Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
Today 2:41am
Today 2:41am
A Paradox
I'm a fool if I think I am clever,
and clever to know that I'm foolish.
Does that cleverness make me more foolish
or the foolishness make me more clever?
I'm still none the wiser.
and clever to know that I'm foolish.
Does that cleverness make me more foolish
or the foolishness make me more clever?
I'm still none the wiser.
#philosophical
20 reads
5 Comments
Keilani
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:13pm
Yesterday 7:13pm
When We Rightly See
We are guests at life’s feast
each of us as good
as the dirt beneath
our sister’s feet
For who will be proud
shall taste defeat
her branches extending
with little reach
and at life’s table
find little to eat
But when the heart
in fullness blooms
and Truth we rightly see
for surely the eyes
are wont to deceive
The haughty cup of pride
swallowed by humility
in victory
we’ll raise together...
each of us as good
as the dirt beneath
our sister’s feet
For who will be proud
shall taste defeat
her branches extending
with little reach
and at life’s table
find little to eat
But when the heart
in fullness blooms
and Truth we rightly see
for surely the eyes
are wont to deceive
The haughty cup of pride
swallowed by humility
in victory
we’ll raise together...
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
13 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:48pm
Yesterday 2:48pm
obscure
light and dark wisdom
in hedonistic parables
metaphors for the soul
puzzles to unlock in time
when knowledge peaks
truth will reveal itself
beauty casts a shadow
what's beautiful to some isn't to others
I find my tastes have changed with experience
revelations have occurred to open my mind
loveliness is found in the odd and macabre equally
passionate utterances whispered into the darkness
found pure by light's measure
a delicate feeling sometimes overpowering
balancing these emotions takes great patience ...
in hedonistic parables
metaphors for the soul
puzzles to unlock in time
when knowledge peaks
truth will reveal itself
beauty casts a shadow
what's beautiful to some isn't to others
I find my tastes have changed with experience
revelations have occurred to open my mind
loveliness is found in the odd and macabre equally
passionate utterances whispered into the darkness
found pure by light's measure
a delicate feeling sometimes overpowering
balancing these emotions takes great patience ...
#philosophical
24 reads
5 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 11:58pm
14th Sep 2021 11:58pm
Master Gardener
as a gardener
not in eden
but
in the Sonoran desert
i have to wonder
what was Adam thinking?
grabbing a fig leaf
to cover
his
banana
when a squash frond
would have provided
much better coverage
no wonder
he
was
ashamed
(C)2021...
not in eden
but
in the Sonoran desert
i have to wonder
what was Adam thinking?
grabbing a fig leaf
to cover
his
banana
when a squash frond
would have provided
much better coverage
no wonder
he
was
ashamed
(C)2021...
#spiritual
#shame
#mythology #philosophical
#mythology #philosophical
12 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 1:05am
14th Sep 2021 1:05am
“Lyrical Jewels” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 26/7/2021
I Drop Lyrical Jewels ...
Like Seas Create Pools ... !!!
So They’re Constantly Juiced ...
To Find Wisdom To Use ...
So My Jewels Are Infused ...
With A Lot of What’s True ...
Like Be Careful of Who ...
You Believe To Be Cool ... !!!
Because Many Will Choose ...
To Play You For A Fool ...
If You’ll Quickly Give Trust ...
To Just ANY Human ...
A BIG LYRICAL JEWEL ... !!!
That’s NOT Good To Argue ...
And That’s Just The TRUTH ...
Because Life Gives You Proof ...
You See Jewels Come In...
Like Seas Create Pools ... !!!
So They’re Constantly Juiced ...
To Find Wisdom To Use ...
So My Jewels Are Infused ...
With A Lot of What’s True ...
Like Be Careful of Who ...
You Believe To Be Cool ... !!!
Because Many Will Choose ...
To Play You For A Fool ...
If You’ll Quickly Give Trust ...
To Just ANY Human ...
A BIG LYRICAL JEWEL ... !!!
That’s NOT Good To Argue ...
And That’s Just The TRUTH ...
Because Life Gives You Proof ...
You See Jewels Come In...
#lyrics
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#philosophical
10 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
13th Sep 2021 1:47pm
13th Sep 2021 1:47pm
Stand with Me in Unity
Diversity
Common ground
Unity
Poem to fit the image
Don't do these often
Too floaty for me
Rather be writing sex poems
You get the picture
Don't you ?
