Poems About Rejection Seeking Friendly Advice
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
For Hire-one seat seeking bums.
On a packed train,heaving bodies,stand face-to-face, facing the taste of breath,of each squashed up,sweet smelly bodies. On their way to slave work.
Every seat was taken.
Except,
For the one next to me.
No-one seemed to want to sit down.
At every stop,each passenger that boarded,
first looked at me,
then at the vacant seat.
Their bodies contorted,rigamortise
I began to wonder if it was me.
With my inquisitive broad nose.
(Inherited from my family.)
I delicately,With stealth like precision, ...
Every seat was taken.
Except,
For the one next to me.
No-one seemed to want to sit down.
At every stop,each passenger that boarded,
first looked at me,
then at the vacant seat.
Their bodies contorted,rigamortise
I began to wonder if it was me.
With my inquisitive broad nose.
(Inherited from my family.)
I delicately,With stealth like precision, ...
#rejection
#LifeStruggles
#ignorance
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the onlookers
The onlookers
How busy we are in our pedestrian life
how shocked morally we behave when they
misbehave, it gives us a pathetic life
it means thinking
in something undefined
we are better than them
the rich are not different than us, but
the can live a dream
as for us, we can do one of two things
be envious and cheap, or know the world
gives leeway to the people they will eat
one day, and when we are not looking
a sudden death and more stories will
was it a murder plot when the simple
truth is pathetic and...
How busy we are in our pedestrian life
how shocked morally we behave when they
misbehave, it gives us a pathetic life
it means thinking
in something undefined
we are better than them
the rich are not different than us, but
the can live a dream
as for us, we can do one of two things
be envious and cheap, or know the world
gives leeway to the people they will eat
one day, and when we are not looking
a sudden death and more stories will
was it a murder plot when the simple
truth is pathetic and...
#sadness
#rejection
#shame
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Round and Round
#regret
#rejection
#heartbroken
#breakup
#IMissYou
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Smouldering embers
I Am A Tragedy.
A great Shakespearian imaginary.
Acting through a Sonnet, metamorphis style.
Like a rocket,
I elevate sporadic Lee. Lee sporadically,tragically,majestically. No matter inside, out. In plain sight.
Whilst still in school.
Bullies turned me into a mule. So I prayed to the moon, consistently, traumatically, revolutionary,reactionary, resilient who I be.
In-spite my spider-like life. My web couldn't stop the process of bullies putting me down, through their spiteful insights.
Smouldering embers,kept up the fight....
A great Shakespearian imaginary.
Acting through a Sonnet, metamorphis style.
Like a rocket,
I elevate sporadic Lee. Lee sporadically,tragically,majestically. No matter inside, out. In plain sight.
Whilst still in school.
Bullies turned me into a mule. So I prayed to the moon, consistently, traumatically, revolutionary,reactionary, resilient who I be.
In-spite my spider-like life. My web couldn't stop the process of bullies putting me down, through their spiteful insights.
Smouldering embers,kept up the fight....
#anxiety
#regret
#rejection #frustration
#rejection #frustration
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Deep wounds.
I was terrible at arithmetic and subsequently received a big fat (F) for failed!
I stumble and fall apart at the sight of numbers. Calculator always at hand.
(I hate you. Her languid body language informed me.)
It's hard for a child to grow successfully,with the hounds of hell biting at their heels.
Let go,hound informs me. For your sanity to thrive.
It doesn't hurt me anymore.
So I'll try.
But deep wounds thrive.
©SukiSushiCrown.19-02-2024
I stumble and fall apart at the sight of numbers. Calculator always at hand.
(I hate you. Her languid body language informed me.)
It's hard for a child to grow successfully,with the hounds of hell biting at their heels.
Let go,hound informs me. For your sanity to thrive.
It doesn't hurt me anymore.
So I'll try.
But deep wounds thrive.
©SukiSushiCrown.19-02-2024
#sadness
#rejection
#bittersweet
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I Died Before the Morning Dew
So suppose that I must confess
For what pray tell but I digress
The crimes I see inside of me
Best left to childhood memory
Some secrets better left untold
To feel the pain as we grow old
This is what I confess to you
I died before the morning dew
To hide among the common thread
From dreams that burn with words she said
Admitting I was left alone
Aches within me a broken bone
The greatest fear that's left in me
That love is something I can't see
A hiding man undercover
Little boy left by his mother ...
For what pray tell but I digress
The crimes I see inside of me
Best left to childhood memory
Some secrets better left untold
To feel the pain as we grow old
This is what I confess to you
I died before the morning dew
To hide among the common thread
From dreams that burn with words she said
Admitting I was left alone
Aches within me a broken bone
The greatest fear that's left in me
That love is something I can't see
A hiding man undercover
Little boy left by his mother ...
