Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 2:07pm
12th Feb 2025 2:07pm
Everything is just the same
Time flies by, so rather quick
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
Everyday repeats itself, week after week
Relentless agony, when nothing awaits
Maybe one day life will smile at you
Stuck in the middle without progression
Only you can guide yourself out of there
You can create another world, all in your mind
In solitude you will find
in your head everything is better than you'll ever be
Life is seldom fair
It leads you to despair
After every uphill
You will descend
You can hide from your fears
to avoid all the pain
but never get to...
#depression
#grief
#hurt
#loneliness
#sadness
113 reads
10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:28pm
10th Jan 2025 1:28pm
Day Unschedualed
Is this a good one?
where all the roses bloom
skies are blue, and you pledge your feelings are true?
Is it a broody and contrary day?
never happy with this and that
When I say up, you say, is that a fact?
Is it going to be anger?
unleash and unabashed
Total destruction is your function
and in its wake, you leave bone and ash
Is it regret?
Of words and actions that were never meant to happen
Still, it happened
Shit, it really happened
The day I give to you
quiet and...
where all the roses bloom
skies are blue, and you pledge your feelings are true?
Is it a broody and contrary day?
never happy with this and that
When I say up, you say, is that a fact?
Is it going to be anger?
unleash and unabashed
Total destruction is your function
and in its wake, you leave bone and ash
Is it regret?
Of words and actions that were never meant to happen
Still, it happened
Shit, it really happened
The day I give to you
quiet and...
#dark
#emotions
#loneliness
122 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:48am
21st Nov 2024 3:48am
sincere
loneliness emits a certain keen
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
if you're listening you will hear it
an emptiness that gnaws at the soul
indifferent to my own pain
it sometimes rises with pangs of ache
and I am taken aback
doubled over with pain
my heart's sorrow clearly seen
hidden deep within, I swallow it down
regretful emotion, I don't want you to see me this way
it hurts my pride to know you get to me
salvation in a hugs sometimes that's all it takes
a smile, to keep those uneasy feelings at bay
tender emotion, when I can express...
#emptiness
#loneliness
#love
129 reads
8 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 3:41pm
26th Aug 2024 3:41pm
I'LL BOTHER YOU NO MORE
YES
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
250 reads
10 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2019 2:24pm
3rd Feb 2019 2:24pm
The Fear ( After Pablo Neruda )
We are not naturally afraid of darkness;
we gestate within it, our eyes unclear
thriving in gelatinous sockets of growth—
it is birth that dilates pupils to fear.
Abuse, its steel toe boot cracking the teeth
of our solar plexus in times of innocence;
adolescence demands our participation—
microscopically studies each breath.
Breaking the spine of nonconformity
fear wills one into a submissive participant;
dominant peers lord over the weak
and life is not lived, but tolerated.
...
we gestate within it, our eyes unclear
thriving in gelatinous sockets of growth—
it is birth that dilates pupils to fear.
Abuse, its steel toe boot cracking the teeth
of our solar plexus in times of innocence;
adolescence demands our participation—
microscopically studies each breath.
Breaking the spine of nonconformity
fear wills one into a submissive participant;
dominant peers lord over the weak
and life is not lived, but tolerated.
...
#anxiety
#loneliness
#childhood
#philosophical
#PabloNeruda
1147 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
The spirit of the soul
As a writer of spoken words ✍️ we have the ability to manifest thoughts and insight, into the deepness of the imagination of those things that are involved, in creating a different kind of perspective on life and love. For sure we can unlock 🔓 your own thoughts that were once, hidden behind the curtains of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually awaken your own deepest thoughts, that slowly becomes more than just words. But yet thoughts and feelings of emotionally tasty, bits of consciousness of the truth of a passion fruit 🍓 THAT leaves a taste of...
#courage
#fear
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#strength
69 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Apr 2018 10:44pm
11th Apr 2018 10:44pm
darkness doesn't need stars or a spark to highlight itself
gently shrinks the twilight's brimming eyes
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
to a bokeh of starry diamonds in fluffiness
flows from the frontally stared nothings
to the unfocusingly glanced sideways
in some subtleties
how easy it is for you
to shed this love
and wear on
those fading shades
at such rudity precision and pace
that even shames a chameleon
how whorish you try make me feel
from your roughened tongue
that's dismembered
from lively arterial strings
since unremembered times
as you spell black and white...
#loneliness
#rejection
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#SelfReflection
582 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
12th Dec 2020 8:18am
12th Dec 2020 8:18am
WHEN I AM PARTED
When I am parted from my guy,
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
I maintain my orgasmic high,
kneeling like nude inverted Y,
by pleasuring between my thigh,
raising many a pant and sigh
with eyes raised as if to the sky.
To my lower lips I apply
my finger tips externally,
gradually internally,
wetting hand as I liquefy,
a desert place no longer dry.
Incantingly your name I cry.
#loneliness
#erotic
#rhyming
450 reads
0 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
8th Aug 2023 1:18am
8th Aug 2023 1:18am
The Woman You See
Ever the happy-go-lucky child
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
Idyllic upbringing into womanhood
Strong and self assured
Or
The façade of such a person
Checking off each passing day
Akin to the doomed Iphigenia
With no
fairy godmother
to
rescue
her
#sadness
#loneliness
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
#SelfReflection #sacrifice
950 reads
88 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 10:59am
15th Sep 2024 10:59am
The Final Act
Before a storm
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness #sadness
#loneliness #sadness
187 reads
16 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 4:34pm
4th Aug 2024 4:34pm
hanging up
there was a rope
a hook
a neck
there was something floating
over the head
there was a rope attached to a hook
around the neck
there were feet
there was the white of the walls
oblivion!
a hook
a neck
there was something floating
over the head
there was a rope attached to a hook
around the neck
there were feet
there was the white of the walls
oblivion!
#anxiety
#dark
#depression
#hope
#loneliness
181 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
26th Mar 2024 6:44pm
chilled bones
the wind came calling today
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
wailing upon my pain
& I didn't know what to say
so I sat in her embrace
& wept
feeling a bit upended today...
#sadness
#loneliness
197 reads
8 Comments
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