Poems About Rebirth by Top Critiquers
#rebirth
Hydrangeas
She was a good wife
Married for over 40 years
She was warm, considerate and always willing & able to help someone
Her talent was making beautiful, colorful gardens all around her property
She also donated her time to the arboretum
This year things have been different for her
She was diagnosed with stage 4 cancer
Her ability to work on the yard and create beautiful, majestic gardens have been impossible
She's very ill
She can't maneuver like she use to
Her husband doesn't have a green thumb
For the 1st time in over 40 years,...
Married for over 40 years
She was warm, considerate and always willing & able to help someone
Her talent was making beautiful, colorful gardens all around her property
She also donated her time to the arboretum
This year things have been different for her
She was diagnosed with stage 4 cancer
Her ability to work on the yard and create beautiful, majestic gardens have been impossible
She's very ill
She can't maneuver like she use to
Her husband doesn't have a green thumb
For the 1st time in over 40 years,...
#cancer
#flowers
#illness
#rebirth
#wife
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10 Comments
Ghost
I seek the solitary places in the darkness
where my soul becomes unhinged
and I rise into the abyss
touching other spirits evolve into mist
my memories touching the aether
blending time with breath
I ascend into the heavens
a life lived well
where my soul becomes unhinged
and I rise into the abyss
touching other spirits evolve into mist
my memories touching the aether
blending time with breath
I ascend into the heavens
a life lived well
#love
#rebirth
248 reads
6 Comments
Here there's beauty
Here there's beauty amongst the clouds drifting, by as puffs of cotton moving slowly, within the silent whispers of the invisible winds, with the light of the full moon, shining and peeking through the clouds. But yet here I sit high upon the peaceful mountain top. That a moment ago I climbed the stairway of stone, to touch the deepness of the clouds as though I could, reach out my waiting hands to feel the wet mist, that once was held back the rain drops of silent tears, from falling gracefully to the ground below. 👇 YET it is in the here and now I am at peace, but I am not here...
#faith
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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She Rises
With spirit and determination
Her lifeforce spread like fire
Every single feather - a blaze
A wingspan more than what anyone could ever measure
A rite of rebirth and regeneration
Baptized in flames
And us poets
With glassy eyes witness
How she rises
A reawakening from beyond this realm
How the words spoken
Can help heal those of us who are broken
As a testament
Leaving behind a legacy
58 Unique words
69 Total
Her lifeforce spread like fire
Every single feather - a blaze
A wingspan more than what anyone could ever measure
A rite of rebirth and regeneration
Baptized in flames
And us poets
With glassy eyes witness
How she rises
A reawakening from beyond this realm
How the words spoken
Can help heal those of us who are broken
As a testament
Leaving behind a legacy
58 Unique words
69 Total
#gratitude
#love
#rebirth
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
114 reads
4 Comments
Rebirth Possible on a Partly Cloudy Day
I want you vulnerable
I'm vulnerable too
Apart we're one thing
Together miraculous
Savagery and tenderness
That keeps me wanting
We're partly cloudy
Or mostly sunny
Possibilities
Rebirth
Too
I'm vulnerable too
Apart we're one thing
Together miraculous
Savagery and tenderness
That keeps me wanting
We're partly cloudy
Or mostly sunny
Possibilities
Rebirth
Too
#love
#relationships
#sun
#rebirth
#vulnerability
450 reads
20 Comments
~':: nowness. newness. nothingness... '
https://youtu.be/LoPf32nKYb8?feature=shared
let you take me in in inner
in your whirlpooling pull
a cataclysmic kissing eating spree
in a deluge of your love my soul
يا روحي,~ ya roohi
digest destroy deconstruct me
in this your calling cosmic kill
a profound grinding in
dissolution I give in
wholly… in this ...
let you take me in in inner
in your whirlpooling pull
a cataclysmic kissing eating spree
in a deluge of your love my soul
يا روحي,~ ya roohi
digest destroy deconstruct me
in this your calling cosmic kill
a profound grinding in
dissolution I give in
wholly… in this ...
#apocalypse
#love
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
102 reads
3 Comments
Deliverance
For a long while – for decades – it was Home.
Not only in the reverent routine of Sunday mornings.
Also in the musical camaraderie
of Tuesday evening jam sessions,
the Wednesday ladies’ earnest search for wisdom
over strong coffee and butter tarts,
the youthful commotion of Friday nights.
