Halloween by Top Critiquers Poems
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halloween by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 8:39pm
13th Mar 2024 8:39pm
Bad Idea
In the early 2000's a man by the name of Wilbur Gentry had a job scaring people at a haunted house.
He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck.
Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by.
Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself.
When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree.
The branch whipped back and choked him to death...
He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck.
Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by.
Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself.
When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree.
The branch whipped back and choked him to death...
#dark
#death
#Halloween
#fiction
#funny
68 reads
4 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
29th Oct 2020 11:48am
29th Oct 2020 11:48am
Said The Vampire To The Ghost
Halloween is coming
The day is approaching fast
To bring out all the monsters
Donning some very scary masks
The ghosts they will be flying
Some high up in the sky
To watch the ghouls and goblins
Fight late into the night
Don't go down without a fight
Said the Vampire to the ghost
I'm the one most menacing
The thing mortals fear the most
The day is approaching fast
To bring out all the monsters
Donning some very scary masks
The ghosts they will be flying
Some high up in the sky
To watch the ghouls and goblins
Fight late into the night
Don't go down without a fight
Said the Vampire to the ghost
I'm the one most menacing
The thing mortals fear the most
#Halloween
#vampires
#ghosts
357 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2023 10:56pm
23rd Sep 2023 10:56pm
forevermore
a flash of teeth and then a scowl
blood burning to cast a spell
devious need give of yourself
inside the dark glower for power unbecoming a vampire
in my dark tower a witch
conjuring for lust's sake
in my darkest hours brew a love potions so great
toil and boil the bones till the cauldron bubbles
tonight shall be the night, the man comes round
underneath a blackened sky
desire will spark an odd fascination
fangs bared, blood curdles
in love he will fall for always
a pink passion for his ardor
some sugar...
blood burning to cast a spell
devious need give of yourself
inside the dark glower for power unbecoming a vampire
in my dark tower a witch
conjuring for lust's sake
in my darkest hours brew a love potions so great
toil and boil the bones till the cauldron bubbles
tonight shall be the night, the man comes round
underneath a blackened sky
desire will spark an odd fascination
fangs bared, blood curdles
in love he will fall for always
a pink passion for his ardor
some sugar...
#lust
#Halloween
#vampires
114 reads
0 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
31st Oct 2023 9:47pm
31st Oct 2023 9:47pm
sometimes tricks are treats
Daddy thoroughly enjoyed Halloween
seeing all the little kids in their costumes
I think it appealed to him
being something other than himself
one year a group of high school seniors showed up at the door
in their ghouls, pirates & zombie gore
politely waiting for small ones to leave
they stepped up & in unison
yelled "trick or treat!"
Daddy eyed them all with amusement
then quietly said "trick"
not at all expecting what happened next
half a dozen teens...from the gymnastics team
launched into the...
seeing all the little kids in their costumes
I think it appealed to him
being something other than himself
one year a group of high school seniors showed up at the door
in their ghouls, pirates & zombie gore
politely waiting for small ones to leave
they stepped up & in unison
yelled "trick or treat!"
Daddy eyed them all with amusement
then quietly said "trick"
not at all expecting what happened next
half a dozen teens...from the gymnastics team
launched into the...
#father
#Halloween
#gratitude
73 reads
8 Comments
deadwolf
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 1:28pm
11th Feb 2024 1:28pm
Even death falls in love;
``~~~…~~~```
Even death falls in love
though its not very nice
it follows, it stalks it traces your face
it is obsessed, forlorn, peccant
It wants to take you down
to a place made for them,
It is innocently invited in
by what is taken in
what is seen, what is heard, what is tasted what is felt
what is played, what is said,
even ones own thoughts betray unto death,
Death loves the scent
winds blow it heavy
onto the darken border lines
of sorrow ash and tears
It reeks of pleasant odor unto it
No, I will never...
