Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Fiftysevenhours
Poem Published
Today 9:00pm
Today 9:00pm
Jackdaws play
I'd say upon,
A blue, blue sky.
Which could be akin to them,
Saying,
We play upon the green,
The grey, the brown.
As they fly by,
Looking down.
Do they watch,
As we drag our clumsy feet?
Watching them bank upon the wind?
They see us,
I know they do.
With sadness.
With fear,
In how they take to flight.
I'd rather they,
Stay awhile and talk.
Introduce to me,
Their racourious caw.
And learn to laugh a little louder,
Knowing not all,
Mean ill.
And now I've been...
A blue, blue sky.
Which could be akin to them,
Saying,
We play upon the green,
The grey, the brown.
As they fly by,
Looking down.
Do they watch,
As we drag our clumsy feet?
Watching them bank upon the wind?
They see us,
I know they do.
With sadness.
With fear,
In how they take to flight.
I'd rather they,
Stay awhile and talk.
Introduce to me,
Their racourious caw.
And learn to laugh a little louder,
Knowing not all,
Mean ill.
And now I've been...
#NaPoWriMo2024
#nature
#philosophical
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PAR
Poem Published
Today 1:19pm
Today 1:19pm
The truth will unfold
Undeniably, shadows consume the sky.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
#honesty
#LifeStruggles
#mirror
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
23 reads
3 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Today 9:32am
Today 9:32am
Willfully In The Dark
It is I again. I guess I should have explained something about myself, I don’t know if I ever addressed this, I hate fucking politics. I write about them sure, but I don’t love anything about the process. I stay informed, but I’m not a fan.
It’s a necessity, not something I enjoy. It helped ruin a friendship, someone I loved liked a brother, it helped destroy a songwriting partnership. Because, I woke up from a 33 year party, and realized some lines had been crossed.
Worst of all it didn’t get any better, when I got sober. I’m talking about, Joey G, of course....
It’s a necessity, not something I enjoy. It helped ruin a friendship, someone I loved liked a brother, it helped destroy a songwriting partnership. Because, I woke up from a 33 year party, and realized some lines had been crossed.
Worst of all it didn’t get any better, when I got sober. I’m talking about, Joey G, of course....
#philosophical
#satirical
53 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Today 2:05am
Today 2:05am
Evil Empire
I’m an advocate for compassion and empathy
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
#LifeStruggles
#magic
#philosophical
42 reads
1 Comment
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:27am
Yesterday 7:27am
Bound To Rust
Fucking circus just pulled into town
Flimflam ringmaster wants to burn it down
Unelected sidekick dancing like a clown
Psychotic logic a smile conceals a frown
How much more has to happen?
To wake them from perpetual sleep?
Disappearing those humans they hate
When it’s the billionaires inflicting pain
This self-induced fall from grace
Turning heel as the world watches in disgust
Pulling the rug while rigging the race
Without allies our foundation is bound to rust
Make America ignorant while killing hope ...
Flimflam ringmaster wants to burn it down
Unelected sidekick dancing like a clown
Psychotic logic a smile conceals a frown
How much more has to happen?
To wake them from perpetual sleep?
Disappearing those humans they hate
When it’s the billionaires inflicting pain
This self-induced fall from grace
Turning heel as the world watches in disgust
Pulling the rug while rigging the race
Without allies our foundation is bound to rust
Make America ignorant while killing hope ...
#philosophical
97 reads
17 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:18am
Yesterday 2:18am
Your Dilemma
You can't protect from the people,
Who hide in the back,
Squeezing through cracks.
The more people you involve,
The more we need laws.
Laws that harm.
Laws that disarm.
And kill.
Children are trafficked,
Because of the laws that you practice.
That no one wants to reveal.
But I have to.
To try and protect someone,
From the people,
That take advantage of the weaker opponent.
But give them some slack,
And they'll fight back,
To protect the young,
Being screwed over, ...
Who hide in the back,
Squeezing through cracks.
The more people you involve,
The more we need laws.
Laws that harm.
Laws that disarm.
And kill.
Children are trafficked,
Because of the laws that you practice.
That no one wants to reveal.
But I have to.
To try and protect someone,
From the people,
That take advantage of the weaker opponent.
But give them some slack,
And they'll fight back,
To protect the young,
Being screwed over, ...
