Heartbroken by Top Critiquers Poems
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heartbroken by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Love
I wish I would have known
That it was just
Another
Four letter word to you
That it was just
Another
Four letter word to you
#heartbroken
#disappointment
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You're on my mind
You know I can't stop thinking about you
For the last two nights I've been dreaming about you
It's always the same dream, you don't want me
This morning I woke up and I swore it was real
I lay there for a while and thought about all the things that I had to do in the dream
How fucked up it was and it took me that long to figure out it was a dream
I thought I had it beat
I thought I had you out of my head for good
I must have slid back because now you're all I think about
I was so proud of myself
I was actually healing
But now I'm back in...
For the last two nights I've been dreaming about you
It's always the same dream, you don't want me
This morning I woke up and I swore it was real
I lay there for a while and thought about all the things that I had to do in the dream
How fucked up it was and it took me that long to figure out it was a dream
I thought I had it beat
I thought I had you out of my head for good
I must have slid back because now you're all I think about
I was so proud of myself
I was actually healing
But now I'm back in...
#breakup
#dreams
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#rejection
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9 Comments
No H8
Why can't i hate you
Hating myself is so easy
How can i blame you
If I could I would leave me
After eighteen years
You went and stepped out
But I was never there
I spent all my time with doubt
The light in your eyes
I remember to this day
My darkness consumed you
And made it go away
It was fight or flight time
You had to make a choice
Lose yourself entirely
Or listen to that little voice
That was begging you to run
Before you became like me
A prisoner of love
Shackled to...
Hating myself is so easy
How can i blame you
If I could I would leave me
After eighteen years
You went and stepped out
But I was never there
I spent all my time with doubt
The light in your eyes
I remember to this day
My darkness consumed you
And made it go away
It was fight or flight time
You had to make a choice
Lose yourself entirely
Or listen to that little voice
That was begging you to run
Before you became like me
A prisoner of love
Shackled to...
#breakup
#forgiveness
#heartbroken #regret
#heartbroken #regret
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11 Comments
Bear, Me and the family
in my lonely pain I see that ugly face you showed me long ago
the jaded one with no sympathy for anyone but himself
because I not knowing which way was north
spurned your affections still believing the system
I said we could not be because of your past
so you cast off our friendship
and we went our separate ways
that;s when I saw your hate face
arms crossed stone cold
I had to wonder where my friend had gone
it would come to be known as your in my way face
loyalty to you is destroying everyone from within
treating their...
the jaded one with no sympathy for anyone but himself
because I not knowing which way was north
spurned your affections still believing the system
I said we could not be because of your past
so you cast off our friendship
and we went our separate ways
that;s when I saw your hate face
arms crossed stone cold
I had to wonder where my friend had gone
it would come to be known as your in my way face
loyalty to you is destroying everyone from within
treating their...
#heartbroken
#love
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0 Comments
From what I recall
You were once
as pleasing
as a summer wind
brushing my cheek
under plum trees
I'd have stood
the world
on its head
to prolong your kisses
those miracles
ignorant of time
and vaporous years
but like all mirages
you faded
making me
in the end ...
as pleasing
as a summer wind
brushing my cheek
under plum trees
I'd have stood
the world
on its head
to prolong your kisses
those miracles
ignorant of time
and vaporous years
but like all mirages
you faded
making me
in the end ...
#heartbroken
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12 Comments
Carnal Crimes
Too many times
You have hijacked
My heart
Kicked it around
Torn it apart
Commiting Grand Larceny
With each new start
You trampled on
this nearly shattered heart
I don't need your attitude
It leaves me cold
Just like your
so called platitudes
There's no evidence
Left behind
Of all of your
carnal crimes
My neediness trips
Me up each time
Leads me off course
Fills me with such
Dreadful remorse
Now, I can...
You have hijacked
My heart
Kicked it around
Torn it apart
Commiting Grand Larceny
With each new start
You trampled on
this nearly shattered heart
I don't need your attitude
It leaves me cold
Just like your
so called platitudes
There's no evidence
Left behind
Of all of your
carnal crimes
My neediness trips
Me up each time
Leads me off course
Fills me with such
Dreadful remorse
Now, I can...
#heartbroken
#love
#lust
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13 Comments
Bones
Stories nestled in my bones
are not silent storms.
My heart is haunted
by their primordial groans.
Yet so many scattered thoughts
go unknown.
Like the frantic way
autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day.
Skeletal stories now, the flesh of us
is gone.
Even though we loved from the core
of our jagged bones.
Human life seems just an agonized attempt
to be heard.
are not silent storms.
My heart is haunted
by their primordial groans.
Yet so many scattered thoughts
go unknown.
Like the frantic way
autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day.
Skeletal stories now, the flesh of us
is gone.
Even though we loved from the core
of our jagged bones.
Human life seems just an agonized attempt
to be heard.
#heartbroken
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
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18 Comments
Snow Leopard
Rest now
lover
climax weary
singed from my searing summer rays
you wounded dove
you famished field mouse
Sleep
Gather your strength
Rise radiant
to winter chill
Glow against the gaunt
tundra horizon
Your Snow Leopard stealth
shall shine
shall gaze
shall prance
gleefully renewed
refreshed and radiant
vibrant and hungry
as a frozen wilderness
Leap, then
bound and determined
your fangs exposed
your claws extended
Rip away the essence
of my...
lover
climax weary
singed from my searing summer rays
you wounded dove
you famished field mouse
Sleep
Gather your strength
Rise radiant
to winter chill
Glow against the gaunt
tundra horizon
Your Snow Leopard stealth
shall shine
shall gaze
shall prance
gleefully renewed
refreshed and radiant
vibrant and hungry
as a frozen wilderness
Leap, then
bound and determined
your fangs exposed
your claws extended
Rip away the essence
of my...
#heartbroken
#lover
#rejection
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove
107 reads
8 Comments
Fatigues. And your blue raincoat
#betrayal
#heartbroken
#love #friendship
#love #friendship
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7 Comments
"JUST FRIENDS"
You’re over me, yet again
I can feel it, this shift
Its causing you to drift
Causing misunderstanding
Where we're just friends.
Back to her because
I had the damn audacity
To say things on my mind?
Said you wanted honesty.
Guess just not my kind.
Thought I would not fight
Wrong! With all my might!
You choose someone else
And tuck me away on a shelf
To collect dust til I'm useable
You're a fucking hypocite
Yet I am still missing you
Every damn part and inch
All the things we'd do ...
I can feel it, this shift
Its causing you to drift
Causing misunderstanding
Where we're just friends.
Back to her because
I had the damn audacity
To say things on my mind?
Said you wanted honesty.
Guess just not my kind.
Thought I would not fight
Wrong! With all my might!
You choose someone else
And tuck me away on a shelf
To collect dust til I'm useable
You're a fucking hypocite
Yet I am still missing you
Every damn part and inch
All the things we'd do ...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#hope
#motivational
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4 Comments
cradling the aftermath
two came feverishly together
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
words of hope glistening on starving lips
tangled up in blinding passion
souls intertwined
bodies alive with fire
they fervently merged
into one
as it sometimes does
time cooled their frenzied bliss
and the one least invested became restless
slipping silently from their embrace
while she in trust slumbered on
still bewitched & oblivious
loneliness crept in
and took his vacant place
broken is the newborn
left wailing in its cradle
the rhythm of its lifeblood ...
#sister
#heartbroken
#breakup
#TimeHeals
#UnrequitedLove
135 reads
2 Comments
Beautiful Echoes Of Yesterday
#relationships
#heartbroken
#lover
#sensual
#passion
522 reads
13 Comments
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