Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
wallyroo92
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
The Misfit So Alone
On a sleepless night I recall on the past
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
#music
#memories
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#NaPoWriMo2021
438 reads
10 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 10:53pm
26th Aug 2024 10:53pm
Thanking I'm Charlie Chann
To my alter ego whom I respect and trust
don't self-destruct and become my obituary
fading to dark drowning in Moo Goo Gai Pan
becoming a psychopathic narcissistic eggroll
thanking I'm Charlie Chann
don't self-destruct and become my obituary
fading to dark drowning in Moo Goo Gai Pan
becoming a psychopathic narcissistic eggroll
thanking I'm Charlie Chann
#emptiness
#FeelingLost
#identity #mirror
#identity #mirror
161 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2023 9:25am
2nd Nov 2023 9:25am
white shirt...
I am
hanging
on the hanger
of hopes
I am
hiding
in his pretty white shirt
thinking that
he will embrace me
n According to him
I am
the button of his shirt
so if I breaks
and falls at his feet
he will throw me away...
hanging
on the hanger
of hopes
I am
hiding
in his pretty white shirt
thinking that
he will embrace me
n According to him
I am
the button of his shirt
so if I breaks
and falls at his feet
he will throw me away...
#FeelingLost
205 reads
10 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
16th Apr 2022 2:22am
16th Apr 2022 2:22am
hauntingly
alone in this
world
alone between
us
alone within
ourselves
despite the
touching
despite the
feelings
despite the
love
ghost moving
from second
to second
blind
and
lost
world
alone between
us
alone within
ourselves
despite the
touching
despite the
feelings
despite the
love
ghost moving
from second
to second
blind
and
lost
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#FeelingLost
352 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
12th Jul 2024 00:49am
12th Jul 2024 00:49am
problem at the bank
sick of hearing you can do it online when I so obviously can’t you understand that I’ve mixed up all my passwords and I just want to send money to my son ..
#FeelingLost
134 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 12:53pm
15th Apr 2024 12:53pm
Butterflies don’t get trapped in spider webs, so I must be something different…
this web of my own choosing
I even helped to build
its supporting structure
has upheld me
and those I love
through countless trials
invisible, sticky strings
of friendship
holding tight
preventing flight
I don’t want to tear the fabric
for those who still belong
but they’re too heavy to take with me
I am afraid to fly
alone.
I don’t know where I’m going
and I am afraid to stay
grounded
lest my wings (soul) dry up
drop off
the path...
I even helped to build
its supporting structure
has upheld me
and those I love
through countless trials
invisible, sticky strings
of friendship
holding tight
preventing flight
I don’t want to tear the fabric
for those who still belong
but they’re too heavy to take with me
I am afraid to fly
alone.
I don’t know where I’m going
and I am afraid to stay
grounded
lest my wings (soul) dry up
drop off
the path...
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
#escape
#risk
#NaPoWriMo2024
195 reads
6 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2024 2:37am
22nd Mar 2024 2:37am
Again and Again
Feeling like I have something to gain,
I dust my pencil off again.
Some letters march to their end
because I have writer’s block again.
Other letters go against the grain;
they are looking to start a war again.
Banding together, they do what they intend;
now I am crying from what they said again.
Here I am harvesting my pain,
hoping to use it to fix myself again.
Making a stand, then I have to pretend
to get my bearings and have a grip again.
Seems organic, and I feel perfectly sane.
No, I do not want to fail again.
Yes, I...
I dust my pencil off again.
Some letters march to their end
because I have writer’s block again.
Other letters go against the grain;
they are looking to start a war again.
Banding together, they do what they intend;
now I am crying from what they said again.
Here I am harvesting my pain,
hoping to use it to fix myself again.
Making a stand, then I have to pretend
to get my bearings and have a grip again.
Seems organic, and I feel perfectly sane.
No, I do not want to fail again.
Yes, I...
#rhyming
#MentalHealth
#myself
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
35 reads
23 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
7th Dec 2022 6:44am
7th Dec 2022 6:44am
In Memory of The Suede Beige Ottoman Chair (A Christmas Funeral)
#sex
#Christmas
#FeelingLost
239 reads
4 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 5:12pm
19th Nov 2024 5:12pm
Lost Souls _ with "Adagio"
sunken within the consuming mist,
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
#FeelingLost
#collaboration
163 reads
9 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 5:27pm
17th Sep 2024 5:27pm
Nothing lasts forever
There's no use exhuming
dead feelings
You'll find nothing
but
brittle bones of sordid reminder
that
nothing is immortal
Not even feelings are...
dead feelings
You'll find nothing
but
brittle bones of sordid reminder
that
nothing is immortal
Not even feelings are...
#emptiness
#FeelingLost
#heartbroken #sadness
#heartbroken #sadness
256 reads
8 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
606 reads
5 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th May 2021 9:00pm
5th May 2021 9:00pm
Without ropes
Cold steel
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
#identity
#FeelingLost
#BDSM
582 reads
31 Comments
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