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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
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Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:51pm
Yesterday 1:51pm
Vargary
07/30
Vargary
I don’t believe Stars sleep or even want to sleep
due to SUDDENLY being thrusted into this new
wonderment of light!
Yes, scientifically, sooner or later, much like our
earth’s sun, all stars get to forever rest.
Hooooooooooooowever,
Spiritually speaking, if new Angels can be born
why not a new star from an ended life on earth?
I wouldn’t want to be wasting my time
(there is NO TIME in the afterlife)
ceding into slumber. I’d become the adventurer
of my neo ethereal existence!
Might ever...
Vargary
I don’t believe Stars sleep or even want to sleep
due to SUDDENLY being thrusted into this new
wonderment of light!
Yes, scientifically, sooner or later, much like our
earth’s sun, all stars get to forever rest.
Hooooooooooooowever,
Spiritually speaking, if new Angels can be born
why not a new star from an ended life on earth?
I wouldn’t want to be wasting my time
(there is NO TIME in the afterlife)
ceding into slumber. I’d become the adventurer
of my neo ethereal existence!
Might ever...
#faith
#love
#spiritual #universe
#spiritual #universe
28 reads
4 Comments
Poeticking81
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 11:41am
2nd Apr 2025 11:41am
This poem is called A PLACE OF ONLY SMILES......
in our world there is....
light and darkness.....
smiles and tears
......joys and pain.....
and....
......fears and peace......
............
but there is another world......
.....a world.....that is different....
from this one.....
for in this world......
there is.....
....
only Light....
and
......only Smiles.....
.......
there is no pain....
........and no fears.......and no darkness.....
just Peace
........everywhere.....😊😊😊😊😊
....
and...
light and darkness.....
smiles and tears
......joys and pain.....
and....
......fears and peace......
............
but there is another world......
.....a world.....that is different....
from this one.....
for in this world......
there is.....
....
only Light....
and
......only Smiles.....
.......
there is no pain....
........and no fears.......and no darkness.....
just Peace
........everywhere.....😊😊😊😊😊
....
and...
#Christian
#God
#happiness
53 reads
0 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 5:17pm
1st Apr 2025 5:17pm
Journey to the Stars
We’re launching a journey to the stars:
a flight of imagination,
a pilgrimage of poetic memoirs,
a hullabaloo of creation.
No jet fuel, ego, or money required
to conquer the world’s gravity;
only thoughtful hearts and minds inspired
will gain us escape velocity.
We don’t carry weapons or millionaires
on this rocket from Underground –
just stories and words, rhythms and prayers,
until each of us is crowned.
We’re led by a loving, Eerie spark
on a path that’s uniquely ours:
to become the lights drowning out...
a flight of imagination,
a pilgrimage of poetic memoirs,
a hullabaloo of creation.
No jet fuel, ego, or money required
to conquer the world’s gravity;
only thoughtful hearts and minds inspired
will gain us escape velocity.
We don’t carry weapons or millionaires
on this rocket from Underground –
just stories and words, rhythms and prayers,
until each of us is crowned.
We’re led by a loving, Eerie spark
on a path that’s uniquely ours:
to become the lights drowning out...
#love
#support
#WritingPoetry
62 reads
8 Comments
LIFE4ME
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 11:22pm
23rd Mar 2025 11:22pm
Unrepentant Heart
Unrepentant heart
Seeks not life, and finds itself
Dead amongst the dead.
Seeks not life, and finds itself
Dead amongst the dead.
#Christian
#God
#spiritual
47 reads
0 Comments
LIFE4ME
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 7:11pm
23rd Mar 2025 7:11pm
A Warning To The Lost
Turn! Turn!
Turn from your wicked ways!
For I tell you, look up!
The time is near for the Lord's return.
Do not bury your head in the sand.
For if one does this,
I tell you, their body shall soon
join their head;
and their soul shall be tortured
by the fiery flames of hell
forever; never ceasing.
Turn!
But you say, "When the time arrives, then I will turn."
No! That time is now!
For death is lurking;
awaiting your last breath.
Death tells you, "Don't worry, you still have time to turn. ...
Turn from your wicked ways!
For I tell you, look up!
The time is near for the Lord's return.
Do not bury your head in the sand.
For if one does this,
I tell you, their body shall soon
join their head;
and their soul shall be tortured
by the fiery flames of hell
forever; never ceasing.
Turn!
But you say, "When the time arrives, then I will turn."
No! That time is now!
For death is lurking;
awaiting your last breath.
Death tells you, "Don't worry, you still have time to turn. ...
#Christian
#death
#God
#hell
#religion
59 reads
0 Comments
WilliamEdwardNight
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 2:17pm
23rd Mar 2025 2:17pm
There is nothing beyond the name
Jesus Christ
#love
58 reads
1 Comment
Connotation
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 00:49am
22nd Mar 2025 00:49am
I'm Awoken
Dropped commotion
Lots encoded
Fostered focus fathers no man
Got the potion
Spot your motion
Rock like oceans, rocks, and ozone
Swallow soma
Hops to load with
Common coping caught a coma
Bothered, goaded
Honored hocus
Problem pocus, pondered posing
Posture frozen
Gothic motive
Monster moment, Sodom spoken
Awful token
Drama joking
Jotted droning drawn exposes
Constant choking
Conscious omen
Offer broken thoughts, emotions ...
