Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Gerardo P.
Gerardo P.
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:27pm
Yesterday 6:27pm
Detached
At some point his mind left
His body or
So he liked to believe.
Poor fool...
Locked inside the tiled stove.
'Do not disturb me, children!'
Unsupervised, bizarre games
Flourished.
His body or
So he liked to believe.
Poor fool...
Locked inside the tiled stove.
'Do not disturb me, children!'
Unsupervised, bizarre games
Flourished.
#dreams
#funny
#philosophical
12 reads
3 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
20th Jan 2021 5:20am
20th Jan 2021 5:20am
"Straight Speak" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 18/1/2021
Now This Poetic Piece ...
Is One That Simply ...
Reveals My Belief ...
That We .....
Need More Straight Speak ...
... In Today’s Artistry ... !!!
Of Course Variety’s ...
A Part of Poetry ...
As It Really Should Be ...
In The Things That We See ...
But I Really Do Think ...
That Denial of This ...
Is A BIG TRAVESTY ... !!!
The Use of Lyrics ...
To Express Through ...
... Straight Speak ...
Cos To Deny It Just WREAKS ...
of Not Keeping Things REAL ... !!!
...
Is One That Simply ...
Reveals My Belief ...
That We .....
Need More Straight Speak ...
... In Today’s Artistry ... !!!
Of Course Variety’s ...
A Part of Poetry ...
As It Really Should Be ...
In The Things That We See ...
But I Really Do Think ...
That Denial of This ...
Is A BIG TRAVESTY ... !!!
The Use of Lyrics ...
To Express Through ...
... Straight Speak ...
Cos To Deny It Just WREAKS ...
of Not Keeping Things REAL ... !!!
...
#honesty
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#denial
#philosophical
13 reads
2 Comments
Jadedembers
Poem Published
18th Jan 2021 8:15pm
18th Jan 2021 8:15pm
Pinecones
... he knew he would face something inside himself that had been there for fifteen years, something dark and violent and troubling."
- Richard Montanari
The swirls on the bottom of a pinecone have
Captivated his tumultuous layers of
Shame and guilt and self- devaluation
All with eyes connected to the cement
How could he have bent his knee and
Lowered his greasy head
Surrendering to his dark compulsions
But then how could he not have given in
His perversions have grown into being gloomy and violent
Troubled inner...
- Richard Montanari
The swirls on the bottom of a pinecone have
Captivated his tumultuous layers of
Shame and guilt and self- devaluation
All with eyes connected to the cement
How could he have bent his knee and
Lowered his greasy head
Surrendering to his dark compulsions
But then how could he not have given in
His perversions have grown into being gloomy and violent
Troubled inner...
#LifeStruggles
#philosophical
#morality #curse
#morality #curse
29 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
17th Jan 2021 6:49pm
17th Jan 2021 6:49pm
WHEN THE MIND RULES OVER YOU
There within the depth of your subconsciousness, lays images and sometimes thoughts that appears, from out of the depth of the darkness. Some that you wish that you could shut out of your mind, like haunting images of those things that transcends through. The dead of the night amongst, the walls of all your hurt and pain, along with the process of the suffering. But yet it is us at the very same time feeling trap systematic and theology. From out of an fascination of human habits always, thinking of things that should be forgotten of the past and of the darkness. That sometimes creeps through...
#SelfReflection
#philosophical
#choices
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
26 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
14th Jan 2021 3:06am
14th Jan 2021 3:06am
Liminal Spaces
In these times of uncertainty
we seek a way to proceed
through saturated fear and grief
This juncture in history
is daunting, an experience
of crossroads and liminality—
the dying gasps of patriarchy
surrendering to a paradigm shift
still wobbly on its feet
The Age of Aquarius;
a loving agitator
against the dulling down
of Divine Feminine grace
~
we seek a way to proceed
through saturated fear and grief
This juncture in history
is daunting, an experience
of crossroads and liminality—
the dying gasps of patriarchy
surrendering to a paradigm shift
still wobbly on its feet
The Age of Aquarius;
a loving agitator
against the dulling down
of Divine Feminine grace
~
#power
#spiritual
#feminism #philosophical
#feminism #philosophical
85 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
14th Jan 2021 00:03am
14th Jan 2021 00:03am
TO UNDERSTAND WHICH WE SEE
They say that from the very beginning of our lives, we are nothing more than an imaginary image. Planted as an seed in the womb of our mother, as an seed from our father an combination of deep passionate love. For even as we grew as seed into a baby into a child, and evolve into an creation of life we are mutual beings apart of one another. The same blood line that starts our own tree of life as an a FAMILY. For as in life we will encounter situations of hurt, yet we must observe what cause the hurt, along with the inner pain. For everything that we shall go through, there are something's are...
