Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 1:38pm
3rd Apr 2025 1:38pm
Personal Thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ What I would like to know from thyself own personal experiences, do you remember when you had a disagreement with someone, that we would just pick up the phone and dial the number. 🤔 Yeah I know that times have changed over the years 😔 with this new wave of communications. BUT yet do you remember what it use to be like to just talk, about what went wrong with just talking to someone. 😡 Now we just go on a web site and voice our thoughts and opinions, to the whole world 🌎 about our situations in...
#honesty
#kindness
#relationships
#respect
#support
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
One Bullet, Five Chances
I came to you for a problem
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
#inspirational
#motivational
#suicide #support
#suicide #support
113 reads
9 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 2:08am
18th Mar 2025 2:08am
Grace
hurting shadows I weep to, my Father
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
#God
#gratitude
#philosophical #support
#philosophical #support
77 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 11:05am
15th Mar 2025 11:05am
A Cryptic Illness
Bring your beauty onto me
Mysterious and distant
I can only imagine to see
We discovered our magic together
Mileage should never stop our love
Your valued more then any buried treasure
One day i will arrive, when you least suspect
Surprise!! Surprise!!
Let's make love, take off your dress
Your looks and appeal are stunning to my eyes
Your body, so beautifully developed
So sexy honey, I tell no lies
Days & weeks go by
Personality isn't what I like
A few more days, I'm saying goodbye
She...
Mysterious and distant
I can only imagine to see
We discovered our magic together
Mileage should never stop our love
Your valued more then any buried treasure
One day i will arrive, when you least suspect
Surprise!! Surprise!!
Let's make love, take off your dress
Your looks and appeal are stunning to my eyes
Your body, so beautifully developed
So sexy honey, I tell no lies
Days & weeks go by
Personality isn't what I like
A few more days, I'm saying goodbye
She...
#FallingInLove
#revenge
#rhyming
#ShortStory
#support
89 reads
10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 10:00am
13th Mar 2025 10:00am
You
When you meet someone,
Who is exactly what they say they are.
Someone terrible.
And they turn out to be,
The nicest person you've ever met.
I think that person,
Is the most special person,
I've ever met.
Thank you.
Who is exactly what they say they are.
Someone terrible.
And they turn out to be,
The nicest person you've ever met.
I think that person,
Is the most special person,
I've ever met.
Thank you.
#support
115 reads
2 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Jizzman
Jizzman
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 5:26pm
12th Mar 2025 5:26pm
DON'T f**k WITH US ! ! ! WORLD TOUR 2025
We're the new force
Headin' out ON TOUR
Hittin' the dance floor
Don't fuck with us!
We'll leave you in a trance
Always takin' a chance
Writing sublime verse
No point in rehearse
You wanna be like us
Attitude a total must
Full of lust -
It's shit or bust!
Let us take you higher
Feelin' totally wired
Somethin' to admire
Find us in a flyer
We're puttin' on a show
It'll be worth it so
This joint will be bangin'
Don't dare leave us hangin'
COS...
Headin' out ON TOUR
Hittin' the dance floor
Don't fuck with us!
We'll leave you in a trance
Always takin' a chance
Writing sublime verse
No point in rehearse
You wanna be like us
Attitude a total must
Full of lust -
It's shit or bust!
Let us take you higher
Feelin' totally wired
Somethin' to admire
Find us in a flyer
We're puttin' on a show
It'll be worth it so
This joint will be bangin'
Don't dare leave us hangin'
COS...
#admiration
#WritingPoetry
#gratitude
#inspirational
#support
251 reads
11 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 10:22pm
6th Mar 2025 10:22pm
He wanted psycho bitch, but all I have left is Hello Kitty
He asked me
to shove my non-existent anger
through his vulnerability
and make him bleed
And I wanted to
I wanted to be the monster
he used to love
but I'm not that vindictive anymore
hurting hurt people doesn't
give me the same rush
it used to
I don't need to carve my pain
into his skin to know
I'm branded there
So I offered him sarcasm instead
He was expecting whips and chains
unleashed from the end of my tongue
but ended up with Avril...
to shove my non-existent anger
through his vulnerability
and make him bleed
And I wanted to
I wanted to be the monster
he used to love
but I'm not that vindictive anymore
hurting hurt people doesn't
give me the same rush
it used to
I don't need to carve my pain
into his skin to know
I'm branded there
So I offered him sarcasm instead
He was expecting whips and chains
unleashed from the end of my tongue
but ended up with Avril...
#friendship
#love
#support
149 reads
8 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 3:29pm
4th Mar 2025 3:29pm
Senryu - Dieu Duet
God, through miracles
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
#God
#hope
#love
#spiritual
#support
78 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 00:32am
3rd Mar 2025 00:32am
You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
Can you scratch my back?
"Maybe. What's in it for me?"
Pimples, scabs and hair
"Maybe. What's in it for me?"
Pimples, scabs and hair
#satirical
#senryu
#support
108 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
Make it a great day!
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#inspirational
#motivational
#rhyming
#support
#uplifting
131 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 7:21pm
16th Feb 2025 7:21pm
Reality is a curse
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#addiction
#love
#marriage #support
#marriage #support
192 reads
17 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 1:38pm
5th Feb 2025 1:38pm
Inkbrella
Ink becomes our strongest guard
and stories forge our strength
while words shield us from pain.
In every verse a fortress is built
against the storms that life will send.
With every line our souls are filled,
in writing we find a friend.
Our pen, a sword that cuts through dark.
Defends the heart from sorrow's bite.
With ink, we leave a lasting mark,
a beacon in the night.
and stories forge our strength
while words shield us from pain.
In every verse a fortress is built
against the storms that life will send.
With every line our souls are filled,
in writing we find a friend.
Our pen, a sword that cuts through dark.
Defends the heart from sorrow's bite.
With ink, we leave a lasting mark,
a beacon in the night.
#love
#support
#WritingPoetry
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6 Comments
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