Poems About Suffering by Top Critiquers
#suffering
Poems about suffering by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Ashleysworld
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 4:09am
10th Nov 2024 4:09am
No reason
#depression
#hurt
#LifeStruggles
#sadness
#suffering
46 reads
4 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 12:54pm
8th Jun 2024 12:54pm
True Justice (Stony Island)
The young boy of ten was in the hospital bathroom having a hard time shitting
While his sister was in vaginal pain experiencing the dark side of female living,
“Both coming home from elementary school was kidnapped and raped
Left in an alley for dead as the sick bastards made their escape,
“The mayor tried to keep it on the low to prevent a riot
A call from DC stated this is an election year-keep the incident quiet,
“When the citizens found out, this was another blow to the face
That illegals committed the crime and the government tried...
While his sister was in vaginal pain experiencing the dark side of female living,
“Both coming home from elementary school was kidnapped and raped
Left in an alley for dead as the sick bastards made their escape,
“The mayor tried to keep it on the low to prevent a riot
A call from DC stated this is an election year-keep the incident quiet,
“When the citizens found out, this was another blow to the face
That illegals committed the crime and the government tried...
#betrayal
#frustration
#humankind
#revenge
#suffering
178 reads
2 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
21st May 2021 1:52am
21st May 2021 1:52am
Belly
.. ...
Morning
A bright sunny day...
With walking people on a wide avenue
Afternoon
An empty street shaded by leafy trees
The one the artists love secretly
Evening
Neon over sidewalks
How complicated is the night?
Wondering ...
Wandering ...
The belly of the beast
A lonely pregnant teen...
Looks at me ...
Like a lover ?
Like a wife ?
Like a father ?
Like a daughter?
... ...
Morning
A bright sunny day...
With walking people on a wide avenue
Afternoon
An empty street shaded by leafy trees
The one the artists love secretly
Evening
Neon over sidewalks
How complicated is the night?
Wondering ...
Wandering ...
The belly of the beast
A lonely pregnant teen...
Looks at me ...
Like a lover ?
Like a wife ?
Like a father ?
Like a daughter?
... ...
#sadness
#suffering
371 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:08am
Yesterday 5:08am
Earnings report
Call comes in report our earnings
One thing missing is all the children we killed
Made 700 hundred million in a quarter of a year
Stack that onto an Octagon billionaire building
A place for when all time ends in Hawaii
He lit a match on social media
Suck up all your data sell it to advertisers while
He trains like he’s in the UFC
Social network trained to destroy the earth
Facebook morphs into meta
Algorithms set to harm teenage girls
You’re own research says it’s so
...
One thing missing is all the children we killed
Made 700 hundred million in a quarter of a year
Stack that onto an Octagon billionaire building
A place for when all time ends in Hawaii
He lit a match on social media
Suck up all your data sell it to advertisers while
He trains like he’s in the UFC
Social network trained to destroy the earth
Facebook morphs into meta
Algorithms set to harm teenage girls
You’re own research says it’s so
...
#responsibility
#suffering
#suicide #technology
#suicide #technology
25 reads
0 Comments
mysteriouslady
Poem Published
27th May 2022 2:37am
27th May 2022 2:37am
Open Wounds
Time doesnt heal shit
Nor the wounds
that were craved into your soul
by people you loved and once trusted
They will always bleed
always stink of sorrow
and no one will ever understand
They just fester
they get ugly
forming a nasty infection
that will never heal
You just learn to change the dressing
take the pain
and live with them
Nor the wounds
that were craved into your soul
by people you loved and once trusted
They will always bleed
always stink of sorrow
and no one will ever understand
They just fester
they get ugly
forming a nasty infection
that will never heal
You just learn to change the dressing
take the pain
and live with them
#suffering
325 reads
11 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
27th Sep 2021 1:00am
27th Sep 2021 1:00am
Pain play
#lust
#sex
#BDSM
#suffering
#dirty
590 reads
0 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 1:38am
15th Sep 2024 1:38am
Mental Health (on hold)
Welcome to the sanitarium
We’ve got dry clothes and a bed
For you to live in
For the time being
What happens next?
