Poems About Support by Top Critiquers
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Poems about support by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
Soulless Zombi
Four walls surround me
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
#confusion
#drugs
#identity
#MentalHealth
#support
47 reads
12 Comments
Her
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 10:13pm
13th Dec 2024 10:13pm
Sam I Am (SamNash)
Sam I am
Or hope to be
Like he
Though he’d deny
Why
My friend Sam
The not so simple man
I lead the caravan
Me, his number one fan
See, it goes something like this
For us dreamers who’s lives have gone amiss
We look to the one whose compass doesn’t drift
Even though he thinks he doesn’t have a grip
It’s how he roams these halls
His vulnerabilities telling all
He’s the kind of guy who thinks he’s small
When quite honestly, he’s the tallest of all
He’s not afraid to tell us of his kinks ...
Or hope to be
Like he
Though he’d deny
Why
My friend Sam
The not so simple man
I lead the caravan
Me, his number one fan
See, it goes something like this
For us dreamers who’s lives have gone amiss
We look to the one whose compass doesn’t drift
Even though he thinks he doesn’t have a grip
It’s how he roams these halls
His vulnerabilities telling all
He’s the kind of guy who thinks he’s small
When quite honestly, he’s the tallest of all
He’s not afraid to tell us of his kinks ...
#admiration
#friendship
#gratitude
#MyInspiration
#support
154 reads
18 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 5:47pm
12th Jun 2024 5:47pm
The Light
I allowed you to take liberties
For your own comfortability
As I realize what I had seen
Was someone,who is in between.
Between, this world and the next,
Clawing my way out with “life” nets.
I refuse to receive a scar
Because my body has enough of its own
I do not need to see more of who you are
Because my soul is my own
Reveling in your debauchery
Revealing the conspiracy
Not seeing what I see
Not accepting the words that flows freely
I must be the understanding one
I must...
For your own comfortability
As I realize what I had seen
Was someone,who is in between.
Between, this world and the next,
Clawing my way out with “life” nets.
I refuse to receive a scar
Because my body has enough of its own
I do not need to see more of who you are
Because my soul is my own
Reveling in your debauchery
Revealing the conspiracy
Not seeing what I see
Not accepting the words that flows freely
I must be the understanding one
I must...
#depression
#hope
#inspirational
#sadness
#support
61 reads
17 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
24th Jul 2023 11:43pm
24th Jul 2023 11:43pm
HONESTLY, YOU REALLY DON'T MIND?
I hadn't seen her in
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
#girlfriend
#relationships
#honesty
#support
#admiration
307 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Aug 2023 8:11pm
11th Aug 2023 8:11pm
I Cut Myself and Thought of You
That's the kind of relationship we have
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
#LifeStruggles
#SelfHarm
#confessional
#gratitude
#support
372 reads
20 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
187 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
20th Dec 2024 6:07pm
waiting on a soul connection
little thoughts of beauty make me smile
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
with a grateful heart I enter another day
my hopes are that there are no surprises I can't handle
focusing on the positive
I won't get mean today
you wouldn't think that is a thing
but it is for the impatient
the key is to remember to be present in the moment
not racing ahead to the next destination
taking my time to smile at people
instead of cutting them with my eyes
it's been brought to my attention how vivid I can be
altering myself I realize I don't want to be sour
I want...
#love
#spiritual
#support
93 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 5:42am
18th Jul 2024 5:42am
THE POWER OF ENERGY
It's been known since the beginning of time, that we have always been in situations that haven't done, anything for you except put fear in your mind and heart. For let's take a look at the many situations that we have been told that wasn't meant for us 😔 but yet we still didn't believe in what we see, only what we hear from spoken words. For what is it about negativity that draws you into a situation, that you continue to entertain to only find yourself, crying in the still of the night with inner senses of the pain. For what is it about positivity that makes you feel a different...
#gratitude
#happiness
#honesty
#love
#support
113 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2024 4:15am
2nd Jun 2024 4:15am
Gratitude
The coffee threatens
to jump from the
oversized mug
that my trembling
hands struggle
to negotiate.
you put a blanket
over my shoulders
and sit next to me
and we stare without words
at some dreamscape,
like a forlorn shore
or an autumn forest in a
Carolina park,
I sigh heavily
and you nod
in my peripheral vision
and we get it.
soft breezes
move my hair
just enough
to make it tickle ...
to jump from the
oversized mug
that my trembling
hands struggle
to negotiate.
you put a blanket
over my shoulders
and sit next to me
and we stare without words
at some dreamscape,
like a forlorn shore
or an autumn forest in a
Carolina park,
I sigh heavily
and you nod
in my peripheral vision
and we get it.
soft breezes
move my hair
just enough
to make it tickle ...
#friendship
#healing
#love #support
#love #support
316 reads
33 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
19th Aug 2023 7:17pm
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
939 reads
42 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
29th Nov 2016 4:06am
29th Nov 2016 4:06am
Oyster
we need your fire
we admire your force
we love your masculinity
you are the yang in our yin
the eye in our hurricane
the rock in our storm
you can choose
to use your hands
to heal or hurt
to open
your heart
or close it
to be a solid base
a safe place to bloom
or a bog in which we sink
you can make us or break us
embrace us or reject us
the choice is yours
in the end
you need us
as we need you
you are ratio
we...
we admire your force
we love your masculinity
you are the yang in our yin
the eye in our hurricane
the rock in our storm
you can choose
to use your hands
to heal or hurt
to open
your heart
or close it
to be a solid base
a safe place to bloom
or a bog in which we sink
you can make us or break us
embrace us or reject us
the choice is yours
in the end
you need us
as we need you
you are ratio
we...
#love
#support
1012 reads
44 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2023 00:58am
23rd Jul 2023 00:58am
My Vacation
#sex
#friendship
#support
282 reads
6 Comments
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