Poems About First Love by Top Critiquers
#FirstLove
Poems about first love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 3:08am
6th Oct 2024 3:08am
The Spider and her lover the Fly
Spider
I have been sitting here for hours, spinning my silken threads, waiting for him to fly by.
He has promised me countless numbers of times that tonight will be the night that he will visit me. I made sure that the threads were glistening in their finest diamonds and my legs. Oh my legs are as sexy as can be. There are eight long and lean made for flexibility. To entice and invite him into my web, you see.
Fly
How do I get wrapped up with these crazy dames? I mean I flew past one time and she caught me. The romp with the twists and the turns....
I have been sitting here for hours, spinning my silken threads, waiting for him to fly by.
He has promised me countless numbers of times that tonight will be the night that he will visit me. I made sure that the threads were glistening in their finest diamonds and my legs. Oh my legs are as sexy as can be. There are eight long and lean made for flexibility. To entice and invite him into my web, you see.
Fly
How do I get wrapped up with these crazy dames? I mean I flew past one time and she caught me. The romp with the twists and the turns....
#FirstLove
#obsession
#sacrifice
228 reads
14 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
16th Sep 2023 7:05pm
16th Sep 2023 7:05pm
SEX VERSUS LOVE
It has taken
me a long time
to discover an
amazing truth.
SEX
last for
a SHORT
time, at
BEST.
BUT LOVE
lasts and
satisfies for
a lifetime. I am
Thankful I
can have BOTH
and know which
amazing gift
period I am in.
Meet me at the
Kissing Place and
today we'll enjoy both.
OKAY?
me a long time
to discover an
amazing truth.
SEX
last for
a SHORT
time, at
BEST.
BUT LOVE
lasts and
satisfies for
a lifetime. I am
Thankful I
can have BOTH
and know which
amazing gift
period I am in.
Meet me at the
Kissing Place and
today we'll enjoy both.
OKAY?
#happiness
#honesty
#gratitude
#admiration
#FirstLove
358 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 11:30am
29th Sep 2020 11:30am
TO BE HELD AND HUG
If you ever been hurt by someone who you thought was in your corner, only to find out later that someone was merely testing your ability to trust and believe within them. Then you should recognize the true silhouette of the shadow that stands before you, even though you may think that you know them only to be fooling yourself into believing. That they have your best interest at heart when it comes to loving and caring for you. For sometimes we all have a need and want to be held within the confine, arms of someone's heart and soul as we stop and look and listen to the stillness of our own...
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
752 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
RESISTANCE
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
#FirstLove
#seductive
306 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
31st May 2021 9:16pm
31st May 2021 9:16pm
my Adonai sweet Adonai I love you
I am the drought upon the land keening for moonshine
will it ever rain on Hollywood again?
they are the merry making mischief makers
chaos is still reigning
the little ones are indulged
I am trying to fit them aboard
the heaven's are being shook
the abyss is too
his will be done
I do sympathize
but the plague cannot be upon the land again
I pray for truth to please her Father
my spirit seeks the humble abodes to find shelter in the storm
I am afraid he is so angry
I've given as he's asked but to his own he won't be...
will it ever rain on Hollywood again?
they are the merry making mischief makers
chaos is still reigning
the little ones are indulged
I am trying to fit them aboard
the heaven's are being shook
the abyss is too
his will be done
I do sympathize
but the plague cannot be upon the land again
I pray for truth to please her Father
my spirit seeks the humble abodes to find shelter in the storm
I am afraid he is so angry
I've given as he's asked but to his own he won't be...
#love
#lover
#FirstLove
389 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
Eustasia
#relationships
#FirstLove
216 reads
7 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
7th Jun 2021 11:31am
7th Jun 2021 11:31am
Shatters Aftermaths Afters Ever Afters
And a window to the surface of the sea
Opened before me.
Lost and found in a depth instilled tranquility.
A womb infused diffused infusion diffusion of gravity.
That summer.
A white out – black out
black out – white out
Glass stained -
Stained glass
of
sand -
Sun
and
the will
to
become
In
the wave machine
of
sight & sound
sound & sight
soundless sights
sightless sounds
nightless days
dayless nights...
Opened before me.
Lost and found in a depth instilled tranquility.
A womb infused diffused infusion diffusion of gravity.
That summer.
A white out – black out
black out – white out
Glass stained -
Stained glass
of
sand -
Sun
and
the will
to
become
In
the wave machine
of
sight & sound
sound & sight
soundless sights
sightless sounds
nightless days
dayless nights...
