Poems About Lions Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about lions seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 2:00am
6th Oct 2024 2:00am
Getting Late Now
It’s getting late now
I have a few more jobs to do
In the corner sweep up yesterday
As the clock runs down I grab my lunch pail
In the distance there’s a damage coming
We hear that there is a hurricane brewing
Boss says it isn’t so just keep working until
ya all go back to work it’s what you’re paid for
Clouds drop down heaven opens
The clouds dropped down hell opened
Boss says move your car out of the water
Flash flood warning upon us
Boss ignored the water...
I have a few more jobs to do
In the corner sweep up yesterday
As the clock runs down I grab my lunch pail
In the distance there’s a damage coming
We hear that there is a hurricane brewing
Boss says it isn’t so just keep working until
ya all go back to work it’s what you’re paid for
Clouds drop down heaven opens
The clouds dropped down hell opened
Boss says move your car out of the water
Flash flood warning upon us
Boss ignored the water...
#dogs
#fish
#horses
#lion
#nature
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 10:48am
11th Jun 2024 10:48am
His name was Earl
Earl was a handsome, cultured young man who liked being outdoors
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Earl eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the suggestion from his agent, Earl fled to Africa, where he...
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Earl eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the suggestion from his agent, Earl fled to Africa, where he...
#animals
#lion
#nature
#ShortStory
#uplifting
82 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 9:28pm
9th Mar 2024 9:28pm
The Outdoorsman
Earl was a handsome, cultured young man who liked being outdoors
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Earl eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the...
His interests were rock climbing, hiking & acting
When he wasn't outdoors he kept a colossal, very detailed diary
Earl eventually went into the motion picture industry
With his sudden wealth, be bought a chic house on endless grounds
He began to raise lions, two to be exact
One Male & One Female
Soon he was being mobbed by people in the street for his autograph
One day at the studio he became tense & edgy
With the...
#lion
#nature
#uplifting #PopCulture
#uplifting #PopCulture
90 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Aug 2022 3:29pm
21st Aug 2022 3:29pm
Woke Up So Hungover
I just woke up so hungover
and looked at this one pool of
water to see this
lion and I hit the roof!
and looked at this one pool of
water to see this
lion and I hit the roof!
#lion
#alcohol
#fiction
#dialogue
#curse
339 reads
0 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
23rd May 2022 10:41am
23rd May 2022 10:41am
JUNE 22 IS A POWERFUL POSSIBILITY
Will Russia bomb US on June 22 ?? That is the anniversary of Hitler's invasion of Russia in 1941.
I am GUESSING that 6/22 will be the evil day.
No I am not "setting dates" - I am speculating, meaning I am not 100% convinced as to the date.
I expect Russia to bomb the US, and then wait 4 days before invading Europe.
You see, it takes 4 days for the smoke/soot to be carried across the ocean from USA to Europe.
Russia wants to wait so that the Europeans will be convinced by the darkness in the sky that Russia's claim (to have hit the US) is true.
The soot...
I am GUESSING that 6/22 will be the evil day.
No I am not "setting dates" - I am speculating, meaning I am not 100% convinced as to the date.
I expect Russia to bomb the US, and then wait 4 days before invading Europe.
You see, it takes 4 days for the smoke/soot to be carried across the ocean from USA to Europe.
Russia wants to wait so that the Europeans will be convinced by the darkness in the sky that Russia's claim (to have hit the US) is true.
The soot...
#dogs
#lion
#nature
261 reads
0 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
12th Mar 2021 5:10am
12th Mar 2021 5:10am
NATO Is The RESTRAINER In 2nd Thessalonians 2.7
Here's the evidence:
NATO has restrained RUSSIA for 70 years !!
If we combine Revelation 13.7 with the first passage(2nd Thess.2.7),
because they are parallel passages (passages about the same thing),
this puts us in the vicinity of WESTERN EUROPE - which is what we want !!
For NATO is a trans-European alliance !!
What is it about Rev.13.7 that i s Europe-centered??
Well, it says, "The BEAST [will make] war against the saints (the Christian countries)..."
This term (the Beast) originates back in Daniel 7.7 onward.
It refers to the "4th...
NATO has restrained RUSSIA for 70 years !!
If we combine Revelation 13.7 with the first passage(2nd Thess.2.7),
because they are parallel passages (passages about the same thing),
this puts us in the vicinity of WESTERN EUROPE - which is what we want !!
For NATO is a trans-European alliance !!
What is it about Rev.13.7 that i s Europe-centered??
Well, it says, "The BEAST [will make] war against the saints (the Christian countries)..."
This term (the Beast) originates back in Daniel 7.7 onward.
It refers to the "4th...
#animals
#lion
#nature
319 reads
4 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
8th Sep 2020 2:28am
8th Sep 2020 2:28am
The River Gorge
With the roar of a mighty lion
Ripping through her ebon bone,
You can hear the river cryin’
From great gorges etched in stone.
The scars upon her surface,
Carved by waters running red;
Through her scarlet epidermis,
By the mighty riverbed.
As harsh weather and erosion
Transform the rock back into sand;
With the sound of an explosion
By which many fishes swam.
