Poems About Rebirth by Top Critiquers
#rebirth
AverageJoe
Poem Published
10th Feb 2023 00:09am
10th Feb 2023 00:09am
Bye
I hope you've gathered the beauty I have lost
Across miles leading elsewhere
Then there and here
Across the fleeting years
When lives diverge
And spun all my memories into dreams of gold
Where flies the days
Those precious hours told
I've lost your growing into all you've become
The tale's told without telling
Becoming someone unknown
The chrysalis empty
The ghost of what was
Haunting me
Still
And I
Someone else
A standing stone
Marking only
Once this was the place
Just a castle...
Across miles leading elsewhere
Then there and here
Across the fleeting years
When lives diverge
And spun all my memories into dreams of gold
Where flies the days
Those precious hours told
I've lost your growing into all you've become
The tale's told without telling
Becoming someone unknown
The chrysalis empty
The ghost of what was
Haunting me
Still
And I
Someone else
A standing stone
Marking only
Once this was the place
Just a castle...
#love
#regret
#rebirth #LifeCycle
#rebirth #LifeCycle
290 reads
10 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Feb 2023 7:09pm
26th Feb 2023 7:09pm
Black History Month
Awash in an ocean of cliché
I saw the sonnet in a brand new way
Where there was no where to go but above,
Strait up into altisonous love
Where lesser noise is left far below
In the surround sound of platitude's show;
Stuck in the cheap seats of discord and din
Grieving again at the wages of sin.
But sometimes, just sometimes...sounds are quite good,
Markedly, when they can be understood,
And in this way can be epiphanic
More so than lingo uttered in panic...
And that concludes my sententious sermon ...
I saw the sonnet in a brand new way
Where there was no where to go but above,
Strait up into altisonous love
Where lesser noise is left far below
In the surround sound of platitude's show;
Stuck in the cheap seats of discord and din
Grieving again at the wages of sin.
But sometimes, just sometimes...sounds are quite good,
Markedly, when they can be understood,
And in this way can be epiphanic
More so than lingo uttered in panic...
And that concludes my sententious sermon ...
#Christian
#rebirth
#morality
200 reads
0 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
25th Jan 2021 3:48am
25th Jan 2021 3:48am
Love letter to my church
From this pit of frustration
I cry out
Will no one join me?
Does nobody see what I see?
Such a sweet loving family
of navel-gazing sinner/saints
imploding into
comfortable
apathy.
The King has left this building.
He's out hob-nobbing
with the desperate --
those who are so empty
of answers and self
that they actually have room to receive love.
No, not that saccharine-starry love
that promises deliverance from this life
to a...
I cry out
Will no one join me?
Does nobody see what I see?
Such a sweet loving family
of navel-gazing sinner/saints
imploding into
comfortable
apathy.
The King has left this building.
He's out hob-nobbing
with the desperate --
those who are so empty
of answers and self
that they actually have room to receive love.
No, not that saccharine-starry love
that promises deliverance from this life
to a...
#loneliness
#religion
#rebirth #spiritual
#rebirth #spiritual
447 reads
12 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 1:21am
30th Dec 2023 1:21am
Welcome Back Otter
If I were to return to earth in another lifeform
I would comeback as a Sea Otter
Be part of nature’s cycle and balance
I would be happy to live in the water
I’d be grooming and primping my thick coat of fur
Floating in the ocean under the California sun
Watching and waving at the whales going by
Diving for food and swimming all day would be fun
No matter what religious or philosophical views
Being a marine mammal would teach all a lesson
Perhaps bringing more awareness to humans
And the dangers to the ecosystems would lessen...
I would comeback as a Sea Otter
Be part of nature’s cycle and balance
I would be happy to live in the water
I’d be grooming and primping my thick coat of fur
Floating in the ocean under the California sun
Watching and waving at the whales going by
Diving for food and swimming all day would be fun
No matter what religious or philosophical views
Being a marine mammal would teach all a lesson
Perhaps bringing more awareness to humans
And the dangers to the ecosystems would lessen...
#earth
#environment
#rebirth #philosophical
#rebirth #philosophical
156 reads
4 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
6th Mar 2020 7:11pm
6th Mar 2020 7:11pm
Gunther's Point
Follow me to Gunther's Point
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
#love
#inspirational
#God
#rebirth
#curse
475 reads
2 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 7:17pm
9th Nov 2024 7:17pm
Scarlet
Sullied blazing blood flowing down my skin,
Scarlet droplets trickling into the tender chalice flower,
Stained with rotten hemorrhage clouding its white petals.
When I turn into an empty, sallow corpse,
Purify the darkening sanguine of any mottles,
Revive me from my own remnants.
Scarlet droplets trickling into the tender chalice flower,
Stained with rotten hemorrhage clouding its white petals.
When I turn into an empty, sallow corpse,
Purify the darkening sanguine of any mottles,
Revive me from my own remnants.
#dark
#rebirth
87 reads
InDreamz
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 5:05pm
10th Sep 2024 5:05pm
Death
In the womb
of death
I shall slumber
like a baby,
surrounded by an amniotic
ocean of serenity.
Learn, grow, develop
in my waking,
and be nourished through
the umbilical cord
connected to the spiritual realm
until
I'm ready for rebirth
Ready to experience
heaven 'n' hell
again...
of death
I shall slumber
like a baby,
surrounded by an amniotic
ocean of serenity.
