Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Don't need your spouse to cum
#emptiness
#loneliness
#marriage #orgasm
#marriage #orgasm
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6 Comments
Tear Kissed Lashes
When I thought I had nothing left
That my internal well had run dry
You managed to bring forth one tear
It clung to the longest lash
Like a lover’s kiss
Just because you said
Beautiful
That my internal well had run dry
You managed to bring forth one tear
It clung to the longest lash
Like a lover’s kiss
Just because you said
Beautiful
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#BDSM
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12 Comments
... Table for One - Rebirth and Redux
I went into the restaurant
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
#confessional
#fate
#karma
#loneliness
#WritingPoetry
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22 Comments
sincere
loneliness emits a certain keen
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#love
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8 Comments
WHEN I AM PARTED
When I am parted from my guy,
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
#loneliness
#erotic
#rhyming
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0 Comments
The Woman You See
Ever the happy-go-lucky child
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
#sadness
#loneliness
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
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88 Comments
A Reality Dream
Do you know why 🤨 WHY DO GOOD PEOPLE, HAVE THE MOST BAD LUCK IN THE WORLD. 🌍 WHEN TRYING TO BE WITH SOMEONE, YET WHO HAVE THE WORST RESULTS IN TRYING, TO FIND THAT ONE RELATIONSHIP, with real honesty and truth and trust. For sure do you know why, it's not working out as they plan, it's simple for they display there feelings and emotion, so easy in there mind and heart ❤️ Hoping that this time will be different than the last time. 😭 BUT yet it becomes a repeat of bad all over again. 😞 For sure let's smash the deepness of the madness, and drama that...
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#StreamOfConsciousness
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4 Comments
I'LL BOTHER YOU NO MORE
YES
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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10 Comments
The Final Act
Before a storm
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness #sadness
#loneliness #sadness
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16 Comments
darkness doesn't need stars or a spark to highlight itself
gently shrinks the twilight's brimming eyes
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
#loneliness
#rejection
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#SelfReflection
547 reads
3 Comments
chilled bones
the wind came calling today
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
#sadness
#loneliness
160 reads
8 Comments
The Fight
it feels like
i’m in a
battle
with life
but i’m losing
the fight
i am
losing
the fight
i smile
i’m polite
but inside it
screams, it rages
i’m fading'
h a n d s
stretch out
into the
world
looking for
someone
Some One
to hold on to
but it’s too late
i’m tired, ...
i’m in a
battle
with life
but i’m losing
the fight
i am
losing
the fight
i smile
i’m polite
but inside it
screams, it rages
i’m fading'
h a n d s
stretch out
into the
world
looking for
someone
Some One
to hold on to
but it’s too late
i’m tired, ...
#dark
#loneliness
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DU Poetry : Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers