Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
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Do you want better
As we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, from your own thoughts and dreams, more than anything that you continue to have in your life and world. 🌍 For sure you have the ability and power to eliminate, the negativity and drama from your life what would you, like to be able to remove that which you don't need or want. TO be apart of your existence as it bought nothing to your life. For sure we have to learn that sometimes, we have to let go of some situations that has slowly began, to break your heart ❤️ leaving behind scars of unbelievable pain, that will...
#courage
#hope
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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4 Comments
It's in this space and time
When tears fall from up above what could happen in your, brain 🧠 that is your mind and heart ❤️ and spiritual subconsciousness of your own thoughts. 🧐 For I just don't want you to go through the process of the sounds, of the rain drops. 💧 I want you to think 🤔 about the last time, that in your own time. WHEN you shed tears from your own eyes due, to the very deepness of the truth of the hurt and spiritual pain. THAT you had and have to go through, 🤔 in your own personal life. 🙏 For sure your tears will be more than tears falling...
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#strength
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SUBMISSION OF THE HEART
What will it take for you to be on a submission with honesty and truth and trust. 💗 For let's take it farther than what we say and do, for after all our actions will speak louder than our own words. THAT may not carry true value at first, as we exchange our thoughts and insight and ideas. The real true potential of our realness of our strength and courage and perseverance. Which
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
with the honesty and truth and trust, to be able to share our lives together as one. For God Almighty by the grace of his power and blessings, 🙏 will change the situation around and rewrite, the...
#courage
#honesty
#kindness
#patience
#spiritual
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For So Dear A Life Keep On Fighting
You are not lying
just a bitter ache hiding
acceptance is God’s blessing
deep Faith pain healing.
*****
A mission of Love
not a call of duty! That’s beyond and above
moments in time of devotion
your acts of love, a drop from an ocean
reminiscing weary souls in youth's grasp
cherished and cradled to the last gasp.
*****
A mission of gratitude
to a soul with noble qualities imbued
a whole journey of giving
a natural spirit of caring
to a precious parent so much we owe
the power of...
just a bitter ache hiding
acceptance is God’s blessing
deep Faith pain healing.
*****
A mission of Love
not a call of duty! That’s beyond and above
moments in time of devotion
your acts of love, a drop from an ocean
reminiscing weary souls in youth's grasp
cherished and cradled to the last gasp.
*****
A mission of gratitude
to a soul with noble qualities imbued
a whole journey of giving
a natural spirit of caring
to a precious parent so much we owe
the power of...
#courage
#healing
#love
#mother
#strength
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4 Comments
Recognition into another life
It is a blessing to be able to share my life with you, 🤩 for sure you have been the very glue that held us together. AS we exchange thoughts and prayers in our lives. 💞 FOR that reason I grown to learn how much more, that you mean to me as a woman a friend and my better half.♀️ For sure we had our share of ups and downs but yet, that's what made us to be more stronger, than we've ever been in this relationship. 🥰 For as we become more than just friends, we became more than that to one another, through our time ⌚ yes together with patience and...
#admiration
#courage
#hope
#respect
#strength
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Keep on pushing through it
Through this message I send to everyone, within the sounds of my voice who currently lives within a relationship, whether as woman to man and man to woman or just people's who have a strong commitment and consistency and real communications skills ✍️ For sure I send my well wishes that what ever situation, that you have to go through know this everything, that you have to go through will be, a test of your strength and courage and perseverance. 🙏 For no matter what you go through, in this world and life 💞 will be your testament of your life, for sure there will be...
#courage
#kindness
#respect
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
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IN THIS MOMENT
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. For real that in this moment of tranquility and space and time, a scenario slowly begins to unfold the deepness of my thoughts, as I reflect upon where I've been and gone. 😭 THAT will forever change my mind and heart, plus my spiritual soul of my SUBCONSCIOUSNESS. THOUGHTS of my brain and what I've learned from these two brain tumors, 🧠 that I have gone through some mental changes. Yet as I sit here and now, within this place I can truly say that I am truly grateful and...
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
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Decision Made
It finally happened
The universe put a hard stop
On a life going off the tracks
Two lines appeared
Gleaming in the light of the bathroom
Positive
Death and life at once
Breathing and not breathing at once
Immortality and inevitability at once
Alone surrounded by four walls
An unusual silence encased itself around you.
Decide!
Pulse is beating so hard it hurts.
Heart squeezed by ribs that are meant to protect
Hot then cold then…..
...
The universe put a hard stop
On a life going off the tracks
Two lines appeared
Gleaming in the light of the bathroom
Positive
Death and life at once
Breathing and not breathing at once
Immortality and inevitability at once
Alone surrounded by four walls
An unusual silence encased itself around you.
Decide!
Pulse is beating so hard it hurts.
Heart squeezed by ribs that are meant to protect
Hot then cold then…..
...
#anxiety
#courage
#fear
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Blissfully Relaxed,
Blissfully relaxed,
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
From materialistic delight, detached
I left my skin down to the carnal mortality
clothed my soul in transcendental eternity
Mountains and forests, skies and seasons
Shepherds and pastoral eclogues;, my glossary
If to flesh satisfaction called on
I am Naturally calibrated, not addicted
Each and every container is to be filled
With the appropriate fair value, not abused
And so, i feel
Heavenly untroubled,
Earthly fulfilled
Spiritually healed ...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
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5 Comments
You Won't Believe What We Saw On The Road
We saw a naked chick.
She's letting some biker dude hump her.
That Harley was still moving.
She's letting some biker dude hump her.
That Harley was still moving.
#courage
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#technology
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Oh to feel Alive
I want to feel alive
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
#courage
#happiness
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
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8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique