Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
Today 5:50am
Today 5:50am
Better off
I've lost my light so I've lost my desire
The darkness consumes me like a raging fire
Its a losing effort to extinguish the flames
Will I be another victim that heartbreak claims?
I try to push on and get past the pain of loss
But my heart is shattered and I cant carry this cross
I refuse to believe this is how we were meant to be
Youre with someone else and I still choose not to see
Without you nothing is worth doing, especially living
Separated from your heart and the love you were giving
Its too much to...
The darkness consumes me like a raging fire
Its a losing effort to extinguish the flames
Will I be another victim that heartbreak claims?
I try to push on and get past the pain of loss
But my heart is shattered and I cant carry this cross
I refuse to believe this is how we were meant to be
Youre with someone else and I still choose not to see
Without you nothing is worth doing, especially living
Separated from your heart and the love you were giving
Its too much to...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
43 reads
5 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
Death by Love
I have cast the stone
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
#anger
#love
#women
#breakup
#power
412 reads
4 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
13th Aug 2023 10:32pm
13th Aug 2023 10:32pm
Saying Isn't Believing
You said that you need a break
A break from what, what does it take
Do you need a break from us
Do you need a break from love
I know what I hear
You don’t really want to be here
Life isn’t moving yet things are mounting
Emotions are clouding and we’re steady drowning
A life line is needed, I’m going down for the last time
I’m getting pulled under could you make up your mind
I know what I hear
You don’t want to be here
Could you scream your secrets
From the darkness of your heart
I see shadows of my...
A break from what, what does it take
Do you need a break from us
Do you need a break from love
I know what I hear
You don’t really want to be here
Life isn’t moving yet things are mounting
Emotions are clouding and we’re steady drowning
A life line is needed, I’m going down for the last time
I’m getting pulled under could you make up your mind
I know what I hear
You don’t want to be here
Could you scream your secrets
From the darkness of your heart
I see shadows of my...
#love
#breakup
#hurt
220 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
14th Nov 2023 9:08pm
14th Nov 2023 9:08pm
The Long and Cold
I had to talk a man down away from the edge
The precipice below is dark and dangerous
I had to take some harmful things away
Now the descent feels every bit as lonely
The long and cold night send shivers up the spine
All the unknowns play a daring game of chess
Calculations can’t be made until the day breaks
And even then, the risks seem impossible to take
But love sometimes makes the mind go numb and blind
How far can one tread the path without sound logic?
Will emotions cloud the ability to make clear decisions?
Will they...
The precipice below is dark and dangerous
I had to take some harmful things away
Now the descent feels every bit as lonely
The long and cold night send shivers up the spine
All the unknowns play a daring game of chess
Calculations can’t be made until the day breaks
And even then, the risks seem impossible to take
But love sometimes makes the mind go numb and blind
How far can one tread the path without sound logic?
Will emotions cloud the ability to make clear decisions?
Will they...
#heartbroken
#breakup
127 reads
3 Comments
Inkplay
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:16am
Yesterday 10:16am
If I Stop To Remember
I have scar tissue
that spells her name,
Its valleys and peaks
landscape my core
and if I stop too long,
I'd spend a lifetime
hiking through them.
Each tree a scent
each blade of grass a memory
and the great plateau
where we parted ways
dominates all.
When sorrow dances in my bones
instinctively I move to its rhythm,
regardless if I want to or not.
that spells her name,
Its valleys and peaks
landscape my core
and if I stop too long,
I'd spend a lifetime
hiking through them.
Each tree a scent
each blade of grass a memory
and the great plateau
where we parted ways
dominates all.
When sorrow dances in my bones
instinctively I move to its rhythm,
regardless if I want to or not.
#breakup
#love
#relationships
51 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
When Will I See You Again...
#breakup
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
643 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
24th May 2023 9:28pm
24th May 2023 9:28pm
If I Knew Then (with song)
If I knew then what I know now
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
#relationships
#breakup
#lyrics #memories
#lyrics #memories
290 reads
16 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
15th Mar 2024 9:18pm
15th Mar 2024 9:18pm
Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
#anger
#love
#breakup
#sex
#lover
187 reads
24 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
25th Jan 2022 8:29am
25th Jan 2022 8:29am
the shadows of silence
what is built in
love and
beauty
is torn down in
rage and
fire
moments
come
moments
go
lovers
come
lovers
go
and at the end
of the
day
when the sun
is tried and
curses the
sky
and cars limp slowly
home through
snow and
ice
loss remains
a faithful
friend
and heartbreak wears a
mask so beautiful that
the shadows
of...
love and
beauty
is torn down in
rage and
fire
moments
come
moments
go
lovers
come
lovers
go
and at the end
of the
day
when the sun
is tried and
curses the
sky
and cars limp slowly
home through
snow and
ice
loss remains
a faithful
friend
and heartbreak wears a
mask so beautiful that
the shadows
of...
#breakup
#apathy
415 reads
12 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Dec 2022 4:34am
19th Dec 2022 4:34am
Phases of the Moon
I felt after you
In the darkness
You not there
Though the sigh of your song remained
Silvered by moonlight
Pale
Echoing the curves of my dreams
My wants and my needs
But shadows don't speak
Lost in their mingling with night
Muffling
Into that peculiar nocturnal silence
I know the dark well
You
In the remembrance of dreams
That celestial
From which you are drawn
Who no longer come on your own
Nor answer when called
I try to touch you ...
In the darkness
You not there
Though the sigh of your song remained
Silvered by moonlight
Pale
Echoing the curves of my dreams
My wants and my needs
But shadows don't speak
Lost in their mingling with night
Muffling
Into that peculiar nocturnal silence
I know the dark well
You
In the remembrance of dreams
That celestial
From which you are drawn
Who no longer come on your own
Nor answer when called
I try to touch you ...
#love
#relationships
#breakup
357 reads
10 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
1st Apr 2021 9:30pm
1st Apr 2021 9:30pm
Cemetery of our Senses (+Reading)
I walk through the graveyard of our feelings,
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
#relationships
#breakup
#conflict
#memories
#graveyard
680 reads
39 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
#breakup
238 reads
3 Comments
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