Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Joshuaberry
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Poem Published
Yesterday 6:57pm
Yesterday 6:57pm
Reserata Carcerem X
when lured life smothers wills and wish
that felon features foster bliss
maring meagre mind, passion pricked
that depression tarred tent pitch
when jolting joy met'morphoses
draped'n borrowed gown, bruised boredom gives -
callous contractions of moanings
sundry oddities attending
make moaning instinct not a lease
to vying vices - sassy sprees
retain rustic rage, canvass thoughts :
worries are items trials bought
damp death ain't a coursed confider
when odds gnaw, make faith your teacher.
...
that felon features foster bliss
maring meagre mind, passion pricked
that depression tarred tent pitch
when jolting joy met'morphoses
draped'n borrowed gown, bruised boredom gives -
callous contractions of moanings
sundry oddities attending
make moaning instinct not a lease
to vying vices - sassy sprees
retain rustic rage, canvass thoughts :
worries are items trials bought
damp death ain't a coursed confider
when odds gnaw, make faith your teacher.
...
#philosophical
#morality
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Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Jun 2020 2:54pm
1st Jun 2020 2:54pm
Why I've stopped
defending myself
when verbally attacked—
It isn't enough
to repeat,
It's not about me personally;
but, to literally believe
it's about what they perceive;
and, no matter how hard
one attempts to disguise an affront
—after-the-fact—
it will never be the Truth
until they accept responsibility
for their choice
Thus, instead of actions
contradicting...
when verbally attacked—
It isn't enough
to repeat,
It's not about me personally;
but, to literally believe
it's about what they perceive;
and, no matter how hard
one attempts to disguise an affront
—after-the-fact—
it will never be the Truth
until they accept responsibility
for their choice
Thus, instead of actions
contradicting...
#peace
#humankind
#evolution
#philosophical
#wisdom
110 reads
37 Comments
Joshuaberry
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Ancestor
Poem Published
1st Jun 2020 11:48am
1st Jun 2020 11:48am
Reserata Carcerem IX
it pays being a fostered fool
than to be to injustice cool
felon fight for fame's worth a take
but bruised blitzkrieg by act is made
if meagre mediocrity coaches you on love
that masticated mind prunes moan's gut
stir eerie emotions, purge pulpy affections:
better be lame than swig from cauldron
lanky love is like la-de-da hay
taunted thrills train, cremating cruising craves
tames fostered feelings, make mountains ooze
a valley of thoughts contrived to pool
to hate is better than to lust
margin melting...
than to be to injustice cool
felon fight for fame's worth a take
but bruised blitzkrieg by act is made
if meagre mediocrity coaches you on love
that masticated mind prunes moan's gut
stir eerie emotions, purge pulpy affections:
better be lame than swig from cauldron
lanky love is like la-de-da hay
taunted thrills train, cremating cruising craves
tames fostered feelings, make mountains ooze
a valley of thoughts contrived to pool
to hate is better than to lust
margin melting...
#philosophical
#morality
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Jadedembers
Poem Published
1st Jun 2020 3:49am
1st Jun 2020 3:49am
Madness and Wickedness
I was unsure whether I wanted it to be attributed to madness or wickedness, but in some ways it didn't matter. In others, though, it was everything. - Christopher Coleman
Madness knocks wanting to be let in
Rocking back and forth
Wickedness and poisoned motives speaking softly
The lines between wickedness and madness growing faint
Evil is calling while madness knocks
Wickedness claiming it only wants to play
Unknown screams held behind charming words
Growling and snarling with a wicked grin
Madness and wickedness...
Madness knocks wanting to be let in
Rocking back and forth
Wickedness and poisoned motives speaking softly
The lines between wickedness and madness growing faint
Evil is calling while madness knocks
Wickedness claiming it only wants to play
Unknown screams held behind charming words
Growling and snarling with a wicked grin
Madness and wickedness...
#dark
#MentalHealth
#philosophical
44 reads
4 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
1st Jun 2020 2:16am
1st Jun 2020 2:16am
Repertoire
.. ...
Repertoire
Routine
The rough and tumble of everyday life
I have no shortage of inspiration
I think about what else I want to wake up to every day ...
Float away
Be kind of neutral
Floor-to-ceiling windows,
Walk right up to the edge and see forever.
As the city becomes one with the sky
Intervals
Pauses
Interludes
Passage of time
All I need is the twilight
All I need is the deepest side of the views
All I need is faces recording nothing but loneliness
......
Repertoire
Routine
The rough and tumble of everyday life
I have no shortage of inspiration
I think about what else I want to wake up to every day ...
Float away
Be kind of neutral
Floor-to-ceiling windows,
Walk right up to the edge and see forever.
As the city becomes one with the sky
Intervals
Pauses
Interludes
Passage of time
All I need is the twilight
All I need is the deepest side of the views
All I need is faces recording nothing but loneliness
......
#meditation
#philosophical
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Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Ancestor
Poem Published
31st May 2020 2:01pm
31st May 2020 2:01pm
Reserata Carcerem VIII
trade not lanky love with worn whore
even if innovation to felon fame crawls
that airy asset yearns yanking yawn
she'll idolize bruised bankruptcy forlorn
if you nurse gaunt grudge 'gainst faith
that like gored gazelle, damp doubt you trail
felon fate had admitted your ailment -
haggard helium fostered feelings ferment
observe the callous calls of cloned clouds
that lusty lightening heeds shrewd shout
if lightening feigns ignorance seeped'n strains
dark doors prune pulpy yawn for rustic rain
take a drop and make it...
even if innovation to felon fame crawls
that airy asset yearns yanking yawn
she'll idolize bruised bankruptcy forlorn
if you nurse gaunt grudge 'gainst faith
that like gored gazelle, damp doubt you trail
felon fate had admitted your ailment -
haggard helium fostered feelings ferment
observe the callous calls of cloned clouds
that lusty lightening heeds shrewd shout
if lightening feigns ignorance seeped'n strains
dark doors prune pulpy yawn for rustic rain
take a drop and make it...
