Halloween by Top Critiquers Poems
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halloween by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Dumb Move
In the early 2000's a man by the name of Wilbur Gentry had a job scaring people at a haunted house. He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck. Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by. Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself. When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree. The branch whipped back and choked him to death anyway.
#dark
#fiction
#funny
#Halloween
#ignorance
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11 Comments
Doodah! Line Six
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#Easter
#Halloween
#MothersDay #cars
#MothersDay #cars
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0 Comments
forevermore
a flash of teeth and then a scowl
blood burning to cast a spell
devious need give of yourself
inside the dark glower for power unbecoming a vampire
in my dark tower a witch
conjuring for lust's sake
in my darkest hours brew a love potions so great
toil and boil the bones till the cauldron bubbles
tonight shall be the night, the man comes round
underneath a blackened sky
desire will spark an odd fascination
fangs bared, blood curdles
in love he will fall for always
a pink passion for his ardor
some sugar...
blood burning to cast a spell
devious need give of yourself
inside the dark glower for power unbecoming a vampire
in my dark tower a witch
conjuring for lust's sake
in my darkest hours brew a love potions so great
toil and boil the bones till the cauldron bubbles
tonight shall be the night, the man comes round
underneath a blackened sky
desire will spark an odd fascination
fangs bared, blood curdles
in love he will fall for always
a pink passion for his ardor
some sugar...
#lust
#Halloween
#vampires
142 reads
0 Comments
Luna
Luna Wolf In London (Loosely Based On The Movie)
London, England
1927
Full Moon
This Is A News Break
A Luna Wolf has been spotted in the London area do not attempt to overtake
Please do not approach
This wolf is considered extremely dangerous when encroached
The nerve of those peasants calling me a… a…wolf on the prowl.. wow
Oo… those humans and misperceptions for me, I live for the now
My cutie paws...
London, England
1927
Full Moon
This Is A News Break
A Luna Wolf has been spotted in the London area do not attempt to overtake
Please do not approach
This wolf is considered extremely dangerous when encroached
The nerve of those peasants calling me a… a…wolf on the prowl.. wow
Oo… those humans and misperceptions for me, I live for the now
My cutie paws...
#Halloween
#sensual
#werewolves #seductive
#werewolves #seductive
332 reads
Monster Ball
Ghost pussy promised on the down low, way down low
Trying to draw a werewolf in but I don't want to fucking know
Promised a gala where there would be smashing and gnashing
Fucking Frankenstien is on the dance floor and he's steady monster mashing
Fucking serial killers in this scenario are just fucking freaks
The zombies wanted brains but they're starting with the butt cheeks
Motherfucking Halloween is done lay your head back and take a deep breath
Hahaha exhale the oxygen until the smell of sulfur is the only thing left
You've seen all of...
Trying to draw a werewolf in but I don't want to fucking know
Promised a gala where there would be smashing and gnashing
Fucking Frankenstien is on the dance floor and he's steady monster mashing
Fucking serial killers in this scenario are just fucking freaks
The zombies wanted brains but they're starting with the butt cheeks
Motherfucking Halloween is done lay your head back and take a deep breath
Hahaha exhale the oxygen until the smell of sulfur is the only thing left
You've seen all of...
#Halloween
#monsters
#rhyming
300 reads
2 Comments
Slayer
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#dark
#evil
#Halloween #scary
#Halloween #scary
131 reads
2 Comments
Dracula Celebrity Blood
Dracula wants to attack
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
Taylor Swift but he
couldn't because she
had Bad Blood that
he couldn't fanthom
So he went after
Katy Perry's blood
which tasted like
Cherry Kool-aid
Then he went after
Ariana Grande's Blood
which tasted like
Blake Shelton's
Whiskey drink then
he went after
Kelly Clarkson's Blood
which tasted like
John Legend
#Halloween
#music
#funny
#vampires
#sexy
405 reads
2 Comments
Halloween 2023
Untimely in the coming
singing in the eternal dark yearning
sinister culted thoughts peak
then wane on a lunar afterthought
Bloodied moon with no taste for the tide
whether it rise and fall again
but still, it mesmerizes the waters
Sending vibrations, it pulls
slowly the waters come in and out
It makes no comment on the maddening way
tortured souls reeking havoc in the pale light
flicker a soul, then unfurl temptation
and for a moment the world turns crimson
Unhinged in the now
tomorrow the glow will have no...