#love
#dark
#summer
#magic
#FirstLove
326 reads
4 Comments
eroseternal
Tim Eros
Tim Eros
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2019 5:27pm
22nd Aug 2019 5:27pm
Vanilla Fetish
#love
#sex
#BDSM #FirstLove
#BDSM #FirstLove
665 reads
8 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
16th Oct 2019 11:17pm
16th Oct 2019 11:17pm
Letters
I remember when you and your cousin Ann came to stay with your grandmother one summer weekend when you were 17. I first saw you down at the pond. I couldn’t take my eyes off of you, you made sure of that. Then Sunday morning at church…temptation disguised as the face of an angel.
You went back home but we wrote…
***
I’ve been rereading a couple of the letters that you’ve sent me over the years...some with a graceful fade into a yellowed tinge.
And it seems as days the time that’s flown.
How many pages did I crumple trying to find the...
You went back home but we wrote…
***
I’ve been rereading a couple of the letters that you’ve sent me over the years...some with a graceful fade into a yellowed tinge.
And it seems as days the time that’s flown.
How many pages did I crumple trying to find the...
#love
#romantic
#FirstLove
597 reads
4 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
10th May 2023 6:12am
10th May 2023 6:12am
Sunshine for Your Inner Sunflower
Sunshine for Your Inner Sunflower
I lie by your side as a sultry summer breeze blows ripples in your skirt. Leaves rustle in the wind. Your dark feathery hair is blown about. It cascades down your shoulders in waves of silky gossamer. Petals are strewn around us in a carpet of nature’s bullion but soft as a whisper on a spring breeze. The field is a wild garden alive with splashes of sunlit stalks crowned like sun kings.
Gazing into your eyes an ocean of sadness spreads out before me. Dark shadings of love are shadowed by numbing coolness. I see your uncertainty as you...
I lie by your side as a sultry summer breeze blows ripples in your skirt. Leaves rustle in the wind. Your dark feathery hair is blown about. It cascades down your shoulders in waves of silky gossamer. Petals are strewn around us in a carpet of nature’s bullion but soft as a whisper on a spring breeze. The field is a wild garden alive with splashes of sunlit stalks crowned like sun kings.
Gazing into your eyes an ocean of sadness spreads out before me. Dark shadings of love are shadowed by numbing coolness. I see your uncertainty as you...
#regret
#flowers
#FirstLove
#SelfDiscovery
#PersonalGrowth
268 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2020 3:43am
3rd Jul 2020 3:43am
My Rose
Mm… my silken rose petals, caressing the softness, of my supple skin
The pillow of his desires where, “Passion’ becomes ecstasies’ greatest sin
Replace in your mind …the whispers of his sultry wishes
Oo…my love, take my breath away, with your tender enchanting kisses
Mmm… pleasure felt… making my temple melt
In the abyss…. of my moisten nature
My soul I bare unto you, worshipping me with your gentle hands
Laying on my back, fingers snaking deep inside me ….as they wickedly dance
Closing my eyes, your thoughts, roaming seductively over me ...
The pillow of his desires where, “Passion’ becomes ecstasies’ greatest sin
Replace in your mind …the whispers of his sultry wishes
Oo…my love, take my breath away, with your tender enchanting kisses
Mmm… pleasure felt… making my temple melt
In the abyss…. of my moisten nature
My soul I bare unto you, worshipping me with your gentle hands
Laying on my back, fingers snaking deep inside me ….as they wickedly dance
Closing my eyes, your thoughts, roaming seductively over me ...
#lover
#FirstLove
1793 reads
19 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
18th May 2022 1:55am
18th May 2022 1:55am
Need, Want, and Desire
Need, Want, and Desire
For years
I thought
I needed
Her,
But her absence
And abandoning
Behaviors
Eventually
Taught me
Through
Loneliness
That
I really
Didn't
Need her
At all.
I thought
Then
That
I wanted
Her,
But
What good
Was that
When she
Hardly knew
That I
Was alive?
Then
I discovered,
I had
Desired her,
To be near,
To know,
To be
Within
The orbit
Of...
For years
I thought
I needed
Her,
But her absence
And abandoning
Behaviors
Eventually
Taught me
Through
Loneliness
That
I really
Didn't
Need her
At all.
I thought
Then
That
I wanted
Her,
But
What good
Was that
When she
Hardly knew
That I
Was alive?
Then
I discovered,
I had
Desired her,
To be near,
To know,
To be
Within
The orbit
Of...
#FirstLove
#obsession
810 reads
12 Comments
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