#narrative
#LifeChangingMoment
#learning
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
29 reads
20 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
12th Jan 2021 11:46pm
12th Jan 2021 11:46pm
EVERYTHING HAS IT'S MOMENT
Through the stairways and gateways of your travels in life, we will go through something's that we couldn't never. Even ever dream or imagine in a million years, that would happen to us as it changes us, mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For there will be situations even some relationships, that will challenge us in ways we are not prepared, or ready to face at face value as the truth presents itself. But in life nothing is ever simple as that as it is the biggest misconception, about life and the world in which we live within. Cause just because we may run into a few...
#motivational
#inspirational
#dialogue
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
29 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
12th Jan 2021 00:13am
12th Jan 2021 00:13am
FUTURE SHOOT IT CAN GET REAL
When you see and look at ME what do you imagine what my life would be as a child ? For I did not chose my life nor my family or parents or life, as it was given to me from my birth into this life's existences. Mentally and emotionally and physically for I didn't ask to be born, into this world full of so much destruction and hatred and jealousy, along with the greed and corruption for the almighty dollar bill that adds nothing more but separate of the races. Carried along with the hurt along with the process of the pain and suffering. Filled with so much destruction and separation and...
#LifeStruggles
#dialogue
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#pandemic
27 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
10th Jan 2021 5:50am
10th Jan 2021 5:50am
“What They Seem” ... A Poem written By Big Virge 9/8/2020
Well Now It’s Pretty Clear ...
That The Truth Is Steered ...
AWAY From Ears And Peoples Eyes ... !!!
When It Comes To OUR LIVES ... !!!
Because It’s ... LIES ...
That Are Fed To Minds ... !!!
To Manipulate And Generate ...
A Breed of ... People ...
Now Known As SHEOPLE' ... !!!
With Mind States ... FEEBLE ... !!!
With ... Herd Mentalities ...
Now WITHOUT Morality ... !!!
Cos’ It’s A World of INSANITY ... ?!?
That People Now GLADLY ... !?!
EMBRACE Cos’ Reality‘s ... ...
That The Truth Is Steered ...
AWAY From Ears And Peoples Eyes ... !!!
When It Comes To OUR LIVES ... !!!
Because It’s ... LIES ...
That Are Fed To Minds ... !!!
To Manipulate And Generate ...
A Breed of ... People ...
Now Known As SHEOPLE' ... !!!
With Mind States ... FEEBLE ... !!!
With ... Herd Mentalities ...
Now WITHOUT Morality ... !!!
Cos’ It’s A World of INSANITY ... ?!?
That People Now GLADLY ... !?!
EMBRACE Cos’ Reality‘s ... ...
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#humankind
#philosophical
27 reads
5 Comments
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
9th Jan 2021 7:58am
9th Jan 2021 7:58am
Recognition
So much going on in this world we are all
In the same game
just different levels dealing with the same hell different devils everybody got demons I fight my mines daily
you ain't going to see it
If you not real with yourself
Nature holds the key to our aesthetic intellectual cognitive even our spiritual satisfactions we can go through troubles in our lives on our own but we're not alone in this simulated reality in fact it's always someone around
open your eyes to recognize
I know your favorite rapper is
not going to tell...
In the same game
just different levels dealing with the same hell different devils everybody got demons I fight my mines daily
you ain't going to see it
If you not real with yourself
Nature holds the key to our aesthetic intellectual cognitive even our spiritual satisfactions we can go through troubles in our lives on our own but we're not alone in this simulated reality in fact it's always someone around
open your eyes to recognize
I know your favorite rapper is
not going to tell...
#LifeStruggles
#LifeAsAWriter
#HumanRights
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
43 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
8th Jan 2021 11:38pm
8th Jan 2021 11:38pm
THE ROAD NEVER ENDS
Through my mere existence within this journey known as life, I have traveled through the deepest muddy waters, even through hell and back. But yet somewhere between the symmetries of lines I always, find thyself wondering upon this dark and cold and lonely road. Silently wondering within the depth of the darkness, searching for what I don't know nor do I remember, the reason why I am here upon this road walking like an silhouette shadow like a shadow walking in the dark. Yet within this transcending moment where realms of the unknown, combine with the reality of thought creating visions of...
#narrative
#TruthOfLife
#dialogue
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
38 reads
8 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
8th Jan 2021 2:17pm
8th Jan 2021 2:17pm
My Views 3
Some regard certain words as profanity,
Others talk about indecent language
Some people call them bad words,
And others label them expletives
You can call them whetever you want
Words are not bad as some think
The minds and ways of people are bad
Others talk about indecent language
Some people call them bad words,
And others label them expletives
You can call them whetever you want
Words are not bad as some think
The minds and ways of people are bad
#philosophical
16 reads
0 Comments
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