Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
drone
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:39am
Yesterday 7:39am
It's Free
It's a funny old world
Where people believe
That they have
Free Will
That it is
Free
NO payment required
To use their
Free Will
Because their Mind
Tells them so
When in truth
The Price
Is
One's Psychological
Blood sweat and tears
Fighting those
Unconscious Biases
Those Thoughts
Not in your Name
For some
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
Where people believe
That they have
Free Will
That it is
Free
NO payment required
To use their
Free Will
Because their Mind
Tells them so
When in truth
The Price
Is
One's Psychological
Blood sweat and tears
Fighting those
Unconscious Biases
Those Thoughts
Not in your Name
For some
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
#honesty
#philosophical
50 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
David Lewis and the concept of bearded men
The concept
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
#love
#lover
#passion
#philosophical
#romantic
105 reads
23 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 10:56am
11th Jan 2025 10:56am
Things Left Unsaid
Cold winter nights and freshly fallen snow
Casting thoughts against a pale reflection
Seems kinda random impeding on the flow
To navigate our world with no real direction
Cigarette smoke lingers in this conversation
Ideas whisper of relevance to be introduced
Organized chaos brings life into the situation
Raw emotion feeding off the logic produced
Hope is the warmth of love in this old heart
That fights the urge to hibernate in my head
Blessed with the light watching clouds part
I still got business with the things left...
Casting thoughts against a pale reflection
Seems kinda random impeding on the flow
To navigate our world with no real direction
Cigarette smoke lingers in this conversation
Ideas whisper of relevance to be introduced
Organized chaos brings life into the situation
Raw emotion feeding off the logic produced
Hope is the warmth of love in this old heart
That fights the urge to hibernate in my head
Blessed with the light watching clouds part
I still got business with the things left...
#philosophical
89 reads
17 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
Training Mission South Pole
Stationed off the grid
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
#philosophical
#risk
#StreamOfConsciousness
#ThrillSeeking
#war
104 reads
26 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
Echos from the past
Through this life, we all will meet someone who seems to have a good heart and spiritual aura, about themselves that will draw them into your life and world. 🌎 THAT will affect you in ways that we may never truly understand. 🤔 YET that is what makes you feel that you know them, 🤨 but do you really know them as you think you do. BUT yet you have a connection that touches your thoughts and insight and heart, ❤️ to let your guard down and to see where it takes you whether near or far away from the negativity, that makes no sense at all till we begin to...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
35 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:19am
10th Jan 2025 8:19am
Stinking Up The Joint
Scattered thoughts merge into shades of grey
Talking heads speak in riddles without a point
Waking up to the reality that most simply obey
While corporate swine are stinking up the joint
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Talking heads speak in riddles without a point
Waking up to the reality that most simply obey
While corporate swine are stinking up the joint
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
88 reads
13 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 7:08am
9th Jan 2025 7:08am
Different Spin
Too many faces are only memories now
Not so clear anymore on all the stories
It seems time closed the door somehow
Running off the fumes of passing glories
Innocent witness being lead to slaughter
Blood laced misery saturates murky water
Silence eats slowly on words never said
Guilt suffocates happiness into despair
It’s been a life sentence inside this head
Unable to blink while sinister eyes stare
Defeated demons will often return again
Same blueprint hidden in a different spin
Copyright @ Damian...
Not so clear anymore on all the stories
It seems time closed the door somehow
Running off the fumes of passing glories
Innocent witness being lead to slaughter
Blood laced misery saturates murky water
Silence eats slowly on words never said
Guilt suffocates happiness into despair
It’s been a life sentence inside this head
Unable to blink while sinister eyes stare
Defeated demons will often return again
Same blueprint hidden in a different spin
Copyright @ Damian...
#grief
#philosophical
117 reads
23 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
Love it or lump it
Fear is your death
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
51 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 12:29pm
6th Jan 2025 12:29pm
Real communications
They say that real communication between two people, is a give and take kind of a mental stimulation, of the mind and heart. 💖 For we each have our own opinions, on the things that are involved in creating a mutual, event of understand between two people's.
FOR sure it's not a debate thing it's a conversation, with someone on a positive and intellectual conversation. FOR sure we may Agree and Disagree but yet that is what a real relationship does for us, as it helps one another as we exchange thoughts and insight and spiritual, subconsciousness of our lives together as one. For...
FOR sure it's not a debate thing it's a conversation, with someone on a positive and intellectual conversation. FOR sure we may Agree and Disagree but yet that is what a real relationship does for us, as it helps one another as we exchange thoughts and insight and spiritual, subconsciousness of our lives together as one. For...
#emotional
#philosophical
#respect
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
61 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 7:04am
6th Jan 2025 7:04am
WALK WITH ME
If you could take a walk with me what would you see 👁️ as you walk away from the negativity of the world, 🌎 as we take this walk through this old mighty oak tree. Planted along time ago in God's heavenly dirt not touched by man on earth. 🌎 For it's true that we are creatures of entity of souls of spiritual, beliefs and silent whispers of being able to connect with you, in ways that you may never truly understand. BUT yet we know what you are going through in each and every one, of your own thoughts and prayers and insight into your lives on earth. 🌍 For...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
58 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 00:40am
6th Jan 2025 00:40am
The dark shadows of night
Why is it that way when you lose countless hours worrying, about the shadows that appear upon the wall 🧱 as we awake from a dream. BUT yet it's those who aren't real just apart of your imagination, once created as the night of the world takes shelter beneath the clouds of the world 🌎 Becomes a darkness of gravity pulling into your own thoughts, that you feel that is watching you sleep 😴 so peaceful and quiet in your dream state of mind. For we ask thyself what does it want with you, for you are just a creatures of habits no different, from anyone else who sometimes...
#confusion
#LifeAsAWriter
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
60 reads
0 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:05pm
5th Jan 2025 11:05pm
Eyes
When televisions first became household objects,
some people were scared to undress in front of them,
the convex and glaucomic eye staring,
pervert cyclops, invader in the living room.
These days of course the eyes are much smaller,
rectangular, and with us at all times, not just
when mother’s home with fish-and-chips to eat before
a black-and-white broadcast. Eyes follow us about.
When I was young and gay, and gay, the unrestricted
internet reached out with slimy hands and claimed
a lot of naive boys and girls, the eyes ...
some people were scared to undress in front of them,
the convex and glaucomic eye staring,
pervert cyclops, invader in the living room.
These days of course the eyes are much smaller,
rectangular, and with us at all times, not just
when mother’s home with fish-and-chips to eat before
a black-and-white broadcast. Eyes follow us about.
When I was young and gay, and gay, the unrestricted
internet reached out with slimy hands and claimed
a lot of naive boys and girls, the eyes ...
#abuse
#philosophical
#power #technology
#power #technology
63 reads
2 Comments
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