Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Play With Fire....You know the rest
A 38 year old woman in America doused herself in gasoline and lit herself on fire in protest of one of those yearly Miss America Beauty Pageant's. Before lighting the match, the woman shouted slogans criticizing the pageant's exploitation of woman. Her last words were reportedly, "WATER! WATER! WATER!!"
#fire
#fiction
#ShortStory #support
#ShortStory #support
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HAMMOCK STRINGS (4-17-1994; Galveston Island Texas)n a
spring birds sing
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail off
into such gentle
soothing...
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail off
into such gentle
soothing...
#inspirational
#peace
#gratitude
#support
#healing
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Habitual Dependence
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
The dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#love
#marriage
#addiction #support
#addiction #support
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Lend Your Hand
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smile & laugh spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#motivational
#inspirational
#rhyming
#uplifting
#support
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Friendship
If you need to talk
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
#courage
#friendship
#haiku
#uplifting
#support
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Soul Friend
affections are funny
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
they grow and wane over time
from furious flames to cooling embers
but my love remains constant
I don't have to like you to see beauty
your soul's scars tell me so much about you
gentle truth, I share my honesty
from one soul to another
sacred promise I will always be your friend
secrets of faith
we have trusted each other facts over our lives
never to ever be used as weapons
I keep your privacy down deep
in the sanctity and bond of friendship
it is an honor to know you ...
#love
#friendship
#support
#admiration
#respect
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BENEATH THE DEEPNESS
BENEATH the deepness of your mind and heart and soul. ✍️ WHAT are you feeling when you decide to think with your heart and not with your mind. For do you open up your heart and close your eyes and mind, as you wear it on your selves 🤔 for do you truly believe the words that comes from out of their mouth 🤔 To express their love for you, without no real communications and commitment and no real consistency, with honest truth and genuine trust. I'm just going through this out in the wind of self consciousness of what you need and want in the world of REAL reality...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#support
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A New Desire, A New Tomorrow
I won't depart, even as we drift away,
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
A steadfast light, in your night, I'll stay.
By your side, whenever you need my part,
But I won't cease living, fueled by my own fire.
Choosing happiness, a new desire,
Leaving sorrow behind, a fresh start I've made.
#happiness
#love
#patience
#LongDistanceRelationship
#support
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That's why
Your smile, your warmth
your love, your desire
your fire, your drive
that's why
your love, your desire
your fire, your drive
that's why
#love
#lover
#support
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Cockayne
Where I currently reside
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
Is filled with murder and suicide
Polluted lakes and streams
Sad reality is what it seams
Tainted death and polluted lands
Oceans toxic as well as the sand
Sooner then later change is what we need
Mother earth is dying, this is my final plea
#hope
#earth
#pollution #support
#pollution #support
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Email from David, the Father of My Baby
Lauryn,
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#support
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YOUR WORD CAN BE MY GUIDE.
YOUR WORD CAN BE MY GUIDE.
I am not writing just to gain
the honour that l have the brain
that can indite some rhythmic lines
that you will like and praise my name.
I know you have the head that thinks.
You go along the way l pass.
It's full of hardships and complaints.
Just look at your most recent lines.
I like to join your aims with mine
and read a word from your smart mind.
You are supposed to have some thoughts.
I will be pleased if lots are wise.
I don't compete with you to chant ...
I am not writing just to gain
the honour that l have the brain
that can indite some rhythmic lines
that you will like and praise my name.
I know you have the head that thinks.
You go along the way l pass.
It's full of hardships and complaints.
Just look at your most recent lines.
I like to join your aims with mine
and read a word from your smart mind.
You are supposed to have some thoughts.
I will be pleased if lots are wise.
I don't compete with you to chant ...
#support
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DU Poetry : Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique