Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Today 7:45am
Today 7:45am
Another Lonely Mile
Chasing after dragons always ends badly
It’s pride that needs to conquer the beast
Morrison is singing about loving her madly
Strange creatures interrupt a zombie feast
Skeleton key opens these forbidden doors
What ever walks through can’t be returned
Aggravating balance is reopening old sores
Another lonely mile equals wisdom earned
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
It’s pride that needs to conquer the beast
Morrison is singing about loving her madly
Strange creatures interrupt a zombie feast
Skeleton key opens these forbidden doors
What ever walks through can’t be returned
Aggravating balance is reopening old sores
Another lonely mile equals wisdom earned
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
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8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 7:21am
Today 7:21am
CRY UPON HIS SHOULDERS
The elders say that we can't stop talking to GOD ALMIGHTY, no matter what we have to face in our lives,
when we have trouble waters in our lives that makes us feel as thought there is no way out of the storms. But yet somehow has changed the very course of our own lives. For sure we must continue to believe in our faith and beliefs, by leaving behind the sorrow of our hurt and pain. YET remaining focus on the task at hand, for sure we must never get caught up within, the storms of our feelings of emotions. Which makes us lose our focus draining, us of our strength and courage and...
when we have trouble waters in our lives that makes us feel as thought there is no way out of the storms. But yet somehow has changed the very course of our own lives. For sure we must continue to believe in our faith and beliefs, by leaving behind the sorrow of our hurt and pain. YET remaining focus on the task at hand, for sure we must never get caught up within, the storms of our feelings of emotions. Which makes us lose our focus draining, us of our strength and courage and...
#faith
#philosophical
#prayer
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:33am
Yesterday 1:33am
Lawless
How can the government protect your privacy,
Without being private?
How do you investigate,
And not masturbate?
How do you pretend you're real,
And avoid forgetting you're not?
How do you make friends,
When you know they're all cops?
Why vote on old legislation,
Canada and Mexico have already been bought?
More than 20 years ago.
It was part of the plot.
Trans America is never gonna stop.
Secret deals is where the government shops.
If the government was public,
We'd all be...
Without being private?
How do you investigate,
And not masturbate?
How do you pretend you're real,
And avoid forgetting you're not?
How do you make friends,
When you know they're all cops?
Why vote on old legislation,
Canada and Mexico have already been bought?
More than 20 years ago.
It was part of the plot.
Trans America is never gonna stop.
Secret deals is where the government shops.
If the government was public,
We'd all be...
#corruption
#funny
#philosophical #politics
#philosophical #politics
49 reads
8 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 11:06pm
10th Feb 2025 11:06pm
The Hollow Bloom
The echo hums where silence breeds, detaching, fading, dissipating,
A river flows, yet never stays, refracting, bending, disappearing,
Its current carves through stone unseen, eroding, shaping, liberating.
The self dissolves, a mist in shade, unraveling, shifting, elevating,
What binds the form but empty seeds? Decaying, blooming, vanishing,
A breath that speaks, yet none remain, unknowing, drifting, meditating.
A lotus drowns where mirrors break, reflecting, shattering, recomposing,
The dream of self, a whispered veil elapsing, wilting,...
A river flows, yet never stays, refracting, bending, disappearing,
Its current carves through stone unseen, eroding, shaping, liberating.
The self dissolves, a mist in shade, unraveling, shifting, elevating,
What binds the form but empty seeds? Decaying, blooming, vanishing,
A breath that speaks, yet none remain, unknowing, drifting, meditating.
A lotus drowns where mirrors break, reflecting, shattering, recomposing,
The dream of self, a whispered veil elapsing, wilting,...
#philosophical
27 reads
1 Comment
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 7:23am
10th Feb 2025 7:23am
Final Breath
A serpent’s shadow in the pale moonlight
Bad dreams are forged into a tragic reality
Words being weaponized as a form of spite
Calloused heart and a doomsday mentality
Congressman’s wet dream to bend the knee
Making blood pacts with the powers that be
A follower with no ideology is a loyal corpse
Ready to walk off a ledge when it’s required
Over time absolute power shapes and warps
Without a conscience the mind is hardwired
Empty heads remaining buried in the sand
Only to privatize hope by seizing public land
...
