Poems About Family Seeking Honest Critique
#family
Poems about family seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Horny Clown, that lives two doors down
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#dirty
#family
#orgasm
#sex
#ShortStory
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Which Of Us Do You Want To Get It On With?
Uncle John
invited us to his
masquerade party where I spotted
two naked chicks wearing only jackets and stuff
from Battlestar Galactica and
they both looked at this guy
with a smile.
invited us to his
masquerade party where I spotted
two naked chicks wearing only jackets and stuff
from Battlestar Galactica and
they both looked at this guy
with a smile.
#beauty
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#sex
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After That Strong Argument We Had
Hi, Honey. It's me. Dad.
I know that we haven't
spoken one nice word
to each other after that
strong argument we had.
I just want you to know
that even though you
started posing naked
for Hustler, you'll always
be my baby no matter
where you go and what
you do because you're
allowed to live your life.
I know that we haven't
spoken one nice word
to each other after that
strong argument we had.
I just want you to know
that even though you
started posing naked
for Hustler, you'll always
be my baby no matter
where you go and what
you do because you're
allowed to live your life.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
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Home no More
Home no More
The sticker slapped upon my door
Informs me that we have a home no more
Gather up the wife and children with not much more than the clothes that hang off of us
At least it’s summertime I guess we won’t freeze sleeping under the night sky
But the season will change and we don’t have enough blankets to keep us warm
So we go to the shelter that is overflowing
With despair and broken human beings
In the darkness the vultures prey upon the few objects that we still own so we are back out on the cold...
The sticker slapped upon my door
Informs me that we have a home no more
Gather up the wife and children with not much more than the clothes that hang off of us
At least it’s summertime I guess we won’t freeze sleeping under the night sky
But the season will change and we don’t have enough blankets to keep us warm
So we go to the shelter that is overflowing
With despair and broken human beings
In the darkness the vultures prey upon the few objects that we still own so we are back out on the cold...
#children
#despair
#family
#homelessness
#inequality
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Give me a second
I’m so happy away from you
Guess you’re the one making me at fault
Of your own patterns, of your own problems
But I can’t run away from being lashed out
I feel like motherfucker 24/7
Home doesn’t feel warm , it’s no longer my shelter
Stress - stress -stress I’m over depressed
Another day , slips away from my hands
Think of possibilities if I haven’t been here
Would my life be destined to go through s thing
I said I’m too broken you said we all are
You don’t deserve the pain , but neither do I
I gave you so...
Guess you’re the one making me at fault
Of your own patterns, of your own problems
But I can’t run away from being lashed out
I feel like motherfucker 24/7
Home doesn’t feel warm , it’s no longer my shelter
Stress - stress -stress I’m over depressed
Another day , slips away from my hands
Think of possibilities if I haven’t been here
Would my life be destined to go through s thing
I said I’m too broken you said we all are
You don’t deserve the pain , but neither do I
I gave you so...
#anxiety
#family
#relationships
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It's the 28th of December 2024
I came here eleven years ago
and met somebody extraordinary,
tonight I return to this bridge leaving
this note saying family can be
chosen in this life too.
We are smiling because you will
meet somebody extraordinary too,
you can't see us but we
are sitting beside you.
and met somebody extraordinary,
tonight I return to this bridge leaving
this note saying family can be
chosen in this life too.
We are smiling because you will
meet somebody extraordinary too,
you can't see us but we
are sitting beside you.
#family
#friendship
#LifeCycle
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Statue in Time
More you sit
More you die
Sit like a statue in time
Hardens around you
Through your mind
Limbs so supple
Die grapes on vine
Keep mobile
Even just in your head
Jack be nimble
Head can’t think
Don’t want to be
Remembered
But I’ll deliver
Concrete can’t hold me
I’m pouring through
Set my place
In time
Set my soul
Back to family
More you die
Sit like a statue in time
Hardens around you
Through your mind
Limbs so supple
Die grapes on vine
Keep mobile
Even just in your head
Jack be nimble
Head can’t think
Don’t want to be
Remembered
But I’ll deliver
Concrete can’t hold me
I’m pouring through
Set my place
In time
Set my soul
Back to family
#aging
#emotions
#family
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The Guiding Light
He went for his daily walk like he did every morning around 9:00 am
Today was Xmas
The weather was overcast with some light flurries
His wife was home and they will be spending Xmas with her parents today
His mother died 10 years ago
He hasn't spoken to his father since the time of her passing
They haven't seen eye to eye for many years prior, but once she died, they stopped talking
His mother was a caring, full of life individual that was taken to early
He wasn't the religious type
He would never go and visit her in the cemetery, which was only...
Today was Xmas
The weather was overcast with some light flurries
His wife was home and they will be spending Xmas with her parents today
His mother died 10 years ago
He hasn't spoken to his father since the time of her passing
They haven't seen eye to eye for many years prior, but once she died, they stopped talking
His mother was a caring, full of life individual that was taken to early
He wasn't the religious type
He would never go and visit her in the cemetery, which was only...
#Christmas
#family
#LifeChangingMoment
#love
#spiritual
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Tale of the hare (For Northern_Soul)
I often think of you
the hare burrowed
comfortably inside
my left ribcage,
rising up, stoking
fires in ivory glades,
carving ripples
in blood instead
of water and
fresh lakes,
a beacon as
to why some
still carry
on here.
the hare burrowed
comfortably inside
my left ribcage,
rising up, stoking
fires in ivory glades,
carving ripples
in blood instead
of water and
fresh lakes,
a beacon as
to why some
still carry
on here.
#admiration
#family
#LifeAsAWriter #respect
#LifeAsAWriter #respect
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He wants your attention
Little boy left for hardly 10 minutes
The sitter had gone to the store for some cigarettes and soda
When she returned she saw the fire engines in front of the house
She saw the smoke & flames
She found out that the little boy she was babysitting had lit his little brother's crib on fire
The baby was burned to death
He used the matches she had left on the table
He had heard that the only child gets more attention from the parents
With more love & extra dessert
He was only looking out for number one
The sitter had gone to the store for some cigarettes and soda
When she returned she saw the fire engines in front of the house
She saw the smoke & flames
She found out that the little boy she was babysitting had lit his little brother's crib on fire
The baby was burned to death
He used the matches she had left on the table
He had heard that the only child gets more attention from the parents
With more love & extra dessert
He was only looking out for number one
#children
#family
#fire
#ignorance
#ShortStory
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Could You Please Knock Before Coming In Here?
"Could you please knock before coming in here?" was
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
#betrayal
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
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So I Move On
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#abuse
#family
#memories #mother
#memories #mother
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DU Poetry : Poems About Family Seeking Honest Critique