Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
You’re Not Alone
For anyone
Who’s ever felt alone
You’re not alone
If I could sit beside you
Right now I would
If I could sing this to you
I would
It’s Going to Be Alright
https://suno.com/song/86b2461a-dee8-4f85-9425-c26c99936939
Who’s ever felt alone
You’re not alone
If I could sit beside you
Right now I would
If I could sing this to you
I would
It’s Going to Be Alright
https://suno.com/song/86b2461a-dee8-4f85-9425-c26c99936939
#despair
#hope
#inspirational #loneliness
#inspirational #loneliness
167 reads
27 Comments
My Eternal Flame
I’m reaching out for you
Feel my warmth come through
Screaming out your name
My love is driving me insane
Walking in the rain
Feel the touch of my face
You’re not here – to dry my tears away
How can I make you see
I am the other half
That reflects your eyes
Weren't you the love of my life?
My heart will never find peace
I always feel that something’s missing
Something’s missing....
My eternal flame
Feel my warmth come through
Screaming out your name
My love is driving me insane
Walking in the rain
Feel the touch of my face
You’re not here – to dry my tears away
How can I make you see
I am the other half
That reflects your eyes
Weren't you the love of my life?
My heart will never find peace
I always feel that something’s missing
Something’s missing....
My eternal flame
#breakup
#conflict
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#love
45 reads
10 Comments
First and Last Kiss (Ending)
We both went to the small kitchenette and found two Dixie cups. I followed him to his office and watched as he pulled a small bottle of Gin and tonic out of his small refrigerators under his desk.
After pouring us both a cup we did the customary tapping and took a drink. Closing my eyes and just enjoying the floral scent most gins have as it went down.
“It’s good right?” He asked as I opened my eyes to see him looking at his own cup in thought.
“Have a seat. We should not stand around after enjoying this gem.”
I smiled and went to the recliner in...
After pouring us both a cup we did the customary tapping and took a drink. Closing my eyes and just enjoying the floral scent most gins have as it went down.
“It’s good right?” He asked as I opened my eyes to see him looking at his own cup in thought.
“Have a seat. We should not stand around after enjoying this gem.”
I smiled and went to the recliner in...
#honesty
#loneliness
#sadness
109 reads
20 Comments
ENOUGH
From the deepness of my thoughts that of which I see. 🤨 WHAT happened to the deepness of love and honor and respect, for sure it seems that the world 🌎 has change the things that matters in our lives. For what happen to when we use to connect on so many levels, but yet now we have gotten so far apart as man to woman and woman to man. For sure it's getting harder to find something that is real evidence of love from the heart. 💗 For what's so wrong with wanting and having a relationship, build on honesty and truth and trust 🤔 with a strong commitment and...
#courage
#emotions
#emptiness
#loneliness
#strength
68 reads
2 Comments
I'LL BOTHER YOU NO MORE
YES
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
I am a slow
learner but
once I learn
it is never
forgotten or
worth spending
idle time trying
to go through
a dead-end..
I
tried being coy,
casual and up front.
sometimes feeling
a brief ray of hope;
BUT
I have learned another
lesson in the life
of a wannabe poet:
"Enough fooling yourself."
I
will never bother
YOU again.
P.S. No! I'm not leaving DUP. Thanks for your encouragement.
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
169 reads
10 Comments
Why?
When I see you cry,
I see an ocean
in your eyes,
drowning you from inside.
A tempest raging;
scarlet scarring your skies...
Heat of your pain
like a thick fog
damping your sight...
A silent scream
"O god why..."
I see an ocean
in your eyes,
drowning you from inside.
A tempest raging;
scarlet scarring your skies...
Heat of your pain
like a thick fog
damping your sight...
A silent scream
"O god why..."
#despair
#LifeStruggles
#loneliness #SelfReflection
#loneliness #SelfReflection
116 reads
15 Comments
Dim
The caw of a crow pierces through
the hovering clouds of time.
Within my melancholy soul,
it's a familiar loud lonely rhyme.
