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Bags on the Moon
Go, young lovers,
gaze at the moon
It is full
of hope and promise
and a lovely soft glow
just like your love
Go, older and cynical,
gaze at the moon
it is full
of memories
of love
that waxed
and then waned its ass off
until it seemed
the orb
of lunar loveliness
was nothing but a siren
beaming a seductive sea of light
onto jagged rocks
Go ahead,
whatever age you are,
gaze at the full moon
it is indeed lovely
always has been
always will be
But once you reach a certain age
your mind goes a bit loony
random facts come to you
at inopportune times
such as, say, the Apollo 11 mission
and the fact that the astronauts
left more than a flag on the moon
many bags of it, it seems.
Go, silly Earthling
gaze at the moon
let its light guide you
away from unnecessary random thoughts
to a shimmering sea
of wherever it is
you want to be.
gaze at the moon
It is full
of hope and promise
and a lovely soft glow
just like your love
Go, older and cynical,
gaze at the moon
it is full
of memories
of love
that waxed
and then waned its ass off
until it seemed
the orb
of lunar loveliness
was nothing but a siren
beaming a seductive sea of light
onto jagged rocks
Go ahead,
whatever age you are,
gaze at the full moon
it is indeed lovely
always has been
always will be
But once you reach a certain age
your mind goes a bit loony
random facts come to you
at inopportune times
such as, say, the Apollo 11 mission
and the fact that the astronauts
left more than a flag on the moon
many bags of it, it seems.
Go, silly Earthling
gaze at the moon
let its light guide you
away from unnecessary random thoughts
to a shimmering sea
of wherever it is
you want to be.
Author's Note
Inspired by some rather gross trivia I read recently. And the full moon.
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Re. Bags on the Moon
25th May 2024 6:01am
Ever since man walked on earth, the Moon has always been the one companion and lover which guided his life and existence. No not the sun. Not the stars… it has always been the Moon
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Re: Re. Bags on the Moon
29th May 2024 00:45am
I'm more of a stars fan myself. The full moon worsens my insomnia, even if that theory has been debunked. But I do get the romantic allure.
Thanks for the read and comments.
Thanks for the read and comments.
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Re. Bags on the Moon
25th May 2024 10:15am
Loved your poem, but had to look up what they left on the moon.
Leave it to humans to leave their waste bags and all kinds of other
tools and stuff on the moon. We litter even on the moon??!!
Leave it to humans to leave their waste bags and all kinds of other
tools and stuff on the moon. We litter even on the moon??!!
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Re: Re. Bags on the Moon
26th May 2024 1:26am
Yep, humans defile everything. Everest is littered with trash and dead bodies. But, one can also concentrate on the beauty.
Thanks for loving the poem.
Thanks for loving the poem.
Re: Re. Bags on the Moon
26th May 2024 1:49am
I love Mt. Everest. I can't believe people would litter in the face of such grandeur.
Have a peaceful night. 🌙
Have a peaceful night. 🌙
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Re. Bags on the Moon
25th May 2024 10:54am
Humans are filth. We will destroy anything and everything. The moon is no exception. Clever write. Intelligent poem.
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Re: Re. Bags on the Moon
26th May 2024 3:01am
At least there's not a McDonald's on the moon. Yet.
Thanks for the read and comments.
Thanks for the read and comments.
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25th May 2024 11:26am
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Re. Bags on the Moon
29th May 2024 00:31am
I want to be in the sea of tranquillity but you knew I'd say that! Gosh, I hope I'm being original. Here's an original thought though, ( I 'ope!). The moon's surface always looked like a fresh fall of snow to me, you know, that smooth featurelessness of a powdery surface.
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Re. Bags on the Moon
29th May 2024 00:39am
I like your poetic moon thoughts. Maybe a moon poem is in your near future.
Re: Re. Bags on the Moon
29th May 2024 00:47am
I've written one already, yes... back in 2015 with... 'Take Me To The Moon (Even if I never get back!)' Sorry... even though I'm not! 😉
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