#loneliness
#rejection
#abuse
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sadness
her hair hides
the fragile smile
as tears find
their way down
her cheeks,
dropping away
into emptiness
and confusion,
passing lost hope
and what was
once happier days.
the fragile smile
as tears find
their way down
her cheeks,
dropping away
into emptiness
and confusion,
passing lost hope
and what was
once happier days.
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#frustration
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No-one can think.
"Look. I mean. Don't blame yourself."
"But I do! I cussed him out this morning."
"But I mean. It's not your fault. I know you do your best you can."
"He's fifteen years old."
"He's nearly a man though. He knows right from wrong."
"Wot you talkin bout. He's just a boy!"
"Come on baby, you're alright. Right?"
"Are you being funny! How can I be alright?"
"Listen babe. I don't want us to fight."
"This ain't fighting. I'm jus stating a fact." ...
"But I do! I cussed him out this morning."
"But I mean. It's not your fault. I know you do your best you can."
"He's fifteen years old."
"He's nearly a man though. He knows right from wrong."
"Wot you talkin bout. He's just a boy!"
"Come on baby, you're alright. Right?"
"Are you being funny! How can I be alright?"
"Listen babe. I don't want us to fight."
"This ain't fighting. I'm jus stating a fact." ...
#sadness
#regret
#rejection
#disappointment
#bittersweet
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Not who I see
We were meant to be
Now I'm drowning
Lost at sea
Crying
A knife to the back
You're certainly
Not lacking tact
Crawling out of windows
Quietly morphing
Your shape into the shadows
Hiding
Stories changing to lies
Truth is hidden
Where you'll never find
Betrayal at your core
Selling your soul
Is something you can't afford
Love your selfish self
While the rest of us
Walk through hell
You crossed a line
There's no going back
No, we...
Now I'm drowning
Lost at sea
Crying
A knife to the back
You're certainly
Not lacking tact
Crawling out of windows
Quietly morphing
Your shape into the shadows
Hiding
Stories changing to lies
Truth is hidden
Where you'll never find
Betrayal at your core
Selling your soul
Is something you can't afford
Love your selfish self
While the rest of us
Walk through hell
You crossed a line
There's no going back
No, we...
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#disappointment
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Borrowed Heart
Something borrowed
Something blue
Had I only known
I’d borrowed you
We met at a wedding
A family affair
You were the best man
I did the brides hair
I caught your attention
You smiled at me
We locked eyes a moment
Underneath the oak tree
The vows were exchanged
The whole time you stared
My heart began racing
The wind in my hair
We met at the bar
You just said “hello”
Your voice unexpected
You spoke very low
You seemed then so timid
And a little bit bold ...
Something blue
Had I only known
I’d borrowed you
We met at a wedding
A family affair
You were the best man
I did the brides hair
I caught your attention
You smiled at me
We locked eyes a moment
Underneath the oak tree
The vows were exchanged
The whole time you stared
My heart began racing
The wind in my hair
We met at the bar
You just said “hello”
Your voice unexpected
You spoke very low
You seemed then so timid
And a little bit bold ...
#sadness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove
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Inane things
A audience of one can be fun.
I lived with paint at home.
I lived with pain at school,
at the hands of insecure,insignificant fools,who knew the were nothing special.
Like them,life horrified me.
So I learned to buy inane material things.
©SukiSushiCrown.27-01-2024
I lived with paint at home.
I lived with pain at school,
at the hands of insecure,insignificant fools,who knew the were nothing special.
Like them,life horrified me.
So I learned to buy inane material things.
©SukiSushiCrown.27-01-2024
#loneliness
#rejection
#misunderstood
#ignorance
#FeelingTrapped
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Thank God for Poetry
I cried out for you
longing to be held.
A vast field of glass shards
and broken eggshells between us.
Stripping myself naked I crawled through,
vulnerable and alone, cut and bleeding.
Reaching the shore of a mother's love
I outstretched my hands with silly hope.
You turned and walked away, footprints
spelling abandon in the sand.
With a clenched fist I forgave you
and began to hate myself.
I walked the train intravenously,
crossing into madness, selling my soul.
Cold and homeless I warmed myself...
longing to be held.
A vast field of glass shards
and broken eggshells between us.
Stripping myself naked I crawled through,
vulnerable and alone, cut and bleeding.
Reaching the shore of a mother's love
I outstretched my hands with silly hope.
You turned and walked away, footprints
spelling abandon in the sand.
With a clenched fist I forgave you
and began to hate myself.
I walked the train intravenously,
crossing into madness, selling my soul.
Cold and homeless I warmed myself...
#rejection
#abuse
#peace #gratitude
#peace #gratitude
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rejection Seeking Friendly Advice