Bad dreams are forged into a tragic reality
Words being weaponized as a form of spite
Calloused heart and a doomsday mentality
Congressman’s wet dream to bend the knee
Making blood pacts with the powers that be
A follower with no ideology is a loyal corpse
Ready to walk off a ledge when it’s required
Over time absolute power shapes and warps
Without a conscience the mind is hardwired
Empty heads remaining buried in the sand
Only to privatize hope by seizing public land
...
#philosophical
85 reads
20 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 8:36pm
8th Feb 2025 8:36pm
You are the key
Why do you keep doing the same things over and over again, for don't you think that you have a choice to choose what you want, your own life to be in high sight of what you choose not to believe, within your own abilities to learn how to think for thyself. Why do you keep saying that you can't make it, for you still refuse to believe within thyself, and the possibility that you have the perseverance to survive, through anything that you have to face head in your own life. Why do you continue to keep repeating situations, that you know aren't what you want or need. BUT yet you still take that...
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
42 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 11:46am
8th Feb 2025 11:46am
Take that one chance and make it a great one
At a young age you were told "You have the whole world ahead of you to do what you like"
What do you do...Nothing. Most settle on what comes to them easily. Never striving for much more then the basics. It don't matter to you at the time. You have youth, energy, your having unprotected sex and hanging out with friends all the time. Life seems quite good, until you have to grow up.
At middle age you now think "I've should have done this to avoid that or to go this route instead of that route" You realize changes can be made but you become to content and set...
What do you do...Nothing. Most settle on what comes to them easily. Never striving for much more then the basics. It don't matter to you at the time. You have youth, energy, your having unprotected sex and hanging out with friends all the time. Life seems quite good, until you have to grow up.
At middle age you now think "I've should have done this to avoid that or to go this route instead of that route" You realize changes can be made but you become to content and set...
#aging
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 9:29pm
7th Feb 2025 9:29pm
All the miles everyday
It's so good to hear you sounding so good and happy, man that's awesome!!
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
#frustration
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#PersonalGrowth
#philosophical
75 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:46pm
7th Feb 2025 1:46pm
Negativity of some people's
In this life we all will be face with the deepness of the negativity, that somehow will create an environment that is unsafe and unfair, to the quality of your life. But yet we must have a real understand, were does that negativity comes from that seems to change our lives. For example could it come from those around us, or could it come from those things that we just don't like to come into our lives, just destructing our own way of thinking about life. For let's take it farther than that in high sight of trying, desperately to avoid the drama and nonsense that it will make your attitude,...
#emotional
#ignorance
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
58 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
The pain that is love
Love is all around us
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
#breakup
#love
#minimalist #philosophical
#minimalist #philosophical
110 reads
24 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:49am
7th Feb 2025 10:49am
Treasure Within
I think that everyone is a treasure.
Everyone is unique.
And when everybody is different,life is never bleak.
I see people as item filled treasure chests.
Quite literally,you could say.
Everyone's souls look a different way.
Some chests are full of rats.
And moldy cheese and fruit.
Some seem like they are filled with mold.
But are filled with the rarest treasures you've seen.
The ones who say they are filled with mold.
Can be the most different people you've seen.
I think that anyone could be a treasure. ...
Everyone is unique.
And when everybody is different,life is never bleak.
I see people as item filled treasure chests.
Quite literally,you could say.
Everyone's souls look a different way.
Some chests are full of rats.
And moldy cheese and fruit.
Some seem like they are filled with mold.
But are filled with the rarest treasures you've seen.
The ones who say they are filled with mold.
Can be the most different people you've seen.
I think that anyone could be a treasure. ...
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical
#prose
#uplifting
30 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 11:02am
6th Feb 2025 11:02am
Ethnic Psychological Traits
It is Said
The Worst
Genethnic Cleansing
Has Always been
Psychological
That Leads
To the Physical
Is the Cleansing
The Forced
Near Extinction
From Our Society
That is Now in the Gutter
Surviving With The Few
Who Still Believe
Commonsense Logical
Reasoning
Should Rule
Those Who Hold
Our Life's
In Their Hands
The Worst
Genethnic Cleansing
Has Always been
Psychological
That Leads
To the Physical
Is the Cleansing
The Forced
Near Extinction
From Our Society
That is Now in the Gutter
Surviving With The Few
Who Still Believe
Commonsense Logical
Reasoning
Should Rule
Those Who Hold
Our Life's
In Their Hands
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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