Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
9th Oct 2023 3:20am
9th Oct 2023 3:20am
I Am Light But Wake in Darkness
We don't dream cause we don't sleep
I peep into him briefly
And see
Yeah
He's like me
Rolling the sheets late at night
Hot
Cold
Sweat adds a spice
Old and ripe
Usually I hop in the shower
Sit and think in the bath
Hours
Beckon the sun
Eyelids lag as I cower
But I start my day with a jog and some jabs
The bag ripped
Some more tape I gotta add
Slip out of more sweat
Take another bath
Get a couple calls and texts
Before nine AM
Eat some leftover...
I peep into him briefly
And see
Yeah
He's like me
Rolling the sheets late at night
Hot
Cold
Sweat adds a spice
Old and ripe
Usually I hop in the shower
Sit and think in the bath
Hours
Beckon the sun
Eyelids lag as I cower
But I start my day with a jog and some jabs
The bag ripped
Some more tape I gotta add
Slip out of more sweat
Take another bath
Get a couple calls and texts
Before nine AM
Eat some leftover...
#love
#depression
#CallToAction #support
#CallToAction #support
205 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Oct 2023 00:38am
4th Oct 2023 00:38am
JUST A MIRAGE
I'm just gonna sit this down right here for I am the STORY TELLER📿🪷♀️☯️. Excuse me may I have a few minutes of your time, to talk to you about something that has been heavy upon my mind. It's nothing bad. For it's about what's good between you and I, for there's no other way to say what I need to say, as I want to say to you, that since you stepped in my life you've changed me in so many ways. For sometimes I have to get personal with my silent, thoughts that keep running through my mind. For I've never thought that I would find out here in the...
#kindness
#honesty
#support
#ForbiddenLove
#LookingForLove
345 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
1st Oct 2023 8:11pm
1st Oct 2023 8:11pm
footprints on the pavement
You can't leave a footprint that lasts if you're always
walking on tiptoe.”—Marion Blakey
martyrs
walk in mortar,
culprits
in the sand;
pulpits
hide big talkers,
gloves are
love’s command.
footprints
on the sandbank
wither
into nought ...
walking on tiptoe.”—Marion Blakey
martyrs
walk in mortar,
culprits
in the sand;
pulpits
hide big talkers,
gloves are
love’s command.
footprints
on the sandbank
wither
into nought ...
#power
#LifeStruggles
#LifeChangingMoment
#CallToAction
#support
184 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Sep 2023 3:07am
24th Sep 2023 3:07am
WHAT A REAL WOMAN NEEDS
Have you seen through the process of the storms, that is brewing in the mist of your own confusion, and the doubt and fear of the unknown. Have you felt trapped by someone else and you felt, the inside of your heart was being ripped from your chest. Yet you saw the real difference in reading between the lines of what love is and what love ain't. As it becomes more clearer when you look at the hurt and pain, that you have and had to go through, in the still of the days and night alone. But yet as you know and think back in your mind and heart. As the front door that you once let open after...
#love
#kindness
#support
#respect
#LookingForLove
799 reads
6 Comments
rainwriter
Poem Published
17th Sep 2023 3:32pm
17th Sep 2023 3:32pm
Drought
"Drought",
it whispers
and its making me frown again
What if...
if I'm my own reason for misery?
What if
Self-egoism, -centered is true for myself?
I am dry
I write instead of being out there with my friends.
I'm scared of sounds
Movements
Them(?)
The thing is, I am over
The Lost Seeker, thinking
about every step on its way it has taken
and
everything it needs to fulfill,
fulfill it,
fulfill...
Fulfill what exactly?
it whispers
and its making me frown again
What if...
if I'm my own reason for misery?
What if
Self-egoism, -centered is true for myself?
I am dry
I write instead of being out there with my friends.
I'm scared of sounds
Movements
Them(?)
The thing is, I am over
The Lost Seeker, thinking
about every step on its way it has taken
and
everything it needs to fulfill,
fulfill it,
fulfill...
Fulfill what exactly?
#sadness
#loneliness
#friendship #support
#friendship #support
213 reads
2 Comments
Asani
Poem Published
6th Sep 2023 2:23pm
6th Sep 2023 2:23pm
EXception
It seems that you're happy with me being your beginning and don't seem to mind if I'm involved in your end; but me, I get lost somewhere in the middle, I'm ultimately fulfilled when you're both. Supposedly I was too quick to break the rule went ahead and made you my exception. While you became my unconditional highlight and I remained your conditional selection even then I crave to be your greatest distraction, you were my favorite method of escape.
#happiness
#romantic
#support
#admiration
#crush
385 reads
1 Comment
Asani
Poem Published
1st Sep 2023 7:47am
1st Sep 2023 7:47am
Sapiosexual Egalitarian Xylene
#TruthOfLife
#magic
#support
#philosophical
#morality
276 reads
3 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 6:42pm
24th Aug 2023 6:42pm
WHAT YOU HAVE IS A BLESSING
THE HERE AND NOW...👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
#romantic
#gratitude
#support
#respect
#obsession
350 reads
7 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
989 reads
42 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Aug 2023 8:11pm
11th Aug 2023 8:11pm
I Cut Myself and Thought of You
That's the kind of relationship we have
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
#LifeStruggles
#SelfHarm
#confessional
#gratitude
#support
396 reads
20 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
7th Aug 2023 10:31pm
7th Aug 2023 10:31pm
Good Company
I once had a vision; a surreal dream
I dreamt I was in good company with no hidden scheme
It felt like an illusion; yet it’s what I yearn for
To be pleasantly surprised when I open that front door.
-
Oh, what I’d do to be in good company
Have my worries and doubts burn out with the sun’s gleam
To be held and cherished unconditionally
I’d give up all earthly wealth to bask in good company.
-
How can I make my dream a reality?
Where’s all the good company?
I’d cherish our bonds wholeheartedly
If only I knew where to find some good...
I dreamt I was in good company with no hidden scheme
It felt like an illusion; yet it’s what I yearn for
To be pleasantly surprised when I open that front door.
-
Oh, what I’d do to be in good company
Have my worries and doubts burn out with the sun’s gleam
To be held and cherished unconditionally
I’d give up all earthly wealth to bask in good company.
-
How can I make my dream a reality?
Where’s all the good company?
I’d cherish our bonds wholeheartedly
If only I knew where to find some good...
#happiness
#family
#friendship
#rhyming
#support
324 reads
21 Comments
Louisamay
JaneyBean
JaneyBean
Poem Published
25th Jul 2023 9:37pm
25th Jul 2023 9:37pm
The Therapists Lament - being perfect people
They tell me their stories
Their troubles and their nightmares
I listen and analyze, I’m their friend for a session
I nod and my face concentrates
While they describe their struggles
I am the perfect, non judgmental professional
I sometimes guide but mostly I give space
Most humans know what they need to do
To be their best selves
But they pay good money
For my degree to collaborate
Their most private struggles
I am so grateful they cannot see
That I am a mess
Yes you read that right
My life is a shitshow ...
Their troubles and their nightmares
I listen and analyze, I’m their friend for a session
I nod and my face concentrates
While they describe their struggles
I am the perfect, non judgmental professional
I sometimes guide but mostly I give space
Most humans know what they need to do
To be their best selves
But they pay good money
For my degree to collaborate
Their most private struggles
I am so grateful they cannot see
That I am a mess
Yes you read that right
My life is a shitshow ...
#confessional
#myself
#SelfReflection #support
#SelfReflection #support
194 reads
2 Comments
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