Poems About Family by Top Critiquers
#family
Poems about family by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Two doors down, there lived a clown
#dirty
#family
#orgasm
#porn
#sex
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I Have A Voice
I have a voice
it will not be stilled
hear me
hear my words
of deep concern
for you
for them
for family
for our nation
we are all
but brothers and sisters
not here to hurt
each other
but to help one another
I have a voice
you have one too
use it for uniting
not dividing each other
and don't forget that
we all matter
it will not be stilled
hear me
hear my words
of deep concern
for you
for them
for family
for our nation
we are all
but brothers and sisters
not here to hurt
each other
but to help one another
I have a voice
you have one too
use it for uniting
not dividing each other
and don't forget that
we all matter
#brother
#sister
#family
#America
#peace
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I see you all clear now see me
with recognition I remember you brothers
of Heaven before we lay eyes on Her
there is a dark woman who claims he encountered her not created her
she was seduced and drew Her portrait
then chained her
after learning her magics
he did dominate her using Adam to humiliate Her
He wanted a show in other words
her children with him rejected
because they were born of his darkness and rape
in terror she released them to Lu to care for
he would not give her peace they found heaven in hell
and Lu taught them self love
his...
of Heaven before we lay eyes on Her
there is a dark woman who claims he encountered her not created her
she was seduced and drew Her portrait
then chained her
after learning her magics
he did dominate her using Adam to humiliate Her
He wanted a show in other words
her children with him rejected
because they were born of his darkness and rape
in terror she released them to Lu to care for
he would not give her peace they found heaven in hell
and Lu taught them self love
his...
#children
#dark
#family #storm
#family #storm
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The Editor
the editor puts
their life under scrutiny
windows of opportunity
close in time
inaction may feel
like an option, for a while
but you simply can’t
turn back the clock
once you realize
what you’ve done
you have a moral
responsibility
so if your ignorance
is an illusion
then you can understand
my confusion
did you have my
best interest in mind?
do you realize where
you crossed the line?
invasive...
their life under scrutiny
windows of opportunity
close in time
inaction may feel
like an option, for a while
but you simply can’t
turn back the clock
once you realize
what you’ve done
you have a moral
responsibility
so if your ignorance
is an illusion
then you can understand
my confusion
did you have my
best interest in mind?
do you realize where
you crossed the line?
invasive...
#secrets
#family
#morality
#responsibility
#deception
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I Hold You to a Lower Standard
I'm weird
Look at this picture
Elton John bad hair day
Or no hair day
Hey watch your language ... bitch
This is what you get for letting me post late
3 sheets to the wind too
Perform
Writhe
Make me less proud of you
I ain't your daddy
Bad Uncle
Best I can do ....
Look at this picture
Elton John bad hair day
Or no hair day
Hey watch your language ... bitch
This is what you get for letting me post late
3 sheets to the wind too
Perform
Writhe
Make me less proud of you
I ain't your daddy
Bad Uncle
Best I can do ....
#family
#porn
#alcohol
#dirty
#curse
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DYNASTY FOUNDING
You need no hounding.
With arms arounding,
get yourself pounding
into my grounding,
dynasty founding,
till I am sounding
in moans abounding
and words astounding.
With arms arounding,
get yourself pounding
into my grounding,
dynasty founding,
till I am sounding
in moans abounding
and words astounding.
#sex
#family
#rhyming
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not by committee...remember?
they think I should hate you
they're my family...I get it
but I have to admit...
the most I can muster is anger
it's not in me to un-love
there's a slice of my heart where you'll always live
I gave you the key
...true...I later changed the lock
...it was warranted
but nobody else will ever occupy that space
it was yours & so it remains
but they're frustrated
I know where it comes from
they're simply trying to protect me
that's just not how it works
the deed is already done...no going back now
I wouldn't even...
they're my family...I get it
but I have to admit...
the most I can muster is anger
it's not in me to un-love
there's a slice of my heart where you'll always live
I gave you the key
...true...I later changed the lock
...it was warranted
but nobody else will ever occupy that space
it was yours & so it remains
but they're frustrated
I know where it comes from
they're simply trying to protect me
that's just not how it works
the deed is already done...no going back now
I wouldn't even...
#love
#breakup
#family #TimeHeals
#family #TimeHeals
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my uncle and the snake
once while
swimming,
my uncle
was bit
by
a snake,
the snake
developed
acute alcohol
poisoning
and died.
swimming,
my uncle
was bit
by
a snake,
the snake
developed
acute alcohol
poisoning
and died.
#family
#water
#memories
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6 Comments
Family Ties
Family Ties
#family
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COVID time
COVID 19 got me and gave me
three days breathing oxygen.
Who thought this up?
All I can do is sleep and
wait for you to call me
I need you to come and
visit me but you can’t.
no one is allowed to visit.
I am thankful for the
nurses and staff who
are risking their health
to care for me.
I try not to ask for anything
as they have too much to do
and I need only your call
and your love to keep
me sane.
I leave the hospital
with another three days
of pills to fight off
the last crap of this ...
three days breathing oxygen.
Who thought this up?
All I can do is sleep and
wait for you to call me
I need you to come and
visit me but you can’t.
no one is allowed to visit.
I am thankful for the
nurses and staff who
are risking their health
to care for me.
I try not to ask for anything
as they have too much to do
and I need only your call
and your love to keep
me sane.
I leave the hospital
with another three days
of pills to fight off
the last crap of this ...
#depression
#family
#illness
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For My Great-Great-Great Grandchildren
(In the Year 2124)
Hey kids!
It’s grandpa Wally from way beyond the grave
I know my time here has passed
But if you read my stories you’ll have a blast
You may have a lot of ancestors but I hope to be your fave
I don’t know what your generation will experience
But I’m sorry for all the things we muffed up here in the past
Just remember that time is always fleeting
As recollections are retreating
Understanding that nothing ever really lasts
Except love…
Love is the only thing you can hold on to
Express it...
Hey kids!
It’s grandpa Wally from way beyond the grave
I know my time here has passed
But if you read my stories you’ll have a blast
You may have a lot of ancestors but I hope to be your fave
I don’t know what your generation will experience
But I’m sorry for all the things we muffed up here in the past
Just remember that time is always fleeting
As recollections are retreating
Understanding that nothing ever really lasts
Except love…
Love is the only thing you can hold on to
Express it...
#children
#family
#WritingPoetry
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Know-it-all People
Know-it-all people
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
#women
#men
#family
#environment
#TimeHeals
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