Lots encoded
Fostered focus fathers no man
Got the potion
Spot your motion
Rock like oceans, rocks, and ozone
Swallow soma
Hops to load with
Common coping caught a coma
Bothered, goaded
Honored hocus
Problem pocus, pondered posing
Posture frozen
Gothic motive
Monster moment, Sodom spoken
Awful token
Drama joking
Jotted droning drawn exposes
Constant choking
Conscious omen
Offer broken thoughts, emotions ...
#metaphor
#morality
#rap
#rhyming
#spiritual
129 reads
2 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 11:34pm
20th Mar 2025 11:34pm
Lonely Goddess
Lonely Goddess
Love is a gold medallion
so ancient it is a priceless
relic of a lost age
when magic reigned
like a forest queen
under a sunlit canopy
whose curtain of light
is her green gown
and her plaited tresses
shimmered dreamily
in the morning light
of a thousand centuries
as veils of raindrops
cloaked her secret eyes
in golden tears of moonlight
as night stars illumined her heart
like twinkling chakras
penetrating her 5 million pores
with soft embers
from distant galaxies
whose...
Love is a gold medallion
so ancient it is a priceless
relic of a lost age
when magic reigned
like a forest queen
under a sunlit canopy
whose curtain of light
is her green gown
and her plaited tresses
shimmered dreamily
in the morning light
of a thousand centuries
as veils of raindrops
cloaked her secret eyes
in golden tears of moonlight
as night stars illumined her heart
like twinkling chakras
penetrating her 5 million pores
with soft embers
from distant galaxies
whose...
#beauty
#nature
#sensual
#spiritual
#women
112 reads
0 Comments
LIFE4ME
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 4:12pm
16th Mar 2025 4:12pm
The Call Of The Father
The Father calls out, "My dear child, come to Me!
Let not death and destruction
seperate us.
Cry out to Me, and I will receive you back.
I have never left you nor forsaken you."
The call of the Father never ceases.
Let not death and destruction
seperate us.
Cry out to Me, and I will receive you back.
I have never left you nor forsaken you."
The call of the Father never ceases.
#Christian
#God
#love #spiritual
#love #spiritual
69 reads
1 Comment
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 9:31pm
14th Mar 2025 9:31pm
Mabon (and tinned apples)
The website told me to
"Get out in the garden"
but it might have to be
someone else's garden
because I don't have one
(unless you count weeds)
but I'm pretty sure harvesting
the last of someone else's
summer crops is illegal
so I won't be doing that
this year
Though if Mabon comes around
and I happen to be in an apocalypse
the Gods and I might need to have words
because I'm not prepared
and I'm sure crop theft
is absolutely acceptable
under those circumstances
just not...
"Get out in the garden"
but it might have to be
someone else's garden
because I don't have one
(unless you count weeds)
but I'm pretty sure harvesting
the last of someone else's
summer crops is illegal
so I won't be doing that
this year
Though if Mabon comes around
and I happen to be in an apocalypse
the Gods and I might need to have words
because I'm not prepared
and I'm sure crop theft
is absolutely acceptable
under those circumstances
just not...
#LifeCycle
#satirical
#spiritual
136 reads
6 Comments
Darkwitch3
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 8:06pm
14th Mar 2025 8:06pm
Evil
Evil isn’t always The
Prince of lies
king of corruption
The tempter
evil is the
soldier of obedience
sound of silence
Sickness of secrets
Goodness can’t just be
Thoughts and prayers
Spiritually sending love and hope
Sometimes goodness is
Tough love and
Hard truths
Sometimes it looks like
You accomplished nothing
That you made no ripples
Sometimes
Those ripples turn to waves
That will wash away the evil
Prince of lies
king of corruption
The tempter
evil is the
soldier of obedience
sound of silence
Sickness of secrets
Goodness can’t just be
Thoughts and prayers
Spiritually sending love and hope
Sometimes goodness is
Tough love and
Hard truths
Sometimes it looks like
You accomplished nothing
That you made no ripples
Sometimes
Those ripples turn to waves
That will wash away the evil
#evil
#morality
70 reads
1 Comment
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
19th Apr 2020 3:56pm
19th Apr 2020 3:56pm
Dubitable
(nineteen of 30 - Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2020)
unpolished
nascent
maybe even
a wee bit
persnickety
anxiously
unsettled –
a crystal
displaying
an aortal
path, flush
hot maybe
feverish
inside the
dream
waking
from metastasis
quintessenced
engulfed,
now within
a mind’s eye
(ajna)*
during
dawn
dusk
& twilight
(shshshshsh)
hush. . .
. . . awaits
an
unclouded
proclivous
prediction
of ...
unpolished
nascent
maybe even
a wee bit
persnickety
anxiously
unsettled –
a crystal
displaying
an aortal
path, flush
hot maybe
feverish
inside the
dream
waking
from metastasis
quintessenced
engulfed,
now within
a mind’s eye
(ajna)*
during
dawn
dusk
& twilight
(shshshshsh)
hush. . .
. . . awaits
an
unclouded
proclivous
prediction
of ...
#pagan
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#NaPoWriMo2020
535 reads
12 Comments
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