Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Spiritual Healing
Through this life we are sometimes faced with challenges that will break even the strongest of us, whether it's a relationship or marriage or friendship or lover even family. 🤔 But yet it's a huge thing to have, to learn to navigate through the process, of the ups and downs. As this to is apart of life 😔 For sure sometimes it will affect us, in ways that we may never truly really understand, For sure it's necessary to understand, that there are those things that will be, out of your own control as this is true, with honesty and truth and trust. Which will leave you alone and...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Just drifting with the winds
Here I am going through the process of cleaning, out my mind thoughts with my inner emotions, begins to calm me from within my own spiritual, subconsciousness of my new beginnings of my search of peace. For sure we will have to learn how can you, make it easier for you to be able to get away from the negativity 😔 For do you believe in your own dreams, that come with endless possibilities, can you imagine. WHAT it means to find a place that would be, just what you need and want. A beautiful place of calmness, by the grace of the sea, were you look out in the distance as far as you can...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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A wicked reaction
As we exchange thoughts and insight and personal thoughts 🤔 for sure it seems that the whole damn world. 🌍 Has gone mad with pure chaos and drama and confusion and madness. For sure as we exchange thoughts what do you think is really happening, 🤨 right before our own eyes 👀
Don't it seems that some individuals are in attack mode trying desperately to stop what's going on in high sight 😞 For sure there are those who have become, snitches and hit squads 🤨 but yet we ask WHY??? For sure it is those enemies from within, that are involved in...
Don't it seems that some individuals are in attack mode trying desperately to stop what's going on in high sight 😞 For sure there are those who have become, snitches and hit squads 🤨 but yet we ask WHY??? For sure it is those enemies from within, that are involved in...
#corruption
#philosophical
#politics
#power
#StreamOfConsciousness
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In your search for love
For even in these days and times real love seems to be the most hardest thing to find in someone, with a positive commitment and consistency and real communications to articulate what we need and want not what we want and don't need. 🤨 For it's imperative that we don't base it on our past relationships, for sure some women's believe that there ain't no good men out in the world 🌎 YET that's far from the truth as there are those, men's looking and searching for the same as you are like you yet not receiving the kind of love back in return. 😞 For more than anything else...
#hope
#love
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Ishtar
Easter Sunday, the day of resurrection,
As we celebrate Christ's rising from the dead,
I believe he did rise,
But the word Easter was taken from a Sumerian religion called Ishtar
The eggs and bunnies are symbols of fertility rites
She was the Goddess of love and war for many ancient cultures
And her legacy lived on in more modern societies
In the Western world today, we celebrate Easter
and have long forgotten where our iconic symbols originated from
Surely it's a lot of fun to color Easter eggs
But it has little to do with...
As we celebrate Christ's rising from the dead,
I believe he did rise,
But the word Easter was taken from a Sumerian religion called Ishtar
The eggs and bunnies are symbols of fertility rites
She was the Goddess of love and war for many ancient cultures
And her legacy lived on in more modern societies
In the Western world today, we celebrate Easter
and have long forgotten where our iconic symbols originated from
Surely it's a lot of fun to color Easter eggs
But it has little to do with...
#Easter
#philosophical
#spiritual
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The beauty of grace
What would you consider to be a precious pearl, of beauty of grace and charm that catches, your deepest thoughts and emotions. For sure ask yourself do they present, who they are with the ability to articulate what they want and need. TO sustain life and love, with support, and understanding, and respect. For sure if someone came into your life, and told you that they didn't come into your life, with mind games but with a positive attitude and a genuine purpose of love and happiness. For sure we have been in relationships, that weren't meant for us 💔 that damn near broke our heart...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Sometimes it's just thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ FOR what if you could find a place, that is disease free and protected, by a crystal dome. Would you want to leave and return back, to a world 🌎 that has become infected with so many peoples are losing there damn minds, that will affect even your own 🤨 well-being. What if you could find a pure source of energy, and with it came with a commitment and consistency, would you rather have that kind of mental health connection. 🤨 What if you could find a spiritual soul, that...
#emotional
#LifeChangingMoment
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Keeps on ticking
Minutes and seconds are passing us by
My one wish is to stop the hands of an enemy we call time
Time will age
Time will heal
Time will drag
Time will kill
No one has any idea what will happen in the next second
But only time will tell
My one wish is to stop the hands of an enemy we call time
Time will age
Time will heal
Time will drag
Time will kill
No one has any idea what will happen in the next second
But only time will tell
#aging
#dark
#death
#minimalist
#philosophical
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A darker shade
From the many memories of the truth of the darkness, that is hidden in the shade of blue 🔵 skies, pass the white clouds of images that makes shapes followed by silent whispers, that exhibit the solar eclipse in motions of changes to come. Creating a sense of calmness and relaxation into tranquility. For it's true that we are only ENTITY'S of the images of our pass lives experience, that reflect the way we see 👁️👁️ things that has helped us to navigate, through the process of the rough times, as well as the good times. Yet it's typically to assume the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#metaphor
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
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entranced
The vibe you put out is entrancing
Romancing the notion of we
There is no us to speak of
Yet your energy says there could be
a deep intellect
I rest in the layered shadows of your creation
and dream of what is there
Taking my time to peruse your visions
With a better sense of who you are
my thoughts reach out to touch you
Surely you're out of my league
to converse with you, an aphrodisiac
to read your pontifications, enlightening
a prophet giving sermons
a poetic genius's glory
With the understanding...
Romancing the notion of we
There is no us to speak of
Yet your energy says there could be
a deep intellect
I rest in the layered shadows of your creation
and dream of what is there
Taking my time to peruse your visions
With a better sense of who you are
my thoughts reach out to touch you
Surely you're out of my league
to converse with you, an aphrodisiac
to read your pontifications, enlightening
a prophet giving sermons
a poetic genius's glory
With the understanding...
#love
#philosophical
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Failure To Adapt
When the government fails at everything,
Then you finally realize,
Why anarchy should exist.
And stop trying to contain freedoms,
For ignorance.
And actually let people,
Govern themselves.
They might actually do,
The normal shit, they've always done,
For centuries.
Which was always,
Parties and booze.
Then you finally realize,
Why anarchy should exist.
And stop trying to contain freedoms,
For ignorance.
And actually let people,
Govern themselves.
They might actually do,
The normal shit, they've always done,
For centuries.
Which was always,
Parties and booze.
#funny
#philosophical
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Capella Auriga
A quest is never done until you reach the end
That is
The questions may not get answered in this world
And thus, we must formulate and theorize my friends
Whatever waits for us on the other side of the universe
So we compose and create to the best of our abilities
Trying to solve the big mystery that mystifies us all
Letting our imaginations run rampant, wild and free
To the point that it consumes and exhumes our soul
But once fate has decided that our number is up
The veil of innocence lifts and things begin to make sense
It...
That is
The questions may not get answered in this world
And thus, we must formulate and theorize my friends
Whatever waits for us on the other side of the universe
So we compose and create to the best of our abilities
Trying to solve the big mystery that mystifies us all
Letting our imaginations run rampant, wild and free
To the point that it consumes and exhumes our soul
But once fate has decided that our number is up
The veil of innocence lifts and things begin to make sense
It...
#love
#philosophical
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
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