Poems About Rejection by Top Critiquers
#rejection
Poems about rejection by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
6th May 2024 12:26pm
6th May 2024 12:26pm
Discarded
Don't send me home tomorrow
Let it be a perfect day
Don't bring me all of this sorrow
By choosing to send me away
My home, hell, life's existence is no more than a cell
I'm barren, I'm waste without you and you can tell
My heart and mind are no more than empty shells
With cracks widening and spidering with every farewell
How can you feel like this and yet fear the words
My advances were met by you retreating and my heart heard
Isn't it time for our sun to rise or do we only exist at night
Am I only to exist within your...
Let it be a perfect day
Don't bring me all of this sorrow
By choosing to send me away
My home, hell, life's existence is no more than a cell
I'm barren, I'm waste without you and you can tell
My heart and mind are no more than empty shells
With cracks widening and spidering with every farewell
How can you feel like this and yet fear the words
My advances were met by you retreating and my heart heard
Isn't it time for our sun to rise or do we only exist at night
Am I only to exist within your...
#love
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
295 reads
21 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
21st Feb 2021 8:46pm
21st Feb 2021 8:46pm
My Sweet Valentine (Part III of Part V)
#rejection
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
621 reads
1 Comment
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
20th Jun 2024 12:18pm
20th Jun 2024 12:18pm
Hollow
You bring me down
you cast me out
I grieve again
but I'll believe again
What you don't know
(fear blinds your soul)
as you watch me go
(your walls so sure)
I'll take my light
(in loveless dark)
I'll leave you hollow
(I wish you grace)
hollow
you cast me out
I grieve again
but I'll believe again
What you don't know
(fear blinds your soul)
as you watch me go
(your walls so sure)
I'll take my light
(in loveless dark)
I'll leave you hollow
(I wish you grace)
hollow
#dark
#faith
#hope
#power
#rejection
316 reads
14 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
21st Nov 2019 7:51pm
21st Nov 2019 7:51pm
The Broken Heart
The Broken Heart
Where do broken hearts go?
When they don't have a song to sing!
Or have a prayer?
When your heart is bare?
Where do broken hearts go?
When your heart has been?
As though being ripped out of your chest?
Then stomped on?
Then your body goes numb?
As you no longer care to live?
Where do broken hearts go?
They shun themselves far away from the rest of the world!
When they're all alone and can't stand to go on?
To be alone with themselves!
To think...think... think...think.
Thinking...
Where do broken hearts go?
When they don't have a song to sing!
Or have a prayer?
When your heart is bare?
Where do broken hearts go?
When your heart has been?
As though being ripped out of your chest?
Then stomped on?
Then your body goes numb?
As you no longer care to live?
Where do broken hearts go?
They shun themselves far away from the rest of the world!
When they're all alone and can't stand to go on?
To be alone with themselves!
To think...think... think...think.
Thinking...
#rejection
#betrayal
684 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 9:23am
11th Sep 2024 9:23am
an Envelope... with suffocating words
today, some of my words fell on the ground like falling stars
which were frozen like a dry layer on my wet lips
which wanted to shine on the paper like the sunlight
which remained hidden in a silent, stubborn and woeful room
which were embraced gently by someone in the lovely evening
today, they were found wrapped in dust on someone's doorstep
those who were growing up in the womb of sweet and soft dreams
had now become guilty by killing sleep
those who were synonymous of happiness and fragrance
and were making someone's...
which were frozen like a dry layer on my wet lips
which wanted to shine on the paper like the sunlight
which remained hidden in a silent, stubborn and woeful room
which were embraced gently by someone in the lovely evening
today, they were found wrapped in dust on someone's doorstep
those who were growing up in the womb of sweet and soft dreams
had now become guilty by killing sleep
those who were synonymous of happiness and fragrance
and were making someone's...
