Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Cen
Poem Published
21st Sep 2023 3:28pm
21st Sep 2023 3:28pm
My God me and my sister.
My mother- Ma kali
Anando mayee Ma.
Ma Durga.
Anando mayee Ma.
Ma Durga.
#religion
#faith
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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poeticdelight
Poem Published
21st Sep 2023 2:06pm
21st Sep 2023 2:06pm
Rustic Delight
Rustic Relish
Twitters come from the shady tree
Where birdies have just nestled
And the tree gently shakes its foliage
As the soft breath of wind is whispered
Down by the foot of the Eucalyptus tree
Poppies, daisies and a swarm of bees
Even a grasshopper, a tune of wheeze
Floating among the wheat fields
Yet to grow mellow, and yield seeds
In May, crops are godsend
Even when it hasen't rained
A bliss from heaven is sent
And over the green hilltop, a tree
A vanguard of the pine forest ...
Twitters come from the shady tree
Where birdies have just nestled
And the tree gently shakes its foliage
As the soft breath of wind is whispered
Down by the foot of the Eucalyptus tree
Poppies, daisies and a swarm of bees
Even a grasshopper, a tune of wheeze
Floating among the wheat fields
Yet to grow mellow, and yield seeds
In May, crops are godsend
Even when it hasen't rained
A bliss from heaven is sent
And over the green hilltop, a tree
A vanguard of the pine forest ...
#faith
#redemption
#philosophical
#morality
#curse
27 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
21st Sep 2023 1:37pm
21st Sep 2023 1:37pm
Hell. Has NO Fury. Like a Human
So you believe
Everybody
Is the same
We are
Human
I disagree
In one respect
Your right
Head arms legs
And all the
Biological bits
Inside
We are all the same
EVEN our DNA
We class our self's
As upright hairless
Walking apes
There's truth in that
But what defines Us
Every single one of Us
Is our Minds
And people
Choose
To Be Human
OR to be
An animal with intelligence
Guess what Is
The Hardest one To Be
We Are
A...
Everybody
Is the same
We are
Human
I disagree
In one respect
Your right
Head arms legs
And all the
Biological bits
Inside
We are all the same
EVEN our DNA
We class our self's
As upright hairless
Walking apes
There's truth in that
But what defines Us
Every single one of Us
Is our Minds
And people
Choose
To Be Human
OR to be
An animal with intelligence
Guess what Is
The Hardest one To Be
We Are
A...
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
46 reads
5 Comments
VeronikaB
Poem Published
20th Sep 2023 4:25pm
20th Sep 2023 4:25pm
Words from the Cracks
It seems like things want to fall apart.
It seems like we’ve been stolen from home.
Where do you go when things fall apart,
when home has been taken away from you,
when the cracks appear?
〰 Bayo Akomolafe 〰
ANTHROPOCENE
The current era of human history is sometimes called Anthropocene, the ‘Age of Man’. All previous word composition with -cene (from Greek kainos = era) 〰 like Miocene, when the Alps and Himalayas were formed, and Pleistocene, when glacial periods caused extinction of many...
It seems like we’ve been stolen from home.
Where do you go when things fall apart,
when home has been taken away from you,
when the cracks appear?
〰 Bayo Akomolafe 〰
ANTHROPOCENE
The current era of human history is sometimes called Anthropocene, the ‘Age of Man’. All previous word composition with -cene (from Greek kainos = era) 〰 like Miocene, when the Alps and Himalayas were formed, and Pleistocene, when glacial periods caused extinction of many...
#inspirational
#evolution
#PowerOfWords
#mythology
#philosophical
36 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
18th Sep 2023 3:39pm
18th Sep 2023 3:39pm
Don't ask humans for certain definitions!
The headlines being how they are, I decided to try a modest work around for the customary music group search response for the idiom "third eye blind" in order to get something like a sturdy definition for the much journalistically bandied term..."woke"...and behold, up came this well worded answer from artificial intelligence via quora.com and ChatGPT...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical #morality
#philosophical #morality
95 reads
6 Comments
drone
Poem Published
18th Sep 2023 1:22pm
18th Sep 2023 1:22pm
Trying To
When one
Is trying to fit
Struggling
Every day
Trying to fit
Logical thinking
In situations
Where logic
Has a hard time
Existing
Then one has no
Understanding
Of Life
Is trying to fit
Struggling
Every day
Trying to fit
Logical thinking
In situations
Where logic
Has a hard time
Existing
Then one has no
Understanding
Of Life
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
47 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
12th Sep 2023 2:07pm
12th Sep 2023 2:07pm
Wagons Are Circling
It is when
One Becomes
A Pioneer
In this wilderness
Of frequencies
In Life
One will be
Tested
Within the circle
Of the wagons
Where You and Yours
Are being attacked
By the lizard minded
And the monkey minded
Tribes
Where one Stands Alone
Everything uprooted
Everything
One once knew
We move
Forward
One Becomes
A Pioneer
In this wilderness
Of frequencies
In Life
One will be
Tested
Within the circle
Of the wagons
Where You and Yours
Are being attacked
By the lizard minded
And the monkey minded
Tribes
Where one Stands Alone
Everything uprooted
Everything
One once knew
We move
Forward
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
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0 Comments
poeticdelight
Poem Published
11th Sep 2023 5:56pm
11th Sep 2023 5:56pm
Zephyr
A whiff of morning breath wafted gently across my face.
