Heartbroken by Top Critiquers Poems
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heartbroken by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
My Saudade
the pendulum swings
the metronome moves
my heart bleeds for you
my anarchist artist
missing us, and
all what once was
passion destruction
maybe just an illusion
yearning for intimacy
i suppress my urge
preventing myself
from calling you
...
the metronome moves
my heart bleeds for you
my anarchist artist
missing us, and
all what once was
passion destruction
maybe just an illusion
yearning for intimacy
i suppress my urge
preventing myself
from calling you
...
#heartbroken
#love
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cradling the aftermath
two came feverishly together
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
#sister
#heartbroken
#breakup
#TimeHeals
#UnrequitedLove
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2 Comments
Sadness
Sadness is worst of visits.
She drinks all our tea.
Devours all the cupcakes
and never goes away.
She drinks all our tea.
Devours all the cupcakes
and never goes away.
#apathy
#depression
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#sadness
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12 Comments
Beginning To End
I can't stop this fall
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
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10 Comments
Sixes and Sevens
This was the year they should have been walking across stage
Caps and gowns with smiles and cheers all around
This was supposed to be the year they were going to graduate
Instead
We still reel over what happened on that dreadful day
This was the summer they were supposed to spread their wings
Off to adventures, like falling in love or going away on vacation
Some would have been heading to college for higher education
Instead
We’re left wondering with what could have been
No parent should ever have to bury a child ...
Caps and gowns with smiles and cheers all around
This was supposed to be the year they were going to graduate
Instead
We still reel over what happened on that dreadful day
This was the summer they were supposed to spread their wings
Off to adventures, like falling in love or going away on vacation
Some would have been heading to college for higher education
Instead
We’re left wondering with what could have been
No parent should ever have to bury a child ...
#grief
#heartbroken
#memorial
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9 Comments
Cotton candy panties girl...
Sunlight shimmers through her hair!
She hasn't got a single fuck...ing care.
I follow her...every...where...
cause I'm her Stalker!
Can I lure her in my van?
I'll bet you puppies that I can!
I've always been her number...one...fan...
cause I'm her Stalker!
Cotton candy panties girl...
you ain't fooling anyone...
you're...a...nasty little...hater!
I will make you understand...
We all have feelings too...except you...
EXCEPT YOU! EXCEPT YOU!
I was normal once. I did try...
got my feelings...
She hasn't got a single fuck...ing care.
I follow her...every...where...
cause I'm her Stalker!
Can I lure her in my van?
I'll bet you puppies that I can!
I've always been her number...one...fan...
cause I'm her Stalker!
Cotton candy panties girl...
you ain't fooling anyone...
you're...a...nasty little...hater!
I will make you understand...
We all have feelings too...except you...
EXCEPT YOU! EXCEPT YOU!
I was normal once. I did try...
got my feelings...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
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4 Comments
Deserts
Those silent sigils laid on the page
Barren, white, the starkest of places
Emblems of meaning the whole not conveying
I linger, hesitant, grief at the thought of touch
The thought of you, a rending, jagged torn
What is the word for a feeling as this
There are no feelings, no words, no more
Solitude...the wilderness howls, 'alone'
Nothing echoes here save memories
In the trackless waste as the mind circles back
Beneath sun and moon
Between heaven and hell
That thin whispered name, out of place
Lost. Aimless. Adrift on a sea of...
Barren, white, the starkest of places
Emblems of meaning the whole not conveying
I linger, hesitant, grief at the thought of touch
The thought of you, a rending, jagged torn
What is the word for a feeling as this
There are no feelings, no words, no more
Solitude...the wilderness howls, 'alone'
Nothing echoes here save memories
In the trackless waste as the mind circles back
Beneath sun and moon
Between heaven and hell
That thin whispered name, out of place
Lost. Aimless. Adrift on a sea of...
#love
#heartbroken
#TruthOfLife
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2 Comments
Just The Tip
(Ten thousand times)
_______________________
"We should talk about this"
"We've talked enough. It's time to heal"
"How?"
"I have an idea"
...
"Paring knives? You're stabbing me?"
"Not exactly. You get one"
"A knife fight?"
"No. We're going to stick each other with just the tips. See who
flinches the worst. Sit down...
_______________________
"We should talk about this"
"We've talked enough. It's time to heal"
"How?"
"I have an idea"
...
"Paring knives? You're stabbing me?"
"Not exactly. You get one"
"A knife fight?"
"No. We're going to stick each other with just the tips. See who
flinches the worst. Sit down...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#escape
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20 Comments
Where are you?
This kills me again
And you are as beautiful as the first dew
and it still remains on my heart
And on my heart it stays…
heavy as the whole world
I know it will stop soon
I know that it will stop quickly
and you will disappear somewhere
You know I'm sick
We used to laugh like children
And you are the most beautiful to me
like that first kiss
which cinched my fate
All my signals are wrong,
they lead me to ruin
They are leading me to disaster
And around me the remnants of our love
My...
And you are as beautiful as the first dew
and it still remains on my heart
And on my heart it stays…
heavy as the whole world
I know it will stop soon
I know that it will stop quickly
and you will disappear somewhere
You know I'm sick
We used to laugh like children
And you are the most beautiful to me
like that first kiss
which cinched my fate
All my signals are wrong,
they lead me to ruin
They are leading me to disaster
And around me the remnants of our love
My...
#love
#heartbroken
#breakup
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17 Comments
Dead Blooms
Departed are the hours I can wile away the pale moon
Now but wrinkle chin the coming eves of doom
And tea leaves have all but been strained
The wafting of my predicament In shadows
My wasted old bones laying midnight winds
My musing crone gives me the blessing and kisses of dead blooms
The frozen pond is thin the chill has left my quill
Leading me to my forgotten prose on the other side window sill
Silently my sighs and closing eyes cry at unfinished words
Departed are the hours I can wile away the pale moon
Now but wrinkle chin the coming eves of doom
And tea leaves have all but been strained
The wafting of my predicament In shadows
My wasted old bones laying midnight winds
My musing crone gives me the blessing and kisses of dead blooms
The frozen pond is thin the chill has left my quill
Leading me to my forgotten prose on the other side window sill
Silently my sighs and closing eyes cry at unfinished words
Departed are the hours I can wile away the pale moon
#dark
#emptiness
#heartbroken #sadness
#heartbroken #sadness
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6 Comments
painting the moment
the doors slams
.you are gone
.
the air falls to
the floor defeated
and the roses on
the table can no
longer laugh
.you are gone
.
the air falls to
the floor defeated
and the roses on
the table can no
longer laugh
#heartbroken
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3 Comments
overheard on the street
please don’t leave me ..”
#heartbroken
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1 Comment
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