Poems About Loneliness Seeking Honest Critique
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
Poem Published
14th Oct 2019 11:20pm
14th Oct 2019 11:20pm
JUST LOST FOR WORDS
From onxy skies to memories that have faded to black leaving behind a trail of broken hearts with broken souls with broken dreams that will forever go unseen, for the persons and the dreams didn't get the chance to be completed with the vision of the dream before there very life of breath was taken out from there chest thanks to humanity.
But from a...
But from a...
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#FeelingLost
#suffering
#StreamOfConsciousness
43 reads
6 Comments
PiecesofEmotions
Poem Published
14th Oct 2019 8:30pm
14th Oct 2019 8:30pm
"Lost inside my own head"
The figurative gun is on the table,
Id like to put it down for good if im able.
Ive pulled that hypothetical trigger hoping to hear that sound;
But all that happens, is the cylinder spins proving yet another empty round.
Without any sign of life just deep, endless blackness that engulfs this room;
My demons will be appearing soon.
Out of the smoke I can scarcely make them out, taunting me from afar;
From the glow emitted by this burning ember, I notice their eyes are as black as char.
Its been many years, ive suffered their...
Id like to put it down for good if im able.
Ive pulled that hypothetical trigger hoping to hear that sound;
But all that happens, is the cylinder spins proving yet another empty round.
Without any sign of life just deep, endless blackness that engulfs this room;
My demons will be appearing soon.
Out of the smoke I can scarcely make them out, taunting me from afar;
From the glow emitted by this burning ember, I notice their eyes are as black as char.
Its been many years, ive suffered their...
#strength
#loneliness
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
36 reads
1 Comment
Inkognito
Poem Published
13th Oct 2019 6:01am
13th Oct 2019 6:01am
Can't Do Without You
I adore how you affect me.
I can be paranoid and be shaking by the thought, leaving my apartment.
Just a few minutes with you, you make me feel relaxed and calm.
You can make my worst days the best days.
When I cry you can make me forget why.
When I'm depressed, you can make me laugh and scream;
FUCK THEM ALL.
I can't get a hug from you, even though I need one.
You can't make it better,
Only give false happiness.
It's helping at the moment,
That's the...
I can be paranoid and be shaking by the thought, leaving my apartment.
Just a few minutes with you, you make me feel relaxed and calm.
You can make my worst days the best days.
When I cry you can make me forget why.
When I'm depressed, you can make me laugh and scream;
FUCK THEM ALL.
I can't get a hug from you, even though I need one.
You can't make it better,
Only give false happiness.
It's helping at the moment,
That's the...
#loneliness
#alcohol
44 reads
0 Comments
LustyNomad
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 11:44pm
11th Oct 2019 11:44pm
Unpretty Thing
#lust
#loneliness
#frustration
#emptiness
#passion
124 reads
4 Comments
LJRoundTown
LJ
LJ
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 9:26pm
11th Oct 2019 9:26pm
eXtasy
Cold nights
Spent without you
Wondering how you’re doing,
My past flame, my lost Xanadu
I feel sick as a dog
Phlegm xanthic with infection
Wondering how things got this way
And why I feel slanted
Initially we were a team
We walked hand in hand
Then you surpassed me
In favor of seeking a nature more relevant
More Xaverian
You boarded a small xebec
Excited to be free
Excited to see something
Something xenon
Something not dull
Something that wasn’t me
I had no idea I was so toxic
So xylene ...
Spent without you
Wondering how you’re doing,
My past flame, my lost Xanadu
I feel sick as a dog
Phlegm xanthic with infection
Wondering how things got this way
And why I feel slanted
Initially we were a team
We walked hand in hand
Then you surpassed me
In favor of seeking a nature more relevant
More Xaverian
You boarded a small xebec
Excited to be free
Excited to see something
Something xenon
Something not dull
Something that wasn’t me
I had no idea I was so toxic
So xylene ...
#love
#loneliness
#breakup #FeelingLost
#breakup #FeelingLost
36 reads
1 Comment
Besus606
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 7:37am
11th Oct 2019 7:37am
Untitled IV
The death was sweet,
That voice in my head no longer speaks
I clasped my hands together firmly,
While on my knees I lied to God
Promising the end to my delusions of grandeur felt so odd
Forever controlling my every move,
I killed my ego all for you
That voice in my head no longer speaks
I clasped my hands together firmly,
While on my knees I lied to God
Promising the end to my delusions of grandeur felt so odd
Forever controlling my every move,
I killed my ego all for you
#lust
#loneliness
#heartbroken
#lover
#temptation
41 reads
1 Comment
Shatteredheart
Poem Published
10th Oct 2019 1:08pm
10th Oct 2019 1:08pm
My Goddess
you were a beautiful rose
but you have the sharpest thorns
blood that you drew
dripping down my puncture wounds
bleeding out you have sucked me dry
not even sand could match my veins
you are the sun that melts ice
brilliant in your beauty but punishing for my eyes
you are the master to my soul
the very keeper of the dead
i am a gluten for approval
but from you i seek it
banished from your grace
vanishing to be replaced
in the muck of corpses
stiff where they lay ...
but you have the sharpest thorns
blood that you drew
dripping down my puncture wounds
bleeding out you have sucked me dry
not even sand could match my veins
you are the sun that melts ice
brilliant in your beauty but punishing for my eyes
you are the master to my soul
the very keeper of the dead
i am a gluten for approval
but from you i seek it
banished from your grace
vanishing to be replaced
in the muck of corpses
stiff where they lay ...
