Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
rickthepoetwarrior
Poem Published
Today 7:19am
Today 7:19am
No One Knows
Bone
Cone
Hone
Lone
Pone
Tone
Zone
None
Done
Gone
Cone
Hone
Lone
Pone
Tone
Zone
None
Done
Gone
#dialogue
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
16 reads
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:21pm
Yesterday 3:21pm
From A Man From Earth
From Man To Mankind
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
I don't have wrath to vent on my foe
Arrogance and ignorance are shame i know
No one has to swell with what they own
Only poor spirits can feel down and low
My name is man, i am eternal god
Eternity, is for the Only one God
But, the time i am granted on earth
Is for good doing, for eternal Lord
Let me not pretend i am the master of all
Death and sickness make me cry and crawl
They make feel little, i kneel with fear and awe
Still am i poorly armed, before the death toll
But Nature has taught...
#emotions
#morality
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
38 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:00am
Yesterday 11:00am
Exterminate the boomers
Here they come, feasting on the young
No hair, no care
Shuffling like a zombie
They don't care about the future
As long as we keep bowing to them
Wrinkled hands write the script
No choice but follow
Treat it like an edict
Greed is the motto of the sick
Cloaked by the model of their politics
The broken structures they erect
Built inequality incarnate
Time will cast them aside
But when?
The damage is done
Progress is no friend to them
Simply accumulate
There's no room to...
No hair, no care
Shuffling like a zombie
They don't care about the future
As long as we keep bowing to them
Wrinkled hands write the script
No choice but follow
Treat it like an edict
Greed is the motto of the sick
Cloaked by the model of their politics
The broken structures they erect
Built inequality incarnate
Time will cast them aside
But when?
The damage is done
Progress is no friend to them
Simply accumulate
There's no room to...
#CallToAction
#parody
#philosophical
#satirical
#TruthOfLife
30 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:10am
Yesterday 8:10am
This Life
In spite of all the danger
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
35 reads
6 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 11:06pm
19th Nov 2024 11:06pm
The Agnostic’s Paradox: A Dialogue with Socrates
In a garden shaded, wise and deep,
Where silent thoughts like shadows creep,
A question echoed through the air,
What is truth, and who will care?
A stranger came with searching eyes,
A soul unmoored, lost in disguise,
And saw, in Socrates, a guide,
A sage who asked, but never lied.
“Tell me, great sage, what can you know?
Is there a truth that we can show?”
Socrates smiled, his eyes aglow,
“A question asked, yet more to go,
For truth is like the wind you feel,
Invisible, but it’s so real.
It moves us...
Where silent thoughts like shadows creep,
A question echoed through the air,
What is truth, and who will care?
A stranger came with searching eyes,
A soul unmoored, lost in disguise,
And saw, in Socrates, a guide,
A sage who asked, but never lied.
“Tell me, great sage, what can you know?
Is there a truth that we can show?”
Socrates smiled, his eyes aglow,
“A question asked, yet more to go,
For truth is like the wind you feel,
Invisible, but it’s so real.
It moves us...
#mystery
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
19 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:12pm
19th Nov 2024 7:12pm
Generation HeXed
Ex-husband
ex-wife
ex-friends
nothing you do is good
you are Generation Hexed!
ex-band members
ex-partyer
ex-athlete
a stream of bad luck
you are Generation Hexed!
You need exercise
always exhausted
MTV is lame
the music you like is shit
exiled from relevance
expired by 1994
you're bald and blubbery
get exterminated
get executed
Generation Hexed!
ex-wife
ex-friends
nothing you do is good
you are Generation Hexed!
ex-band members
ex-partyer
ex-athlete
a stream of bad luck
you are Generation Hexed!
You need exercise
always exhausted
MTV is lame
the music you like is shit
exiled from relevance
expired by 1994
you're bald and blubbery
get exterminated
get executed
Generation Hexed!