singing in the eternal dark yearning
sinister culted thoughts peak
then wane on a lunar afterthought
Bloodied moon with no taste for the tide
whether it rise and fall again
but still, it mesmerizes the waters
Sending vibrations, it pulls
slowly the waters come in and out
It makes no comment on the maddening way
tortured souls reeking havoc in the pale light
flicker a soul, then unfurl temptation
and for a moment the world turns crimson
Unhinged in the now
tomorrow the glow will have no...
#dark
#Halloween
#vampires
135 reads
2 Comments
The Trick of Pumpkin Manor
Grinning, Mr. Saint James rises from his chair and walks over
to the wooden doors.
Standing in front of them, he opens them both at the same
time with a flourish and stands back.
As the three boys move closer, they see an old piece of paper
filled with printed words, floating inside an infinite looking
space flickering with brilliant orange light.
CAESAR
Wow! How’s it doing that?
DEON
You a magician or something,
mister?
MR. SAINT JAMES
Something. One of you must read it
out loud.
CAESAR ...
to the wooden doors.
Standing in front of them, he opens them both at the same
time with a flourish and stands back.
As the three boys move closer, they see an old piece of paper
filled with printed words, floating inside an infinite looking
space flickering with brilliant orange light.
CAESAR
Wow! How’s it doing that?
DEON
You a magician or something,
mister?
MR. SAINT JAMES
Something. One of you must read it
out loud.
CAESAR ...
#Halloween
362 reads
8 Comments
Flashing Bunny Ears
the end of a long, long school week
i get to go home and...
oops! no i don't
Trunk or Treat tonight
decorated cars
families slowly driving through
candy coming at them from all angles
last year
when i taught 6th grade
we were studying mythology
i was Medusa
i'd found a woven plastic headband
threaded the tails of rubber snakes through it
the snakes stuck out in all directions
everyone loved it
this year?
fuck costumes
fuck everything
fuck TJ twerking his fat ass in class
i'm...
i get to go home and...
oops! no i don't
Trunk or Treat tonight
decorated cars
families slowly driving through
candy coming at them from all angles
last year
when i taught 6th grade
we were studying mythology
i was Medusa
i'd found a woven plastic headband
threaded the tails of rubber snakes through it
the snakes stuck out in all directions
everyone loved it
this year?
fuck costumes
fuck everything
fuck TJ twerking his fat ass in class
i'm...
#children
#LifeStruggles
#Halloween
208 reads
9 Comments
Nails and Flowers (Halloween Syck House Series)
Wrapped in spiked metal, inlaid with runes of imprisonment
Demon stitched with a layer of angelic skin given by hell as a gift,
“From head to toe nails were hammered into warped flesh
Causing agonizing pain, never giving the imprisoned no rest,
“Ancient chains of binding were also applied
Entering the body through the groin, arms and third eye,
“Along with being drowned in blood until the last breath
As tears of brimstone long ago have already been wept,
“Every year when the celebration of Halloween was strong...
Demon stitched with a layer of angelic skin given by hell as a gift,
“From head to toe nails were hammered into warped flesh
Causing agonizing pain, never giving the imprisoned no rest,
“Ancient chains of binding were also applied
Entering the body through the groin, arms and third eye,
“Along with being drowned in blood until the last breath
As tears of brimstone long ago have already been wept,
“Every year when the celebration of Halloween was strong...
#dark
#Halloween
#hurt
189 reads
2 Comments
Halloween
Hear the Spectres
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
wailing through the night
haunting their homes
where they once lived
hear the Witches
Cackling with glee
as they savour
the terror on the children's face
hear the hags sing their tune
on Halloween Night
they fly again
Until dawn.
#Halloween
1067 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Halloween by Top Critiquers Poems