#sadness
#loneliness
#heartbroken
57 reads
3 Comments
fieryangelsouljia
MorriganFey
MorriganFey
Poem Published
10th Oct 2019 12:23pm
10th Oct 2019 12:23pm
Child of Porcelain
Tuck me in like I'm gonna break
something fragile feeling soft
(I am soft...)
maybe the blankets
will keep me from breaking
maybe your presence
will stop the shaking
I want to be alright
listening to your stories
and learning to smile
in the bedroom light
Hold my hand
and kiss my head
I want to feel I'm loved
want to feel like I belong
faking this reality
till I'm
fucking
dead
something fragile feeling soft
(I am soft...)
maybe the blankets
will keep me from breaking
maybe your presence
will stop the shaking
I want to be alright
listening to your stories
and learning to smile
in the bedroom light
Hold my hand
and kiss my head
I want to feel I'm loved
want to feel like I belong
faking this reality
till I'm
fucking
dead
#depression
#loneliness
#childhood #MentalHealth
#childhood #MentalHealth
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2 Comments
Shatteredheart
Poem Published
10th Oct 2019 11:52am
10th Oct 2019 11:52am
I'M
I'm trying not to cry with all this stress upon my heart
I'm broken I'm shattered and its tearing me apart
i'm falling down this hole and i cant seem to get a grip
i'm drowned by my demons i cant give them the slip
I'm trying so hard to pick up the pieces
I'm falling behind I'm unfolding like paper creases
I'm not a man but a immature kid trying to be a man
I'm nothing but my childhood is who i am
I'm beating I'm bruised and i feel abused
I'm a summer storm 10 fold only to release and be used
I'm trapped with no...
I'm broken I'm shattered and its tearing me apart
i'm falling down this hole and i cant seem to get a grip
i'm drowned by my demons i cant give them the slip
I'm trying so hard to pick up the pieces
I'm falling behind I'm unfolding like paper creases
I'm not a man but a immature kid trying to be a man
I'm nothing but my childhood is who i am
I'm beating I'm bruised and i feel abused
I'm a summer storm 10 fold only to release and be used
I'm trapped with no...
#sadness
#loneliness
#confusion
#despair
#emptiness
39 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
9th Oct 2019 7:57pm
9th Oct 2019 7:57pm
solitaire
no commendation
no condemnation
but nobody knows
how shallow
or deep
the hermit’s wits
not by commission
but by omission
his latency grows
into a
deep sleep
with no exits
growing attrition
void of contrition
who shall expose
how hollow
or cheap
the broken bits
no ammunition
no manumission
daily he goes
like callow
lost sheep
bound by defeats
© Copyright 2019 October 06
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
no condemnation
but nobody knows
how shallow
or deep
the hermit’s wits
not by commission
but by omission
his latency grows
into a
deep sleep
with no exits
growing attrition
void of contrition
who shall expose
how hollow
or cheap
the broken bits
no ammunition
no manumission
daily he goes
like callow
lost sheep
bound by defeats
© Copyright 2019 October 06
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#sadness
#loneliness
#separation
38 reads
3 Comments
Juvenalis66
Juvenalis
Juvenalis
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 11:36pm
8th Oct 2019 11:36pm
Paranoid
Scream out your name,
as you get into my head.
Order submission!
I rather be dead.
Inhaling fear
with every breath
that I take,
shivering, as I crumble,
then silently break.
Subtle torture,
meticulously induced;
mental strangulation,
more painful than a noose.
No more clarity for a paragon;
no more differences
between truth or lie.
Head racing
beyond boundaries,
only demons keeping time.
Addressed by many saviours,
none bearing your cross or crime.
Again, the furys circle ...
as you get into my head.
Order submission!
I rather be dead.
Inhaling fear
with every breath
that I take,
shivering, as I crumble,
then silently break.
Subtle torture,
meticulously induced;
mental strangulation,
more painful than a noose.
No more clarity for a paragon;
no more differences
between truth or lie.
Head racing
beyond boundaries,
only demons keeping time.
Addressed by many saviours,
none bearing your cross or crime.
Again, the furys circle ...
#anxiety
#depression
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
163 reads
9 Comments
BabydoII
Itty Bitty
Itty Bitty
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 10:41pm
8th Oct 2019 10:41pm
To those days...
When whats everything to you means nothing
To the one that you hope it will mean something to...
To the one that you hope it will mean something to...
#depression
#regret
#loneliness #obsession
#loneliness #obsession
65 reads
2 Comments
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