphers guided by
earthworm visions liberated by shadows embrace
confidently surfing atop earthquakes
feet warmed by earths molten fires
singing out with all her might fearless clarion
secrets abandoned
soaring in grass crafted spaceships
liberated amidst stars and attendant moons
assimilating earth mother’s occult message
living lusting yearning solving riddles of the rabbit hole
strident melody harmonizing with pulsatile rhythms
of creation
humming celestial rhapsodies speaking universal truths
sheltered by expansive sky
draped in rainbows cloaked in grassy verdant tones
iridescent as sister hummingbird steadfast as brother stone
guided by valiant father sun comprehending
existential cycles from joyful birth through dying breath
voice unrestrained essence unshackled
exposed vulnerable powerful
laid bare unashamed proclaiming crystal truths
shouting to devotees screaming twice to skeptics
unshadowed by fear
feral spirit shouting her thunderous reality:
i am gaia’s untamed offspring wild and free!
dreaming in contrasting shadows
unshorn tresses adorned with twigs and leaves
words uttered without hush of whispers
prowling stalking beside tiger woman
partaking of feast shared with cougar and lynx
member of the pack neither alpha nor omega
energized revitalized by sunbeam caresses
elder trees display cryptic ciphers guided by
earthworm visions liberated by shadows embrace
confidently surfing atop earthquakes
feet warmed by earths molten fires
singing out with all her might fearless clarion
secrets abandoned
soaring in grass crafted spaceships
liberated amidst stars and attendant moons
assimilating earth mother’s occult message
living lusting yearning solving riddles of the rabbit hole
strident melody harmonizing with pulsatile rhythms
of creation
humming celestial rhapsodies speaking universal truths
sheltered by expansive sky
draped in rainbows cloaked in grassy verdant tones
iridescent as sister hummingbird steadfast as brother stone
guided by valiant father sun comprehending
existential cycles from joyful birth through dying breath
voice unrestrained essence unshackled
exposed vulnerable powerful
laid bare unashamed proclaiming crystal truths
shouting to devotees screaming twice to skeptics
unshadowed by fear
feral spirit shouting her thunderous reality:
i am gaia’s untamed offspring wild and free!
Written by Kinkpoet
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Anne-Ri999
Forum Posts: 217
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 16th Aug 2023 Forum Posts: 217
This competition is also one that I initiated under my other profile, though I can not access this older profile anymore. I can not log in to this profile anymore so therefor I will not be able to comment or judge this competition.
Hereby i would like to thank all contestants so far for participating, really great entries from all fellow members!
Much gratitude to all
A\R
Hereby i would like to thank all contestants so far for participating, really great entries from all fellow members!
Much gratitude to all
A\R
slipalong
Forum Posts: 854
Dangerous Mind
43
Joined 1st Jan 2018Forum Posts: 854
A she progeny cursed
Erupts like a dormant gurgling spring
beds of hot coals cant burn her feet
a source, tumbling `or stones, advancing
beware, and best luck if you compete
Came from the womb, sense of menace forming
with the attitude of flaming hair
carrying a red triangle warning
"whatever- I don`t care"
Her life of lace and tattered rags
the morals were trampled
mysteries, the runes foretold, strewn from the muslin bag
no homespun Goddess, just a wild example
not held, or restrained
this wild mare paws the air
her mother wails with loud complaints
domesticity and lacking manners fair
That missing knitted bond
frustrated love spread with despair
comb cant unpick a ticking bomb
tread the path no others dare
Abandoned dance, torso and limbs
its origin follows any feckless whim
replica Josephine Baker dwells within
a cavorting mind, subconscious vim
A free spirit born to fight and wrestle
an aching wish, that never will subside
My she angel, witch or devil
the other me, lies deep inside
beds of hot coals cant burn her feet
a source, tumbling `or stones, advancing
beware, and best luck if you compete
Came from the womb, sense of menace forming
with the attitude of flaming hair
carrying a red triangle warning
"whatever- I don`t care"
Her life of lace and tattered rags
the morals were trampled
mysteries, the runes foretold, strewn from the muslin bag
no homespun Goddess, just a wild example
not held, or restrained
this wild mare paws the air
her mother wails with loud complaints
domesticity and lacking manners fair
That missing knitted bond
frustrated love spread with despair
comb cant unpick a ticking bomb
tread the path no others dare
Abandoned dance, torso and limbs
its origin follows any feckless whim
replica Josephine Baker dwells within
a cavorting mind, subconscious vim
A free spirit born to fight and wrestle
an aching wish, that never will subside
My she angel, witch or devil
the other me, lies deep inside
Written by slipalong
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