Poems About Rebirth Seeking Honest Critique
#rebirth
Yesterdays Future, Multiverse
Pictures flash
in front of me
colour fractions
pass , so frequently
tomorrows past
we all can see
just like yesterdays future
will always be .
Existential
within this dimension
every now and then
we hit old connections
reform recollections
get born
into new shells
conform
then live through hell
then fall
to the tomb , again .
There's relativity
and times gone
that will always be
no energy spent
just forms , new shapes
to represent
the...
in front of me
colour fractions
pass , so frequently
tomorrows past
we all can see
just like yesterdays future
will always be .
Existential
within this dimension
every now and then
we hit old connections
reform recollections
get born
into new shells
conform
then live through hell
then fall
to the tomb , again .
There's relativity
and times gone
that will always be
no energy spent
just forms , new shapes
to represent
the...
#death
#universe
#rebirth
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This Is What I Would Like To See Happening
I really do
wish they open the shopping
malls back up like the old days.
wish they open the shopping
malls back up like the old days.
#rebirth
#dialogue
#nostalgia
#nonfiction
#bittersweet
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From ashes comes beauty
In the depths of a timeless valley, where darkness reigns and hope seems lost, I find myself entangled in a web of despair. The once vibrant light that illuminated my path has been obscured by the shadows that now surround me. Lost and alone, I wander aimlessly, with only the winter breeze as my companion.
As I struggle to find my way through this barren land, my mind is consumed by doubt and fear. Whispers of doubt and uncertainty echo in the night, haunting me with their relentless taunts. I am filled with a sense of foreboding, anxiously awaiting the inevitable moment when...
As I struggle to find my way through this barren land, my mind is consumed by doubt and fear. Whispers of doubt and uncertainty echo in the night, haunting me with their relentless taunts. I am filled with a sense of foreboding, anxiously awaiting the inevitable moment when...
#faith
#rebirth
#fate
#spiritual
#redemption
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Long live the jellyfish
In the brine of forgotten ages,
Drift the jellyfish, translucent and eternal,
their bodies pulsing with borrowed light,
a dance of impermanence.
We mere mortals envy your secret pact,
to give up persecution for eternity,
and embrace the abyss of oblivion,
where memories dissolve like salt in water.
Let us grant them our coveted gift:
Immortality, wrapped in gelatinous grace,
while we, the fleeting sparks of existence,
dive headlong into the oblivious void.
For what is human life but a flash,
a phosphorescent...
Drift the jellyfish, translucent and eternal,
their bodies pulsing with borrowed light,
a dance of impermanence.
We mere mortals envy your secret pact,
to give up persecution for eternity,
and embrace the abyss of oblivion,
where memories dissolve like salt in water.
Let us grant them our coveted gift:
Immortality, wrapped in gelatinous grace,
while we, the fleeting sparks of existence,
dive headlong into the oblivious void.
For what is human life but a flash,
a phosphorescent...
#birth
#death
#nature
#rebirth
#LifeCycle
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The Corruption of Molly Tasnim
#dark
#corruption
#murder
#rebirth
#horror
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Unhuman
I open the curtains of blasphemy of whose torn veils decorate and violate
The silent chamber's non - spoken stillness as if spectres dance in a masqurade
A lonely shadow brisks upon a long withered painting cast aside deliberate
Staring through its hollow holes into the room while eluded epiphanies ressurect
Macabre visions weave a halo of dripping blood sliding down the skin
Embroidering seething stigmas emanated, defiled, sanctified by the sin
Which is committed with a rapturous zeal, opted for the remainder within
A glorious way to succumb...
The silent chamber's non - spoken stillness as if spectres dance in a masqurade
A lonely shadow brisks upon a long withered painting cast aside deliberate
Staring through its hollow holes into the room while eluded epiphanies ressurect
Macabre visions weave a halo of dripping blood sliding down the skin
Embroidering seething stigmas emanated, defiled, sanctified by the sin
Which is committed with a rapturous zeal, opted for the remainder within
A glorious way to succumb...
#rebirth
#evolution
#SelfReflection
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The Miracle of the Divine Twins
#God
#rebirth
#spiritual
#mythology
#desert
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Imbolc Cleansing
O Brigid, your season has arrived
Bowing to you, Jack Frost retreats
Nature speaks spring language
The first leaves unfurl, seeds sprout
Animals give birth to their offspring
Blessed by your light, o Goddess of
Fertility, the eternal circle of
Birth death and rebirth starts anew
I call upon your guidance, o Brigid
All rooms are prepared and cleaned
The incense sticks are kindled
Now the time has come to
Smudge the house of my soul
I am afraid to face the darker side
Encouraged by your divine light
I open the...
Bowing to you, Jack Frost retreats
Nature speaks spring language
The first leaves unfurl, seeds sprout
Animals give birth to their offspring
Blessed by your light, o Goddess of
Fertility, the eternal circle of
Birth death and rebirth starts anew
I call upon your guidance, o Brigid
All rooms are prepared and cleaned
The incense sticks are kindled
Now the time has come to
Smudge the house of my soul
I am afraid to face the darker side
Encouraged by your divine light
I open the...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#mythology #pagan
#mythology #pagan
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weightlessness
A very common caterpillar
eating leaves non-stop.
She dreams of being a butterfly...
Could have been a butterpillar
or it could even be a caterfly...
Ends of the same Gordian knot.
eating leaves non-stop.
She dreams of being a butterfly...
Could have been a butterpillar
or it could even be a caterfly...
Ends of the same Gordian knot.
#butterfly
#rebirth
#mirror
#metaphor
#healing
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Of Ancient Lore Forgotten
- Of Ancient Lore Forgotten -
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#pagan
#philosophical
#rebellion
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Nothing's Lost, you see?
When my frame can no longer hold me here, My Spirit, He will search The Eternal for dreams held off my reach. Planting these as seeds in my children's blood, He will say, "These sketches, Nana left them to guide the path you choose to follow."
We do not only give birth to our children. He Who gives them life, gives us their dreams as well to bear.
Nothing's Lost, You see?!
We do not only give birth to our children. He Who gives them life, gives us their dreams as well to bear.
Nothing's Lost, You see?!
#children
#dreams
#rebirth
#TruthOfLife
#LifeCycle
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Bitcoin futures
Bitcoin futures
My future in a casket?
the black crows, cawing laugh
ends exit sign that flickers
my winters chilling draught
trading with the Devil
or any God that listens
my unwritten Will in blood
before my body stiffens
hear the raging clamour
the golden trading kite
Plutus, from the floor I soar
do what the HELL I LIKE!
unlimited potential
a never waning star
Midas jealous as can be
financing a new Farrari car
no need to wish a fairy
with wand...
My future in a casket?
the black crows, cawing laugh
ends exit sign that flickers
my winters chilling draught
trading with the Devil
or any God that listens
my unwritten Will in blood
before my body stiffens
hear the raging clamour
the golden trading kite
Plutus, from the floor I soar
do what the HELL I LIKE!
unlimited potential
a never waning star
Midas jealous as can be
financing a new Farrari car
no need to wish a fairy
with wand...
#rebirth
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rebirth Seeking Honest Critique