Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Trome
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 4:28am
14th Dec 2024 4:28am
IM FEELING LIKE HÉRCULES
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
113 reads
4 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
The Harvest
It is said
There are People
Who are Like
Factory Mushrooms
Who Like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
That Attracts The Dijnns
Dressed
In the Flesh
With a Mask
That Pleases
Your Mind
There are People
Who are Like
Factory Mushrooms
Who Like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
That Attracts The Dijnns
Dressed
In the Flesh
With a Mask
That Pleases
Your Mind
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
69 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:03am
13th Dec 2024 7:03am
Life Friends
Is it not
When one passes
Those teenage year's
One's new friends
Could well Define
Who and what
You Really are
For the rest
Of your Life
When one passes
Those teenage year's
One's new friends
Could well Define
Who and what
You Really are
For the rest
Of your Life
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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Tia
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 7:18pm
12th Dec 2024 7:18pm
Better or worse
People think about others
That's just a fact
But they do it in two different ways
Some people compare themselves to their supposed superiors
Those who they believe are better than them
Others prefer to ignore that
And focus on those who are worse, inferior
Is it a cruel trick or fate that we all live this way?
Or is it simply the common flaw of humanity?
Perhaps comparison is simply our truth
That's just a fact
But they do it in two different ways
Some people compare themselves to their supposed superiors
Those who they believe are better than them
Others prefer to ignore that
And focus on those who are worse, inferior
Is it a cruel trick or fate that we all live this way?
Or is it simply the common flaw of humanity?
Perhaps comparison is simply our truth
#humankind
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
43 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
Espejo
Distracted by
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
#confessional
#FreeVerse
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
#TruthOfLife
74 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
Sexual Oxygen
I watch you
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
#lover
#risk
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
157 reads
31 Comments
drone
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:56am
9th Dec 2024 8:56am
Amazing
Amazing opportunities
When one's imagination
Fly's
When intuition
Shows you the way
Strange things
Begin to happen
When you Train
Your Brain
When one's imagination
Fly's
When intuition
Shows you the way
Strange things
Begin to happen
When you Train
Your Brain
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
57 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
IT Stays On
Morning grey
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
77 reads
2 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 5:53pm
8th Dec 2024 5:53pm
Not a rant, not sure really just things (not a poem)
Why do people believe in this world? Why is it not ok to question beliefs. Why is it ok that the things people believe can be broadcast all over everthing and left as little asides but I'm not allowed to question that? Why is it ok to say you're going to hell or I'll pray for your soul to an non believer but not be allowed to tell them why their god doesn't exist? I understand might see it as sn attack on them but ultimately the same person is still lying to themselves in both scenarios. Obviously you can see it from either or perspective and think that too. I might across like I am attacking...
#TruthOfLife
96 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
From out of darkness
Some say that we all know what is darkness and when it's time. ⌚ As a spiritual entity of another place. 🙏 BUT yet there are those who believe in life after death. ☠️ But yet the elders say it doesn't have to be that way, because your thoughts and spirit, will continue to live on in the after realms, in a different kind of mentally stimulation in a world. 🌍 Far away in the light.🕯️For sure out of the darkness of night, it can be a place with it's own shadows. Roaming free like angles of heaven in a fight between the devil's in human skin....
#faith
#morality
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
57 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:52pm
6th Dec 2024 3:52pm
Ultimately Nullified
All is ruination supreme
and life a bitter joke
in desolation nightmare scream
on universal folk...
as if in horror cinema
whose cast must suffer stunts
where matter force in minima
means bearing real brunts.
Thus for sure reality sucks;
a clock just winding down
away from youth and thrilling fucks
like verbs reduced to noun.
And so to death we modify,
even during Yule,
regifting fodder when we die;
with ourselves as gruel.
and life a bitter joke
in desolation nightmare scream
on universal folk...
as if in horror cinema
whose cast must suffer stunts
where matter force in minima
means bearing real brunts.
Thus for sure reality sucks;
a clock just winding down
away from youth and thrilling fucks
like verbs reduced to noun.
And so to death we modify,
even during Yule,
regifting fodder when we die;
with ourselves as gruel.
#TruthOfLife
#universe
136 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
You will never know
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ they say that we will never know, what is waiting for us that it could change the very outcome, of what is expected that we found it in another person, that happens in time. For sure we can talk about what we know that we want and need, 🤔 to help us navigate through the process, of the ups, Still and yet there will be downs. For sure we will try to create a vision of what we need and want, 🤨 but yet find ourselves involved in a entanglement.🤨 Trying to figure out how did we get here and now. 😞 YET there is...
#faith
#fate
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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