Poems About Suffering Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about suffering seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
As A Result Of Todd's Birthday Rave
Andromeda
woke up so
hungover and
discovered that she was
sleeping naked on top
of her ex-husband John
as a result of Todd's birthday rave.
woke up so
hungover and
discovered that she was
sleeping naked on top
of her ex-husband John
as a result of Todd's birthday rave.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
#suffering
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Safety Bubble
Within this safe bubble
I remain
Nursing my
Wounded heart
After you walked
Away from me
I remain
Nursing my
Wounded heart
After you walked
Away from me
#heartbroken
#breakup
#suffering
65 reads
17 Comments
How I Feel After They Demolished It
Those memories of
a happy childhood are dead
and buried with that old house.
a happy childhood are dead
and buried with that old house.
#home
#fiction
#dialogue
#suffering
#emptiness
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Architecture of suffering
The darkness is thickening...
And the darkness craves bodies...
The world is filled with fragments of desires.
In the incomprehensibility of sinful thoughts
There is a limit assigned to purity...
The point of no return happens early...
Canvases of bodies...
With strokes of words - subjects of secrets,
Drowning in the pulsation of hidden moments
And the foreignness of a crumpled dream...
Dreams are cut... nightmares
To the touch...
And the darkness craves bodies...
The world is filled with fragments of desires.
In the incomprehensibility of sinful thoughts
There is a limit assigned to purity...
The point of no return happens early...
Canvases of bodies...
With strokes of words - subjects of secrets,
Drowning in the pulsation of hidden moments
And the foreignness of a crumpled dream...
Dreams are cut... nightmares
To the touch...
#dark
#secrets
#suffering
#emptiness
#BDSM
204 reads
37 Comments
Such is Suffering
Troubled, distressed
trauma and woe
unwavering discomfort
enduring sorrow
Feelings of anguish
consumed by despair
unfortunate hardships
a heavy cross to bear
Amid charred ashes
of loss and tragedy
existence, not living
bounded, unfree
Such is suffering
this human condition
seemingly endless
with no remission
Twilight of death
a wretched place
ultimately necessary
that I may find my grace
trauma and woe
unwavering discomfort
enduring sorrow
Feelings of anguish
consumed by despair
unfortunate hardships
a heavy cross to bear
Amid charred ashes
of loss and tragedy
existence, not living
bounded, unfree
Such is suffering
this human condition
seemingly endless
with no remission
Twilight of death
a wretched place
ultimately necessary
that I may find my grace
#suffering
#NaPoWriMo2024
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1 Comment
Scars Run Deep
Scars of children acquired so young
Can last a lifetime, leave their deep mark
They suffer inside and wonder what
They did to deserve a life so dark
Caregivers mishandling the ones
They're supposed to love
Robbing a young one
Of a normal childhood
Some scars they just
Won't go away from
Lost souls past transgressions
Even when they've been forgiven
Can last a lifetime, leave their deep mark
They suffer inside and wonder what
They did to deserve a life so dark
Caregivers mishandling the ones
They're supposed to love
Robbing a young one
Of a normal childhood
Some scars they just
Won't go away from
Lost souls past transgressions
Even when they've been forgiven
#childhood
#despair
#suffering #hurt
#suffering #hurt
84 reads
9 Comments
On The Day After The Beach Party
On a
Sunday, Paige
woke up
with a pain in her
head and found herself
nude in a sleeping
bag with
some guy next
to her.
Sunday, Paige
woke up
with a pain in her
head and found herself
nude in a sleeping
bag with
some guy next
to her.
#beach
#morning
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
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MYSTERY UNDER ROCKS DEEP ERRIE ROADS
Too many deaths
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
#dark
#murder
#death
#TruthOfLife
#suffering
68 reads
5 Comments
Wish For No More Party Invites
Alice
woke up with
a pain
in her head and found
herself naked in
bed which made her wish
for no
more party
invites.
woke up with
a pain
in her head and found
herself naked in
bed which made her wish
for no
more party
invites.
#alcohol
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
#dating
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0 Comments
Oracularity
The French gave us the word cliché
and so to honor Gallic grace
let's urge cliché to be passe
so no more discourse will debase
from any verse or any pen
where some foreseeable trauma
repeats its ugly life again
to flare into a melodrama,
or kindle more calamity
with ideation raised anew
antipodal to amity
which most of us already knew...
but still would not associate
a lack of tact with repeat fate.
and so to honor Gallic grace
let's urge cliché to be passe
so no more discourse will debase
from any verse or any pen
where some foreseeable trauma
repeats its ugly life again
to flare into a melodrama,
or kindle more calamity
with ideation raised anew
antipodal to amity
which most of us already knew...
but still would not associate
a lack of tact with repeat fate.
#anxiety
#suffering
#apathy
#choices
#PersonalGrowth
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10 Comments
A New Type Of Dirty Old Man
Brody saw Vanessa go into the barn
before he heard screams which made him rush into that
barn and find her stripped naked and raped due to
his late uncle whose own spirit is still restless.
before he heard screams which made him rush into that
barn and find her stripped naked and raped due to
his late uncle whose own spirit is still restless.
#home
#fiction
#ghosts
#suffering
#sensual
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This Is For Kicking Me Out Of Your Life
During her separation
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
#LGBT
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#suffering
#sensual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Suffering Seeking Honest Critique