Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
15th Oct 2019 11:54pm
15th Oct 2019 11:54pm
Wales scores a goal...
..Wales scores a goal
and the guy goes all "Ape"
literally!...
from the other chair, I hear...
...Whatcha expect, luv?
'es Welsh, in't 'e?...
and the guy goes all "Ape"
literally!...
from the other chair, I hear...
...Whatcha expect, luv?
'es Welsh, in't 'e?...
#sports
#philosophical
35 reads
13 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
13th Oct 2019 9:58pm
13th Oct 2019 9:58pm
THE VESSEL OF YOUR SOUL
From the mind we remember the love as well as the hurt but yet it is those elements that carries the deep tears of passion, that becomes buried beneath the sadness of the tears that falls silently upon ones face unseen, but yet seen by the red color of there eyes and the buffy eyes from crying through days and nights.
...
...
#strength
#courage
#respect
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
22 reads
2 Comments
EmptyTree
Poem Published
12th Oct 2019 8:26pm
12th Oct 2019 8:26pm
Things I know nothing about
There are many things I do not know.
But whatever the case may be
For reasons ineffable
We ought to carry on carrying on,
Continually learning about learning,
Dreaming the unimaginable dream,
And live...living
A life unexplainable
And yet entirely comprehensible
A dream.
But whatever the case may be
For reasons ineffable
We ought to carry on carrying on,
Continually learning about learning,
Dreaming the unimaginable dream,
And live...living
A life unexplainable
And yet entirely comprehensible
A dream.
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
37 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 9:56pm
11th Oct 2019 9:56pm
looking for the gods
where are
they?
where did
they go?
looked in the
kitchen cabinets...
nope,
not there
went upstairs,
checked under
the bed...
nothing
searched the
shed in the
backyard...
zip,
zero
drove down to
the local grocery
store,
looked in the frozen
food section...
not a god to be
seen
explored the great
gothic cathedrals
and ancient temple's
of the world...
bupkis
opened dusty,...
they?
where did
they go?
looked in the
kitchen cabinets...
nope,
not there
went upstairs,
checked under
the bed...
nothing
searched the
shed in the
backyard...
zip,
zero
drove down to
the local grocery
store,
looked in the frozen
food section...
not a god to be
seen
explored the great
gothic cathedrals
and ancient temple's
of the world...
bupkis
opened dusty,...
#philosophical
29 reads
8 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 1:38pm
11th Oct 2019 1:38pm
see you on the other side
find your reflection in the darkness
open your eyes to a revelation
there is beauty here you've yet to explore
it's a hidden knowledge
the dark was here first
from it we evolved into the creatures we are
sin is a mortal creation
morality has its place
but don't let fear define you
let your mind roam the outer realms
here you will find answers
we all have questions demanding our attention
your journey requires you push your limits
you know it's true
as soon as you get comfy
something comes along...
open your eyes to a revelation
there is beauty here you've yet to explore
it's a hidden knowledge
the dark was here first
from it we evolved into the creatures we are
sin is a mortal creation
morality has its place
but don't let fear define you
let your mind roam the outer realms
here you will find answers
we all have questions demanding our attention
your journey requires you push your limits
you know it's true
as soon as you get comfy
something comes along...
#love
#universe
#TruthOfLife #philosophical
#TruthOfLife #philosophical
57 reads
2 Comments
cold_fusion
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 10:10am
11th Oct 2019 10:10am
when i see
an unforgiving soul
i see more than just
an unjust and a narcissistic
human
i see
a lost one
lost not only
of way home
but also one
that is now a captive
of war
the war no one saw
when the dominant
of the internal fraternal twins
that are the conscience and ego
crushed the other
into little more
than a vegetable state
the latter landing blows
at the feeblest
of sniveling
a sad story walking
a pretty
manicured and landscaped graveyard
i see more than just
an unjust and a narcissistic
human
i see
a lost one
lost not only
of way home
but also one
that is now a captive
of war
the war no one saw
when the dominant
of the internal fraternal twins
that are the conscience and ego
crushed the other
into little more
than a vegetable state
the latter landing blows
at the feeblest
of sniveling
a sad story walking
a pretty
manicured and landscaped graveyard
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#humankind
#MovingOn
#philosophical
123 reads
15 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
9th Oct 2019 3:17pm
9th Oct 2019 3:17pm
too serious
The World needs more
nonsense…
it's plain to see...
They's some folks take
their own selves
way too serious-ly
nonsense…
it's plain to see...
They's some folks take
their own selves
way too serious-ly
#MentalHealth
#philosophical
41 reads
11 Comments
_boybrains
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 00:32am
8th Oct 2019 00:32am
iris.
(visual)
#confessional
#PowerOfWords
#SixWordStory
#minimalist
#philosophical
17 reads
9 Comments
AndyJHale
Andy J Hale
Andy J Hale
Poem Published
6th Oct 2019 3:30am
6th Oct 2019 3:30am
The Sages
A curtain of darkness covered his eyes
He sat in the twilight
Confined to the chains of time
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Behind stone curtains
the infinity of his words
illumined the night
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Where the light goes
it goes...
He sat in the twilight
Confined to the chains of time
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Behind stone curtains
the infinity of his words
illumined the night
Where the light goes
it goes there weeping
It falls between the branches
it goes there weeping
Where the light goes
it goes...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#philosophical
#wisdom
32 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
5th Oct 2019 8:26am
5th Oct 2019 8:26am
Capitalreligionism
Like in the days
of old
the weak willed
eager to please
the blind
and the ignorant
continue to follow
the laws
of their prophets
they dare not
look back
at the things
their profits
leave behind
for they fear the beast
that sleeps within
the beast
that can connect them
to the things
that their profits
have left behind
that uncontrollable
beast
whom they dare not name
only in shallow whispers
in the brightest of light
do their lips tremble
with the name of...
of old
the weak willed
eager to please
the blind
and the ignorant
continue to follow
the laws
of their prophets
they dare not
look back
at the things
their profits
leave behind
for they fear the beast
that sleeps within
the beast
that can connect them
to the things
that their profits
have left behind
that uncontrollable
beast
whom they dare not name
only in shallow whispers
in the brightest of light
do their lips tremble
with the name of...
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
21 reads
0 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
4th Oct 2019 6:16pm
4th Oct 2019 6:16pm
At best...
At best …
life is uncertain
one minute you're here
next moment … you're not.
life is uncertain
one minute you're here
next moment … you're not.
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
35 reads
4 Comments
Northern1
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2019 9:47pm
3rd Oct 2019 9:47pm
Circle
There is no wall there is no gate
There is no time while we wait
There is no you there is no me
There is no singular eternity
A circle starts where it will end
A new beginning around the bend
And so it went and so it goes
And what it's for no one knows
So on we walk so on we run
Have it all as we have none
A dream of life a life of dream
Maybe more than it may seem
Round it goes round is all
And we rise to see us fall
As we plead why oh when
Then we start it all again
There is no time while we wait
There is no you there is no me
There is no singular eternity
A circle starts where it will end
A new beginning around the bend
And so it went and so it goes
And what it's for no one knows
So on we walk so on we run
Have it all as we have none
A dream of life a life of dream
Maybe more than it may seem
Round it goes round is all
And we rise to see us fall
As we plead why oh when
Then we start it all again
#universe
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
82 reads
12 Comments
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