Poems About Rejection Seeking Honest Critique
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
DARK and TWISTED
Sometimes your honesty feels like violent blows
For I still carry our hidden secrets nobody knows
My eyes have opened, but my soul's departed
You left me stranded after just getting started
Somewhere along the way your feelings shifted
Leaving me often feeling so very dark and twisted
You were a trickster filled with so very many lies
To many when's and way far too many why's
Mixed in also with how come's and also who's
Leaving me dumbfounded without many clues
I know I'm not very special nor am I very gifted
I am...
For I still carry our hidden secrets nobody knows
My eyes have opened, but my soul's departed
You left me stranded after just getting started
Somewhere along the way your feelings shifted
Leaving me often feeling so very dark and twisted
You were a trickster filled with so very many lies
To many when's and way far too many why's
Mixed in also with how come's and also who's
Leaving me dumbfounded without many clues
I know I'm not very special nor am I very gifted
I am...
#rejection
#heartbroken
#emptiness #bittersweet
#emptiness #bittersweet
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Sisters
Thru years of laughter, and even tears.
Thru all the pain and happy cheers!!
Thru bullshit fights, and cold cold shoulders.
To arguments cuz you acted older.
Sly remarks, and evil eyes.
Yet choked back sobs from each goodbye.
Slamming doors, breaking glass..
Funny jokes and smoking grass.
Talking shit, fights and screams..
To hanging out and sharing dreams.
Thru childhood trauma, we got got thru somehow ..
We stuck together, at least until now,
It shouldn't matter the mood were in..
Tomorrow will come and we can try...
Thru all the pain and happy cheers!!
Thru bullshit fights, and cold cold shoulders.
To arguments cuz you acted older.
Sly remarks, and evil eyes.
Yet choked back sobs from each goodbye.
Slamming doors, breaking glass..
Funny jokes and smoking grass.
Talking shit, fights and screams..
To hanging out and sharing dreams.
Thru childhood trauma, we got got thru somehow ..
We stuck together, at least until now,
It shouldn't matter the mood were in..
Tomorrow will come and we can try...
#anger
#regret
#rejection
#shame
#disappointment
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Poets, The Innocent Liars
sometimes we have to fake to live
for a nice feedback to receive
thus, our hearts are quite and calm
and yet, we express too much pain
we are liars, the deceiftul writers
wicked crafters, and manipulators
we seek sympathy and others attention
even against our own self-abnegation
but, sincerely we are very bad actors
making color movies from old cliches
outdated scripts and Hitchcock scenarios
to look pitiful in masked low-budget thrillers
the innocent words to outwardly deliver
alas ! die so fast...
for a nice feedback to receive
thus, our hearts are quite and calm
and yet, we express too much pain
we are liars, the deceiftul writers
wicked crafters, and manipulators
we seek sympathy and others attention
even against our own self-abnegation
but, sincerely we are very bad actors
making color movies from old cliches
outdated scripts and Hitchcock scenarios
to look pitiful in masked low-budget thrillers
the innocent words to outwardly deliver
alas ! die so fast...
#rejection
#abuse
#misunderstood
#despair
#emotional
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You're spouting a load of utter crap Harriet Harman! Get real, woman!
By Stanley Collymore
No way should our MPs ever be
allowed to work from home or
anywhere else, come to that,
for that matter as many of them clearly
and quite unscrupulously already do in
the latter case. We quite literally, elect
our MPs, in this here United Kingdom,
to effectively unquestionably actually
readily, and professionally; physically
and accountably, significantly deliver
themselves quite accountably within
the House of Commons, and literally
crucially as well actually take part in
debates...
No way should our MPs ever be
allowed to work from home or
anywhere else, come to that,
for that matter as many of them clearly
and quite unscrupulously already do in
the latter case. We quite literally, elect
our MPs, in this here United Kingdom,
to effectively unquestionably actually
readily, and professionally; physically
and accountably, significantly deliver
themselves quite accountably within
the House of Commons, and literally
crucially as well actually take part in
debates...
#rejection
#shame
#greed
#denial
#emptiness
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Unlucky Seven
Moments still stand still
Yet time passed me by
This haunting eerie chill
I close my eyes and sigh
There's almost a time
When I think back
My memories sublime
Despite true love I lacked
Decisions that I made
Caused this course of life
But if I could trade
And change life's cutting knife
What if is the question on my mind
How would we now be
Would there be love we'd find
That might be you and me
Would I be what you sought
How would you now feel
What you think you thought
You felt would it be real ...
Yet time passed me by
This haunting eerie chill
I close my eyes and sigh
There's almost a time
When I think back
My memories sublime
Despite true love I lacked
Decisions that I made
Caused this course of life
But if I could trade
And change life's cutting knife
What if is the question on my mind
How would we now be
Would there be love we'd find
That might be you and me
Would I be what you sought
How would you now feel
What you think you thought
You felt would it be real ...
#rejection
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Never Came Back
He never came back no he didn't
he never came back no more
said he would be gone just for a minute
but he never came back no more
put in his pocket a shiny gold shilling
cleaned up his boots
saddled up the philly
but he never came back no he didn't
he never came back no more
stood on the porch as the sun when a setting
if i had a gold shilling
i would of laid it down betting
he'd be back knockin on the door
is that what i feel my heart just a breakin
he never came back no he didn't
he never came back no...
he never came back no more
said he would be gone just for a minute
but he never came back no more
put in his pocket a shiny gold shilling
cleaned up his boots
saddled up the philly
but he never came back no he didn't
he never came back no more
stood on the porch as the sun when a setting
if i had a gold shilling
i would of laid it down betting
he'd be back knockin on the door
is that what i feel my heart just a breakin
he never came back no he didn't
he never came back no...