Learn, grow, develop
in my waking,
and be nourished through
the umbilical cord
connected to the spiritual realm
until
I'm ready for rebirth
Ready to experience
heaven 'n' hell
again...
#death
#philosophical
#rebirth
#sleep
#spiritual
225 reads
19 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 7:07pm
28th Aug 2024 7:07pm
Mars meets Venus In Poetry
When Mars and Venus collide, earth wont be enough place
to contain their burning fires,,there will be volcanoes,
eruption of emotive interaction,geysers, a poetic cataclysm.
A symbiosis reflection of feelings.,,,,,, death and life all mix
in a synergic entwined unity..radiations of airborne feelings and fires,
like a lightening that tears the sky with a sharp light, making the heart
stands in awe..stand aloof watching this new kind of existence.....
no life no death,
There is a cosmic assimilation, a synergy of flat and round lines, ...
to contain their burning fires,,there will be volcanoes,
eruption of emotive interaction,geysers, a poetic cataclysm.
A symbiosis reflection of feelings.,,,,,, death and life all mix
in a synergic entwined unity..radiations of airborne feelings and fires,
like a lightening that tears the sky with a sharp light, making the heart
stands in awe..stand aloof watching this new kind of existence.....
no life no death,
There is a cosmic assimilation, a synergy of flat and round lines, ...
#astrology
#fate
#morality
#rebirth
#spiritual
108 reads
6 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 00:09am
4th Nov 2024 00:09am
Under the Linden Tree
the river crystal clear spiritual shadows entwine
keeping deep sorrow a story almost divine
a baby girl lost in a woman memories trapped
of being lost in the depth innocence still wrapped
the echoes and memories of a linden tree
branches low caressing the ground tenderly
the soft earth beneath cradled her baby form
covered in embrace of wildflowers swarm
she remembers the stream in her dream
the cool crystal clear water where she fell
the cool breeze on her as she was thrown
by her mother into where the fishes dwell
...
keeping deep sorrow a story almost divine
a baby girl lost in a woman memories trapped
of being lost in the depth innocence still wrapped
the echoes and memories of a linden tree
branches low caressing the ground tenderly
the soft earth beneath cradled her baby form
covered in embrace of wildflowers swarm
she remembers the stream in her dream
the cool crystal clear water where she fell
the cool breeze on her as she was thrown
by her mother into where the fishes dwell
...
#dreams
#rebirth
96 reads
6 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2020 1:45am
23rd Oct 2020 1:45am
LIFE!!
I have a lot
of reasons
for gratitude,
and hope
for a beneficial future,
and,
upon reminiscing,
Yeah,
I would do most of it again.
of reasons
for gratitude,
and hope
for a beneficial future,
and,
upon reminiscing,
Yeah,
I would do most of it again.
#rebirth
382 reads
0 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2020 11:19pm
3rd Jun 2020 11:19pm
Something Is Squeezing My Skull
Exhumed from dinosaur wombs
We are the closest
Rock to damnation,
Weeping wounds
Of savage(d) Gods.
Fossilised firmament of
Feathered wing tip,
Quill inscribed patterns
Bayonet tapestries:
We repeat desecration, sabotage,
As pigs filing back to abattoir.
Rhapsody of reliquary bleeds
O’er plastic vases and paper plinths,
Urns of rosary beads, rowed
Along sunset kerbs:
Suffer the little orphans.
Thus the night,
Mounts stone bird shoulders
Has come
Ghost mortem,
To mourn her...
We are the closest
Rock to damnation,
Weeping wounds
Of savage(d) Gods.
Fossilised firmament of
Feathered wing tip,
Quill inscribed patterns
Bayonet tapestries:
We repeat desecration, sabotage,
As pigs filing back to abattoir.
Rhapsody of reliquary bleeds
O’er plastic vases and paper plinths,
Urns of rosary beads, rowed
Along sunset kerbs:
Suffer the little orphans.
Thus the night,
Mounts stone bird shoulders
Has come
Ghost mortem,
To mourn her...
#love
#universe
#rebirth #dystopian
#rebirth #dystopian
382 reads
2 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 8:30am
6th Dec 2024 8:30am
The True Story Of Adam And Eve
Another lovely day in paradise.
The sky is coloured in orangy red
When from their wildflower bed
Adam and Eve gently rise.
All of nature breathes peace.
Playfully a fox chases a hare.
Sweet birdsong lingers in the air.
Sun warms a cat’s golden fleece.
A stroll through Garden Eden they take
With a lively mind and carefree.
When Eve stops in front of a tree,
On one branch lies a glittering snake.
"Careful, Eve! From the evil run away!"
“It’s a harmless beauty, can't you see?
I'm sure it's the...
The sky is coloured in orangy red
When from their wildflower bed
Adam and Eve gently rise.
All of nature breathes peace.
Playfully a fox chases a hare.
Sweet birdsong lingers in the air.
Sun warms a cat’s golden fleece.
A stroll through Garden Eden they take
With a lively mind and carefree.
When Eve stops in front of a tree,
On one branch lies a glittering snake.
"Careful, Eve! From the evil run away!"
“It’s a harmless beauty, can't you see?
I'm sure it's the...
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
79 reads
8 Comments
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