Philosophical Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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philosophical seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stranger
Inquiry of questions interrogations in my head
Yesterday a revolving door in paradox of philosophical repose
For all the things I wish I never said
The mystery of the history of all the things that no one knows
I am a stranger to myself gradually learning as I go
Who I am in this experience to discover why
Every choice I make is another revelation of getting to know
Self, in all the tangles unraveling, until the day I die
Mystery in the mirror, mirror
How do I believe the best
When so much of what I’ve done doesn’t square
When...
Yesterday a revolving door in paradox of philosophical repose
For all the things I wish I never said
The mystery of the history of all the things that no one knows
I am a stranger to myself gradually learning as I go
Who I am in this experience to discover why
Every choice I make is another revelation of getting to know
Self, in all the tangles unraveling, until the day I die
Mystery in the mirror, mirror
How do I believe the best
When so much of what I’ve done doesn’t square
When...
#Christian
#NaPoWriMo2024
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
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Silence
Silence is that you?
confession number 6 I am afraid
falling forever falling in love with you
no matter the cause, doomed to fail
damned if I do, damned if I don't
pardoned on one condition
my brother, we can not speak
He will destroy me for being evidence of His dark side
laying witness I was cold with grief
imprisoned I was not allowed to stand with you
a traitor to feelings for you...never
visions of the future
you saw in my mind while we soul-coupled
the...
confession number 6 I am afraid
falling forever falling in love with you
no matter the cause, doomed to fail
damned if I do, damned if I don't
pardoned on one condition
my brother, we can not speak
He will destroy me for being evidence of His dark side
laying witness I was cold with grief
imprisoned I was not allowed to stand with you
a traitor to feelings for you...never
visions of the future
you saw in my mind while we soul-coupled
the...
#hell
#love
#philosophical
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2 Comments
Gunpowder
A season in hell
does not enable anyone
for that dream vacation
in Paradise...
Non-appreciators
forgive me, but
my Vodka, when
is not in circulation
in my organism
it's very quiet
in the freezer...
Drugs for what?
The truth is so harsh
in the morning, as much as
it was before falling asleep.
does not enable anyone
for that dream vacation
in Paradise...
Non-appreciators
forgive me, but
my Vodka, when
is not in circulation
in my organism
it's very quiet
in the freezer...
Drugs for what?
The truth is so harsh
in the morning, as much as
it was before falling asleep.
#alcohol
#honesty
#mirror
#myself
#philosophical
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Exploring
During the night
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
#dreams
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
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3 Comments
On ...Off ...Tell me Another...Cut the Crap !!
That's my new expression
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
#technology
#TruthOfLife
#consumerism
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
120 reads
42 Comments
Universal
#universe
#spiritual
#philosophical
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2 Comments
Zombie Lines
These words fade before the ink dries
When intentions to actions fail to materialize
Fabricating inspiration, reputation embodied in an empty phrase
All the ammunition without the impact, handicaps of shame
The right words without the follow through, the low highs of shallow praise
Wasted potentials relegated to make a name
Play the role and write the script
Saint facades of the linguist hypocrite
Thriving on the uninspired
The taste for silence is acquired
Every word is noise that is love without meaning
When character...
When intentions to actions fail to materialize
Fabricating inspiration, reputation embodied in an empty phrase
All the ammunition without the impact, handicaps of shame
The right words without the follow through, the low highs of shallow praise
Wasted potentials relegated to make a name
Play the role and write the script
Saint facades of the linguist hypocrite
Thriving on the uninspired
The taste for silence is acquired
Every word is noise that is love without meaning
When character...
#inspirational
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Something about suffering
Allah toast the moon
La luna sombrero from the big spoon
Tetrahedron dome tiny memorabilia
Mycelium, roots, moss, fauna, gnome
What weathers and doesnt kill ya
Wand of fire
Another ace of spades,
Against the tops of tree, she waxes, she wanes
Surrenders aglow in love and in pains
A call from my friends
You said Id be shorter
Theres layers of moon beams
Pyramid screen doors
Larger than in mirror
Nothing as it seems is as it allegedly appears
Nor does that apply here
The cheats are encoded into everywhere
La luna sombrero from the big spoon
Tetrahedron dome tiny memorabilia
Mycelium, roots, moss, fauna, gnome
What weathers and doesnt kill ya
Wand of fire
Another ace of spades,
Against the tops of tree, she waxes, she wanes
Surrenders aglow in love and in pains
A call from my friends
You said Id be shorter
Theres layers of moon beams
Pyramid screen doors
Larger than in mirror
Nothing as it seems is as it allegedly appears
Nor does that apply here
The cheats are encoded into everywhere
#anxiety
#fiction
#historical
#philosophical
#sensual
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3 Comments
Ponder that…
Is death really the end?
Is it ever really over?
It just doesn’t seem logical to me
I know I’ve never believed it is
Yet when death stares you in the face
All logic goes out the window
I know she’s not really gone
She’s as close to me as ever
I can feel her all around me
She’s in each breath that I breathe
She’s in every tear that I cry
She is everywhere and in everything I do
She’s as gone now as she was when alive
She’s as present now as one can be in death
She’s constantly near and far
Always...
Is it ever really over?
It just doesn’t seem logical to me
I know I’ve never believed it is
Yet when death stares you in the face
All logic goes out the window
I know she’s not really gone
She’s as close to me as ever
I can feel her all around me
She’s in each breath that I breathe
She’s in every tear that I cry
She is everywhere and in everything I do
She’s as gone now as she was when alive
She’s as present now as one can be in death
She’s constantly near and far
Always...
#death
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
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7 Comments
Cathedral cheese
I went south one day to sit on a hill
And low and behold I found a packet of cheese
Who’d have thought it would bring me to my knees
I looked up at the sky and saw a bird
I found myself and transcended realms
As I held my cheese I felt quite overwhelmed
I sat on the floor and thought “Am I god?”
With my cheese in tow and a feeling of love
I sunk into the ground and became one with above
And low and behold I found a packet of cheese
Who’d have thought it would bring me to my knees
I looked up at the sky and saw a bird
I found myself and transcended realms
As I held my cheese I felt quite overwhelmed
I sat on the floor and thought “Am I god?”
With my cheese in tow and a feeling of love
I sunk into the ground and became one with above
#spiritual
#philosophical
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The Value of Time
I can hear some of my watches on my nightstand ticking away
As I lay in bed waiting for sleep in the quiet and dark of night
Wondering how many minutes I’ve wasted on that particular day
Or the years I treated time as infinite but forgetting my time is finite
And then I remember all those lazy days and unproductive hours
All that precious time gifted as it now drifts into the blackness of space
The moments I made something of them while others were wasted
Postponing dreams and aspirations that I always wanted to chase
Now as I approach a...
As I lay in bed waiting for sleep in the quiet and dark of night
Wondering how many minutes I’ve wasted on that particular day
Or the years I treated time as infinite but forgetting my time is finite
And then I remember all those lazy days and unproductive hours
All that precious time gifted as it now drifts into the blackness of space
The moments I made something of them while others were wasted
Postponing dreams and aspirations that I always wanted to chase
Now as I approach a...
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#philosophical #NaPoWriMo2024
#philosophical #NaPoWriMo2024
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Wise Words From The Wild
Wise Words From The Wild
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
#religion
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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6 Comments
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