Even death falls in love
though its not very nice
it follows, it stalks it traces your face
it is obsessed, forlorn, peccant
It wants to take you down
to a place made for them,
It is innocently invited in
by what is taken in
what is seen, what is heard, what is tasted what is felt
what is played, what is said,
even ones own thoughts betray unto death,
Death loves the scent
winds blow it heavy
onto the darken border lines
of sorrow ash and tears
It reeks of pleasant odor unto it
No, I will never...
#gothic
#Halloween
143 reads
3 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
13th Oct 2013 2:57pm
13th Oct 2013 2:57pm
Halloween
Hear the Spectres
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
#Halloween
1037 reads
8 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
21st Oct 2021 4:45am
21st Oct 2021 4:45am
Dracula Celebrity Blood
Dracula wants to attack
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
#Halloween
#music
#funny
#vampires
#sexy
370 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2022 6:45pm
22nd Oct 2022 6:45pm
Monster Ball
Ghost pussy promised on the down low, way down low
Trying to draw a werewolf in but I don't want to fucking know
Promised a gala where there would be smashing and gnashing
Fucking Frankenstien is on the dance floor and he's steady monster mashing
Fucking serial killers in this scenario are just fucking freaks
The zombies wanted brains but they're starting with the butt cheeks
Motherfucking Halloween is done lay your head back and take a deep breath
Hahaha exhale the oxygen until the smell of sulfur is the only thing left
You've seen all of...
Trying to draw a werewolf in but I don't want to fucking know
Promised a gala where there would be smashing and gnashing
Fucking Frankenstien is on the dance floor and he's steady monster mashing
Fucking serial killers in this scenario are just fucking freaks
The zombies wanted brains but they're starting with the butt cheeks
Motherfucking Halloween is done lay your head back and take a deep breath
Hahaha exhale the oxygen until the smell of sulfur is the only thing left
You've seen all of...
#Halloween
#monsters
#rhyming
272 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
31st Oct 2023 12:59pm
31st Oct 2023 12:59pm
Luna Orionid
Across the zenith she progressed
with proud Orion just below
and in the full sky angel glow
slowly turning forever west,
through straying whiffs of vapored air,
imperceptibly suspended
in a matrix, halo splendid,
where only proper spirits dare
to slow the hunter's meteors...
blazing through diaphanous gold
and quenched in stratospheric cold,
like honey on plasmatic smores!
Which all the gods are sure to eat
since constellations need no meat:)
with proud Orion just below
and in the full sky angel glow
slowly turning forever west,
through straying whiffs of vapored air,
imperceptibly suspended
in a matrix, halo splendid,
where only proper spirits dare
to slow the hunter's meteors...
blazing through diaphanous gold
and quenched in stratospheric cold,
like honey on plasmatic smores!
Which all the gods are sure to eat
since constellations need no meat:)
#moon
#fall
#night #Halloween
#night #Halloween
124 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
18th Oct 2023 6:32am
18th Oct 2023 6:32am
Slayer
#dark
#evil
#Halloween #scary
#Halloween #scary
107 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Oct 2023 1:03am
30th Oct 2023 1:03am
Luna
Luna Wolf In London (Loosely Based On The Movie)
London, England
1927
Full Moon
This Is A News Break
A Luna Wolf has been spotted in the London area do not attempt to overtake
Please do not approach
This wolf is considered extremely dangerous when encroached
The nerve of those peasants calling me a… a…wolf on the prowl.. wow
Oo… those humans and misperceptions for me, I live for the now
My cutie paws...
London, England
1927
Full Moon
This Is A News Break
A Luna Wolf has been spotted in the London area do not attempt to overtake
Please do not approach
This wolf is considered extremely dangerous when encroached
The nerve of those peasants calling me a… a…wolf on the prowl.. wow
Oo… those humans and misperceptions for me, I live for the now
My cutie paws...
#Halloween
#sensual
#werewolves #seductive
#werewolves #seductive
286 reads
adagio
Poem Published
20th Jun 2022 00:22am
20th Jun 2022 00:22am
Doodah! Line Six
#Easter
#Halloween
#MothersDay #cars
#MothersDay #cars
253 reads
0 Comments
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