A mental walk through yesterday.
The sun of remembrance
dims her rays.
Past dead gardens,
where unborn gestures roam.
Haunted by abandoned
people that felt like home.
The days of boisterous blossom gone.
Just crumbling tombstones for all we longed.
the hovering clouds of time.
Within my melancholy soul,
it's a familiar loud lonely rhyme.
A mental walk through yesterday.
The sun of remembrance
dims her rays.
Past dead gardens,
where unborn gestures roam.
Haunted by abandoned
people that felt like home.
The days of boisterous blossom gone.
Just crumbling tombstones for all we longed.
#loneliness
#memories
166 reads
25 Comments
The Final Act
Before a storm
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness #sadness
#loneliness #sadness
151 reads
16 Comments
Two separate trains
From two separate motionless trains
their eyes met.
From two separate departing trains
their eyes embraced.
On two separate moving trains
they dreamed of a stranger
in their arms.
their eyes met.
From two separate departing trains
their eyes embraced.
On two separate moving trains
they dreamed of a stranger
in their arms.
#loneliness
120 reads
10 Comments
The Fear ( After Pablo Neruda )
We are not naturally afraid of darkness;
we gestate within it, our eyes unclear
thriving in gelatinous sockets of growth—
it is birth that dilates pupils to fear.
Abuse, its steel toe boot cracking the teeth
of our solar plexus in times of innocence;
adolescence demands our participation—
microscopically studies each breath.
Breaking the spine of nonconformity
fear wills one into a submissive participant;
dominant peers lord over the weak
and life is not lived, but tolerated.
...
we gestate within it, our eyes unclear
thriving in gelatinous sockets of growth—
it is birth that dilates pupils to fear.
Abuse, its steel toe boot cracking the teeth
of our solar plexus in times of innocence;
adolescence demands our participation—
microscopically studies each breath.
Breaking the spine of nonconformity
fear wills one into a submissive participant;
dominant peers lord over the weak
and life is not lived, but tolerated.
...
#anxiety
#loneliness
#childhood
#philosophical
#PabloNeruda
1100 reads
6 Comments
Wednesday
help me find my way
down the dark and twisted path
I have no faith in people
the ones I've trusted let me down
it hurts bitterly
the only one I blame is myself
making the wrong choices
letting them inside my sacred heart
they took me for granted
looked at vulnerability as a game to play
I will not choose someone new
I no longer trust myself
to choose loving people
your love is all-encompassing you allow me to make mistakes
my loneliness is complete there is no human that can compare
I've delved into...
down the dark and twisted path
I have no faith in people
the ones I've trusted let me down
it hurts bitterly
the only one I blame is myself
making the wrong choices
letting them inside my sacred heart
they took me for granted
looked at vulnerability as a game to play
I will not choose someone new
I no longer trust myself
to choose loving people
your love is all-encompassing you allow me to make mistakes
my loneliness is complete there is no human that can compare
I've delved into...
#loneliness
#UnrequitedLove
125 reads
7 Comments
They Come and Go
They come and go
Passers-by
They stop to refuel and then go on their way
Some stay a little longer to browse
Shop
Getting to know the locals
Then they disappear into the highway
Some stay awhile
Make friends
They begin to thrive in this strange town
Calling it a home
And then one day, just as they came in
They vanish into the night
They come and go
These travelers
Traversing the universe
Sharing stories and telling tales
And the shop keepers
With wanderlust
Wonder what’s beyond ...
Passers-by
They stop to refuel and then go on their way
Some stay a little longer to browse
Shop
Getting to know the locals
Then they disappear into the highway
Some stay awhile
Make friends
They begin to thrive in this strange town
Calling it a home
And then one day, just as they came in
They vanish into the night
They come and go
These travelers
Traversing the universe
Sharing stories and telling tales
And the shop keepers
With wanderlust
Wonder what’s beyond ...
#sadness
#depression
#loneliness #disappointment
#loneliness #disappointment
470 reads
DU Poetry : Poems About Loneliness by Top Critiquers