Poems About First Love Seeking Honest Critique
#FirstLove
Poems about first love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 2:39pm
13th Mar 2025 2:39pm
First, But Not Complete
Beneath the bloom of your new dawn,
A new life stirs—your first to spawn
In sacred times before her cry,
I touched your love that will not die.
Though deeper loves now call your heart,
I fucked your kind uncharted parts.
Congratulations soft and sweet,
For I was first, but not complete.
Your eyes are soft for what comes next,
But I’ll always be your faithful ex.
A new life stirs—your first to spawn
In sacred times before her cry,
I touched your love that will not die.
Though deeper loves now call your heart,
I fucked your kind uncharted parts.
Congratulations soft and sweet,
For I was first, but not complete.
Your eyes are soft for what comes next,
But I’ll always be your faithful ex.
#FirstLove
#pregnancy
#sex
142 reads
1 Comment
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 2:54pm
20th Feb 2025 2:54pm
Her Burial Site
Staring at her photograph on her tombstone,
I'm hit by nostalgia and transported back to her life—
34 years, two months, and 11 days of vibrancy,
now frozen in time.
Her energy and grace live on in my memory,
despite the two decades that have passed.
Her children chose burial over cremation,
and as I stand by her grave,
I'm struck by the reality of her physical decay beneath the earth.
I can't help but think of what must remain—
a skeletal echo of the person I once held close.
Teeth, hair, perhaps some stubborn fibers of the clothes...
I'm hit by nostalgia and transported back to her life—
34 years, two months, and 11 days of vibrancy,
now frozen in time.
Her energy and grace live on in my memory,
despite the two decades that have passed.
Her children chose burial over cremation,
and as I stand by her grave,
I'm struck by the reality of her physical decay beneath the earth.
I can't help but think of what must remain—
a skeletal echo of the person I once held close.
Teeth, hair, perhaps some stubborn fibers of the clothes...
#FirstLove
#LifeCycle
#sex #teens
#sex #teens
131 reads
1 Comment
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 6:37pm
15th Feb 2025 6:37pm
THE RING
Perfect gift for a special one
Not at random for just ANY ONE
An indestructible expression
of eternal ascension
Fitting for loved ones, lovers or between friends
Band of eternal circle with neither flaw nor end.
Round and round – no corners to turn
Infinite lessons, yet, still left to learn
As all within the circle closer become
Venturing hidden corners still to come
Hearts all beat and join as one.
Perfect expression of an infinite love
Between loved ones or friends joined above
Perfect emblem of an...
Not at random for just ANY ONE
An indestructible expression
of eternal ascension
Fitting for loved ones, lovers or between friends
Band of eternal circle with neither flaw nor end.
Round and round – no corners to turn
Infinite lessons, yet, still left to learn
As all within the circle closer become
Venturing hidden corners still to come
Hearts all beat and join as one.
Perfect expression of an infinite love
Between loved ones or friends joined above
Perfect emblem of an...
#BestFriend
#FirstLove
#friendship
#lover
#marriage
2 reads
0 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 7:18pm
8th Feb 2025 7:18pm
VIRGINITY
With such class and sheer elegance
Her demeanor called for reverence.
Like winter-white fresh-fallen snow
Her nudity covering [skin] reflected a radiant glow.
Wholesome and complete, her barren womb
Fertile-ready for a love seed to bloom
When the time be right
And when glistening stars would shine bright.
There she walked with a humble stride
Simple with every step and soft strides of an innocent bride
Her body full of radiant light
The winter-white virgin is her husband’s delight.
Pure and transparent as summer rain
Her...
Her demeanor called for reverence.
Like winter-white fresh-fallen snow
Her nudity covering [skin] reflected a radiant glow.
Wholesome and complete, her barren womb
Fertile-ready for a love seed to bloom
When the time be right
And when glistening stars would shine bright.
There she walked with a humble stride
Simple with every step and soft strides of an innocent bride
Her body full of radiant light
The winter-white virgin is her husband’s delight.
Pure and transparent as summer rain
Her...
#admiration
#beauty
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#husband
4 reads
1 Comment
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 1:48pm
5th Feb 2025 1:48pm
First Kiss
Our lips traveled miles,
A hundred or more,
To meet and ask for the
Promise of tomorrows.
Warmth and moist,
As an uncharted land.
A single kiss from Virginia
Two kids with unknown futures.
Her tongue grew quiet,
Becoming a delicate envoy,
She carried a whisper of lust
And placed it on my lips.
Her tongue was pure in its intent
And promised me heaven.
Virginia whispered, “Later,”
And so it was to be.
A hundred or more,
To meet and ask for the
Promise of tomorrows.