A faint puff of air hardly felt, has grabbed all my senses..entranced my being and drove me willingly into the pine forest.
Sun shyly peeping behind the hilly mountains, and sends a warm ripe streak onto the dormant land.......I winded my way into the woods, thru' a trodden pathway where shepherds and flocks pass, leaving dusty twirls in their wake, dust in the clear airs spins and spins, makes an image of a travelling caravanserai through the dunes....
However, in the eastern side where...
A faint puff of air hardly felt, has grabbed all my senses..entranced my being and drove me willingly into the pine forest.
Sun shyly peeping behind the hilly mountains, and sends a warm ripe streak onto the dormant land.......I winded my way into the woods, thru' a trodden pathway where shepherds and flocks pass, leaving dusty twirls in their wake, dust in the clear airs spins and spins, makes an image of a travelling caravanserai through the dunes....
However, in the eastern side where...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#morality
42 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
10th Sep 2023 9:46am
10th Sep 2023 9:46am
All. You Gotta Do
One has no need
Of planning
Every step
One's Thoughts
One's intentions
One's
Imagination
Has already
Made it so
All you gotta do
Is let it go
While Unconsciously
Moving
Towards It
Of planning
Every step
One's Thoughts
One's intentions
One's
Imagination
Has already
Made it so
All you gotta do
Is let it go
While Unconsciously
Moving
Towards It
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
51 reads
0 Comments
Vandel_Viaclovsky
Van
Van
Poem Published
10th Sep 2023 00:09am
10th Sep 2023 00:09am
VOL Prt 2 (The scene resets...)
The scene resets. Our speaker clears throat and begins again,
louder this time, like,
projecting.]
SPEAKER IN PARTIAL SHADOW:
Here, upon this branch of branching paths and upward chanced to spy or see through the peephole now
or glance O comrades O fellow creature ye friend and foe alike O kindred of my kind spied we through
the embrasure at first sight through the cornea iris cortex lens through the macula retina keyhole camera eye
quite normally we see a large grape leaf tilted and mischievous paralex'd in green...
louder this time, like,
projecting.]
SPEAKER IN PARTIAL SHADOW:
Here, upon this branch of branching paths and upward chanced to spy or see through the peephole now
or glance O comrades O fellow creature ye friend and foe alike O kindred of my kind spied we through
the embrasure at first sight through the cornea iris cortex lens through the macula retina keyhole camera eye
quite normally we see a large grape leaf tilted and mischievous paralex'd in green...
#BDSM
#trees
#water
#pagan
#philosophical
6 reads
1 Comment
Vandel_Viaclovsky
Van
Van
Poem Published
9th Sep 2023 11:21pm
9th Sep 2023 11:21pm
VOL Prt 1 (Being a Story Theatre Picaresque...)
V ᴉ ɐ ɔ ˥ o ʌ s ʞ ʎ
Vagabonds of Love
Being a Story Theatre Picaresque,
If Not Yet a Remembrance,
of
Some Days and Times of the Author, Some Words,
Newly Compiled
WITH ADDITIONAL ILLUSTRATIONS
and Very Delightful to Partake.
CANTO I :
HOUSE OF THE DEADNIGHT SUN
[ In vibrant shades of azure, violet, and emerald, the small stage unveils itself. ...
Vagabonds of Love
Being a Story Theatre Picaresque,
If Not Yet a Remembrance,
of
Some Days and Times of the Author, Some Words,
Newly Compiled
WITH ADDITIONAL ILLUSTRATIONS
and Very Delightful to Partake.
CANTO I :
HOUSE OF THE DEADNIGHT SUN
[ In vibrant shades of azure, violet, and emerald, the small stage unveils itself. ...
#friendship
#spiritual
#mythology
#magic
#philosophical
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Ahavati
Poem Published
8th Sep 2023 5:16pm
8th Sep 2023 5:16pm
Paradise Lost
The mind is its own place,
and in itself can make a heaven of hell,
a hell of heaven.” – John Milton, Paradise Lost
No prison is darker
as that of one’s mind
when jailer's thoughts
become torturous binds.
No captivity exceeds
our own mental belief
convincing ourselves
of thoughts that we think.
When indeed they will pass
if we choose to release
expectation and doubt
for patience and faith.
Greater is the knowledge
regardless of condition
that gratitude and love ...
and in itself can make a heaven of hell,
a hell of heaven.” – John Milton, Paradise Lost
No prison is darker
as that of one’s mind
when jailer's thoughts
become torturous binds.
No captivity exceeds
our own mental belief
convincing ourselves
of thoughts that we think.
When indeed they will pass
if we choose to release
expectation and doubt
for patience and faith.
Greater is the knowledge
regardless of condition
that gratitude and love ...
#philosophical
147 reads
18 Comments
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