Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
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breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
Knowing when to Quit
I'm Bossy
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
#breakup
337 reads
12 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
1st Apr 2021 9:30pm
1st Apr 2021 9:30pm
Cemetery of our Senses (+Reading)
I walk through the graveyard of our feelings,
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
#relationships
#breakup
#conflict
#memories
#graveyard
515 reads
39 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
12th Apr 2021 4:00pm
12th Apr 2021 4:00pm
Cold Burn
In retrospect many love songs tend to have a different meaning
Only after some time has passed
I guess the older we get we wake up from the dreaming
As if awakening from a spell once cast
Years later we begin to understand ourselves a little better
Seeing where and how things went wrong
Comprehending the significance of each poem, text or letter
Realizing why we were so headstrong
Oh how the days of eternal youth flew by like the blink of an eye
When relationships were beat and broken
In the cold burn we learn to deal and heal and...
Only after some time has passed
I guess the older we get we wake up from the dreaming
As if awakening from a spell once cast
Years later we begin to understand ourselves a little better
Seeing where and how things went wrong
Comprehending the significance of each poem, text or letter
Realizing why we were so headstrong
Oh how the days of eternal youth flew by like the blink of an eye
When relationships were beat and broken
In the cold burn we learn to deal and heal and...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#music
#confessional
#NaPoWriMo2021
354 reads
6 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
1st May 2022 9:13am
1st May 2022 9:13am
He
#lust
#boyfriend
#breakup
338 reads
36 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
#teens
#relationships
#breakup
#sex
#rhyming
303 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
nicotine
the death of polluted
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
#love
#breakup
533 reads
22 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
7th Oct 2022 2:21am
7th Oct 2022 2:21am
Kamikaze Sky
Devil lives on the sun
Drinks 100 proof fire for liquor
His last call waving me over
Beckoning his destruction
In the name of seduction
Sitting oh so all alone
Up high on his inferno throne
Wants to melt me down
Wear me like a golden crown
But deep down I know
I’m not the only one
Got holy water angel wings
Laced and spiked with rum
Bestowed by my mother
Who prays to garnet
Rosaries from past lovers
She says it’s a big bad
World an unsafe place
Empty words have no faith
Beware of...
Drinks 100 proof fire for liquor
His last call waving me over
Beckoning his destruction
In the name of seduction
Sitting oh so all alone
Up high on his inferno throne
Wants to melt me down
Wear me like a golden crown
But deep down I know
I’m not the only one
Got holy water angel wings
Laced and spiked with rum
Bestowed by my mother
Who prays to garnet
Rosaries from past lovers
She says it’s a big bad
World an unsafe place
Empty words have no faith
Beware of...
#anger
#love
#breakup
255 reads
33 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
Death by Love
I have cast the stone
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
#anger
#love
#women
#breakup
#power
324 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
When Will I See You Again...
#breakup
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
404 reads
6 Comments
Her
Poem Published
30th Nov 2022 11:59am
30th Nov 2022 11:59am
The Recesses Of Us
Time does not always heal
Coming to you I’m broken
Fading time captured
The best part of me
The shell of a woman
Surfing the waves of reality
Pulled under and let go
Of my dreams
Rescued by the fantasy
Blanked in your comfort
You instilled confidence
Misleading me
Empty promises await
Seasons change the rampages of desire
Ever changing man
Haunting me
Gaining footsteps and dancing
Daring to emerge triumphantly
No longer held back
By memories
Standing my ground ...
Coming to you I’m broken
Fading time captured
The best part of me
The shell of a woman
Surfing the waves of reality
Pulled under and let go
Of my dreams
Rescued by the fantasy
Blanked in your comfort
You instilled confidence
Misleading me
Empty promises await
Seasons change the rampages of desire
Ever changing man
Haunting me
Gaining footsteps and dancing
Daring to emerge triumphantly
No longer held back
By memories
Standing my ground ...
#courage
#heartbroken
#breakup
#lover
#MentalHealth
68 reads
4 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Feb 2021 9:34am
28th Feb 2021 9:34am
Shattered
Shattered
Laying in a thousand pieces, like a broken mirror on the floor, your shattered heart, still beats, though your head can take no more
Why does the Sun come up, when you just want the world to end, when love slips through your fingers, you feel like your heart will never mend
How can the world continue to turn, still the sea still laps against the shore, don't the world know you're dying, you have your love no more
Such a pain deep inside your heart, your mind searching for the reason why, you can't eat or sleep, all you do is cry ...
Laying in a thousand pieces, like a broken mirror on the floor, your shattered heart, still beats, though your head can take no more
Why does the Sun come up, when you just want the world to end, when love slips through your fingers, you feel like your heart will never mend
How can the world continue to turn, still the sea still laps against the shore, don't the world know you're dying, you have your love no more
Such a pain deep inside your heart, your mind searching for the reason why, you can't eat or sleep, all you do is cry ...
#love
#heartbroken
#breakup
456 reads
4 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
10th Feb 2021 7:52am
10th Feb 2021 7:52am
i WiLl FaLl!!!
#anger
#breakup
#conflict
282 reads
0 Comments
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