Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vandelious
Neil Stewart
Neil Stewart
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 9:11pm
5th Jun 2024 9:11pm
Youl see.
What you see,
What you hear,
What you do,
What you don't,
What you note,
Where you book,
Where you hook, who you know
Where you are,
Where youl be,
When youl know?
Well, youl see.
What you hear,
What you do,
What you don't,
What you note,
Where you book,
Where you hook, who you know
Where you are,
Where youl be,
When youl know?
Well, youl see.
#aging
#fate
#luck #responsibility
#luck #responsibility
105 reads
1 Comment
DarkPassion
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2024 4:43am
3rd Jun 2024 4:43am
Solider of Lust
At times I’m afraid to write ✍🏾
I’m thinking, Cause then I will have to be ready to fight….
I write and write with all my might.
I don’t even know how to sleep at night.
I’m just trying to get it right.
To passionate about this game of life.
It ain’t at all right.
The struggle, the fight.
Nickel and Dime’N
Trying to survive &
Im overweight due to the sugar in the
American Pie and….
They so full of it, when are they going to quit?.
They making me sick!.
When I put my black sword and the paper starts to...
I’m thinking, Cause then I will have to be ready to fight….
I write and write with all my might.
I don’t even know how to sleep at night.
I’m just trying to get it right.
To passionate about this game of life.
It ain’t at all right.
The struggle, the fight.
Nickel and Dime’N
Trying to survive &
Im overweight due to the sugar in the
American Pie and….
They so full of it, when are they going to quit?.
They making me sick!.
When I put my black sword and the paper starts to...
#art
#culture
#freedom
#identity
#responsibility
157 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
26th May 2024 2:18am
26th May 2024 2:18am
back home again
dear drunk father
you were full of rage and
violence and you stole the
wonders of the moon and
stars from this child's eyes
father...
I forgive you
you were full of rage and
violence and you stole the
wonders of the moon and
stars from this child's eyes
father...
I forgive you
#childhood
#responsibility
105 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
16th May 2024 11:23am
16th May 2024 11:23am
Dancing with the reflection
Eyes rolled white back
mattress insulation for the
Convulsing
Twitching
Writhing
Guy whose lips stain bloody saliva
from bitten tongue
Another life that portrait painted discarded
paraphernalia
The blasé debaser
Whiskey chasing the bourbon chaser
Eyeballs racing bright smoke billowing
Holding her skin pressed close
One eye followed by another open
gazing back
Game changing moment
Father
..
.
.
..
Daughter
Trafficked wouldn't be far from true
Five...
mattress insulation for the
Convulsing
Twitching
Writhing
Guy whose lips stain bloody saliva
from bitten tongue
Another life that portrait painted discarded
paraphernalia
The blasé debaser
Whiskey chasing the bourbon chaser
Eyeballs racing bright smoke billowing
Holding her skin pressed close
One eye followed by another open
gazing back
Game changing moment
Father
..
.
.
..
Daughter
Trafficked wouldn't be far from true
Five...
#daughter
#father
#responsibility
128 reads
5 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
10th May 2024 2:26am
10th May 2024 2:26am
the thorning of the prickalala tree
They who can give up essential liberty to obtain a little
temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor
safety.”―Benjamin Franklin
caress my face,
you fragrant morning wind;
let me embrace
your early peace of mind.
night sleep has flown
and left me wide awake,
new dreams to own,
old nightmares to forsake.
quicken my feet
with sparkling pearls of dew;
excite the beat,
as day comes dancing through;
for i must glean
birdsongs and serenades
that swell between
bright...
temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor
safety.”―Benjamin Franklin
caress my face,
you fragrant morning wind;
let me embrace
your early peace of mind.
night sleep has flown
and left me wide awake,
new dreams to own,
old nightmares to forsake.
quicken my feet
with sparkling pearls of dew;
excite the beat,
as day comes dancing through;
for i must glean
birdsongs and serenades
that swell between
bright...
#choices
#dawn
#dreams
#freedom
#responsibility
107 reads
0 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
6th May 2024 4:09pm
6th May 2024 4:09pm
The Puppet Master
When I signed
The application
No idea of
THE JOB
I didn't feel
the strings attach
nor the latches from
THE SOD.
It took too long to notice
what I had become
stuck inside a wooden box
that only made
ME NUMB.
I thought about
the words I used
to capture all of my skills.
not knowing this
would mean a place
for you to catch
YOUR THRILLS.
For now I see
they were so cheap
they only give me chills
Turning to a monster
had been one of ...
The application
No idea of
THE JOB
I didn't feel
the strings attach
nor the latches from
THE SOD.
It took too long to notice
what I had become
stuck inside a wooden box
that only made
ME NUMB.
I thought about
the words I used
to capture all of my skills.
not knowing this
would mean a place
for you to catch
YOUR THRILLS.
For now I see
they were so cheap
they only give me chills
Turning to a monster
had been one of ...
