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Summer is ..
July
Heat
Staying light late
Watermelon
Flesh exposed
Complaining about weather
Humidity
Bugs
Alcohol haze
Horniness
This year political madness
They all suck
I’ll take Kamala
At least she’s lucid
Back to regular programming
Sleep deprived
Did I say horny ?
Mood
Would be poet
Widow Jane Rye
Gradation
He’s got a good curveball
The boys of summer
Beer
Heat
Staying light late
Watermelon
Flesh exposed
Complaining about weather
Humidity
Bugs
Alcohol haze
Horniness
This year political madness
They all suck
I’ll take Kamala
At least she’s lucid
Back to regular programming
Sleep deprived
Did I say horny ?
Mood
Would be poet
Widow Jane Rye
Gradation
He’s got a good curveball
The boys of summer
Beer
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8th Jul 2024 3:37am
politics is useless, but heat, watermelon, all this is good with time, necessary to increase sexual arousal...
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8th Jul 2024 3:51am
I'll take Kamala too, but I'll take Biden over the felon any day.
I like your summer list.
I like your summer list.
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8th Jul 2024 4:02am
Yeah, it’s a murky mess
My birthday is on Election Day this year..
Ain’t enough whiskey in the world for this shit storm ..
Thx on the list
My birthday is on Election Day this year..
Ain’t enough whiskey in the world for this shit storm ..
Thx on the list
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8th Jul 2024 10:23am
Love this! I feel like i'm in the heart of NYC. Let's crack open a fire hydrant and cool down.
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Yeah, thats a good idea.
Had my first Mr. Softee ice cream a few days ago at our local park. Same dude in his truck year after year. A community feel at the park. Not Central Park mind you, another park on the East River that mostly only locals use. It's an oasis in big bad nyc.
Had my first Mr. Softee ice cream a few days ago at our local park. Same dude in his truck year after year. A community feel at the park. Not Central Park mind you, another park on the East River that mostly only locals use. It's an oasis in big bad nyc.
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8th Jul 2024 11:13am
I love Mr. Softee ice cream!! NYC feels the heat more so then Long Island or the surrounding tri state area. Same goes for the cold.
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8th Jul 2024 12:09pm
That could be a very long answer.
Bottom line is you know when you live here if city life is for you. Because it challenges you in every way imaginable. It comes down to who you are more than what it is ...
I've written a lot about it. If you run down y list of 2000 + poems I'm sure you'll find some answers ..
Bottom line is you know when you live here if city life is for you. Because it challenges you in every way imaginable. It comes down to who you are more than what it is ...
I've written a lot about it. If you run down y list of 2000 + poems I'm sure you'll find some answers ..
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8th Jul 2024 12:11pm
Gotcha. Appreciate the answer and I'll check some of your older poems out.
Have a great day!!
Have a great day!!
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8th Jul 2024 12:00pm
I’ll take the watermelon on exposed flesh in the July heat. If you want to add some of that ice cream I’m all over that too. I’ll worry about cleaning up later.
I don’t have room for the rest. I no longer entertain what doesn’t serve me. Life is too short. So, I may even consider all that in NYC one day (never been).
Love your list tho, PS. You’re true to you. And who can ask for anything better than that?
I don’t have room for the rest. I no longer entertain what doesn’t serve me. Life is too short. So, I may even consider all that in NYC one day (never been).
Love your list tho, PS. You’re true to you. And who can ask for anything better than that?
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8th Jul 2024 12:12pm
I try to stay true to me.
You have to. When you go outside of yourself other things can happen. I'll leave it at that. NYC is a jumble of so many things.
Mostly cramped quarters and ideas ....
You have to. When you go outside of yourself other things can happen. I'll leave it at that. NYC is a jumble of so many things.
Mostly cramped quarters and ideas ....
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8th Jul 2024 12:21pm
I know all about cramped quarters and trying to stay true to you.
Ever since I joined DUP you’ve been an example of the kind of person I strive to be. Reading you has helped me in immeasurable ways and I’m not sure if I’ve ever properly thanked you.
So, thank you, Gary.
And don’t give me any BS about how I’d be better off finding someone else to (insert whatever). I think we both know that’s crap.
Ever since I joined DUP you’ve been an example of the kind of person I strive to be. Reading you has helped me in immeasurable ways and I’m not sure if I’ve ever properly thanked you.
So, thank you, Gary.
And don’t give me any BS about how I’d be better off finding someone else to (insert whatever). I think we both know that’s crap.
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8th Jul 2024 1:00pm
Thank you Mary !!
I've had mentors and now I'm of the age where I'm trying to give some wisdom back ..
Not sure about the insertion part. I think I'll leave that to your discretion 🤠
I've had mentors and now I'm of the age where I'm trying to give some wisdom back ..
Not sure about the insertion part. I think I'll leave that to your discretion 🤠
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8th Jul 2024 1:00pm
That "Did I say horny ?" came quite unexpected, but it's a great addition to this piece. BIG
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9th Jul 2024 5:30am
Dear PS,
I like these writes. To me, they’re like a snapshot of the times that historians will study and get to know us. Awesome piece. H🌷
I like these writes. To me, they’re like a snapshot of the times that historians will study and get to know us. Awesome piece. H🌷
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9th Jul 2024 11:04am
Dear H,
Yes, I like to write list poems. Brevity that packs in a feeling that can be studied. Its an obstute observation and I'm glad to receive it H.
Thanks ✋ 💌
Yes, I like to write list poems. Brevity that packs in a feeling that can be studied. Its an obstute observation and I'm glad to receive it H.
Thanks ✋ 💌
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