Halloween Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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halloween seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
6th Nov 2022 00:00am
6th Nov 2022 00:00am
Pictures of a Devil
#Halloween
#sexy
174 reads
4 Comments
Thepunkpoet
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2022 10:19am
3rd Nov 2022 10:19am
Orange you glad it's Halloween
Orange, are you glad it's Halloween?"
Tawny sky was falling down in sheets of clay
Autumn crackling beneath Auburn sunrays
Pomelo radiance kissing monarch wings
Burnt sienna moon good harvest brings
Taste of hickory embers hang the tongue
Recall festivities of when we were young
Anticipation for the cornucopia of sweets
Every Hallow's Eve the tradition repeats
Jack-o-lanterns glowing tangerine by dusk
Appetite of lumberjacks belly aches a must
An array of candies appease the tooth fairy
An...
Tawny sky was falling down in sheets of clay
Autumn crackling beneath Auburn sunrays
Pomelo radiance kissing monarch wings
Burnt sienna moon good harvest brings
Taste of hickory embers hang the tongue
Recall festivities of when we were young
Anticipation for the cornucopia of sweets
Every Hallow's Eve the tradition repeats
Jack-o-lanterns glowing tangerine by dusk
Appetite of lumberjacks belly aches a must
An array of candies appease the tooth fairy
An...
#fall
#Halloween
125 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Nov 2022 11:48am
1st Nov 2022 11:48am
About This Hot Blonde He Met
My best friend told me
about this hot blonde he met
one Halloween night
at a party and how good
she looked in her own costume.
about this hot blonde he met
one Halloween night
at a party and how good
she looked in her own costume.
#friendship
#Halloween
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
121 reads
0 Comments
Mikey
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 11:42pm
31st Oct 2022 11:42pm
House on the Corner
A crooked penny
a cracked plate
a pet missing
a broken gate
open door swinging,
eager eyes wait.
a cracked plate
a pet missing
a broken gate
open door swinging,
eager eyes wait.
#dark
#shadows
#Halloween #rhyming
#Halloween #rhyming
131 reads
1 Comment
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 11:30pm
31st Oct 2022 11:30pm
The Baby on the Doorstep
The trick-or-treater on the left
looks just as cleft
as Adam’s rib,
the pale bib
spotted with gore.
Opening to him the door
I wonder what weird impetus
might lay behind the costume choice,
and feeling bold I ask him thus.
Across the romper suit he wears
are little plastic lice,
a torn-off oaken latticework
suspended from an arm.
‘I am the boy whose house this was,
and is’, he says with sheer authority.
‘Look in the basement and you’ll see
the rest of my cradle.’
looks just as cleft
as Adam’s rib,
the pale bib
spotted with gore.
Opening to him the door
I wonder what weird impetus
might lay behind the costume choice,
and feeling bold I ask him thus.
Across the romper suit he wears
are little plastic lice,
a torn-off oaken latticework
suspended from an arm.
‘I am the boy whose house this was,
and is’, he says with sheer authority.
‘Look in the basement and you’ll see
the rest of my cradle.’
#Halloween
153 reads
0 Comments
ShaunCronick100
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 8:55pm
31st Oct 2022 8:55pm
It Knows What Scares You
It dwells in me,
This endless hate.
No human morals,
My mind does debate.
My identity hidden,
Until Halloween night.
Clues I will drop,
With cunning delight.
But beware my lies,
Strewn among truth.
Then scream my name,
From what you sleuth.
I'll make half-promises,
That I might keep.
I'll reveal my name,
Before your final sleep.
At the very end,
It will be presented.
Then all are damned,
And slowly tormented.
I sometimes sleep,
But not for long.
When I...
This endless hate.
No human morals,
My mind does debate.
My identity hidden,
Until Halloween night.
Clues I will drop,
With cunning delight.
But beware my lies,
Strewn among truth.
Then scream my name,
From what you sleuth.
I'll make half-promises,
That I might keep.
I'll reveal my name,
Before your final sleep.
At the very end,
It will be presented.
Then all are damned,
And slowly tormented.
I sometimes sleep,
But not for long.
When I...
#dark
#evil
#Halloween
#mystery
#horror
280 reads
4 Comments
ShaunCronick100
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 8:23pm
31st Oct 2022 8:23pm
Season Of The Witch
From the dawn of time she came,
Moving malevolently through the centuries.
No-one ever knowing she was among us,
Until now...
Sorceress!
For I'm the man, the soul she let slip away,
To tell of her dark legend to all this day.
To abandon virtues for they are gone for good,
All splintered and consumed like mere firewood.
Beware of her and of her dark witchery,
Her sweet of talk seeded with trickery.
Sharpness of tongue casts a necromanced spell,
This devil's daughter from the bowels of hell.
