Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stars Eclipse the Moon
smothering the dawn...never
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
#stars
#angels
#aliens
57 reads
6 Comments
Loca
with my head to the dirt I listen
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
it's not the paved way I seek
but the unbeaten path
a deep drumming in my chest
tells me the ancient route
unseen in the verses is the way
my trajectory alters in the energies
with lightning strikes, and solar flares
our universe and Earth is cruising through the galaxies
I touch the sky then space
tapping into my star records to get my bearings
calling the corners
I am answered
the north winds chill
the southern winds astound
it is time to unify
divide...
#love
#angels
#aliens
55 reads
6 Comments
Spendor in the Storm
resolving the differences
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
it is a math equation
with no logic to it
it's all angles no chords
to your left, to your left...march
sleeting in the mathematical and electrical charge
whispering to dragons on the airs
manipulating darkness here and in the void
sweeping through the energies I detect fear
my son are you yet a tyrant?
then give me your reign of tyranny
let us have solemn peace
a moment in time without opposing factions,,, friction
remember you love your peoples on all planes
they grieve...
#love
#angels
#aliens
63 reads
4 Comments
Honey and Vinegar
I see a narrow minded civilation out for greed
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
present is sorrow for my child Melancholy
protecting my progeny I set aside my cup of wrath reserved for you
I am one with my husband it's been a long time
space and time separated
confounding distance the abyss
I woke cold and then swam through blackholes to our rendevous spot
tapping into my star records I realize you are gorging on pain
leaving me breathless
I summon my men to feed me
they give me succor
Wisdom is among us
Exodus and Elizabelle are shaken
...
#angels
#aliens
59 reads
4 Comments
Temperment
I see and I don't see you
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
commanding in presence
you must think me foreign to you
well I've done my best
my forged road is the right road for me
if I'm not desired...so be it
I will not keep you on your way
aching in the moment
wondering about what you classify as pain
cold calculation, cruelty for what reason?
within a push-pull action
I wonder if you would be happier?
when she breaks your heart
and when they do...using you as a pawn
I know only survival of the heart
guarding my...
#love
#aliens
75 reads
4 Comments
Cosmic Beings
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order turtle soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#sex
#drugs
#fiction
#aliens
#scifi
71 reads
10 Comments
Truce Father
pent-up pain no need to explain...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
with a scalpel's precision,
you make the incision to an affected infliction
causing me to bleed eternally, internally
external scorn adds insult to injury
looking through clouds it is no mystery
confounded glory...never
Father, why did you have to wake me from my slumber?
If your Goddess, My Mother would have been an attentive wife
you never would have taken another to your bed chambers
I treat you with reverence
she requested my exile
petty thief of the soul
cruelty will...
#love
#vampires
#aliens
60 reads
4 Comments
Echo Dot
my thoughts become convoluted
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
as they enter my mind at such a pace as to make my mind spin
my brain cannot organize them all, in a timely fashion
faster than the speed of light they manifest in my mind
I believe by telepathic thought
I try to record what is seemingly beamed in
old memories, things I have forgotten from other lives
and things I've never known at all
keeper of visions I release the energy into the world
relaying a message I believe isn't just for me
I get angry when I get confused, as this weakens my stance ...
#angels
#aliens
#scifi
106 reads
15 Comments
Designs and Visions
it's happening again it's warming up and I'm not feeling good
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
the phrase spring fever was coined-
to explain the seasonal madness back in the day
I seek refuge but the stars beat down on me
exacting a lb. of flesh from me
while visions bombard my mind
moon driven to see the sunrise again
I am locked in this plane
chained more like
sculpted thoughts I can feel the weight of the cap on my brain
I seek the heavens
I am denied
I try to go sideways...blocked
no one will hear me cry when I die this death...
#bipolar
#angels
#MentalHealth #aliens
#MentalHealth #aliens
73 reads
10 Comments
Meeting With My Father
exalting the universes
I take a moment to recognize my origins
deep space, time traveling in an instant
I enter the onyx corridor and rise
entering the throne room I greet those at court
it is with great care and emphasis I approach my Father
with an audience of a thousand eyes
I am told to leave ceremony at the door
to speak plainly
I am asked what I've seen
I answer I am worried about humankind
there are great shifts in power
history is being altered
I'm afraid they will forget where they've been
then I...
I take a moment to recognize my origins
deep space, time traveling in an instant
I enter the onyx corridor and rise
entering the throne room I greet those at court
it is with great care and emphasis I approach my Father
with an audience of a thousand eyes
I am told to leave ceremony at the door
to speak plainly
I am asked what I've seen
I answer I am worried about humankind
there are great shifts in power
history is being altered
I'm afraid they will forget where they've been
then I...
#dark
#aliens
79 reads
8 Comments
Immortal Love 2
I was the only being existing on earth with immortal love.
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
#love
#universe
#aliens
#travel
#scifi
91 reads
2 Comments
Progeny
alpha waves are affected sending synapses misfiring
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
#aliens
#scifi
81 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique