Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
moon_bather
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:54pm
Yesterday 11:54pm
I am the conundrum
I am the conundrum
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
#admiration
#apathy
#confusion
#despair
#support
38 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:17pm
Yesterday 12:17pm
A Gift
Good Morning to each of you. I went to bed last night without any gifts under the tree.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
#friendship
#happiness
#love
#magic
#support
52 reads
9 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
These Scars Wont Define Us
Heartfelt, this goes out to all the poets here
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
#gratitude
#healing
#support #TimeHeals
#support #TimeHeals
46 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
waiting on a soul connection
little thoughts of beauty make me smile
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
#love
#spiritual
#support
73 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:09am
20th Dec 2024 11:09am
Lifetime
Life neither remembers nor forgets
It is valueless to itself
It doesn't care about you
Don't you see how easily it leaves the room when you need it during those trying times?
It is valueless to itself
It doesn't care about you
Don't you see how easily it leaves the room when you need it during those trying times?
#LifeStruggles
#morality
#support
65 reads
9 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
14th Dec 2024 2:28pm
The Importance of the Right Woman
Thoughts of you, woman,
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
stir love in your man's soul
Memories of your presence bring forth feelings
Powerful,
Bold
There is a fire burning inside your man
which keeps him moving ever forward
A God-given imperative to profess, provide, and protect
It is your presence in his life
which gives focus to his method
And gives reason to his madness
It is what you do
and who you are
that bring peace in the heart of this man
Doing what comes natural to you is the cure for what ails him ...
#courage
#love
#respect
#strength
#support
56 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 11:28am
30th Nov 2024 11:28am
NYC's Guardian Angels
When you're down in the dirty gutter
Speak out, Call our names
We will lift you to another level
We fire it up, You wont hit the floor
When you walk on the ground that's sour
No need to pray, We're here to stay
You know the number when you dial to heaven
Turn it up and you will reach them today
We're like the angels
Falling from the sky, Make a wish and we'll be there
We want to guide you through violence and despair
We are the saviors from the other side
We bring your heart and soul back to life
When your hope...
Speak out, Call our names
We will lift you to another level
We fire it up, You wont hit the floor
When you walk on the ground that's sour
No need to pray, We're here to stay
You know the number when you dial to heaven
Turn it up and you will reach them today
We're like the angels
Falling from the sky, Make a wish and we'll be there
We want to guide you through violence and despair
We are the saviors from the other side
We bring your heart and soul back to life
When your hope...
#city
#corruption
#hope
#support
#violence
73 reads
8 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 10:38am
28th Nov 2024 10:38am
MidnightSonneteer
Expression Series, Visual III
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #support
#respect #support
287 reads
18 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:18pm
26th Nov 2024 2:18pm
Paul
Expression Series, Visual II
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #support
#respect #support
285 reads
22 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 11:59am
24th Nov 2024 11:59am
Mary
Expression series, Visual I
#admiration
#gratitude
#respect #support
#respect #support
344 reads
23 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:57am
24th Nov 2024 10:57am
Housed on unsteady grounds
Shy on the attempt to bring up sharing space
Knew it’d be possible based on the feel
Came in reality & realized it wouldn’t be
caked
Understood early the table talks would be often to clear air
The perfect plan didn’t include taking accountability but gripping responsibility
Run it right & there’ll be help to it continue but run it the opposite & it may run over you
(Go steady when feeling the blues)
Knew it’d be possible based on the feel
Came in reality & realized it wouldn’t be
caked
Understood early the table talks would be often to clear air
The perfect plan didn’t include taking accountability but gripping responsibility
Run it right & there’ll be help to it continue but run it the opposite & it may run over you
(Go steady when feeling the blues)
#choices
#kindness
#learning
#patience
#support
55 reads
0 Comments
ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:30am
24th Nov 2024 10:30am
No matter what
That moment when I struggle
It's not supposed to be
I try to hold on to the
words once said to me
I promised that I'll thank Him
every single day
for if it was His blessing
I'll guard it come what may
In words once said to me
embedded in my heart
assured to always be
there no matter what
It's not supposed to be
I try to hold on to the
words once said to me
I promised that I'll thank Him
every single day
for if it was His blessing
I'll guard it come what may
In words once said to me
embedded in my heart
assured to always be
there no matter what
#bittersweet
#MeToo
#support
41 reads
0 Comments
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