Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:38pm
Yesterday 2:38pm
… little eyes
innocent and caring,
they really see more,
those big little eyes,
that walk
through our core,
they skip through
our minds,
and push open the doors,
so behind your smiles
or inside your frowns,
those little bitty eyes,
are wandering around.
they really see more,
those big little eyes,
that walk
through our core,
they skip through
our minds,
and push open the doors,
so behind your smiles
or inside your frowns,
those little bitty eyes,
are wandering around.
#children
#honesty
#support
#philosophical
#wisdom
23 reads
2 Comments
APissPoorShaman
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2021 5:05pm
3rd Dec 2021 5:05pm
Black Sun
What worth my prose
the sum and total supposed
of a life soon foreclosed
an existence freely chose
Hating conformity
revolted by mediocrity
sickened by sanitized society
I renounce my humanity
Always seeking...
a new way of seeing
finding life through death
in an endless dance
of chaotic expanse
What coins are paid
spiritual wealth weighed
and guidance prayed
at the end of days
A black sun grown
as all our sins are known
the dead shall inherit the earth
in a time of...
the sum and total supposed
of a life soon foreclosed
an existence freely chose
Hating conformity
revolted by mediocrity
sickened by sanitized society
I renounce my humanity
Always seeking...
a new way of seeing
finding life through death
in an endless dance
of chaotic expanse
What coins are paid
spiritual wealth weighed
and guidance prayed
at the end of days
A black sun grown
as all our sins are known
the dead shall inherit the earth
in a time of...
#faith
#rebirth
#fate
#redemption
#philosophical
33 reads
3 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2021 11:34am
2nd Dec 2021 11:34am
Restrictions
What You see
Is what you choose
Without compromise
To see
What You
Believe
Is what you choose
To believe
Without Compromising
What Your Circle
Believes
For all what you See
Is just your own
Restricted reflections
Of your Own
Restricted Conclusions
Of How
To Live
Your Life
Is what you choose
Without compromise
To see
What You
Believe
Is what you choose
To believe
Without Compromising
What Your Circle
Believes
For all what you See
Is just your own
Restricted reflections
Of your Own
Restricted Conclusions
Of How
To Live
Your Life
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
28 reads
0 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2021 6:44am
2nd Dec 2021 6:44am
All Understand Love.
The Projourity,majority,nonsensically,desirably,want.
L.....Oyalty.
O.....Obsession Lee.
V......Ambuously.
E......Ntrance Of Hearts.
©Wired6.28/10/2021
L.....Oyalty.
O.....Obsession Lee.
V......Ambuously.
E......Ntrance Of Hearts.
©Wired6.28/10/2021
#philosophical
14 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
30th Nov 2021 1:07pm
30th Nov 2021 1:07pm
TO UNDERSTAND A WOMAN
Excuse me but can I as I must confirm your suggestion, that what I let you know and what you see are two very different things. For example sometimes we have to put on a different, kind of face to hide the tears, from preying eyes that just might not understand. But that said I don't and won't make excuses, for just how you made me feel but yet I won't let you see. The truth of the moment when you hurt me with your words and stab me in the back. For these tears that silently falls from my eyes when I am alone, I regret as much as I regret you for letting me become blind by the power I gave...
#strength
#courage
#redemption
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
44 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Nov 2021 1:42pm
29th Nov 2021 1:42pm
Secret Door
My home
My chamber
My art
Open the door
To my world
Secrets
Creation
Life
My chamber
My art
Open the door
To my world
Secrets
Creation
Life
#secrets
#LifeChangingMoment
#art #philosophical
#art #philosophical
64 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
26th Nov 2021 6:58pm
26th Nov 2021 6:58pm
LAY YOUR TROUBLES DOWN
From moments ago things aren't what they appear to be, nor are they an image of reflection, but more importantly, they are an reflection sometimes of our life. So why do we need and want to escape, from the truth about ourselves as we sometimes, hide behind the darkness. Yet we have found ourselves lock in a prison where we feel trap within an aura of uncertainty. But Yet As the night slowly begins to creep into the air, like an blanket covering over our body and soul. Yet As night shade becomes night, we become invisible like a ghost in the dark with no face. Just eyes from an mere shadow of...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
42 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
25th Nov 2021 11:50am
25th Nov 2021 11:50am
Art in Progress
Continuation
Big Soviet Art
Ancestors
Russian
Romanian
Passion
Grandeur
Hot
Temper
Low
Rise
The
Fact
That
You
Love
Art
Thrills Me
Big Soviet Art
Ancestors
Russian
Romanian
Passion
Grandeur
Hot
Temper
Low
Rise
The
Fact
That
You
Love
Art
Thrills Me
#love
#PopCulture
#gratitude
#art
#philosophical
65 reads
17 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2021 1:30pm
22nd Nov 2021 1:30pm
Roman Style
Nothing
Is what it seems
On the net
On our streets
So they say
I disagree
Commonsense is Everything
It is
what it seems
But when
Notifications
of doubt
Appear
Within Your thoughts
You don't want
To click the link
Only if your brave
Coz You Know
You could well Lose
Your belief
That they are
Your friends
And like
In the days
Of the romans
A thumbs down
Means
Loneliness
Before the Painful
Death
Of Your Belief
Is what it seems
On the net
On our streets
So they say
I disagree
Commonsense is Everything
It is
what it seems
But when
Notifications
of doubt
Appear
Within Your thoughts
You don't want
To click the link
Only if your brave
Coz You Know
You could well Lose
Your belief
That they are
Your friends
And like
In the days
Of the romans
A thumbs down
Means
Loneliness
Before the Painful
Death
Of Your Belief
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
15 reads
0 Comments
dejure
vick
vick
Poem Published
20th Nov 2021 5:35pm
20th Nov 2021 5:35pm
It is better
life is better
without mistakes
mistakes are better
without regrets
regrets are better
without truth
truth is better
without reasons
reasons are better
without lies
lies are better
without pain
pain is better
without it
it is better...
without mistakes
mistakes are better
without regrets
regrets are better
without truth
truth is better
without reasons
reasons are better
without lies
lies are better
without pain
pain is better
without it
it is better...
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#SelfReflection #philosophical
#SelfReflection #philosophical
56 reads
6 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
18th Nov 2021 9:20pm
18th Nov 2021 9:20pm
The Game...
Here we go Again..
Who gave away The Game?...
(Sorry...no Comprendo..)...
(c)Wired6.1/11/2021
Who gave away The Game?...
(Sorry...no Comprendo..)...
(c)Wired6.1/11/2021
#philosophical
20 reads
1 Comment
Wired6
Poem Published
17th Nov 2021 10:17pm
17th Nov 2021 10:17pm
MIS0ACE TASTE...
She's a library of dreams--
overlooked, dusty and in dis-repair,
so many facets of fictional prescriptions she heads,
her life is imbued with a love of the outdoors,
mimicking nature instead.
(c)Wired6.27/10/2021
overlooked, dusty and in dis-repair,
so many facets of fictional prescriptions she heads,
her life is imbued with a love of the outdoors,
mimicking nature instead.
(c)Wired6.27/10/2021
#rhyming
#philosophical
32 reads
0 Comments
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