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Official DUP NAPOWRIMO (National Poetry Writing Month) 2017

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
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When GOD Responded

Heard no words 
read no text 
lived the life of recluse 
in the curtained darkness 
of the book 

Suddenly from a left side surprise 
the values reshaped 
and I heard my name called 

with tease and a small word of sleaze 

My first real prayer fell from my lips 

"Oh father, 
forgive me and see my faults 
if this is wrong 
and a thing, not to be done 
create a reason 
for her not to come 
hear my prayer" 

It was a hell-bent message that told 
of a bloke who had 
whose tradition fell 
but the fact of the matter 
the truth to be told 

My god arranged reason for her to be gone! 

And I sat in my darkness 
wishing to sing 
but then rather gave thanks 
from my heart to him 


"I'm loving angles instead" 

[!] 

10 -04 -2017

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
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^^ apologies ^^
Umm unexplained

whale
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SEVENTH PIECE

So better be silent than spout like a fool

And others will deny the truth
Just for the hell of it

I take this piece of silver
and return it to the romans
A disease of discourse

The truth or otherwise irrelevant
To speak no evil is the new radicalism

What words can describe the Word
Man can only see on what light alights
He can not hear what a dog can

What he says he sees becomes his truth
What vessel is this to discover the universe

What tool have we to say what we understand

To seek impose power on others because of the knowledge you've been given is evil
Service not Power

They will offer short cuts through a wilderness
Where they will rob you
Away from the path that had been made for you

It is not for man to say what is true or not true his logic hasn't  the capacity to discriminate
But his gut does

whale
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er...

SatansSperm
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Hoops

some people go for a walk in the park
others wear funny clothes I would never be caught dead in
try to hit a little ball into a tiny hole
for me I like to quiet my mind
by putting a 9.5 inch rubber ball
through a hoop
this game of urban ballet
performed on concrete
is my form of therapy
helps me to clear my mind
cleanse me of aggression
I crank up the boom-box
[ you need volume for this ]
& start with my personal favorite anthem
Cheech & Chong"s
"Basketball Jones"
& work on my groove
till I can tell just from the feel
of the ball off of my hand
that it is going in
I don't need to look
at the basket
I just listen for that swoosh
of the net
so thank you Dr. Naismith
for your little invention
has saved me countless
amounts of money
& time on a couch
helping to support
someones golf game


04092017

Ahavati
Tams
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JohnnyBlaze said:
PsychoticMastermind


LOLOL!!!!

Ahavati
Tams
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whale said:er...

LOL! We gotcha back, Brother!"

RevolutionAL said:^^ apologies ^^
Umm unexplained


LOL! We gotcha covered, Al! Carry on Revolutionizing!

MadameLavender
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April 9--Writer's Block and Nasal, Too

Few hours left before "goodnight",
with no ideas of what to write.

Perhaps I'll just gross-out, instead,
Dear Reader, with how to clear my head,
though not the stuck words, as you'll see,
but swollen sinus cavities.

Every spring's a sinus infection,
for years, as far as my recollection.

Cup of water, add some salt,
snorted, makes the swelling halt .

Perhaps, then, I can finally breathe
and unlike last night, get some sleep .

Ready, set, and here we go--
mucus, boogers, about to blow !

David_Macleod
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Twenty Two

I looked down at the packet
Took the aluminium foil strip
Ignoring the instruction leaflet
Who gives a fuck about side affects
Cant believe a fuckin word they say
The wise old doctor says what to take
Take two, three times a day
The orange capsules look like candy
Even I know all drugs are hard candy
Even when taken as instructed
I carefully snap two into my hand
Two capsules of orangey sunshine
The foil shines, twenty two left
I consider taking another two
I consider taking twenty four
Nobody would need to know
It would be my little secret
All washed down with spiced rum
A bacon sandwich and a cigarette
Would make the act complete
I try to think of reasons not to
But my mind is positively bankrupt
But despite drawing lines in the sand
I fail miserably, lacking courage
I have the courage to eat a bacon sandwich
I have the courage to drink a spiced rum
But not enough to take more than
The instructed number of capsules
The orange smiley sunshine ones
Twenty two still to go

LobodeSanPedro
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seedling

the sunflower 🌻 dropped a seed
as with all things from him

it was hardened with
speckled lashes
where he'd been beaten
his core and petals
withering each season

a drop of lavender
coats the seed
pulling it away from the scavengers
she is pure
and generous

the old blind sharecropper
cares for the seedling  
until she breaks free
Stretching to reach
the lullabies
of her mother

which way shall she grow
breaking sediment
and the concrete chorus of men
so she may sing
melodies
never heard
in the wild



DaisyGrace
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Ahavati
Tams
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DaisyGrace said:Autism....a tanka series
[...]
*****
Day 9. I know they aren't really tankas. I just stole the syllable count to help me get through today's poem.


Napo throws many bouys out to its swimmers, Grace. Grab whichever is closer and swim on!

mel44
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Sisters?

Here are my two children
One pretty, the other smart
Painful is the message
To a child’s heart

Feeling insufficient
Despite what side you’re on
Traumatic impression
An adolescences gone

Instead of being sisters
Rivals we became
Competing for attention
Always placing blame

A constant apprehension
Fostering of fears
Animosity developed
Carried through the years

Although we are now grown
Tensions do not budge
Regardless of my efforts
I sense a bitter grudge

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Ahavati said:

Napo throws many bouys out to its swimmers, Grace. Grab whichever is closer and swim on!

*moist eyes*
That's beautiful, Sage, I just had to say it here, I hope you don't mind.

DaisyGrace said:Autism....a tanka series
*****
Day 9. I know they aren't really tankas. I just stole the syllable count to help me get through today's poem.

Dear Grace, I've been a writer of the Tanka form for years, and let me say that if it's this poetic style that gets you by, you got your expressions across just fine.  I'm extremely close to families with autistic children of all ages up to 18 years, and they are all amazing in their dedication & strength.  My very best to you.  

Jade-Pandora
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April 10 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )

Sweet Tea

When lonesome home I have a cup of tea,
A gentle steaming cup to put me right.
I hear the mantle ticking of the clock
And watch Venetian sunrise' morning light.

The crack of day is empty in my hands
While warmth of vessel cradles tenderly.
I think of nothing in these empty notes,
And then I see him peeking in on me.

I know he's far away at work in thought;
Perhaps still tending his own cup of sweet,
Or pouring tanic acid from an urn
And touches lips to rim to think of me.

I live these times for when we phantom meet,
When morning wraps us in a gentle sweep.
A moment from when life begins to rise
While lovers sip from cups of amber steeped.



Venetian = blinds

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