Poems About Loneliness Seeking Honest Critique
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
closram25
Poem Published
29th May 2020 11:20pm
29th May 2020 11:20pm
Ethereal of sadness
Pray for me I know I'm not alright yeah
I spend my time alone at night
Watch the stars as I drink excessively
Mind flooded as I cry out to nobody
Baby I don't want to do this
Heart broke I don't see any changes
Tightrope as my mind rages;
Hellbent when there was no haven.
What's it like to be wanted,
I only ask this cause I'm haunted
Lost in the unknown, I can't pretend;
I'm alone to the very end
I just want a friend
But they only care about material,
Call me crazy I can feel my end.
I see all...
I spend my time alone at night
Watch the stars as I drink excessively
Mind flooded as I cry out to nobody
Baby I don't want to do this
Heart broke I don't see any changes
Tightrope as my mind rages;
Hellbent when there was no haven.
What's it like to be wanted,
I only ask this cause I'm haunted
Lost in the unknown, I can't pretend;
I'm alone to the very end
I just want a friend
But they only care about material,
Call me crazy I can feel my end.
I see all...
#loneliness
#MentalHealth
20 reads
1 Comment
WaterWet
Steve_Mbetu
Steve_Mbetu
Poem Published
29th May 2020 7:35pm
29th May 2020 7:35pm
Lonely
A lonely kid,
Am but a lonely kid from a broken home
A silent kid,
I'll always be the silent boy with a broken smile
Everything i know, I've learned in silence
Bright days come and pass,
Dark days come and stay
Everything I've seen, I've seen in darkness
Bridge after another, I burn
Trying to create some distance between humanity and i
I stare,
I stare at the Vagueness in my Chest
Layers upon layers of nothingness
There's a city in ruins living right underneath my ribcage
Foul air, this place is a cemetery ...
Am but a lonely kid from a broken home
A silent kid,
I'll always be the silent boy with a broken smile
Everything i know, I've learned in silence
Bright days come and pass,
Dark days come and stay
Everything I've seen, I've seen in darkness
Bridge after another, I burn
Trying to create some distance between humanity and i
I stare,
I stare at the Vagueness in my Chest
Layers upon layers of nothingness
There's a city in ruins living right underneath my ribcage
Foul air, this place is a cemetery ...
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#dark
#despair
21 reads
2 Comments
The_Silly_Sibyl
Poem Published
29th May 2020 1:42am
29th May 2020 1:42am
Walking the Streets at Night
Walked home via Aldwych. Reflected that nothing really changes. I’m still walking about this city dragging my loneliness with me, putting on a front, whistling in the dark. It is getting darker all the time.” - The Kenneth Williams Diaries
Walking the streets at night,
I look at windows overlooking alleyways
and tangled gardens long since given up,
and picture myself inside those rooms
just outside the dangerous corner of pitch,
where anything might be lurking.
I’d never tell my grandmother,
who once freaked out
when I said that...
Walking the streets at night,
I look at windows overlooking alleyways
and tangled gardens long since given up,
and picture myself inside those rooms
just outside the dangerous corner of pitch,
where anything might be lurking.
I’d never tell my grandmother,
who once freaked out
when I said that...
#loneliness
#despair
#emptiness #bittersweet
#emptiness #bittersweet
25 reads
2 Comments
Addi82
Addi
Addi
Poem Published
28th May 2020 8:30am
28th May 2020 8:30am
MIND OF A MANIC
welcome
to the mind of a manic
constant confusion
forever in a state of panic
never knowing what i want
ruining every thing i touch
pushing people away
refusing love
yet needing it so much
i hate this life
its like a curse
like a big play
that i forgot to rehearse
a constant failure
a complete mess inside
i feel isolated
but its because i hide
i can clearly see the problems
but im helpless
3am
im in full makeup and a dress
dont know what to do
feeling lost
what am i doing, i...
to the mind of a manic
constant confusion
forever in a state of panic
never knowing what i want
ruining every thing i touch
pushing people away
refusing love
yet needing it so much
i hate this life
its like a curse
like a big play
that i forgot to rehearse
a constant failure
a complete mess inside
i feel isolated
but its because i hide
i can clearly see the problems
but im helpless
3am
im in full makeup and a dress
dont know what to do
feeling lost
what am i doing, i...
