Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:58pm
Yesterday 6:58pm
Orange Man Bad
One day, you'll only see orange and white.
God, has Trump's face.
Now, look to sun,
And get saved!
Your eyes redden.
There's a purple haze.
Your child is mimicking,
The things you do everyday.
You look through it.
And see the game.
Trumps face, saying, "Say my name!".
God is an orange man.
He has Trump's face.
Now, look to the sun,
And get saved!
You'll thank me one day.
God, has Trump's face.
Now, look to sun,
And get saved!
Your eyes redden.
There's a purple haze.
Your child is mimicking,
The things you do everyday.
You look through it.
And see the game.
Trumps face, saying, "Say my name!".
God is an orange man.
He has Trump's face.
Now, look to the sun,
And get saved!
You'll thank me one day.
#philosophical
30 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:07am
Yesterday 6:07am
Shadow Of Doubt
Biased figures manipulate opportunities
Power has reigned since the dawn of time
Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities
False sincerity acted out in full pantomime
Dreams are aborted before even catching breath
Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death
Programmed from a young age to conform
Most are burned out before reaching thirty
Riding out the calm straight into a shitstorm
Only way to quit the lie is going cold turkey
Hope is the idea that peace and love will win out
While living in a world built on a...
Power has reigned since the dawn of time
Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities
False sincerity acted out in full pantomime
Dreams are aborted before even catching breath
Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death
Programmed from a young age to conform
Most are burned out before reaching thirty
Riding out the calm straight into a shitstorm
Only way to quit the lie is going cold turkey
Hope is the idea that peace and love will win out
While living in a world built on a...
#philosophical
64 reads
15 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
Fellah, a Man of Earth, a Man or Worth
Je t'admire, toi le Fellah dans les vastes champs
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#spiritual
41 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:36am
14th Jan 2025 9:36am
Why Do You
For one to Have
Real Freedom
One Must Understand
Why
You Do
What You Do
Real Freedom
One Must Understand
Why
You Do
What You Do
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
19 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 7:39am
12th Jan 2025 7:39am
It's Free
It's a funny old world
Where people believe
That they have
Free Will
That it is
Free
NO payment required
To use their
Free Will
Because their Mind
Tells them so
When in truth
The Price
Is
One's Psychological
Blood sweat and tears
Fighting those
Unconscious Biases
Those Thoughts
Not in your Name
For some
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
Where people believe
That they have
Free Will
That it is
Free
NO payment required
To use their
Free Will
Because their Mind
Tells them so
When in truth
The Price
Is
One's Psychological
Blood sweat and tears
Fighting those
Unconscious Biases
Those Thoughts
Not in your Name
For some
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
#honesty
#philosophical
57 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
David Lewis and the concept of bearded men
The concept
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
#love
#lover
#passion
#philosophical
#romantic
132 reads
25 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 10:56am
11th Jan 2025 10:56am
Things Left Unsaid
Cold winter nights and freshly fallen snow
Casting thoughts against a pale reflection
Seems kinda random impeding on the flow
To navigate our world with no real direction
Cigarette smoke lingers in this conversation
Ideas whisper of relevance to be introduced
Organized chaos brings life into the situation
Raw emotion feeding off the logic produced
Hope is the warmth of love in this old heart
That fights the urge to hibernate in my head
Blessed with the light watching clouds part
I still got business with the things left...
Casting thoughts against a pale reflection
Seems kinda random impeding on the flow
To navigate our world with no real direction
Cigarette smoke lingers in this conversation
Ideas whisper of relevance to be introduced
Organized chaos brings life into the situation
Raw emotion feeding off the logic produced
Hope is the warmth of love in this old heart
That fights the urge to hibernate in my head
Blessed with the light watching clouds part
I still got business with the things left...
#philosophical
101 reads
17 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
Training Mission South Pole
Stationed off the grid
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
#philosophical
#risk
#StreamOfConsciousness
#ThrillSeeking
#war
116 reads
26 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
Echos from the past
Through this life, we all will meet someone who seems to have a good heart and spiritual aura, about themselves that will draw them into your life and world. 🌎 THAT will affect you in ways that we may never truly understand. 🤔 YET that is what makes you feel that you know them, 🤨 but do you really know them as you think you do. BUT yet you have a connection that touches your thoughts and insight and heart, ❤️ to let your guard down and to see where it takes you whether near or far away from the negativity, that makes no sense at all till we begin to...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
45 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:19am
10th Jan 2025 8:19am
Stinking Up The Joint
Scattered thoughts merge into shades of grey
Talking heads speak in riddles without a point
Waking up to the reality that most simply obey
While corporate swine are stinking up the joint
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Talking heads speak in riddles without a point
Waking up to the reality that most simply obey
While corporate swine are stinking up the joint
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#philosophical
97 reads
13 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 7:08am
9th Jan 2025 7:08am
Different Spin
Too many faces are only memories now
Not so clear anymore on all the stories
It seems time closed the door somehow
Running off the fumes of passing glories
Innocent witness being lead to slaughter
Blood laced misery saturates murky water
Silence eats slowly on words never said
Guilt suffocates happiness into despair
It’s been a life sentence inside this head
Unable to blink while sinister eyes stare
Defeated demons will often return again
Same blueprint hidden in a different spin
Copyright @ Damian...
Not so clear anymore on all the stories
It seems time closed the door somehow
Running off the fumes of passing glories
Innocent witness being lead to slaughter
Blood laced misery saturates murky water
Silence eats slowly on words never said
Guilt suffocates happiness into despair
It’s been a life sentence inside this head
Unable to blink while sinister eyes stare
Defeated demons will often return again
Same blueprint hidden in a different spin
Copyright @ Damian...
#grief
#philosophical
139 reads
24 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
6th Jan 2025 10:03pm
Love it or lump it
Fear is your death
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
Pain is your hate
War is always hell
Cursed,denied at the gate
Slaves looked as sinners
Priests dream of fucking whores
How much more can you accept
Doesn't matter if you lock your doors
Love brings on hurt,
A sick and twisted mind
Screams flow into a pool of blood
Faith is a joke, are you still blind?
Hope is a black hole
Gold might be on a nearby vine
The middle class is a dying dream
Start thinking of creative crimes
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
55 reads
4 Comments
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