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Thedeadinme
Poem Published
25th Sep 2022 5:10am
25th Sep 2022 5:10am
The Dying Tomes
Her soul devoid of ruin
Upon palatial woes
Embracing dark reveries
To mutter sweet repose
Damn the vigil swaying
Cut down from culling sword
A demise invictus reckoned
Death breeds with sullen whore
Bleeding darkened fantasia
Stolen from her womb
Parasites and eurodites
Come lapping at the wound
Lost within translation
Temptation fathered droves
Of crimson eyed lost acolytes
Gathered in concert, doomed
Will snuff the light
So burning bright
Above the lowly shore
Alone...
Upon palatial woes
Embracing dark reveries
To mutter sweet repose
Damn the vigil swaying
Cut down from culling sword
A demise invictus reckoned
Death breeds with sullen whore
Bleeding darkened fantasia
Stolen from her womb
Parasites and eurodites
Come lapping at the wound
Lost within translation
Temptation fathered droves
Of crimson eyed lost acolytes
Gathered in concert, doomed
Will snuff the light
So burning bright
Above the lowly shore
Alone...
#mythology
#philosophical
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
24th Sep 2022 6:19pm
24th Sep 2022 6:19pm
Direct Questions And Direct Answers
I have a direct question to ask the minister of national security.
What gives you the feeling that you are a better person than the ones whom you regard as criminals?
Since I do not expect you to answer the question, I will answer it for you.
Whatever label you give other people, you and your colleagues are the same thing.
I also have a direct question for other members of the government.
What makes you think there is a difference between you and the people whom you call wrongdoers?
I am certain that you will not respond to my question, so I will give you...
What gives you the feeling that you are a better person than the ones whom you regard as criminals?
Since I do not expect you to answer the question, I will answer it for you.
Whatever label you give other people, you and your colleagues are the same thing.
I also have a direct question for other members of the government.
What makes you think there is a difference between you and the people whom you call wrongdoers?
I am certain that you will not respond to my question, so I will give you...
#politics
#TruthOfLife
#CallToAction
#HumanRights
#philosophical
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Orc_Pirate_68
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2022 6:42pm
23rd Sep 2022 6:42pm
Balance
The spool is spun
The first moment I saw the sun.
I lightly tread
Upon a thread,
Walking a line so thin
Knowing I'll fall, let slip my feelings, but not when,
As I teeter over the edge, left and right
Wobbling, knowing not if I'll fall left or right,
Or straight forward,
Or exactly backward,
Or do a loop-de-loop, bounce around
And land anywhere on the ground.
Truths, secrets, social norms, rebellions,
Thoughts, feelings, preoccupations, and actions,
Sometimes lopsided one way or the other,
With thoughts and...
The first moment I saw the sun.
I lightly tread
Upon a thread,
Walking a line so thin
Knowing I'll fall, let slip my feelings, but not when,
As I teeter over the edge, left and right
Wobbling, knowing not if I'll fall left or right,
Or straight forward,
Or exactly backward,
Or do a loop-de-loop, bounce around
And land anywhere on the ground.
Truths, secrets, social norms, rebellions,
Thoughts, feelings, preoccupations, and actions,
Sometimes lopsided one way or the other,
With thoughts and...
#strength
#LGBT
#LifeCycle
#pagan
#philosophical
20 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
21st Sep 2022 9:05pm
21st Sep 2022 9:05pm
Commercial Photography Vs Personal Photography
It seems that the security guards at Emancipation Park, Devon House, and Hope Botanical Gardens were not informed accurately.
They tell the local people that DSLR cameras and high-tech cameras are not allowed on these premises,
But smart phones, tablets, and small digital cameras are allowed for personal photography.
And this information is a contradiction of what the signs at these places actually say.
The signs at the entrances of these places say, “No commercial photography is allowed without a pass.”
But they do not specify the kind of photographic...
They tell the local people that DSLR cameras and high-tech cameras are not allowed on these premises,
But smart phones, tablets, and small digital cameras are allowed for personal photography.
And this information is a contradiction of what the signs at these places actually say.
The signs at the entrances of these places say, “No commercial photography is allowed without a pass.”
But they do not specify the kind of photographic...
#money
#TruthOfLife
#CallToAction #philosophical
#CallToAction #philosophical
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PAR
Poem Published
21st Sep 2022 9:22am
21st Sep 2022 9:22am
onions
layer
after layer,
peel off
the onion,
until stay with
nothing more.
sum up
so,
in their emptiness,
the onions.
only bark
on bark,
layers
over layers.
just appearance...
only bitterness...
just acidity...
some
people
by whom
I passed
over
in this life
deserve,
Certainly,
the epithet.
they are onions!
we try to
find them
the core
but there is not.
we continue in
trying to
discover them
a heart
but there...
after layer,
peel off
the onion,
until stay with
nothing more.
sum up
so,
in their emptiness,
the onions.
only bark
on bark,
layers
over layers.
just appearance...
only bitterness...
just acidity...
some
people
by whom
I passed
over
in this life
deserve,
Certainly,
the epithet.
they are onions!
we try to
find them
the core
but there is not.
we continue in
trying to
discover them
a heart
but there...
