Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
5th Oct 2021 7:52am
5th Oct 2021 7:52am
so long, long gone
Memories
meeting the weight
of the night
is where
I used to find you.
Then,
it was shearing sleep to ribbons
pent up wrath
that strangled my light
and left darkness king
Struggling behind closed eyes
sharp pops of lightning-like bursts
were reminders
of the very breadth of loss
Now,
it's cementing deep loneliness
permanently sealing
that past
exactly,
where it should live.
...
meeting the weight
of the night
is where
I used to find you.
Then,
it was shearing sleep to ribbons
pent up wrath
that strangled my light
and left darkness king
Struggling behind closed eyes
sharp pops of lightning-like bursts
were reminders
of the very breadth of loss
Now,
it's cementing deep loneliness
permanently sealing
that past
exactly,
where it should live.
...
#love
#grief
#breakup
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
319 reads
24 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
When Will I See You Again...
#breakup
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
257 reads
6 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
1st May 2022 9:13am
1st May 2022 9:13am
He
#lust
#boyfriend
#breakup
99 reads
17 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
#teens
#relationships
#breakup
#sex
#rhyming
249 reads
4 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
Death by Love
I have cast the stone
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
#anger
#love
#women
#breakup
#power
260 reads
4 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
19th Feb 2022 8:43pm
19th Feb 2022 8:43pm
Wounded Weather
When you climbed that
Windy cold mountain
Shoved me down forgotten
Hoping I’d shatter
Seeping dried rain barely
There for your fountain
From the unnoticed crack
That didn’t matter
Your dried brittle
Left over stems
With black thorns
Claws of venom horns
Trying to pierce
With skill my skin
Puncture my
Ultrastructure
Got a heart filled
With sun and thunder
Surrounded by a glass
Gem vase suitcase
Ready to change course
Breeze towards...
Windy cold mountain
Shoved me down forgotten
Hoping I’d shatter
Seeping dried rain barely
There for your fountain
From the unnoticed crack
That didn’t matter
Your dried brittle
Left over stems
With black thorns
Claws of venom horns
Trying to pierce
With skill my skin
Puncture my
Ultrastructure
Got a heart filled
With sun and thunder
Surrounded by a glass
Gem vase suitcase
Ready to change course
Breeze towards...
#relationships
#breakup
#storm
208 reads
14 Comments
RevolutionAL
Poem Published
14th Nov 2017 6:20pm
14th Nov 2017 6:20pm
Lost Cause
Men have lost their marbles
they're doing the craziest things
Loosing their minds
in a real world
and hurting offspring
Men have lost their marbles
Ask the shrinks
what they think
They just shrug their shoulders
looking at the numbers
in the pool
Suggest the law
might be a better bet
Divorce a better tool
Woman have lost their giving
only want to get
It's like they have a mission
to be treated right
Smile a second
before the next big fight
...
they're doing the craziest things
Loosing their minds
in a real world
and hurting offspring
Men have lost their marbles
Ask the shrinks
what they think
They just shrug their shoulders
looking at the numbers
in the pool
Suggest the law
might be a better bet
Divorce a better tool
Woman have lost their giving
only want to get
It's like they have a mission
to be treated right
Smile a second
before the next big fight
...
#women
#men
#breakup
#MovingOn
#separation
332 reads
1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
nicotine
the death of polluted
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
#love
#breakup
493 reads
22 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
1st Feb 2022 7:47pm
1st Feb 2022 7:47pm
Thank You!
When you let,a know herself,Woman go.
You're doing her a favour.
She knows she's worth a lot more,
than the way you continually treat her.
She's the best thing that's happened 2 you.
And this,you already know.
And in she,you'll always remember.
Why you had 2 let her go.
The day you let a Strong Woman Go.
You'll Regret your Decision Forever!
Thank You!
Thank You!
Thank You!
Are the words she briefly thinks
about her ex, who had an un-savoury A- Genda.
...
You're doing her a favour.
She knows she's worth a lot more,
than the way you continually treat her.
She's the best thing that's happened 2 you.
And this,you already know.
And in she,you'll always remember.
Why you had 2 let her go.
The day you let a Strong Woman Go.
You'll Regret your Decision Forever!
Thank You!
Thank You!
Thank You!
Are the words she briefly thinks
about her ex, who had an un-savoury A- Genda.
...
#breakup
#MovingOn
#separation
104 reads
2 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
#breakup
111 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
Knowing when to Quit
I'm Bossy
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
#breakup
267 reads
12 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Feb 2021 9:34am
28th Feb 2021 9:34am
Shattered
Shattered
Laying in a thousand pieces, like a broken mirror on the floor, your shattered heart, still beats, though your head can take no more
Why does the Sun come up, when you just want the world to end, when love slips through your fingers, you feel like your heart will never mend
How can the world continue to turn, still the sea still laps against the shore, don't the world know you're dying, you have your love no more
Such a pain deep inside your heart, your mind searching for the reason why, you can't eat or sleep, all you do is cry ...
Laying in a thousand pieces, like a broken mirror on the floor, your shattered heart, still beats, though your head can take no more
Why does the Sun come up, when you just want the world to end, when love slips through your fingers, you feel like your heart will never mend
How can the world continue to turn, still the sea still laps against the shore, don't the world know you're dying, you have your love no more
Such a pain deep inside your heart, your mind searching for the reason why, you can't eat or sleep, all you do is cry ...
#love
#heartbroken
#breakup
302 reads
4 Comments
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