Warmth and moist,
As an uncharted land.
A single kiss from Virginia
Two kids with unknown futures.
Her tongue grew quiet,
Becoming a delicate envoy,
She carried a whisper of lust
And placed it on my lips.
Her tongue was pure in its intent
And promised me heaven.
Virginia whispered, “Later,”
And so it was to be.
#FirstLove
#teens
260 reads
1 Comment
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 11:25pm
23rd Jan 2025 11:25pm
Sketch lines
I know we are young
I know we have no idea where we’ll end up
We’re just finding our way
We won’t stay the same
and I don’t want to
neither do you
I am hiding in the minutes, the seconds
that I get to kiss you
Some day will come, when we break up
and I have to miss you
Cause we’ll fight, come undone
Too many bullets in our guns
To stay safe
To stay this way
We are just sketching out the lines
Too much still undefined
So hold me tighter
Than you’ve ever done before
Let’s come closer ...
I know we have no idea where we’ll end up
We’re just finding our way
We won’t stay the same
and I don’t want to
neither do you
I am hiding in the minutes, the seconds
that I get to kiss you
Some day will come, when we break up
and I have to miss you
Cause we’ll fight, come undone
Too many bullets in our guns
To stay safe
To stay this way
We are just sketching out the lines
Too much still undefined
So hold me tighter
Than you’ve ever done before
Let’s come closer ...
#anxiety
#FirstLove
#love
#relationships
#teens
126 reads
2 Comments
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 1:58am
22nd Jan 2025 1:58am
To Love the Tsunami
It's been years
Since the solitude and still waters of my body met his
His social warmth and plummeting waves
refreshing to my little puddle
A saltless ocean I can't help but sink in
I can still unearth admiration in observing him
His weathered and adorned hot-glued framed glasses
Their fragile state taken back again and again
No matter how many times their nose-bridge spine snaps
or its stretched arms loses the tiniest screw I have ever seen
...
Since the solitude and still waters of my body met his
His social warmth and plummeting waves
refreshing to my little puddle
A saltless ocean I can't help but sink in
I can still unearth admiration in observing him
His weathered and adorned hot-glued framed glasses
Their fragile state taken back again and again
No matter how many times their nose-bridge spine snaps
or its stretched arms loses the tiniest screw I have ever seen
...
#admiration
#beauty
#FirstLove
#love
#relationships
134 reads
4 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
What Love Is
I lied when I said it was infatuation
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
#FirstLove
#IMissYou
#sadness
#shame
#women
168 reads
1 Comment
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
243 reads
4 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 1:33pm
15th Dec 2024 1:33pm
Young Love in 94
In the glow of the harvest moon's embrace,
Debra found a tender space.
A church hayride in '94
A time of wonder. A time of grace.
Fourteen summers graced her face,
With eyes that sparkled in autumn's lace.
A boy she’d known for all their lives
Joined her there in that special place.
Amidst the laughter, the creak of the cart,
She felt a flutter within her heart.
In the hay they sat, her church friends near,
The boy was sweet and kind in heart.
With his kiss she blushed and smiled.
With soft embrace his...
Debra found a tender space.
A church hayride in '94
A time of wonder. A time of grace.
Fourteen summers graced her face,
With eyes that sparkled in autumn's lace.
A boy she’d known for all their lives
Joined her there in that special place.
Amidst the laughter, the creak of the cart,
She felt a flutter within her heart.
In the hay they sat, her church friends near,
The boy was sweet and kind in heart.
With his kiss she blushed and smiled.
With soft embrace his...
#FirstLove
#teens
179 reads
2 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 5:55pm
9th Dec 2024 5:55pm
Love from afar
Call me insane, I wear it well,
Insanely in love, it’s my secret spell.
Crazy to think I could be enough,
Yet here I am, in this whirlwind of love.
Demented dreams, I hold you tight,
Frantic thoughts consume my nights.
But you, my dear, deserve the sun,
It’s mad to think our fates are one.
You’re blind to the light you truly are,
Crazy to doubt you could go far.
Deranged, perhaps, but I still see,
A beauty in you that was always meant to be set free
Insanely in love, it’s my secret spell.
Crazy to think I could be enough,
Yet here I am, in this whirlwind of love.
Demented dreams, I hold you tight,
Frantic thoughts consume my nights.
But you, my dear, deserve the sun,
It’s mad to think our fates are one.
You’re blind to the light you truly are,
Crazy to doubt you could go far.
Deranged, perhaps, but I still see,
A beauty in you that was always meant to be set free
#acceptance
#FirstLove
#healing
171 reads
1 Comment
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
What Could’ve Been
Time has passed
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
#crush
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
#respect
311 reads
8 Comments
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