Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 10:01pm
18th Nov 2024 10:01pm
weirdo
escape the hurt, of relationships that don't click
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
#aliens
#spiritual
48 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum!
Hidden from humanity, Hideous to see
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
#aliens
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
#violence
73 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
Teeth
Alien Predator within me
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
#aliens
#myself
#shadows #symbolism
#shadows #symbolism
47 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
After We Heard A Noise Over Our Heads
A spaceship landed next door.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
#aliens
#cats
#dialogue
#fiction
#scifi
92 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 7:12pm
10th Oct 2024 7:12pm
Boats of Musical Wood
Boats of musical wood
Inmates pick up broken pieces
Of a boat carrying migrants to shore
Broken dreams of families not realized
Behind bars in a wood shop
Pick up a sliver trying to deliver
A violin with strings that sing
Or an oar to make a cello
Back in the hell of a prison cell
Putting a boat back together
Boat now making music
singing immigrant dreams
Off the coast of Italy
Italian prisoner makes musical dreams
To call attention to...
Inmates pick up broken pieces
Of a boat carrying migrants to shore
Broken dreams of families not realized
Behind bars in a wood shop
Pick up a sliver trying to deliver
A violin with strings that sing
Or an oar to make a cello
Back in the hell of a prison cell
Putting a boat back together
Boat now making music
singing immigrant dreams
Off the coast of Italy
Italian prisoner makes musical dreams
To call attention to...
#aliens
#beach
#SelfWorth
69 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
We Saw Her Coming Out Of The Water
We
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
#aliens
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#friendship
90 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
Stole Geronimo
Stole Geronimo for skull n bones
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
#aliens
#America
#angels #apocalypse
#angels #apocalypse
70 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 5:14pm
25th Sep 2024 5:14pm
Wine O ~AOL had a specific ring tone found this guy on MYspace wow tech is growing
into the unknown, I go
fiction and reality mixed together
Arapaho warriors and fallen angels
for some reason I've found reality is getting stranger
my mind bends and dimension hops
technology is just shifting gears
the stars in the heavens are sisters
they each sing a song
and are intimately connected by their songs
they each cover their children
some of them reside on the inside in their mother's star womb
while others are at war with each other on the surface of the planet
they have no knowledge of each...
fiction and reality mixed together
Arapaho warriors and fallen angels
for some reason I've found reality is getting stranger
my mind bends and dimension hops
technology is just shifting gears
the stars in the heavens are sisters
they each sing a song
and are intimately connected by their songs
they each cover their children
some of them reside on the inside in their mother's star womb
while others are at war with each other on the surface of the planet
they have no knowledge of each...
#aliens
#angels
84 reads
3 Comments
magichearts
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 1:59pm
17th Sep 2024 1:59pm
लिख-लिख कर मिटाता रहा नसीब वो
जान-जान कर
कोरे कागज़ की कहानी यूँ खुदा हो गयी !
जान-जान कर
कोरे कागज़ की कहानी यूँ खुदा हो गयी !
#aliens
#angels
#devil
#ghosts
#God
122 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 8:32pm
15th Sep 2024 8:32pm
Mind Altering Drugs
I saw today aliens wearing bad toupee's
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order antelope soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
they were having a foursome on the beach
I just watched
The waves were meh, so I just stared
One of the aliens was butt fucking the other alien,
came real fast and decided to go to the snack bar
I asked him where were they were from, he said, "Way past Uranus"!
I think he was kidding but then again, maybe he was insulting me
I saw him order antelope soup and a drink called yellow passion
Not sure what that was except,
when I ordered one, it tasted like piss
Actually it was piss!! ...
#aliens
#drugs
#fiction
#scifi
#funny
62 reads
11 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 2:43am
15th Sep 2024 2:43am
stars
inside is grievous I lull myself to sleep
entertaining ghosts and demons
thoughts of midnight's best
requested to be present
witnessing a star system I don't recognize
fearing release from my mortal tomb
when the door opens how many spirit children will be released with me
where are they going are some going to a different star?
are some going to a black hole for being destructive forces of nature?
where am I going? I just don't want my memories taken again
with only flashbacks I don't want to be a solitary creature again it was...
entertaining ghosts and demons
thoughts of midnight's best
requested to be present
witnessing a star system I don't recognize
fearing release from my mortal tomb
when the door opens how many spirit children will be released with me
where are they going are some going to a different star?
are some going to a black hole for being destructive forces of nature?
where am I going? I just don't want my memories taken again
with only flashbacks I don't want to be a solitary creature again it was...
#aliens
#shadows
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
78 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
The Last Upper
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
120 reads
11 Comments
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