#grief
#rejection
#SelfReflection
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FInal Nine
Life's a joke love isn't blind
Our love affair undermined
Sad and lonely I await
One day closer to number eight
The journey of pain is how I feel
At least I know what isn't real
Can't hide the truth time tells all
No more hiding in my denial
It's good to know I'm glad you're fine
As am I I'm down to nine
So here I wait patiently
One day closer to eternity
In the end I don't mind
Just counting down my final nine
Our love affair undermined
Sad and lonely I await
One day closer to number eight
The journey of pain is how I feel
At least I know what isn't real
Can't hide the truth time tells all
No more hiding in my denial
It's good to know I'm glad you're fine
As am I I'm down to nine
So here I wait patiently
One day closer to eternity
In the end I don't mind
Just counting down my final nine
#rejection
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Silent Shadows of A Castle's Dance
In the biggest ballroom that once held the loudest Galas.
Into the biggest pocket of time where echoes surround us.
Empty and abandoned this castle is a lot like most people.
Happy, full of life, and glowing as the days go by.
Until one small tick causes a ripple in time.
A place that used to hold so much management.
Now so empty and left abandoned and stranded.
If you think about it, this castle could represent my love.
The love I’ve had for you that I can’t contain very well.
I’ve tried to push you away but god it hurts like...
Into the biggest pocket of time where echoes surround us.
Empty and abandoned this castle is a lot like most people.
Happy, full of life, and glowing as the days go by.
Until one small tick causes a ripple in time.
A place that used to hold so much management.
Now so empty and left abandoned and stranded.
If you think about it, this castle could represent my love.
The love I’ve had for you that I can’t contain very well.
I’ve tried to push you away but god it hurts like...
#love
#regret
#rejection
#emptiness
#sacrifice
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The Embrace of Serenity
At the dawn of bliss, our story took a twist,
Into a raging tempest, my heart couldn't resist.
Once adorned with adventure, our link did thrive,
But as emotions surged, he became the brilliant star in your sight.
Now, friendship is the path we must embrace,
Reviving the link that time can't erase.
Our fleeting fling, a saga in the hazy land,
In future endeavors, let games be muted and subdued.
May my heart find solace, in the hug of peace,
May healing unfold, as harmony sets us free.
Into a raging tempest, my heart couldn't resist.
Once adorned with adventure, our link did thrive,
But as emotions surged, he became the brilliant star in your sight.
Now, friendship is the path we must embrace,
Reviving the link that time can't erase.
Our fleeting fling, a saga in the hazy land,
In future endeavors, let games be muted and subdued.
May my heart find solace, in the hug of peace,
May healing unfold, as harmony sets us free.
#rejection
#heartbroken
#betrayal #polyamory
#betrayal #polyamory
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Utterly disgusting and quite thoroughly, revoltingly sick!
By Stanley Collymore
Purposely mixing your supposedly
known biological father's sperm
with your own, to ensure that
your partner gets pregnant, posing an
obvious possibility, that you basically
either knew, or effectively suspected
that at best, you possibly have a low
sperm count, or are crucially, literally
azoospermiac is very reprehensible.
And any genuinely, moral individual
will fully recognize that as the case.
Seemingly, however, Britain is now
so thoroughly morally and simply
discernibly debased, that...
Purposely mixing your supposedly
known biological father's sperm
with your own, to ensure that
your partner gets pregnant, posing an
obvious possibility, that you basically
either knew, or effectively suspected
that at best, you possibly have a low
sperm count, or are crucially, literally
azoospermiac is very reprehensible.
And any genuinely, moral individual
will fully recognize that as the case.
Seemingly, however, Britain is now
so thoroughly morally and simply
discernibly debased, that...
#anger
#rejection
#dark
#greed
#denial
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Uncomplicated
As I lie here awake
Your whispers haunt the thickened air
This loneliness I cannot take
I feel your breath like you were there
All the time we've been as one
Like our world would never end
Before I knew it you were gone
What was real were we pretend
All your laughter and those tears
Cherished forever in my heart
When I reflect over the years
Losing you was the hardest part
It's so hard to explain what I feel
And that you were a part of me
So when losing you became so real
I was...
Your whispers haunt the thickened air
This loneliness I cannot take
I feel your breath like you were there
All the time we've been as one
Like our world would never end
Before I knew it you were gone
What was real were we pretend
All your laughter and those tears
Cherished forever in my heart
When I reflect over the years
Losing you was the hardest part
It's so hard to explain what I feel
And that you were a part of me
So when losing you became so real
I was...
#rejection
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Gypsy Feeling
Born and bred in the forlorn bled
I've seen fake,the truth never said
The town i've fled, Nature instead
Gypsy in the blood, little i am fed
I live quite on the margin, self-satisfied
I have mountains, and the pastures wide
A shepherds' friend, the herd by my side
A friend of words and the world in mind
i've learnt to smile in my enemies' faces
I've learned to stand in the saddest cases
The wisdom i gained from the lives taken
Deepened by death, so not to be mistaken
I love...
I've seen fake,the truth never said
The town i've fled, Nature instead
Gypsy in the blood, little i am fed
I live quite on the margin, self-satisfied
I have mountains, and the pastures wide
A shepherds' friend, the herd by my side
A friend of words and the world in mind
i've learnt to smile in my enemies' faces
I've learned to stand in the saddest cases
The wisdom i gained from the lives taken
Deepened by death, so not to be mistaken
I love...
#sadness
#anxiety
#hate
#rejection
#confusion
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