Churning into motion, dust
From the rusty-colored land;
Returning to the ocean cusp,
From which it once began.
Ripping through her ebon bone,
You can hear the river cryin’
From great gorges etched in stone.
The scars upon her surface,
Carved by waters running red;
Through her scarlet epidermis,
By the mighty riverbed.
As harsh weather and erosion
Transform the rock back into sand;
With the sound of an explosion
By which many fishes swam.
Churning into motion, dust
From the rusty-colored land;
Returning to the ocean cusp,
From which it once began.
#river
#water
#lion
#nature
#fish
674 reads
25 Comments
Laluma
Poem Published
23rd May 2020 8:52pm
23rd May 2020 8:52pm
Nature's Call
A lion would never ask for help even when in need of it
A very different perspective that speaks to so much whether seen or unseen
The nature of the beast is also its folly
The voice that pierces through these words placing them close to our reach
As people even with the spirit of lions the nature of community can not be escaped
The deeply observant eye that allows this place to be reached so clearly in the mind
Together we rise and fall
Whatever happens happens regardless of how someone may feel
A very different perspective that speaks to so much whether seen or unseen
The nature of the beast is also its folly
The voice that pierces through these words placing them close to our reach
As people even with the spirit of lions the nature of community can not be escaped
The deeply observant eye that allows this place to be reached so clearly in the mind
Together we rise and fall
Whatever happens happens regardless of how someone may feel
#lion
#nature
#fate
#humankind
#luck
548 reads
5 Comments
Angeliki
Poem Published
25th Apr 2020 9:18am
25th Apr 2020 9:18am
To the beat of the drum
Walk and talk
Against the wall
That we piss on
For naked truth
Red raw request
Never say die
The real conquest
Grunge ways to
The after math.
A million poppies
They are due
For the spirit
Of angels is calling
The calling
Walk to the beat
And your falling
Falling into his heart
I say lord now have me
Drink the blood of Jesus
Sing sing sing
Shot for mercy
Love rests
Holy treaty
The land of Oz
Been thinking lately
A hill of water
lions affair
Come say the angels ...
Against the wall
That we piss on
For naked truth
Red raw request
Never say die
The real conquest
Grunge ways to
The after math.
A million poppies
They are due
For the spirit
Of angels is calling
The calling
Walk to the beat
And your falling
Falling into his heart
I say lord now have me
Drink the blood of Jesus
Sing sing sing
Shot for mercy
Love rests
Holy treaty
The land of Oz
Been thinking lately
A hill of water
lions affair
Come say the angels ...
#water
#lion
#addiction
528 reads
0 Comments
dmcdonald
Poem Published
18th Apr 2020 4:56am
18th Apr 2020 4:56am
Dandelions
Strewn along the path
Lion's teeth lie unheeded
A wild man's fair boon
Lion's teeth lie unheeded
A wild man's fair boon
#flowers
#lion
#nature #haiku
#nature #haiku
410 reads
3 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
4th Apr 2020 12:39pm
4th Apr 2020 12:39pm
Pride
A hunter prides his trophy kill,
While mother nature mourns a loss.
He selfishly fulfills his thrill,
At another creature’s cost.
How very tough, you are,
Killing in the name of fun!
A lion never stood a chance
Against a semi-automatic gun.
And then you have the gall
To mount its head upon your wall,
To glorify your ignorance—
I'm horrified and appalled.
You’ll make your lion rugs,
While you rape the lion cubs
Of a home they’ll never have,
And a mother’s lion love.
Celebrating...
While mother nature mourns a loss.
He selfishly fulfills his thrill,
At another creature’s cost.
How very tough, you are,
Killing in the name of fun!
A lion never stood a chance
Against a semi-automatic gun.
And then you have the gall
To mount its head upon your wall,
To glorify your ignorance—
I'm horrified and appalled.
You’ll make your lion rugs,
While you rape the lion cubs
Of a home they’ll never have,
And a mother’s lion love.
Celebrating...
#animals
#lion
#vanity
#consumerism
#greed
744 reads
8 Comments
Adzy
Poem Published
26th Aug 2019 8:59pm
26th Aug 2019 8:59pm
The Last Lion
The lion roams the plains
On the prowl, he shows no fear
He is the hunter
Or so it would appear
He's spotted his prey
And moves in to attack
He fails to hear the sound
Of a rifle cocking back
The lion strikes
And makes his kill fast
He thinks the jobs done
But the feeling won't last
He starts eating his catch
But the lion's soon stopped
A quick pull of the trigger
And the lions now dropped
A couple emerge from the bushes
They'd been hiding in cover
They kiss in celebration ...
On the prowl, he shows no fear
He is the hunter
Or so it would appear
He's spotted his prey
And moves in to attack
He fails to hear the sound
Of a rifle cocking back
The lion strikes
And makes his kill fast
He thinks the jobs done
But the feeling won't last
He starts eating his catch
But the lion's soon stopped
A quick pull of the trigger
And the lions now dropped
A couple emerge from the bushes
They'd been hiding in cover
They kiss in celebration ...
#corruption
#violence
#animals
#lion
#nature
623 reads
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