#sadness
#anxiety
#loneliness
#confusion
#emptiness
40 reads
1 Comment
anonymouslyhere
Poem Published
27th May 2020 3:00pm
27th May 2020 3:00pm
Kill Me, You Little Devil
I fall through worlds
Euphoria into dispair
After laughter comes
Depression, I am alone
Oh, this is the fashion of the faithless
It's you babe, loveless
Nevertheless lets trudge
Toward the dying light
Bitch.
Euphoria into dispair
After laughter comes
Depression, I am alone
Oh, this is the fashion of the faithless
It's you babe, loveless
Nevertheless lets trudge
Toward the dying light
Bitch.
#love
#depression
#loneliness #breakup
#loneliness #breakup
23 reads
0 Comments
Edward80
Ef
Ef
Poem Published
27th May 2020 00:06am
27th May 2020 00:06am
Hatred
Hurt
Anger
Torment
Rage
Emptiness
Despair
Anger
Torment
Rage
Emptiness
Despair
#sadness
#anger
#hate #loneliness
#hate #loneliness
27 reads
1 Comment
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
26th May 2020 8:16pm
26th May 2020 8:16pm
Captain Cowardice
Withdrawing to my jilted world,
I sit upon a private spindle,
Looming over silken whorls,
And licks of flame from fire kindle.
At the wheel of my creation,
Concealed from human intervention;
I escape their every expectation,
In this pool of my invention.
The epitome of a selfish need,
Shunning every sect of society;
I pick my brain until I bleed,
Overrun by my anxiety.
Like a nightmare with no end,
My twisted mind begins to spin;
As exit lights begin to dim,
Looks like it's time to sink or swim.
...
I sit upon a private spindle,
Looming over silken whorls,
And licks of flame from fire kindle.
At the wheel of my creation,
Concealed from human intervention;
I escape their every expectation,
In this pool of my invention.
The epitome of a selfish need,
Shunning every sect of society;
I pick my brain until I bleed,
Overrun by my anxiety.
Like a nightmare with no end,
My twisted mind begins to spin;
As exit lights begin to dim,
Looks like it's time to sink or swim.
...
#anxiety
#depression
#loneliness
#shame
#misunderstood
81 reads
18 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
25th May 2020 9:43am
25th May 2020 9:43am
Far from Home
My children
are asleep in bed.
The little ones
I’m missing
I wish I was with
them now
instead
I sit here
writing
...weeping
are asleep in bed.
The little ones
I’m missing
I wish I was with
them now
instead
I sit here
writing
...weeping
#loneliness
34 reads
3 Comments
MadameLavender
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 9:53pm
23rd May 2020 9:53pm
Emptying
I wish to be pulled away
like ocean waves, strangely
receding—
that anxious moment before
a tsunami.
I must become the sky—
not just the sky, but
its color,
horrific , bubbling gray-greens
as tornadoes form, slow
motion.
Ah, to stand at crossroads
amid corn fields, waiting
for something ...
to hit me .
I have emptied my grief —
poured
out bucketfuls
of past hurts, regrets.
But,
the longing gnaws, maddeningly
taunting—
(my timetable, against God’s)
...
like ocean waves, strangely
receding—
that anxious moment before
a tsunami.
I must become the sky—
not just the sky, but
its color,
horrific , bubbling gray-greens
as tornadoes form, slow
motion.
Ah, to stand at crossroads
amid corn fields, waiting
for something ...
to hit me .
