Halloween by Top Critiquers Poems
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halloween by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
trick or treat life like it's real
anyone really want to do all
that squishy, disneyfied commercialised shit about
all hallows eve this year I mean when so much has died ..
that squishy, disneyfied commercialised shit about
all hallows eve this year I mean when so much has died ..
#Halloween
#pandemic
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Sweet Surgery (Halloween Night of the Dark Joy)
Unknown too many are true dark creators of sweets across the Earth
Sugar scientist who have sold their soul for their delicious work,
“The candies, the chocolates, the cookies and cakes
They are the demonic secret influencers of candy CEO’s and those who love to bake,
““Nonetheless, their greatest joy is not making enjoyable sweets
But the transformation of those into ravaging sugar freaks,
“Let lose upon the world to satisfy their need
Turned into glucose vampires, because the sugar in the blood is how they feed,
...
Sugar scientist who have sold their soul for their delicious work,
“The candies, the chocolates, the cookies and cakes
They are the demonic secret influencers of candy CEO’s and those who love to bake,
““Nonetheless, their greatest joy is not making enjoyable sweets
But the transformation of those into ravaging sugar freaks,
“Let lose upon the world to satisfy their need
Turned into glucose vampires, because the sugar in the blood is how they feed,
...
#dark
#Halloween
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2 Comments
Haunted Night - for Halloween
Haunted Night
Moonlight sifted through the pines
making ghostly shadows in the night forest.
The sound of chanting floated down
from the monastery on the hilltop.
I stood in my tattered nightgown
considering where I was to sleep this night.
Following the stream, as it danced and shimmed
across egg-shaped rocks I found its source.
The oval pool reflected the moonlight
in rippled circle patterns
as the night breeze blew cold and damp.
I heard a rustling in the bushes
and felt cold fear course down my spine. ...
Moonlight sifted through the pines
making ghostly shadows in the night forest.
The sound of chanting floated down
from the monastery on the hilltop.
I stood in my tattered nightgown
considering where I was to sleep this night.
Following the stream, as it danced and shimmed
across egg-shaped rocks I found its source.
The oval pool reflected the moonlight
in rippled circle patterns
as the night breeze blew cold and damp.
I heard a rustling in the bushes
and felt cold fear course down my spine. ...
#Halloween
#vampires
#historical #escape
#historical #escape
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3 Comments
Flashing Bunny Ears
the end of a long, long school week
i get to go home and...
oops! no i don't
Trunk or Treat tonight
decorated cars
families slowly driving through
candy coming at them from all angles
last year
when i taught 6th grade
we were studying mythology
i was Medusa
i'd found a woven plastic headband
threaded the tails of rubber snakes through it
the snakes stuck out in all directions
everyone loved it
this year?
fuck costumes
fuck everything
fuck TJ twerking his fat ass in class
i'm...
i get to go home and...
oops! no i don't
Trunk or Treat tonight
decorated cars
families slowly driving through
candy coming at them from all angles
last year
when i taught 6th grade
we were studying mythology
i was Medusa
i'd found a woven plastic headband
threaded the tails of rubber snakes through it
the snakes stuck out in all directions
everyone loved it
this year?
fuck costumes
fuck everything
fuck TJ twerking his fat ass in class
i'm...
#children
#LifeStruggles
#Halloween
236 reads
9 Comments
Spooky with a Booty
That time of year
When spooky can be naughty.
The only fright
losing my sight.
Fear, anxiety, horror, spine-chilling, nightmares
Not the reaction from
Lace, fishnets, push-up, low-cut, spandex and lipstick
Wow! look at that derriere!
That booty so nice
Oh, those lanterns
Memory for a jack
Pondering do they taste
like pumpkin spice.
What is spooky,
can the tiniest material
contain that firm booty
She without a care
sipping Halloween cocktails
I’m trying not to stare
...
When spooky can be naughty.
The only fright
losing my sight.
Fear, anxiety, horror, spine-chilling, nightmares
Not the reaction from
Lace, fishnets, push-up, low-cut, spandex and lipstick
Wow! look at that derriere!
That booty so nice
Oh, those lanterns
Memory for a jack
Pondering do they taste
like pumpkin spice.
What is spooky,
can the tiniest material
contain that firm booty
She without a care
sipping Halloween cocktails
I’m trying not to stare
...
#lust
#Halloween
#funny #luck
#funny #luck
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13 Comments
The Spoken Spell
In whispered words, a cry takes flight,
“Avra ke-davra, I speak to ignite.”
Voices woven, reality they weave,
On kosher parchment, our truths we believe.
Kaptsiel, Malakhel, guide my way,
As you did for Abraham in the light of day,
Unmask the thief, draw near, behold,
Kematin’s secret in the tales of old.
Circle the suspects with the rooster's grace,
Let it leap upon truth in this sacred space.
For small and big burns, a spell we invoke,
Ancient names whispered, our healing cloak.
Agrifuk,...
“Avra ke-davra, I speak to ignite.”
Voices woven, reality they weave,
On kosher parchment, our truths we believe.
Kaptsiel, Malakhel, guide my way,
As you did for Abraham in the light of day,
Unmask the thief, draw near, behold,
Kematin’s secret in the tales of old.
Circle the suspects with the rooster's grace,
Let it leap upon truth in this sacred space.
For small and big burns, a spell we invoke,
Ancient names whispered, our healing cloak.
Agrifuk,...
#curse
#Halloween
#magic
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Witch
I think that I'd have been happy
if I'd been born a witch.
Without any toes but still able
to dance, and ride above
the steeples of
this green Jerusalem's churches.
To creep in through the chimney pots,
to make brews in the dark,
to draw a set of lots
on each Samhain
to see whose cattle dies this night.
A mark impervious to pain
spread out inside one arm, a dark wine stain
that says I'm joined
in what God leaves as undiscerned,
the skittering, the sins conjoined.
if I'd been born a witch.
Without any toes but still able
to dance, and ride above
the steeples of
this green Jerusalem's churches.
To creep in through the chimney pots,
to make brews in the dark,
to draw a set of lots
on each Samhain
to see whose cattle dies this night.
A mark impervious to pain
spread out inside one arm, a dark wine stain
that says I'm joined
in what God leaves as undiscerned,
the skittering, the sins conjoined.
#Halloween
#historical
#pagan #witches
#pagan #witches
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2 Comments
The old graveyard
#Halloween
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The Ghost Trapped in Time
xghost
#love
#Halloween
#LifeCycle
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Halloween
Hear the Spectres
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
#Halloween
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Draculina
she was crying with a gun in her mouth
the smell of her families blood around
I asked “who did this?”
as tears ran down her face
her silence disturbed me
still I extended my hand, then told her
“why die when you could live forever?”
she was a bit on the wild side
I shrugged it off as her being young
though her actions were bothersome
ripping kids heads off
running after pregnant women
tearing the fetus from the belly
I’m a monster, but it still made me sick
I might be a murderer
but more of the gentle...
the smell of her families blood around
I asked “who did this?”
as tears ran down her face
her silence disturbed me
still I extended my hand, then told her
“why die when you could live forever?”
she was a bit on the wild side
I shrugged it off as her being young
though her actions were bothersome
ripping kids heads off
running after pregnant women
tearing the fetus from the belly
I’m a monster, but it still made me sick
I might be a murderer
but more of the gentle...
#dark
#Halloween
#vampires
110 reads
3 Comments
Slay Me!
(LibraSoul96/Billy Snagg)
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
#love
#lust
#vampires
#passion
#Halloween
845 reads
34 Comments
DU Poetry : Halloween by Top Critiquers Poems