Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 4:36pm
9th Jul 2024 4:36pm
Madness Speaks
Hello Madness I was waiting for you
you've slipped the chain, yes, and escaped undetected...
the masquerade is in session all of my spirits are all masked
my loyal followers are masked too
you will never know who is beside you
you will not know, man, nor beast, or which angels have rebelled
and yes I will boast I may regret it,though
pride came before the fall no, that is a spell
I will not be brainwashed into a cage
you my ex, have a large ego
you showed me what you do, Madison Beers
and it needs a constant new horizon to...
you've slipped the chain, yes, and escaped undetected...
the masquerade is in session all of my spirits are all masked
my loyal followers are masked too
you will never know who is beside you
you will not know, man, nor beast, or which angels have rebelled
and yes I will boast I may regret it,though
pride came before the fall no, that is a spell
I will not be brainwashed into a cage
you my ex, have a large ego
you showed me what you do, Madison Beers
and it needs a constant new horizon to...
#aliens
#angels
#love #universe
#love #universe
105 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 12:57pm
6th Jul 2024 12:57pm
Poems and Thunderstorms
If you weren’t complicated ..
You’d just be beautiful
I like the combo platter
Watch out for Scorpions
Forever searching for answers
Perhaps there’s none
That’s ok too
You’d just be beautiful
I like the combo platter
Watch out for Scorpions
Forever searching for answers
Perhaps there’s none
That’s ok too
#aliens
188 reads
22 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
"Secret Invasion " A24×8!!
In the Age, of true light which dissipates all illusions brought forth with the help of the moon's light!
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
#aliens
#earth
#evolution
#moon
#universe
200 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 10:19am
3rd May 2024 10:19am
Golden light that warms not a flashlight that blinds and turns space into nuclear wiinter
dear Eating disorder are you thin enough yet from stuffing yourself with pain
starving people for human kindness and making them think they struggle in vain
eating their misery while you explode off your aristocracy old doesn't make wise
instinct serves me well
English is the ghost in the machine
I am here and my will and belief is more powerful than your brainwashing machine
you are ancient bullies I know the language of light and dark
sound and distance black white man
you are alien to me
cold and calculating
I hear you shrieking aol ...
starving people for human kindness and making them think they struggle in vain
eating their misery while you explode off your aristocracy old doesn't make wise
instinct serves me well
English is the ghost in the machine
I am here and my will and belief is more powerful than your brainwashing machine
you are ancient bullies I know the language of light and dark
sound and distance black white man
you are alien to me
cold and calculating
I hear you shrieking aol ...
#aliens
132 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st May 2024 10:45am
1st May 2024 10:45am
From the skies above
During that dead silent morning
We weren't informed, there was no warning
The initial revelation
Of an alien invasion
Created a stir in the nation
Threatening confrontation
No escape, from any location
People ailing from starvation
Beings exploit our creation
Resulting in death, or some mutation
Aliens performing amputations
Everywhere lies excessive devastation
Suicidal conformation
Someone save us from salvation
The Final Revelation
We weren't informed, there was no warning
The initial revelation
Of an alien invasion
Created a stir in the nation
Threatening confrontation
No escape, from any location
People ailing from starvation
Beings exploit our creation
Resulting in death, or some mutation
Aliens performing amputations
Everywhere lies excessive devastation
Suicidal conformation
Someone save us from salvation
The Final Revelation
#aliens
#dark
#death
#prison
#rhyming
181 reads
8 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 6:09am
26th Apr 2024 6:09am
Second Coming
Ten, nine, eight,
seven, six, five, four
Behold, I knock upon the door
that whosoever… three, two, one
We have ig-ni-tion.
Orian sighs and by his breath,
all life returns from after death.
A swarm of ships from Heaven’s realm
amass and duly overwhelm
the somber dark before the light.
A thief has come unto the night.
Swirling spheres that make no sound
split the sky and torch the ground,
zig and zag with proton speed,
phantoms of the galaxy.
Angels lead a vast descent
inside their shiny armament. ...
seven, six, five, four
Behold, I knock upon the door
that whosoever… three, two, one
We have ig-ni-tion.
Orian sighs and by his breath,
all life returns from after death.
A swarm of ships from Heaven’s realm
amass and duly overwhelm
the somber dark before the light.
A thief has come unto the night.
Swirling spheres that make no sound
split the sky and torch the ground,
zig and zag with proton speed,
phantoms of the galaxy.
Angels lead a vast descent
inside their shiny armament. ...
#aliens
#apocalypse
#God
#religion
#spiritual
329 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 11:20am
23rd Apr 2024 11:20am
Distant Travels
As my mind reflects
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
#aliens
#identity
#memories
#scifi
#universe
152 reads
10 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 00:54am
8th Apr 2024 00:54am
Inter-Planet Janet and the Alien Doomsday Device
#forgiveness
#childhood
#sex
#aliens
#scifi
101 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
26th Mar 2024 9:05pm
Stars Eclipse the Moon
smothering the dawn...never
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
#stars
#angels
#aliens
136 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
26th Mar 2024 3:37pm
Loca
with my head to the dirt I listen
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
#love
#angels
#aliens
153 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
25th Mar 2024 9:35pm
Spendor in the Storm
resolving the differences
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
#love
#angels
#aliens
141 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
25th Mar 2024 3:46am
Honey and Vinegar
I see a narrow minded civilation out for greed
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
#angels
#aliens
113 reads
4 Comments
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