Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 11:59pm
25th Feb 2025 11:59pm
Just-World Fallacy
Think no winning greatness a phenotype
but hell itself in repeat mutation
helpful to demagoguery and hype
yet not a guarantee of elation;
just genes at the mercy of cosmic rays
about which Budda could not give a shit
since he has long ago lived out his days
with us remaining to preserve his wit,
as dead as any philosopher's stone
and only resurrected when we read,
assuming that we don't leave it alone,
in our animal haze of need and greed
when abandoning justice for karma...
in warped veracity cushioned by pharma.
but hell itself in repeat mutation
helpful to demagoguery and hype
yet not a guarantee of elation;
just genes at the mercy of cosmic rays
about which Budda could not give a shit
since he has long ago lived out his days
with us remaining to preserve his wit,
as dead as any philosopher's stone
and only resurrected when we read,
assuming that we don't leave it alone,
in our animal haze of need and greed
when abandoning justice for karma...
in warped veracity cushioned by pharma.
#TruthOfLife
204 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 11:52pm
25th Feb 2025 11:52pm
Observational
I saw you scheming.
Double teaming.
Your friends are stupid.
For trying to beat me.
I saw them lying.
While you think you're hiding.
Ill always shut her out.
I have no doubts.
You can block me.
But you can't stop me.
I know you're scheming.
Double teaming.
Double teaming.
Your friends are stupid.
For trying to beat me.
I saw them lying.
While you think you're hiding.
Ill always shut her out.
I have no doubts.
You can block me.
But you can't stop me.
I know you're scheming.
Double teaming.
#funny
#TruthOfLife
109 reads
5 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 10:16pm
25th Feb 2025 10:16pm
WTF
How and Why
can something like that happen
can't be
but truth is stranger then fiction
it happened
say it ain't so
but it is so...
Here
Today
Now
WTF...
can something like that happen
can't be
but truth is stranger then fiction
it happened
say it ain't so
but it is so...
Here
Today
Now
WTF...
#TruthOfLife
107 reads
6 Comments
drivelicious13
alon aLion
alon aLion
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 3:16pm
25th Feb 2025 3:16pm
The Lord`s Prayer (flow re-mix)
One Order Please
of numbed out binge
breathe in deep
resin singed
Shambling Sloppy
Starve on Fringe
Humiliate
make parents cringe
snort and spit
off the grid
spare precious pits
from chemist wits
reek like shit
totally lit
concrete bed
split my head
good `ol Medieval
blood-let
drenched in red
am I better yet?
Rejoice in ALL
I aim yet miss
damage brain ...
of numbed out binge
breathe in deep
resin singed
Shambling Sloppy
Starve on Fringe
Humiliate
make parents cringe
snort and spit
off the grid
spare precious pits
from chemist wits
reek like shit
totally lit
concrete bed
split my head
good `ol Medieval
blood-let
drenched in red
am I better yet?
Rejoice in ALL
I aim yet miss
damage brain ...
#LifeStruggles
#religion
#TruthOfLife
70 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 1:46am
25th Feb 2025 1:46am
just laugh in his face
I’m trying desperately not to write
about all the bollocks trump
has recently said, but to hear that kier starmer
wants to make a deal with him,
prime minister, you should just laugh
in his face, you should just laugh in his face ..
about all the bollocks trump
has recently said, but to hear that kier starmer
wants to make a deal with him,
prime minister, you should just laugh
in his face, you should just laugh in his face ..
#TruthOfLife
74 reads
4 Comments
drone
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 9:01am
24th Feb 2025 9:01am
How They Effect
If one cannot judge
Things
By how they
Effect things
Then
The only things
One can judge
Are opinions
Based on Theory's
Dressed by experts
As Fact
Things
By how they
Effect things
Then
The only things
One can judge
Are opinions
Based on Theory's
Dressed by experts
As Fact
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
92 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
Love to a Gunfight
"We're bringing love to a gunfight."
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
#conflict
#love
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
384 reads
25 Comments
drone
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 12:50pm
21st Feb 2025 12:50pm
Speak
When one
Speaks
One creates
Vibrational Word's
But When one
Speaks
From your Heart
One creates Waves
That carries
The vibrations
Into the field
That morphs
Into what
We sometimes find
Hard to Believe
Speaks
One creates
Vibrational Word's
But When one
Speaks
From your Heart
One creates Waves
That carries
The vibrations
Into the field
That morphs
Into what
We sometimes find
Hard to Believe
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
2 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 5:28am
21st Feb 2025 5:28am
IM VERY BUSY
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
132 reads
6 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 6:01pm
20th Feb 2025 6:01pm
Fixed
Beware your saviours.
But why bother learning now?
Indulge yourselves some dignity, best give up and lie down.
It's what you wanted.
Don't dare ask why or how.
Built empires off your backs you simply furnished them a crown.
One fix the other.
And all you get is broke.
Short-changing you maintains their float so in their debt you drown.
But why bother learning now?
Indulge yourselves some dignity, best give up and lie down.
It's what you wanted.
Don't dare ask why or how.
Built empires off your backs you simply furnished them a crown.
One fix the other.
And all you get is broke.
Short-changing you maintains their float so in their debt you drown.
#TruthOfLife
145 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
19th Feb 2025 11:11am
I feel fine
Take a trip through my magic ocean
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
People always feel real fine
Suddenly the devil said
You may have committed a crime
How do you feel?
I feel fine
Handed down the secret
Mistakes are made, voices are silent
Perfection is the key
A lesson not taught by violence
Your tears have dried through denial
Let's move on hidden sun
Proclamation, assassination
My work here is always done
Create a pathway to salvation
Never once has my trip been exonerated
Death is a chance to recycle
Mind body...
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
112 reads
10 Comments
drone
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 9:24am
19th Feb 2025 9:24am
Parasick Mind Virus
Why do you find it
So fucking Hard
To Believe it's True
Why Think about it
When it's all over the net
Even Gp chat wikapedia Google
And most podcasts
All say it's True
But No
You have to Think about it
What can I say
When it's Something
That could well Affect us All
I drag out my Commonsense
Logical Reasoning
Kicking and Screaming
And make them
Do some work
Its a Real Bitch sometimes
But for people like you
Its easy to believe
You Have
What i...
So fucking Hard
To Believe it's True
Why Think about it
When it's all over the net
Even Gp chat wikapedia Google
And most podcasts
All say it's True
But No
You have to Think about it
What can I say
When it's Something
That could well Affect us All
I drag out my Commonsense
Logical Reasoning
Kicking and Screaming
And make them
Do some work
Its a Real Bitch sometimes
But for people like you
Its easy to believe
You Have
What i...
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
83 reads
0 Comments
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