#aging
#parody
#philosophical
#satirical
#TruthOfLife
42 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 2:21pm
19th Nov 2024 2:21pm
The Silent Cartographer
In the realm where shadows softly hum,
And silent whispers through dreams come,
A cartographer maps the soul’s great maze,
Charting the truth in moonlit haze.
A predator looms, fierce and wild,
The untamed fear of a guarded child.
Chased through woods of fractured thought,
By shadows of battles never fought.
An infant stirs, fragile and new,
The seed of beginnings breaking through.
Its cries echo with tender grace,
The yearning for love’s eternal face.
The faceless runner on twisted lanes,
Fleeing...
And silent whispers through dreams come,
A cartographer maps the soul’s great maze,
Charting the truth in moonlit haze.
A predator looms, fierce and wild,
The untamed fear of a guarded child.
Chased through woods of fractured thought,
By shadows of battles never fought.
An infant stirs, fragile and new,
The seed of beginnings breaking through.
Its cries echo with tender grace,
The yearning for love’s eternal face.
The faceless runner on twisted lanes,
Fleeing...
#dreams
#metaphor
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
#philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness
19 reads
0 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 11:44am
16th Nov 2024 11:44am
Grey cells
I think, for myself.
I, love words.
Regurgitating,
Is for the birds.
A.R.M.
Lorane Post 97451
I, love words.
Regurgitating,
Is for the birds.
A.R.M.
Lorane Post 97451
#myself
#philosophical
#SelfReflection #TruthOfLife
#SelfReflection #TruthOfLife
28 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
YOUR ENERGY LEVEL
There will come a time in each of our lives, for the mind to develop a sense of rebuilding, your thoughts on a positive level. Because with real substance with real intelligences, with your own thoughts to believe that you can
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
43 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 1:30pm
14th Nov 2024 1:30pm
The Truth Fairy
Under the pillow, a tooth was placed.
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
#childhood
#fairies
#magic
#memories
#philosophical
52 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 3:28pm
13th Nov 2024 3:28pm
Truth And Modesty
unlike the narcissist, i 'm self abnegated
and yet, a solid link in the human chain
and so outwardly going, and not alienated
sharing thick and thin with the common run
i do not raise above to make me shown
the storm will not spare the lofty weeds
lying low, but not even to be unknown
the crops speak volumes about the seed
learned too much from a life of humans
to guess what face lurks behind the ink
open confession or dark self-reflection
your story has been told to the shrink
so, cleverness is idiocy if ever...
and yet, a solid link in the human chain
and so outwardly going, and not alienated
sharing thick and thin with the common run
i do not raise above to make me shown
the storm will not spare the lofty weeds
lying low, but not even to be unknown
the crops speak volumes about the seed
learned too much from a life of humans
to guess what face lurks behind the ink
open confession or dark self-reflection
your story has been told to the shrink
so, cleverness is idiocy if ever...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical #spiritual
#philosophical #spiritual
51 reads
4 Comments
Louisamay
JaneyBean
JaneyBean
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:39pm
10th Nov 2024 9:39pm
It Seems
It seems everyone knows best
My way or the highway
My politics are the only way
And I won’t accept you feel that way
I understand and you don’t
And so we will be enemies
I cannot accept your point of view
It affects me too much
I’m not a snowflake I’m just right
I’m sensitive, my mental health is fragile
And because of the way I feel
I can’t trust my fellow humans
You were wrong
And to hell with democracy if it doesn’t go my way
Hang on that’s a bit religious hmm
American against American
It’s so sad ...
My way or the highway
My politics are the only way
And I won’t accept you feel that way
I understand and you don’t
And so we will be enemies
I cannot accept your point of view
It affects me too much
I’m not a snowflake I’m just right
I’m sensitive, my mental health is fragile
And because of the way I feel
I can’t trust my fellow humans
You were wrong
And to hell with democracy if it doesn’t go my way
Hang on that’s a bit religious hmm
American against American
It’s so sad ...
#kindness
#love
#philosophical
#politics
#tolerance
37 reads
5 Comments
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