It became a refuge especially in
the quiet solitude of a random weekday.
Just me, the piano, and Peace –
a sanctuary that stood in stark contrast
to the inner tension of my performance as
“good Christian woman”. ...
Not only in the reverent routine of Sunday mornings.
Also in the musical camaraderie
of Tuesday evening jam sessions,
the Wednesday ladies’ earnest search for wisdom
over strong coffee and butter tarts,
the youthful commotion of Friday nights.
It became a refuge especially in
the quiet solitude of a random weekday.
Just me, the piano, and Peace –
a sanctuary that stood in stark contrast
to the inner tension of my performance as
“good Christian woman”. ...
#MovingOn
#rebirth
#religion
107 reads
6 Comments
Black History Month
Awash in an ocean of cliché
I saw the sonnet in a brand new way
Where there was no where to go but above,
Strait up into altisonous love
Where lesser noise is left far below
In the surround sound of platitude's show;
Stuck in the cheap seats of discord and din
Grieving again at the wages of sin.
But sometimes, just sometimes...sounds are quite good,
Markedly, when they can be understood,
And in this way can be epiphanic
More so than lingo uttered in panic...
And that concludes my sententious sermon ...
I saw the sonnet in a brand new way
Where there was no where to go but above,
Strait up into altisonous love
Where lesser noise is left far below
In the surround sound of platitude's show;
Stuck in the cheap seats of discord and din
Grieving again at the wages of sin.
But sometimes, just sometimes...sounds are quite good,
Markedly, when they can be understood,
And in this way can be epiphanic
More so than lingo uttered in panic...
And that concludes my sententious sermon ...
#Christian
#rebirth
#morality
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Utopian Nothingness
we leave this dimension to enter another I was discussing with another poet
about this...how we don't alter who we are from one plane to the next
some people believe they will all of a sudden be perfect I don't believe that's the case
rather into the fray of another world we enter.…” - Crimsin
“it's interesting you should bring that up just lately I'd been thinking along those lines basically that the same people we are in life will continue later... I don't believe we will all of a sudden be great people later living in some type of utopia... it makes no sense......
about this...how we don't alter who we are from one plane to the next
some people believe they will all of a sudden be perfect I don't believe that's the case
rather into the fray of another world we enter.…” - Crimsin
“it's interesting you should bring that up just lately I'd been thinking along those lines basically that the same people we are in life will continue later... I don't believe we will all of a sudden be great people later living in some type of utopia... it makes no sense......
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
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2 Comments
Glitch
Toep, the drow, with eyes like midnight,
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
#rebellion
#rebirth
#revenge
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12 Comments
The Divine Portal (The Holy Quran Of The Pineal Gland)
Only the realization of intellectual overload when my existence needs to give credence to the four rachibi when at rest
In this lifetime always be prepared for what comes next
Such a beautiful Moon that sits on the throne of infinity beaming from the skies
Look up and listen for the sultry benedictions of its midnight tales and divine lullabies
That superior light can travel your cerebrum to the third Heavens, given of its ancient stories to tell
Open your...
In this lifetime always be prepared for what comes next
Such a beautiful Moon that sits on the throne of infinity beaming from the skies
Look up and listen for the sultry benedictions of its midnight tales and divine lullabies
That superior light can travel your cerebrum to the third Heavens, given of its ancient stories to tell
Open your...
#moon
#rebirth
#spiritual
#sun
#water
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Zoanthropic
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Zoanthropic
Woke up thinking I actually
understood
heard birds chirping
cats meowing
my mind truly getting it
all in.
Felt as if I awoke reborn
into a sentient lower
life of easy days and nights
and of natural (nature’s)
comprehension.
No time to be too busy
to listen to another
No time to be too easy
to ignore some other
Just time for communion
and repast
relax
release
re-live
unique word...
Zoanthropic
Woke up thinking I actually
understood
heard birds chirping
cats meowing
my mind truly getting it
all in.
Felt as if I awoke reborn
into a sentient lower
life of easy days and nights
and of natural (nature’s)
comprehension.
No time to be too busy
to listen to another
No time to be too easy
to ignore some other
Just time for communion
and repast
relax
release
re-live
unique word...
#nature
#rebirth
#LifeChangingMoment
#dialogue
#NaPoWriMo2022
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rebirth by Top Critiquers