#dark
#rejection
#sadness
175 reads
5 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
19th Sep 2020 3:13am
19th Sep 2020 3:13am
Regret of Men and Women
I regret when men
and women cheat
because they ruin it
for all the good men
and women out there
looking to get to
know each other
It's hard to do this
because we all fear
rejection or if they
will cheat on us
Remember one thing
Always treat the
Woman with:
Kindness and Respect
and women cheat
because they ruin it
for all the good men
and women out there
looking to get to
know each other
It's hard to do this
because we all fear
rejection or if they
will cheat on us
Remember one thing
Always treat the
Woman with:
Kindness and Respect
#regret
#rejection
#women
#men
#emotions
539 reads
6 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 4:15pm
14th Sep 2024 4:15pm
The Slow Fade Of Confidence
There was a time
he never thought about it,
it came
(and so did he)
automatically...
He reveled in the opportunity
-the unspoken attraction
and the subsequent reaction
provoked by a chance meeting
or finding common ground
among a former acquaintance
The excitement of discovery
was motivation enough
and he grew to appreciate
the contrasts of others
- the differing shapes and movements
that offered that seal of delight
He wasn't reckless, by any means
or even someone who played the game ...
he never thought about it,
it came
(and so did he)
automatically...
He reveled in the opportunity
-the unspoken attraction
and the subsequent reaction
provoked by a chance meeting
or finding common ground
among a former acquaintance
The excitement of discovery
was motivation enough
and he grew to appreciate
the contrasts of others
- the differing shapes and movements
that offered that seal of delight
He wasn't reckless, by any means
or even someone who played the game ...
#anxiety
#lover
#rejection
#sadness
#vulnerability
158 reads
5 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 1:30pm
10th Sep 2024 1:30pm
Unscented BS
Unscented BS of quackery luring the lambs
like Little Bo Peep and Lemmings leaping
into the forever-forgotten obituary of fools
posted on a facade of tidbits and guilty omens
inclined to butcher the mind of common sense
playing marmalade to obsessed dark charades
who are as guilty as the one obsessed
thinking they a jester to Lady Godiva and the
pimpernel hiding in shadows
like Little Bo Peep and Lemmings leaping
into the forever-forgotten obituary of fools
posted on a facade of tidbits and guilty omens
inclined to butcher the mind of common sense
playing marmalade to obsessed dark charades
who are as guilty as the one obsessed
thinking they a jester to Lady Godiva and the
pimpernel hiding in shadows
#greed
#hate
#loneliness #rejection
#loneliness #rejection
119 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
The Negative side of Ai.
In google, i typed : AI generated poetry, and here what came.
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
#disappointment
#frustration
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
112 reads
14 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 10:47pm
20th Dec 2024 10:47pm
Glass Abortions (Cauldron Kill Series)
#dirty
#evil
#mother
#rejection
#son
48 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
16th Jan 2023 11:50pm
16th Jan 2023 11:50pm
oh no fair maid, I cannot marry you
ain’t just that my
socks smell, it doesn’t help me
taking them off, it’s
my feet, my feet
do as well
socks smell, it doesn’t help me
taking them off, it’s
my feet, my feet
do as well
#rejection
259 reads
1 Comment
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
18th Jul 2018 7:10am
18th Jul 2018 7:10am
Love Overdose
Your my addiction baby, you got me outta touch don't know what's fact or fiction.
Losing reality, is this love real or will it lead me to a fatality.
I lose sleep thinking fantasizing about your love.
I wanna be your wife, I wanna dress in all white like a dove.
I wanna lie in your bed and let you take over my body.
I wanna be the essence of your world, the light that brightens your dark days.
Guess it's true dreams don't come true.
I get sick of my wanting of you taking over my mind.
The lies being told...
Losing reality, is this love real or will it lead me to a fatality.
I lose sleep thinking fantasizing about your love.
I wanna be your wife, I wanna dress in all white like a dove.
I wanna lie in your bed and let you take over my body.
I wanna be the essence of your world, the light that brightens your dark days.
Guess it's true dreams don't come true.
I get sick of my wanting of you taking over my mind.
The lies being told...
#rejection
#love
#lust
814 reads
10 Comments
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