...
Moving malevolently through the centuries.
No-one ever knowing she was among us,
Until now...
Sorceress!
For I'm the man, the soul she let slip away,
To tell of her dark legend to all this day.
To abandon virtues for they are gone for good,
All splintered and consumed like mere firewood.
Beware of her and of her dark witchery,
Her sweet of talk seeded with trickery.
Sharpness of tongue casts a necromanced spell,
This devil's daughter from the bowels of hell.
...
#dark
#Halloween
#pagan
#witches
#horror
239 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 8:17pm
31st Oct 2022 8:17pm
Halloweeners
He went to costume party for Halloween
Dressed like Disco Stu to dance and be seen
When over by the drinks and food he saw the girl for his dreams
She was dressed as a sexy ghoul
Making all the guys at the party drool
While she was stuffing her face with some tasty franks and beans
He boogied to the music down her way
Grooving to the beat with swag to prey
She was a cutie with a booty and tonight he was going to take a chance
Then he saw she had some ginormous bewbs
While the dudes there just looked...
Dressed like Disco Stu to dance and be seen
When over by the drinks and food he saw the girl for his dreams
She was dressed as a sexy ghoul
Making all the guys at the party drool
While she was stuffing her face with some tasty franks and beans
He boogied to the music down her way
Grooving to the beat with swag to prey
She was a cutie with a booty and tonight he was going to take a chance
Then he saw she had some ginormous bewbs
While the dudes there just looked...
#Halloween
#scary
#funny
247 reads
10 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 6:00pm
31st Oct 2022 6:00pm
Two Werewolves. Loving causes wild pain.
You asked me not to leave you alone,
And looked at the full moon with angry eyes.
I was just silent - I didn’t know what to say.
We shouldn't be together, I just knew that.
I repeated again that we can not be together,
Explained many times that we are different.
But you didn't want to understand what I meant.
I boldly cut at the root of all my dreams ...
You stood under the moon, turning away from me,
And lovingly said something through my tears.
I will never forget that moment of destruction,
That moment of our silent...
And looked at the full moon with angry eyes.
I was just silent - I didn’t know what to say.
We shouldn't be together, I just knew that.
I repeated again that we can not be together,
Explained many times that we are different.
But you didn't want to understand what I meant.
I boldly cut at the root of all my dreams ...
You stood under the moon, turning away from me,
And lovingly said something through my tears.
I will never forget that moment of destruction,
That moment of our silent...
#love
#moon
#Halloween
#suffering
#werewolves
447 reads
75 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 9:24am
31st Oct 2022 9:24am
Halloween visitors
Halloween visitors
Tonight it is Halloween the veil between the worlds are thin, the spirits of our ancestors are so close, waiting to come right in
Some will be welcomed, they bring loving memories of old, some are mischievous they're here to be bad and bold
Some come to let you know they watch over you though they're gone, but some are plain evil, whose badness carries on
They make noises or move things to let you know they're there, to them if it scares you, they don't really care
Others give you a feeling of security, you still...
Tonight it is Halloween the veil between the worlds are thin, the spirits of our ancestors are so close, waiting to come right in
Some will be welcomed, they bring loving memories of old, some are mischievous they're here to be bad and bold
Some come to let you know they watch over you though they're gone, but some are plain evil, whose badness carries on
They make noises or move things to let you know they're there, to them if it scares you, they don't really care
Others give you a feeling of security, you still...
#Halloween
205 reads
6 Comments
ShaunCronick100
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 8:32am
31st Oct 2022 8:32am
Tales From The Crypt
Dark greetings bold stranger I welcome you,
Now ready one's heart for what's on view.
Terrifying tales aplenty this Halloween Night,
Painted black and red with no end in sight.
Be warned they're not for any faint hearted,
For if unprepared you'll join many departed.
Tales of torment and fear with stories of woe,
Now lets kick off my Halloween horror show...
Jack The Ripper Returns
Beneath the streets of London,
There sleeps a nasty surprise.
Waiting patiently in the sewers,
For many their hidden demise.
...
Now ready one's heart for what's on view.
Terrifying tales aplenty this Halloween Night,
Painted black and red with no end in sight.
Be warned they're not for any faint hearted,
For if unprepared you'll join many departed.
Tales of torment and fear with stories of woe,
Now lets kick off my Halloween horror show...
Jack The Ripper Returns
Beneath the streets of London,
There sleeps a nasty surprise.
Waiting patiently in the sewers,
For many their hidden demise.
...
#dark
#evil
#Halloween
#nightmares
#horror
347 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 00:02am
31st Oct 2022 00:02am
Spooky
#lust
#dreams
#Halloween #sexy
#Halloween #sexy
197 reads
4 Comments
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