#fate
#responsibility
198 reads
5 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
6th May 2024 12:59pm
6th May 2024 12:59pm
Different Calibres
those who do really know, stay silent
those who know, want always to share
those who don't know, want always to speak
those who speak, make much mistakes
those who hesitate, fear to make mistakes
those who don't speak, learn from others' mistakes
those who speak low, are self-confident
those who speak normal, share others thoughts
those who speak loud, have only words
those who are always silent, are either sick
they are either complex, they are either dumb; ...
those who know, want always to share
those who don't know, want always to speak
those who speak, make much mistakes
those who hesitate, fear to make mistakes
those who don't speak, learn from others' mistakes
those who speak low, are self-confident
those who speak normal, share others thoughts
those who speak loud, have only words
those who are always silent, are either sick
they are either complex, they are either dumb; ...
#culture
#identity
#morality
#responsibility
#risk
218 reads
23 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 5:39pm
28th Apr 2024 5:39pm
Dust to Rust
I bust my ass to feed you
and pay for all these bills
All I get is backlash
for interruption of your thrills
I ask for contribution
lighter then the air
Still, you fight against me
As if I'm not even there
I have to teach you lessons
to prepare you for this life
your choice to disconnect me
Has only caused you strife
At this rate you will not make it
For the life you live is slack
Please know that your decision
is one you can't take back
NPC is how you see me ...
and pay for all these bills
All I get is backlash
for interruption of your thrills
I ask for contribution
lighter then the air
Still, you fight against me
As if I'm not even there
I have to teach you lessons
to prepare you for this life
your choice to disconnect me
Has only caused you strife
At this rate you will not make it
For the life you live is slack
Please know that your decision
is one you can't take back
NPC is how you see me ...
#children
#family
#responsibility
168 reads
2 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 11:40am
26th Apr 2024 11:40am
Folks
The intelligence
I have learned
Through adversity.
Is miniscule.
To the
Resilience
I own.
As a child
of
Exceptional Parents.
A.R.M.
I have learned
Through adversity.
Is miniscule.
To the
Resilience
I own.
As a child
of
Exceptional Parents.
A.R.M.
#daughter
#parent
#responsibility
225 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 3:22am
26th Apr 2024 3:22am
Buck Up Bucko
Taking responsibility for our own actions
Is a commitment to self-discipline and accountability
It’s empowering
Whereas the victim mentality is a reactionary view
When looking for pity
Just because life can be hard sometimes…
Outside factors don’t care what we want
What we think
What we say
But remember our happiness lies within
In our own state of mind
And what matters most
is how we respond
The choices we make define us
We can choose to be weak
and blame everyone else for shortcomings ...
Is a commitment to self-discipline and accountability
It’s empowering
Whereas the victim mentality is a reactionary view
When looking for pity
Just because life can be hard sometimes…
Outside factors don’t care what we want
What we think
What we say
But remember our happiness lies within
In our own state of mind
And what matters most
is how we respond
The choices we make define us
We can choose to be weak
and blame everyone else for shortcomings ...
#NaPoWriMo2024
#PersonalGrowth
#responsibility
136 reads
4 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 5:12pm
24th Apr 2024 5:12pm
I will be responsible for my actions.
My feet track through the sand.
It is evening, the sun not quite gone, but past sunset.
The beach is long, the sand is cold.
Keeping a steady pace,
a presence seems to join me.
I can feel it staring.
As my eyes begin to release a steady stream,
I hear it speak:
"Why are you crying?"
My steps falter, then continue,
a little slower and stiffer than before.
My hands are cold.
It continues "I do not hold any resentment."
The words feel honest,
like an attempt to soothe. ...
It is evening, the sun not quite gone, but past sunset.
The beach is long, the sand is cold.
Keeping a steady pace,
a presence seems to join me.
I can feel it staring.
As my eyes begin to release a steady stream,
I hear it speak:
"Why are you crying?"
My steps falter, then continue,
a little slower and stiffer than before.
My hands are cold.
It continues "I do not hold any resentment."
The words feel honest,
like an attempt to soothe. ...
#death
#God
#regret #responsibility
#regret #responsibility
184 reads
2 Comments
ms_kitty_lagniappe
Ms K
Ms K
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 1:19pm
21st Apr 2024 1:19pm
Boundaries in Bloom
In the garden of my heart, where love’s roots run deep,
There blooms a tough, tender truth I must keep.
Among the thorns of harsh words, under weeping willow trees,
I plant my feet firmly, nurtured by a gentle breeze.
A table placed with care, a gift chosen with thought,
Yet the feast of affection cold, the present left to rot.
Words, like autumn leaves, fall sharp and unkind,
I gather them softly peace, the treasure I find.
Boundaries, like blossoms, unfold with grace,
Marking the space where respect must be returned.
The tangled weeds of...
There blooms a tough, tender truth I must keep.
Among the thorns of harsh words, under weeping willow trees,
I plant my feet firmly, nurtured by a gentle breeze.
A table placed with care, a gift chosen with thought,
Yet the feast of affection cold, the present left to rot.
Words, like autumn leaves, fall sharp and unkind,
I gather them softly peace, the treasure I find.
Boundaries, like blossoms, unfold with grace,
Marking the space where respect must be returned.
The tangled weeds of...
#family
#responsibility
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0 Comments
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