Poems About First Love Seeking Honest Critique
#FirstLove
Poems about first love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Baldwin
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 5:29pm
3rd Apr 2024 5:29pm
His Inability to write seductively
I see your face,
your form,
both works of art
both wonders,
and realize
how feeble’s my ability
however much I think
I am adept at poetry
to capture you,
to rapture you,
with words.
And if I tried,
I know
that from the start
I’d show myself
incompetent,
absurd,
so verbally impoverished,
a literary blunderer.
your form,
both works of art
both wonders,
and realize
how feeble’s my ability
however much I think
I am adept at poetry
to capture you,
to rapture you,
with words.
And if I tried,
I know
that from the start
I’d show myself
incompetent,
absurd,
so verbally impoverished,
a literary blunderer.
#WritingPoetry
#FirstLove
82 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
Eustasia
#relationships
#FirstLove
102 reads
7 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
28th Feb 2024 9:37pm
28th Feb 2024 9:37pm
Surrendering to Love
It was late summer in 1950. On the third floor of the Adolphus Hotel in downtown Dallas, Thomas and Ruth found their way to a bedroom filled with soft natural light from the curtains that faced north. Within minutes the floor was littered with clothing. Soon, Thomas was poised at the edge of Ruth's sacred place. He softly asked, “Are you sure?”
Tears came into Ruth’s eyes. A 26-year-old Dallas businessman was more powerful that a 17-year-old girl from modest means. His question reflected great restraint and respect at such a moment.
She said, “Yes” with a voice that...
Tears came into Ruth’s eyes. A 26-year-old Dallas businessman was more powerful that a 17-year-old girl from modest means. His question reflected great restraint and respect at such a moment.
She said, “Yes” with a voice that...
#love
#sex
#FirstLove
114 reads
3 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 2:19pm
27th Feb 2024 2:19pm
Blinded By Love
In the summer of 1950, Dallas, Texas, was abuzz with excitement. Seventeen-year-old Ruth, with her sun-kissed hair and radiant smile, had won a local swimsuit contest, sending ripples of admiration through the community. Her parents beamed with pride as their daughter became a local sensation, gracing various service organizations with her presence, captivating hearts with her charm.
Among the admirers was Thomas, a dashing young man in his mid-twenties. Entranced by Ruth's beauty and spirit, he found himself drawn to her magnetic presence. Despite being eight years her senior and...
Among the admirers was Thomas, a dashing young man in his mid-twenties. Entranced by Ruth's beauty and spirit, he found himself drawn to her magnetic presence. Despite being eight years her senior and...
#love
#sex
#FirstLove
113 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
RESISTANCE
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
#FirstLove
#seductive
188 reads
3 Comments
athar
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 4:26pm
21st Feb 2024 4:26pm
Flowers and Roses
#love
#FirstLove
45 reads
0 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 7:16pm
8th Jan 2024 7:16pm
Love at first sight
The first moment that we saw each other i was running down the street,
I was shocked in mesmer and at that moment my mind came to freeze,
Called you ‘hey lady’ to tell you how i feel,
Beauty of a goddess, g’bumps all over, my mouth went to zip.
Kicked with confusion, charmed me like no one did before,
Heart pounded stronger but u brought the energy I never had beyond the zone,
Then we talked for hours, said baby you have to be the one,
You’re the one to die for n i wish to call you hun.
The only thing i think of is for you to be...
I was shocked in mesmer and at that moment my mind came to freeze,
Called you ‘hey lady’ to tell you how i feel,
Beauty of a goddess, g’bumps all over, my mouth went to zip.
Kicked with confusion, charmed me like no one did before,
Heart pounded stronger but u brought the energy I never had beyond the zone,
Then we talked for hours, said baby you have to be the one,
You’re the one to die for n i wish to call you hun.
The only thing i think of is for you to be...
#love
#romantic
#admiration
#FirstLove
#crush
167 reads
3 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
5th Jan 2024 8:15am
5th Jan 2024 8:15am
OH MY LOVE!ALL MY LOVE!
He said to me, He Who Is My Heart, He said:
"Don't love me because I AM God,"
"Don't Love me because I AM Lord Jesus Christ."
"Don't love me because I AM The Lord of Hosts"
"Love me for me; LORD"
"Don't love me because I AM God,"
"Don't Love me because I AM Lord Jesus Christ."
"Don't love me because I AM The Lord of Hosts"
"Love me for me; LORD"
#love
#ILoveYou
#God #FirstLove
#God #FirstLove
101 reads
2 Comments
TeeTeeAlyriAh0764
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 1:48pm
4th Dec 2023 1:48pm
Remix of "That's What I Do..."
#relationships
#romantic
#FirstLove
#sensual
#passion
157 reads
4 Comments
Andreoliveira
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 00:04am
27th Nov 2023 00:04am
Lovers Paradise
Every day and every night.
I fantasise of you.
Making love to you.
Your glance excites every part of my being. Your kisses electrifies me.
Each kiss revitalises my spirit.
My soul.
The essence of you being you.
I love it.
I adore it.
I desire it.
I want to cater to your deepest needs.
Be of service to you.
Let me water your seeds.
Fertilise my mind with your knowledge, sacredness and power.
My beloved
Eme nga ku zola
I praise the most...
I fantasise of you.
Making love to you.
Your glance excites every part of my being. Your kisses electrifies me.
Each kiss revitalises my spirit.
My soul.
The essence of you being you.
I love it.
I adore it.
I desire it.
I want to cater to your deepest needs.
Be of service to you.
Let me water your seeds.
Fertilise my mind with your knowledge, sacredness and power.
My beloved
Eme nga ku zola
I praise the most...
#breakup
#beauty
#admiration
#MovingOn
#FirstLove
197 reads
0 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
10th Nov 2023 9:44am
10th Nov 2023 9:44am
Matters of Attraction
My beloved showed me beauty, the strong
nuclear force, binding quarks —
and its marvellous spin-off, uniting bodies.
Spanning atoms or stars, mysterious
glue, exchange of tangling tokens,
trinkets, touches, words —
body-breathed, fingertip written,
tracing undulating contours.
Following spacetime dimples, planets blindly
orbit their star.
Charmed, we lie, still,
eye to eye, in a darkened room, and worlds
fall away. The cosmos shrinks
wrapping us.
nuclear force, binding quarks —
and its marvellous spin-off, uniting bodies.
Spanning atoms or stars, mysterious
glue, exchange of tangling tokens,
trinkets, touches, words —
body-breathed, fingertip written,
tracing undulating contours.
Following spacetime dimples, planets blindly
orbit their star.
Charmed, we lie, still,
eye to eye, in a darkened room, and worlds
fall away. The cosmos shrinks
wrapping us.
#BestFriend
#relationships
#LongDistanceRelationship #FirstLove
#LongDistanceRelationship #FirstLove
153 reads
2 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
7th Nov 2023 12:29pm
7th Nov 2023 12:29pm
Evidence of a Life
In high school, photos were taped to my bedroom wall.
They were evidence of a life,
memories of friendships found and lost.
When we made love, I thought of those faces looking on,
some approvingly.
They were evidence of a life,
memories of friendships found and lost.
When we made love, I thought of those faces looking on,
some approvingly.
#sex
#friendship
#FirstLove
172 reads
6 Comments
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