We don’t know
Nor do we much care
So fix your head already
Then
get the fuck outta here
We’ve got dry clothes and a bed
For you to live in
For the time being
What happens next?
We don’t know
Nor do we much care
So fix your head already
Then
get the fuck outta here
#dark
#morality
#shame
#suffering
#vulnerability
84 reads
1 Comment
darkcloud68
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 8:25am
7th Oct 2024 8:25am
End Times
New world order of world disorder, bombs falling in the east. Men marching with arms, looking to harm. When we all should be marching for peace. History of wars have not taught mankind anything, so we are always doomed to repeat. Machines guns are fed, just to leave people dead, just to appease the elite. They have money for wars to even the score, yet children are dying from having nothing to eat. Political ties with greed in their eyes, are surely the mark of the beast. Hell on earth governments fighting for turf, and the whole world is feeling the heat. Many tears would be shed, mothers...
#death
#evil
#hate
#lies
#suffering
100 reads
6 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 9:14am
10th Sep 2024 9:14am
Back on my Devil Shit
when I was young I was a hellion
looked down on by the world
I had no problem with anarchy
until I found love
and that was all that mattered
straight laced for her sake
holding her extra tight tonight
for tomorrow
I’m back on my devil shit
as I unbury my guns
all I can think of is peace
what the fuck is peace
for a person like me?
should of know they’d never let me be
see, I’m different
thought I could run away
but those demons keep lurking
at every corner
calling for the Devil
dressed...
looked down on by the world
I had no problem with anarchy
until I found love
and that was all that mattered
straight laced for her sake
holding her extra tight tonight
for tomorrow
I’m back on my devil shit
as I unbury my guns
all I can think of is peace
what the fuck is peace
for a person like me?
should of know they’d never let me be
see, I’m different
thought I could run away
but those demons keep lurking
at every corner
calling for the Devil
dressed...
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
111 reads
2 Comments
CeeCee-Elaine
Nugz
Nugz
Poem Published
17th Feb 2020 3:26am
17th Feb 2020 3:26am
Tight Rope.
Baby, I've been walking on your tight-rope
for far too long now.
Teetering on the edge of lunacy,
in hopes of a different finale.
But we both know how this show always ends.
Broken dreams, better than broken bones.
Then again, who really needs them
when they're used up and frail,
hollowed from our heart-shaped acrobatics.
One foot, in front of the other.
My shaky legs beg for your attention,
longing for the chance to be your main attraction.
I'm up in the air, back and forth.
Plastered smiles...
for far too long now.
Teetering on the edge of lunacy,
in hopes of a different finale.
But we both know how this show always ends.
Broken dreams, better than broken bones.
Then again, who really needs them
when they're used up and frail,
hollowed from our heart-shaped acrobatics.
One foot, in front of the other.
My shaky legs beg for your attention,
longing for the chance to be your main attraction.
I'm up in the air, back and forth.
Plastered smiles...
#love
#heartbroken
#UnrequitedLove
#suffering
#hurt
620 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:21pm
Yesterday 2:21pm
Woke Up On Christmas Morning
Alex woke up on Christmas morning
and discovered that she had slept
naked in front of the tree
and has a hangover
which was possibly
due to the bash
that was thrown
there last
night.
and discovered that she had slept
naked in front of the tree
and has a hangover
which was possibly
due to the bash
that was thrown
there last
night.
#alcohol
#Christmas
#fiction
#sex
#suffering
60 reads
2 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
6th Jan 2021 2:57am
6th Jan 2021 2:57am
American Dreamer
This is a Moroccan beat which I personally love. Please listen while reading, I really would appreciate it, thank you 😊
Al Marconi :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
Cast upon him a burden
a wicked curse
born under the wrong agenda
what could be worse?
Life's value lost and hollow
burned out
can anybody hear you?
There's no way out!...
Al Marconi :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
Cast upon him a burden
a wicked curse
born under the wrong agenda
what could be worse?
Life's value lost and hollow
burned out
can anybody hear you?
There's no way out!...
#grief
#misunderstood
#despair
#suffering
#FeelingTrapped
904 reads
13 Comments
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