#philosophical
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NewBeginnings
Poem Published
30th May 2020 9:14pm
30th May 2020 9:14pm
Taking Sides
The world isn’t always black and white,
But rather, a vibrant spectrum of colors.
It’s never so simple as wrong or right.
Have we forgotten about the others?
There are many shades of pigmentation,
Yet we cling to this false dichotomy,
Creating a fallacious pig-men-nation
Like a figurative lobotomy.
The driving force of this division?
A great state of prejudice and hate...
So, we perpetuate a precise incision,
A decision I’ll never advocate.
Somewhere between the lips of silence...
And bloody...
But rather, a vibrant spectrum of colors.
It’s never so simple as wrong or right.
Have we forgotten about the others?
There are many shades of pigmentation,
Yet we cling to this false dichotomy,
Creating a fallacious pig-men-nation
Like a figurative lobotomy.
The driving force of this division?
A great state of prejudice and hate...
So, we perpetuate a precise incision,
A decision I’ll never advocate.
Somewhere between the lips of silence...
And bloody...
#politics
#racism
#misunderstood
#philosophical
#morality
83 reads
24 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
30th May 2020 8:38pm
30th May 2020 8:38pm
POINT 'ZERO'
viz:: point 'zero'
https://youtu.be/jM_83NYvaOQ
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#love
#spiritual
#music
#historical
#philosophical
62 reads
6 Comments
Jadedembers
Poem Published
30th May 2020 4:19pm
30th May 2020 4:19pm
Cobblestones
She is somewhere between losing her mind and finding her soul..." - unknown
Cobblestones beneath her feet
Walls of the catacombs embracing wounded troubled souls
Sacrificed to evil that only wants me to disappear A missing person that wont resurface
Speculation and assumption based on what is seen
Trusting a personal reality
A reality that it's hidden underneath the cobblestones
Graves keep watch at our doorstep
The creek flows over cobblestone steps
Twisting and twirling around and through the graves
Flowing...
Cobblestones beneath her feet
Walls of the catacombs embracing wounded troubled souls
Sacrificed to evil that only wants me to disappear A missing person that wont resurface
Speculation and assumption based on what is seen
Trusting a personal reality
A reality that it's hidden underneath the cobblestones
Graves keep watch at our doorstep
The creek flows over cobblestone steps
Twisting and twirling around and through the graves
Flowing...
#MentalHealth
#philosophical
54 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
30th May 2020 2:36pm
30th May 2020 2:36pm
STILL NO JUSTICE
LEVELS OF DEGREES For Knowledge is Power...First Degree Murder is any intentional murder that is willful and premeditated with malice aforethought. Felony Murder involves a dangerous crime where death results from the depth of the crime which is first degree murder. Second Degree Murder is intentional with malice aforethought but is not premeditated or planned. Involuntary Manslaughter is a killing that stems from a lack of intention to cause death but involving an intentional or negligent act leading to death. Third Degree Murder serves as a catch-all for other murders...
#dialogue
#CallToAction
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
38 reads
2 Comments
Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Ancestor
Poem Published
30th May 2020 1:47pm
30th May 2020 1:47pm
Reserata Carcerem VII
if lanky love pushes you 'til you fall
eerie affections to a meagre maiden draw
but moaning mind finds no solace there
admit the urge, then contend with bruised bear
if jolting jealousy triggers hoisted hope
for wanky wealth with fellas cope
but moaning mind finds no solace there
admit humpy urge, then contend with bruised bear
if wielded wits whoosh favor
towards taunted mate, wealth bruising barter
but meagre mind finds no solace there
admit haggard urge, then contend with bruised bear
jumpy jealousy is a felon...
eerie affections to a meagre maiden draw
but moaning mind finds no solace there
admit the urge, then contend with bruised bear
if jolting jealousy triggers hoisted hope
for wanky wealth with fellas cope
but moaning mind finds no solace there
admit humpy urge, then contend with bruised bear
if wielded wits whoosh favor
towards taunted mate, wealth bruising barter
but meagre mind finds no solace there
admit haggard urge, then contend with bruised bear
jumpy jealousy is a felon...
#philosophical
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0 Comments
Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Ancestor
Poem Published
29th May 2020 5:56pm
29th May 2020 5:56pm
Reserata Carcerem VI
when rustic rhythm tramples thought
that felon feelings, fabrications fought
thorn thumping merging meagre moan
I tell you! Lanky love glibs gaunt growth
a man with worth wields guts
trails tramples, smothers sassy lust:
damp decisions seeped'n salient acme
fractured features foil strained spree
jolting joy has met with dainty disgrace
squashed semantics prune its pulpy praise;
some with whooshing wealth think they afford joy
when 'twouldn't even to punctured power coil
jumpy joy lodges in hoisted hemisphere ...
that felon feelings, fabrications fought
thorn thumping merging meagre moan
I tell you! Lanky love glibs gaunt growth
a man with worth wields guts
trails tramples, smothers sassy lust:
damp decisions seeped'n salient acme
fractured features foil strained spree
jolting joy has met with dainty disgrace
squashed semantics prune its pulpy praise;
some with whooshing wealth think they afford joy
when 'twouldn't even to punctured power coil
jumpy joy lodges in hoisted hemisphere ...
#philosophical
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