#philosophical
28 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 12:41pm
2nd Apr 2025 12:41pm
Marriage Stuff
We come and go
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
#love
#marriage
#philosophical
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
75 reads
12 Comments
BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:57am
2nd Apr 2025 7:57am
Insanity Within Humanity
She looks over the edge of temptation,
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear,
All your worries will disappear."
She questions her sanity,
With more pills made by humanity,
That state her mental health,
Is the reason for her insanity.
She tells herself it's time to go,
To the world's end,
No one will ever have to know.
One leap of faith,
For an angel with no wings,
She jumps forward,
Listening to the things,
She has been called.
You hear a smack,
A...
They whisper in her ear,
"One more step my dear,
All your worries will disappear."
She questions her sanity,
With more pills made by humanity,
That state her mental health,
Is the reason for her insanity.
She tells herself it's time to go,
To the world's end,
No one will ever have to know.
One leap of faith,
For an angel with no wings,
She jumps forward,
Listening to the things,
She has been called.
You hear a smack,
A...
#humankind
#MentalHealth
#philosophical #suicide
#philosophical #suicide
52 reads
1 Comment
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:13am
2nd Apr 2025 7:13am
Showdown Over The Horizon
I guess you didn’t expect me back so soon. To be honest neither did I. But I’m always revisiting memories, or thinking about the journey to get where I am at present.
My friend, J.J. Burton, recently lost his mother. I think it was March 10th to be precise. He’s been busy, and I understand we’ll talk when were supposed to. I was there for him when his father passed, though there relationship was strained, it was still his father.
This one I figured would be worse, because he was close to his mom. I didn’t know her well. We talked some, she was a nice lady....
My friend, J.J. Burton, recently lost his mother. I think it was March 10th to be precise. He’s been busy, and I understand we’ll talk when were supposed to. I was there for him when his father passed, though there relationship was strained, it was still his father.
This one I figured would be worse, because he was close to his mom. I didn’t know her well. We talked some, she was a nice lady....
#philosophical
75 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
We have to ignore somethings
Through this cycle of life we all will have to learn, to walk away from the negativity of nonsense, that doesn't have anything to do with our own lives. For sure we have to learn how to navigate, through the process of the confusion trying to make some kind of sense out of it all. Just because we decided not to entertain, ourselves in a way that is detrimental to our own way of thinking about life. For sure we are responsible for our own actions, that comes with consequences, even when we speak within a conversation to articulate, what we have to say in a positive way to someone. Who is hell...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
47 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 10:12pm
31st Mar 2025 10:12pm
Dolphin Tuna
I get called black,
But my family isn't.
Should I be called a Nigger,
By the ignorant?
Or should I use it for,
Scholarships for education,
To learn how to be offended,
By political correctness?
Should I pretend that people
Only want good things for you?
Or view them as leeches,
That will suck the life from you?
Should I pretend I'm from a country,
That I never grew up in?
Should I care about slaves,
If only the rich bought them?
Am I just a corpse,
In this lonely...
But my family isn't.
Should I be called a Nigger,
By the ignorant?
Or should I use it for,
Scholarships for education,
To learn how to be offended,
By political correctness?
Should I pretend that people
Only want good things for you?
Or view them as leeches,
That will suck the life from you?
Should I pretend I'm from a country,
That I never grew up in?
Should I care about slaves,
If only the rich bought them?
Am I just a corpse,
In this lonely...
#philosophical
#politics
43 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 9:23am
31st Mar 2025 9:23am
My Final Resting Place (The Blue Notebook)
It is I, again. I’m the itch that can’t be scratched, folks. Slightly annoying, but I mean well. In all seriousness, I’m just always looking for a catchy beginning. Hey, they can’t all be winners. It doesn’t get me down though, people.
In the immortal words of David Lee Roth: “You gotta roll with the punches to get to what’s real.” It’s all about adapting, being a counterpuncher, that’s been my entire existence. Some things in this world are avoidable, others not so much.
Look, I’m just a humble poet. With little stories that I hope helps somebody out...
In the immortal words of David Lee Roth: “You gotta roll with the punches to get to what’s real.” It’s all about adapting, being a counterpuncher, that’s been my entire existence. Some things in this world are avoidable, others not so much.
Look, I’m just a humble poet. With little stories that I hope helps somebody out...
#philosophical
100 reads
18 Comments
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