Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
David Lewis and the concept of bearded men
The concept
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
#love
#lover
#passion
#philosophical
#romantic
234 reads
28 Comments
when i get too lonely
even though
the night
has taken
away
my sight,
my mind
is still
filled with
thoughts
of you,
and even
while we
are apart,
i can
have you
here
with me
when
i get
too lonely.
the night
has taken
away
my sight,
my mind
is still
filled with
thoughts
of you,
and even
while we
are apart,
i can
have you
here
with me
when
i get
too lonely.
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#strength
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4 Comments
Bags on the Moon
Go, young lovers,
gaze at the moon
It is full
of hope and promise
and a lovely soft glow
just like your love
Go, older and cynical,
gaze at the moon
it is full
of memories
of love
that waxed
and then waned its ass off
until it seemed
the orb
of lunar loveliness
was nothing but a siren
beaming a seductive sea of light
onto jagged rocks
Go ahead,
whatever age you are,
gaze at the full moon
it is indeed lovely
always has been
always will be
But once you...
gaze at the moon
It is full
of hope and promise
and a lovely soft glow
just like your love
Go, older and cynical,
gaze at the moon
it is full
of memories
of love
that waxed
and then waned its ass off
until it seemed
the orb
of lunar loveliness
was nothing but a siren
beaming a seductive sea of light
onto jagged rocks
Go ahead,
whatever age you are,
gaze at the full moon
it is indeed lovely
always has been
always will be
But once you...
#aging
#love
#moon
247 reads
18 Comments
Sonja at 18
Sonja at 18
Our healing village is down by the levee in New Orleans. I am deep in Psyche hospital funk. I am curled in a ball on the couch in a fetal pose. My mind is afloat in a Sargasso Sea of drugged peace.
The mind doctors take me off all my meds. I am alert and sitting for a change. Sarah and Pamela, who are counselors, walk by me. Sarah looks at me. “Paul did you know Pamela poses nude for artists in the French Quarter? You should come to a showing of her at the gallery after discharge.”
“That sounds like my cup of tea,” I reply, moon-eyed.
...
Our healing village is down by the levee in New Orleans. I am deep in Psyche hospital funk. I am curled in a ball on the couch in a fetal pose. My mind is afloat in a Sargasso Sea of drugged peace.
The mind doctors take me off all my meds. I am alert and sitting for a change. Sarah and Pamela, who are counselors, walk by me. Sarah looks at me. “Paul did you know Pamela poses nude for artists in the French Quarter? You should come to a showing of her at the gallery after discharge.”
“That sounds like my cup of tea,” I reply, moon-eyed.
...
#healing
#love
#MentalHealth
#romantic
#sensual
64 reads
2 Comments
The Sweater
The warmth of a woven garment
accents a sensation on the skin.
Scent displaces devolving thoughts.
Threads get snagged, suddenly caught
in the auditory of augmented whispers.
A traverse through blurred memories,
with eyes closed, forming a resolution;
savoring the evolution of love.
Every sense is tangled in an action
of an attraction, love, worn like cashmere.
accents a sensation on the skin.
Scent displaces devolving thoughts.
Threads get snagged, suddenly caught
in the auditory of augmented whispers.
A traverse through blurred memories,
with eyes closed, forming a resolution;
savoring the evolution of love.
Every sense is tangled in an action
of an attraction, love, worn like cashmere.
#love
#relationships
43 reads
22 Comments
I can feel it
I can feel it...
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
#anxiety
#emotions
#hurt #love
#hurt #love
144 reads
19 Comments
Poetically Yours
Now, it is past summer
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
every light filled a shady corner
it is so so far from cold December
yet, it can be poetically warmer.
it is the heat of august flames,
and the noon lounges lazy in the hot hour
some kind of time rarely sensed,
some kind of feelings, mystically resuscitated,
some sort of streaming languid, lengthy oscillation,
seen on a very large sea, without limitation,
then the void swallows any sign of voice,
of motion, less life, less existence,
death of any poetic fresh dictionary.
No...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
#respect
111 reads
4 Comments
Whispers of Love (Collaboration with Vision_of_Insanity)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us
Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and
Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your cherry lips, velvety and sweet
Need to be sealed with a kiss
Echoing in divine dimensions of
Eternal bliss
Eternally yours...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us
Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and
Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your cherry lips, velvety and sweet
Need to be sealed with a kiss
Echoing in divine dimensions of
Eternal bliss
Eternally yours...
#emotions
#love
128 reads
6 Comments
Parting of her thighs like the Red sea
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#love
#passion
258 reads
2 Comments
The Cruel Vessel
All aboard the steamer to the midnight sea
On waves of lightning we set sail
All baggage thrown over board
To make space for barrels of brandy and rum
Sanity runs through fingers like sand
Love awaits us on dry Land
On waves of lightning we set sail
All baggage thrown over board
To make space for barrels of brandy and rum
Sanity runs through fingers like sand
Love awaits us on dry Land
#love
62 reads
2 Comments
Shades of Magenta
I'm an Aquarius aquarium
This feeling never floats away
Happiness lives inside me
Every single day
It feels like schools of fish
Are swimming in my veins
Swells of tranquility
Become vibrant reality
Can you feel them flow
Do you even know
I've never felt like this before
I'm not fighting it anymore
You turn me
Shades of Magenta
Whenever I'm with ya
You turn me
Shades of Magenta
Because I love ya
When my heart beats it sends
Pulses of possibilities instead
It...
This feeling never floats away
Happiness lives inside me
Every single day
It feels like schools of fish
Are swimming in my veins
Swells of tranquility
Become vibrant reality
Can you feel them flow
Do you even know
I've never felt like this before
I'm not fighting it anymore
You turn me
Shades of Magenta
Whenever I'm with ya
You turn me
Shades of Magenta
Because I love ya
When my heart beats it sends
Pulses of possibilities instead
It...
#FallingInLove
#love
140 reads
20 Comments
hanging cranes
You fold me into origami
glaze me over, heat me up
call me porcelain art
hang me from the ceiling
and watch me spin
in this whirlpool of love
Your heart is a blackhole
and I mistook you
for something beautiful
when you were just a cuckoo
masquerading
as something wholesome
glaze me over, heat me up
call me porcelain art
hang me from the ceiling
and watch me spin
in this whirlpool of love
Your heart is a blackhole
and I mistook you
for something beautiful
when you were just a cuckoo
masquerading
as something wholesome
#lies
#love
54 reads
4 Comments
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