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Bones
Stories nestled in my bones
are not silent storms.
My heart is haunted
by their primordial groans.
Yet so many scattered thoughts
go unknown.
Like the frantic way
autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day.
Skeletal stories now, the flesh of us
is gone.
Even though we loved from the core
of our jagged bones.
Human life seems just an agonized attempt
to be heard.
are not silent storms.
My heart is haunted
by their primordial groans.
Yet so many scattered thoughts
go unknown.
Like the frantic way
autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day.
Skeletal stories now, the flesh of us
is gone.
Even though we loved from the core
of our jagged bones.
Human life seems just an agonized attempt
to be heard.
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Re. Bones
8th May 2024 9:18pm
Really loved this one... image reminds me of the end of Hugo's Hunchback... not the Disney version...
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8th May 2024 9:22pm
Hey girl. Thank you! I could not resist the image.
I love all things skeletal, lol
I love all things skeletal, lol
Re. Bones
8th May 2024 9:21pm
I like this. Feel the sorrow oozing through the skeletons rib cage on this one. Nicely done. Great image too!
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Re: Re. Bones
8th May 2024 9:27pm
Thanks so much, I like your comments!
I'm glad you liked, the inkwell is near dry over here.
Inspiration feels skeletal. 🦴
I'm glad you liked, the inkwell is near dry over here.
Inspiration feels skeletal. 🦴
Re. Bones
9th May 2024 00:58am
Re. Bones
9th May 2024 2:12am
This is pretty awesome! It's quite clever and shares a really interesting theme with the readers. Well done!
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9th May 2024 2:44am
Re. Bones
9th May 2024 4:44am
Dear D,
This is poetry. For me, this write succinctly captures human emotion and life’s foibles, poetically. Your formatting and line breaks allowed such a great flow. Awesome write. H🌷
This is poetry. For me, this write succinctly captures human emotion and life’s foibles, poetically. Your formatting and line breaks allowed such a great flow. Awesome write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Bones
9th May 2024 8:09am
Re. Bones
9th May 2024 8:43pm
Oooh, those first 2 lines girl.. I'm like... what did I just read.. awesome shit is what. Upon reading the rest of it, you delivered. Great picture
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Bones
9th May 2024 8:54pm
Wow, thank you. I love hearing such positive feedback, it inspires me.
Thank you for always stopping bye, it means a lot.
Thank you for always stopping bye, it means a lot.
Re. Bones
13th May 2024 12:00pm
"What decays becomes wisdom
for another day."
Love the message here
And the metaphor throughout with the bones is very cool.
Haunting but beautiful!
♡
for another day."
Love the message here
And the metaphor throughout with the bones is very cool.
Haunting but beautiful!
♡
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13th May 2024 12:11pm
Re. Bones
14th May 2024 8:08am
Greetings Debbie, dig this one, gave a like... This is mine favorite part
"autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day." man, nice words right there, very right on my friend... take good care: deadwolf
"autumn leaves are blown.
What decays becomes wisdom
for another day." man, nice words right there, very right on my friend... take good care: deadwolf
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14th May 2024 8:40am
Re. Bones
17th May 2024 12:25pm
So happy to have stumbled upon your page, the imagery in this write is awesome.
The use of the word "bones" fits this write - and gave me smiles: I have uses the word bones too.
The use of the word "bones" fits this write - and gave me smiles: I have uses the word bones too.
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Re: Re. Bones
17th May 2024 2:46pm
I'm so happy you stopped bye too. Yup, bones is one of my words, lol.
It's a cool word to use. Thank you for nice comment.
Have a great day!
It's a cool word to use. Thank you for nice comment.
Have a great day!
Re. Bones
5th Jul 2024 5:20am
Some very powerful conviction here, in the hope of loving and everlasting meaning between people in relationships. It's as if you've found your sweet spot in the forgotten decay and depths of what that means, in an attempt to recognize an ideality of vision and purpose. Good work as always!
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5th Jul 2024 3:02pm