Common ground
Unity
Poem to fit the image
Don't do these often
Too floaty for me
Rather be writing sex poems
You get the picture
Don't you ?
#sex
#universe
#TruthOfLife #philosophical
#TruthOfLife #philosophical
52 reads
11 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
12th Sep 2021 11:01am
12th Sep 2021 11:01am
Taking Flight
Personal journey
Abstraction
Next chapter
I am your
Poet
Artist
Rogue
Onward
Abstraction
Next chapter
I am your
Poet
Artist
Rogue
Onward
#LifeAsAWriter
#SelfReflection
#art #philosophical
#art #philosophical
32 reads
8 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
11th Sep 2021 4:08pm
11th Sep 2021 4:08pm
Breath Of God
Touched by the breath of God
as a valance of night
comes down in silence
of the nightingales
reflecting memories
as a valance whisper,
Ave Maria
as a valance of night
comes down in silence
of the nightingales
reflecting memories
as a valance whisper,
Ave Maria
#philosophical
24 reads
0 Comments
AutumnLeaves
Poem Published
11th Sep 2021 1:21pm
11th Sep 2021 1:21pm
Untitled
(Visual poetry)
Be true to yourself
Have pure intentions
That's more than enough
Be true to yourself
Have pure intentions
That's more than enough
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
26 reads
2 Comments
Keilani
Poem Published
11th Sep 2021 3:42am
11th Sep 2021 3:42am
Satyr Play
I am the darkness
that crucifies life
I am the levity
deposing the strife
the satyr’s play
a potent wine
profane and holy
flawlessly twined
tartness and sweetness
plucked from the vine
Rising and setting
the sun in its hour
‘wakens the scent
of the fragrant flower
then loosens her tresses
to rest upon earth
becoming a cover
of mystical dust ...
that crucifies life
I am the levity
deposing the strife
the satyr’s play
a potent wine
profane and holy
flawlessly twined
tartness and sweetness
plucked from the vine
Rising and setting
the sun in its hour
‘wakens the scent
of the fragrant flower
then loosens her tresses
to rest upon earth
becoming a cover
of mystical dust ...
#universe
#philosophical
22 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Sep 2021 10:32pm
10th Sep 2021 10:32pm
cipher
coded messages sent directly to the brain stem
sending signals to trigger a reaction
a vibe rides the air we internalize this feeling
in sync with the larger works I dance to the beat
I've been here before deja vu washes over me
manifesting in soul I grow
tasting the pain I keen
evolving on the wavelengths we build connections
pulses of energy awaken us
driven passion instigates an awareness
I push on the barriers
they push back
a veil over my face I look into the aether
afraid to see but curious
...
sending signals to trigger a reaction
a vibe rides the air we internalize this feeling
in sync with the larger works I dance to the beat
I've been here before deja vu washes over me
manifesting in soul I grow
tasting the pain I keen
evolving on the wavelengths we build connections
pulses of energy awaken us
driven passion instigates an awareness
I push on the barriers
they push back
a veil over my face I look into the aether
afraid to see but curious
...
#love
#universe
#philosophical
42 reads
3 Comments
cloventongue89
Poem Published
10th Sep 2021 7:14pm
10th Sep 2021 7:14pm
More Than Nothing
Running in circles
This maze of delusion
I brought myself to this place
Stacked against the odds
I pay my dues to the past
In my attempt to move forward
Can I catch my breath
While it keeps running away
Caught up in patterns
I self sabatoge
My every lust endorses poverty
Enriched in the moment
I made this bed I lay in
Remodel my life
Before its too late to live again
Theres a price tag on my every breath
How do I have vision for tomorrow
When it feels like a wasted investment
...
This maze of delusion
I brought myself to this place
Stacked against the odds
I pay my dues to the past
In my attempt to move forward
Can I catch my breath
While it keeps running away
Caught up in patterns
I self sabatoge
My every lust endorses poverty
Enriched in the moment
I made this bed I lay in
Remodel my life
Before its too late to live again
Theres a price tag on my every breath
How do I have vision for tomorrow
When it feels like a wasted investment
...
#lust
#LifeStruggles
#spiritual
#greed
#philosophical
22 reads
4 Comments
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