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Love
I wish I would have known
That it was just
Another
Four letter word to you
That it was just
Another
Four letter word to you
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Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
Still working it out.
Still working it out.
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Re. Love
14th Mar 2024 7:12pm
Re. Love
14th Mar 2024 10:46pm
Re. Love
15th Mar 2024 3:50am
Dear H,
Ooooo brilliant. I really like the direct style of this take no prisoners write. Fab insight. Great piece. H🌷
Ooooo brilliant. I really like the direct style of this take no prisoners write. Fab insight. Great piece. H🌷
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Re. Love
15th Mar 2024 6:11am
Re: Re. Love
16th Mar 2024 2:49pm
I’m happy to say that as of today I’m over the heartache. It’s time to concentrate on the positive experience of him.
Re. Love
16th Mar 2024 3:18pm
Wouldn't it be nice if they came with warning labels? Might be worth the side effects in the end...if we knew on the outset where it would eventually lead. Keep working it out
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Re: Re. Love
16th Mar 2024 3:21pm
I actually told him that his warning label
Should have been wrapped in caution tape…
Came through on the other side this morning.
Thank you:)
Should have been wrapped in caution tape…
Came through on the other side this morning.
Thank you:)
Re: Re. Love
17th Mar 2024 3:12am
Warning labels--luvvit. Flashing red lights, sirens, speed bumps, air bags should be standard mandatory equipment for some of us.
Including me.
I love the Beatles line: "Take a sad song and make it better."
You got the sad song. Now...what you do with it is up to you.
Including me.
I love the Beatles line: "Take a sad song and make it better."
You got the sad song. Now...what you do with it is up to you.
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Re: Re. Love
17th Mar 2024 3:15am