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Poems and Thunderstorms
If you weren’t complicated ..
You’d just be beautiful
I like the combo platter
Watch out for Scorpions
Forever searching for answers
Perhaps there’s none
That’s ok too
You’d just be beautiful
I like the combo platter
Watch out for Scorpions
Forever searching for answers
Perhaps there’s none
That’s ok too
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Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
6th Jul 2024 12:59pm
YES, like me some combo platter too. Have a fantastic day my General xxxxxxxx
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6th Jul 2024 2:55pm
Just make sure there not coming from Uranus!!
Love your poems, always my friend!!
Love your poems, always my friend!!
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6th Jul 2024 8:15pm
Oof! Indeed. We're human x-ray machines and our spidey-senses are rarely wrong.
I like the intrigue of this one.
I like the intrigue of this one.
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6th Jul 2024 9:32pm
One of those poems that write themselves fast.
No Art, just words
Feels good
Thx
Appreciate
No Art, just words
Feels good
Thx
Appreciate
Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
7th Jul 2024 00:00am
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7th Jul 2024 1:08am
It's the intensity that draws me. Otherwise they can't handle mine! Love the Scorpios...
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Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
7th Jul 2024 1:37am
Definitely like the first three lines, (whole poem too) the first three though, I don't know who to strive to love anymore now, you've just thrown many angles of thought my direction
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Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
7th Jul 2024 3:29am
My travels take me through intricate liaisons... Beauty and magic prevail...
Thx ED
Thx ED
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Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
7th Jul 2024 9:13am
Dear PS,
Righteous. Every dish has the option of a few sides and for me, I love how you’ve narrated the complexities of humans. Big Dig my friend. Xx
H🌷
Righteous. Every dish has the option of a few sides and for me, I love how you’ve narrated the complexities of humans. Big Dig my friend. Xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. Poems and Thunderstorms
7th Jul 2024 10:13am
Dear H,
I'm always studying the human form and the poems are a good vehicle to express thoughts. I write them fast before they slip into a void....
Many thanks for your support H !!
Appreciate you
🤠❤
I'm always studying the human form and the poems are a good vehicle to express thoughts. I write them fast before they slip into a void....
Many thanks for your support H !!
Appreciate you
🤠❤
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