Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I Wish You Hadn’t
I wish you hadn’t opened that wound
Four months was too soon
You left me alone with just my tears in that room
The loneliness and heartache so deep I drowned
I wish my heart could learn to be cold
And celestial mysteries wouldn’t have foretold
A relationship that needed mending would unfold
And the love I still have for you would be exposed
I wish you could see your worth but it’s not my place
It’s your demons you have to face
Then maybe someday you will find the space
To have in your heart the place I still...
Four months was too soon
You left me alone with just my tears in that room
The loneliness and heartache so deep I drowned
I wish my heart could learn to be cold
And celestial mysteries wouldn’t have foretold
A relationship that needed mending would unfold
And the love I still have for you would be exposed
I wish you could see your worth but it’s not my place
It’s your demons you have to face
Then maybe someday you will find the space
To have in your heart the place I still...
#breakup
#love
#TimeHeals
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Here to stay with you
You got this thing in your head girl
you think im going away
get it out of your head girl
because im here to stay
im here to stay with you
There must be something about you
I got no reason to doubt you
so im here to stay
here to stay with you
I wouldn't believe it, but I know it's true
everything I want is right here within you
Don't know too much about you
don't know what to say
but I can't live without you
but I'm here to stay
here to stay with you
With you
With you
you think im going away
get it out of your head girl
because im here to stay
im here to stay with you
There must be something about you
I got no reason to doubt you
so im here to stay
here to stay with you
I wouldn't believe it, but I know it's true
everything I want is right here within you
Don't know too much about you
don't know what to say
but I can't live without you
but I'm here to stay
here to stay with you
With you
With you
#breakup
#love
#relationships
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habits die harder in nightmares
It was like one of those
cigarette dreams where you smoke
(or drink or break your
sobriety)
and get pissed at
yourself
but do it anyway
Filthy habits always seem
to die
harder in dreams
So it was with us
last night
We stood on
opposite sides
of a cursed door
foreheads pressed
eyes closed
palms flat
as if we could
transmogrify
the sick regret
to anything
anything
else
through the...
cigarette dreams where you smoke
(or drink or break your
sobriety)
and get pissed at
yourself
but do it anyway
Filthy habits always seem
to die
harder in dreams
So it was with us
last night
We stood on
opposite sides
of a cursed door
foreheads pressed
eyes closed
palms flat
as if we could
transmogrify
the sick regret
to anything
anything
else
through the...
#addiction
#breakup
#depression
#dreams
#nightmares
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22 Comments
My Letter to the Woman with the Famous Blue Raincoat
It’s four in the morning
And I could not sleep
I’m thinking of you
But I could not weep
You left me cold
In the land of the living
My music you took
As I lay there dying
I heard that you left
With the man I did trust
Into the desert
Where stone turns to dust
My hope was an illusion
Not very pleasant
Megan came with the news
That you were gone
She said that your heart
Had turned to stone
That night you secretly
Planned to run free ...
And I could not sleep
I’m thinking of you
But I could not weep
You left me cold
In the land of the living
My music you took
As I lay there dying
I heard that you left
With the man I did trust
Into the desert
Where stone turns to dust
My hope was an illusion
Not very pleasant
Megan came with the news
That you were gone
She said that your heart
Had turned to stone
That night you secretly
Planned to run free ...
#betrayal
#breakup
#friendship #love
#friendship #love
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HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
#teens
#relationships
#breakup
#sex
#rhyming
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Discarded Parts
Broken pieces of desire
rusted with pain.
Clawed with your name.
Tears drown your corroded remains.
Even the trees wearing their pink bouquets,
could no longer extract the dark decay.
Of the day your eyes coldly looked away.
You were there but you were gone.
It's the mind that wanders further than the body.
At first.
And then it's the absence of your body
that blows up my heart.
An explosion raining rejection's shards.
Upon my discarded parts.
rusted with pain.
Clawed with your name.
Tears drown your corroded remains.
Even the trees wearing their pink bouquets,
could no longer extract the dark decay.
Of the day your eyes coldly looked away.
You were there but you were gone.
It's the mind that wanders further than the body.
At first.
And then it's the absence of your body
that blows up my heart.
An explosion raining rejection's shards.
Upon my discarded parts.
#breakup
#heartbroken
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Tears Tears Dystopia
Rip your tampon out
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
#dark
#breakup
#violence #dystopian
#violence #dystopian
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REARRANGED
REARRANGED
Today sure unusual it was unlike any other
came home early to surprise my hot lover.
Anticipation to hug him & his smiling face
soon I overheard another voice in our place.
The grunts & growls made my heart numb
she was screaming, 'fill me up with your cum'.
I quickly took out my phone and I hit record
for what I was witnessing had me totally floored.
I aroused but stunned and also in total shock
as I watched her fuck every inch of his cock.
Quietly I slipped away & just sat in my car
I was dumbfounded...
Today sure unusual it was unlike any other
came home early to surprise my hot lover.
Anticipation to hug him & his smiling face
soon I overheard another voice in our place.
The grunts & growls made my heart numb
she was screaming, 'fill me up with your cum'.
I quickly took out my phone and I hit record
for what I was witnessing had me totally floored.
I aroused but stunned and also in total shock
as I watched her fuck every inch of his cock.
Quietly I slipped away & just sat in my car
I was dumbfounded...
#rejection
#heartbroken
#breakup
#betrayal
#disappointment
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2 Comments
When Will I See You Again...
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#breakup
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
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6 Comments
shattered
I'm looking back
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
#breakup
#healing
#MovingOn
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10 Comments
THINGS WE CAN'T CONTROL
They say that in our lives we as man's and woman's will be face, with many of those obstacles, that we can't really control in our lives. But yet there are somethings we can control, 🤔 one is our own emotions and our own true personal, thoughts of what we want and need in our lives🪬 For let's take a moment to analyze, our own trials and tribulation, that has altered the decisions of what we have done.🤔 For sure there was things and people's that we wish, hadn't come into our lives for it was at that time in our lowest point in our lives 😔 We decided really just...
#betrayal
#breakup
#deception
#disappointment
#heartbroken
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Passing Fancy
Such a petty argument and now I can’t see your face
With your back turned our bed is now filled with freezing time and space
another morning with this shit and the beef is still rolling strong
Emotionally pacifying thought, approached, and applied all wrong
Frustrated with our results preparations made, and bills have to be paid
I know every aspect of you from the backside although we have never laid
Ever contour of your body even stretched monthly to the max
Your hair has covered me also as it flowed about like wax
But I have our...
With your back turned our bed is now filled with freezing time and space
another morning with this shit and the beef is still rolling strong
Emotionally pacifying thought, approached, and applied all wrong
Frustrated with our results preparations made, and bills have to be paid
I know every aspect of you from the backside although we have never laid
Ever contour of your body even stretched monthly to the max
Your hair has covered me also as it flowed about like wax
But I have our...
#betrayal
#breakup
#love #death
#love #death
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