#philosophical
#morality
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drone
Poem Published
20th Sep 2022 1:00pm
20th Sep 2022 1:00pm
The Simulacrum
It's strange
When one
Thinks about it
It is not only
Our language
That connects us
Now day and age
It is the net
Where humans
Are slowly
Circumventing
What was said
When they Watched
The structure
Being built
To pierce the Sky
Before the sky
Glitces
Again
When one
Thinks about it
It is not only
Our language
That connects us
Now day and age
It is the net
Where humans
Are slowly
Circumventing
What was said
When they Watched
The structure
Being built
To pierce the Sky
Before the sky
Glitces
Again
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
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drone
Poem Published
20th Sep 2022 12:35pm
20th Sep 2022 12:35pm
Archaix With a dot And a Com
Is it not
Strange
That the Chronology
From our past
To the present
To future day's
Mathematically Perfect
As near as can be
And yet
Its all quiet
On the western front
No debate
No serious debunking
From those who say
We are the educated one's
NO pushing back
To the man
WHO has
ALL the verifiable
Reseach at hand
Who lays everything out
To those with ears
To Listen
And to check
It could well be
AN open and shut case
Another reset
Another babel 2.o ...
Strange
That the Chronology
From our past
To the present
To future day's
Mathematically Perfect
As near as can be
And yet
Its all quiet
On the western front
No debate
No serious debunking
From those who say
We are the educated one's
NO pushing back
To the man
WHO has
ALL the verifiable
Reseach at hand
Who lays everything out
To those with ears
To Listen
And to check
It could well be
AN open and shut case
Another reset
Another babel 2.o ...
#lies
#betrayal
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
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soleil_89
Taylor G.
Taylor G.
Poem Published
19th Sep 2022 11:35pm
19th Sep 2022 11:35pm
For Kuwait.
I forgot what this feels like.
Heart racing.
Dry mouth.
Anxiety rippling through my veins.
Every time,
They disappear.
Whether my beauty or intellect
Is worthy.
Rejection, abandonment remains.
Whether my heart is gentle,
Or enraged with injustice.
Whether my eyes reflect the calm emerald seas, or the flames of Napalm Skies;
They all leave us.
But yet,
Here you are.
Your ocean eyes,
That quiet smile.
It makes my entire being quiver.
...
Heart racing.
Dry mouth.
Anxiety rippling through my veins.
Every time,
They disappear.
Whether my beauty or intellect
Is worthy.
Rejection, abandonment remains.
Whether my heart is gentle,
Or enraged with injustice.
Whether my eyes reflect the calm emerald seas, or the flames of Napalm Skies;
They all leave us.
But yet,
Here you are.
Your ocean eyes,
That quiet smile.
It makes my entire being quiver.
...
#hope
#peace
#mystery #philosophical
#mystery #philosophical
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soleil_89
Taylor G.
Taylor G.
Poem Published
19th Sep 2022 1:23pm
19th Sep 2022 1:23pm
The Fall of the Narcissist
My eyes scan you over,
lips curl into a distorted smirk.
Your adorable,
you know.
With your kitty pool of a brain,
and the white pearls that reveal your trampy remains.
Fuck you, and your overpriced society.
Your purchased adoration,
Name brand mutilation.
Porn's executed prohibition.
Pathetic in your own demise,
Did you actually think you would win?
As I disappear and transform in
The shadow of your own demolition.
Adieu, mon cher ami On ne te verra plus.
lips curl into a distorted smirk.
Your adorable,
you know.
With your kitty pool of a brain,
and the white pearls that reveal your trampy remains.
Fuck you, and your overpriced society.
Your purchased adoration,
Name brand mutilation.
Porn's executed prohibition.
Pathetic in your own demise,
Did you actually think you would win?
As I disappear and transform in
The shadow of your own demolition.
Adieu, mon cher ami On ne te verra plus.
#breakup
#rebirth
#vanity
#philosophical
#hurt
48 reads
2 Comments
dejure
vick
vick
Poem Published
17th Sep 2022 7:26pm
17th Sep 2022 7:26pm
sovereignty...
where's
the democracy
in a monarchy
how could
another human
be better by birth?
while one strives
just for survival
yet another
freeloader sits
on the throne
what's a freedom
in a monarchy
why can't
a monarch
chose love
and be respected?
maybe
sovereignty
comes with
a price
the democracy
in a monarchy
how could
another human
be better by birth?
while one strives
just for survival
yet another
freeloader sits
on the throne
what's a freedom
in a monarchy
why can't
a monarch
chose love
and be respected?
maybe
sovereignty
comes with
a price
#LifeStruggles
#LifeAsAWriter
#inequality
#philosophical
#morality
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Kinkpoet
Poem Published
15th Sep 2022 4:36pm
15th Sep 2022 4:36pm
Living Room
in the space between
unlearned lessons
and
unattained dreams
life happens
© 2022 Raibeart Bruis
unlearned lessons
and
unattained dreams
life happens
© 2022 Raibeart Bruis
#spiritual
#philosophical
64 reads
2 Comments
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
14th Sep 2022 5:38pm
14th Sep 2022 5:38pm
.. chillin
chilling, beat in time
melo is golden,
relaxed an reclined.
one hand on the boards,
the other with wine.
chillin, beat is fine
tomorrow emboldened,
but tonight I unwind.
chillin with the boards
feeling relieve from the grind..
melo is golden,
relaxed an reclined.
one hand on the boards,
the other with wine.
chillin, beat is fine
tomorrow emboldened,
but tonight I unwind.
chillin with the boards
feeling relieve from the grind..
#peace
#music
#uplifting
#philosophical
#healing
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