I have emptied my grief —
poured
out bucketfuls
of past hurts, regrets.
But,
the longing gnaws, maddeningly
taunting—
(my timetable, against God’s)
...
#loneliness
35 reads
3 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 6:51pm
23rd May 2020 6:51pm
Whore! My Brain Repeats
Whore! My brain says. I enjoy myself, life in these streets
Wise pennies, Sir is skilful and a master between the sheets.
all these poor young maidens, they are here for the sweets
centuries after centuries, it’s still what men love to eat!
Whore! My brain repeats.
a cast out with a steel blade like myself should not be tested
measured by an ordinary women whose interests are vested
Spasms of love spasms of hate, yet the feelings are the same
out of kindness, out of lust, men and us just ignore the shame
Whore! My brain repeats.
...
Wise pennies, Sir is skilful and a master between the sheets.
all these poor young maidens, they are here for the sweets
centuries after centuries, it’s still what men love to eat!
Whore! My brain repeats.
a cast out with a steel blade like myself should not be tested
measured by an ordinary women whose interests are vested
Spasms of love spasms of hate, yet the feelings are the same
out of kindness, out of lust, men and us just ignore the shame
Whore! My brain repeats.
...
#anxiety
#lust
#loneliness
#inspirational
#FeelingLost
41 reads
4 Comments
anonymouslyhere
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 11:47am
23rd May 2020 11:47am
Days in Waste
Sunrise, I have awaited an arrival
I have awaited a revival
Serenades sang sweetly by ghosts
Our tepid pasts aligned in harmony
Children know no such emptiness
Until they've been drained
Skinned alive, driven insane
I was a coward living brutishly
Until I stumbled downward
Into the great collapse, the chasm
You lie on your back on your bed
Bareskin on semen-stained sheets
Willing as am I to admit defeat
Exercising moments of euphoria
As am I, hands grasping your breasts
Without love, without a...
I have awaited a revival
Serenades sang sweetly by ghosts
Our tepid pasts aligned in harmony
Children know no such emptiness
Until they've been drained
Skinned alive, driven insane
I was a coward living brutishly
Until I stumbled downward
Into the great collapse, the chasm
You lie on your back on your bed
Bareskin on semen-stained sheets
Willing as am I to admit defeat
Exercising moments of euphoria
As am I, hands grasping your breasts
Without love, without a...
#depression
#loneliness
#death
#apathy
#hurt
43 reads
4 Comments
Cannaballester
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 5:54am
23rd May 2020 5:54am
Coming Home
The Snow Lies Deep Upon The Ground,,,
And The Winter Winds Blow Cold,,,
Your Footprints From Last Spring Are Gone,,,
Your Memory Slowly Grows Old And Fades Away,,,
Your Shape No Longer Imprints,,,
The Side Of The Bed Where You Once Laid,,,
How I Long For Those Yesterdays,,,
When You Were Home To Stay,,,
I Dream,,,I Cry,,,
I Pray To The Lord,,,
Up In The Sky,,,
I Talk To The Stars,,,
The Sun And The Moon,,,
As The Clouds Roll On By,,,
But None Can Give Me,,,
Any Reason Why,,,
I Am All Alone,,,
Won't You...
And The Winter Winds Blow Cold,,,
Your Footprints From Last Spring Are Gone,,,
Your Memory Slowly Grows Old And Fades Away,,,
Your Shape No Longer Imprints,,,
The Side Of The Bed Where You Once Laid,,,
How I Long For Those Yesterdays,,,
When You Were Home To Stay,,,
I Dream,,,I Cry,,,
I Pray To The Lord,,,
Up In The Sky,,,
I Talk To The Stars,,,
The Sun And The Moon,,,
As The Clouds Roll On By,,,
But None Can Give Me,,,
Any Reason Why,,,
I Am All Alone,,,
Won't You...
#sadness
#loneliness
#heartbroken #despair
#heartbroken #despair
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