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amiss
she snuck by quietly
a shadow
hung off in the corner
fluttering
in winds so strong last may
i felt needed
as we had slipped away
confused
confined
left within the clutter
clouded and consuming
trembled
marks masking misgivings
another darkened day
i stare into the ether
eternally gone astray
noting
what if this is it
nothing
languid, amiss
it remains
a mess
life
she no longer stays
a shadow
hung off in the corner
fluttering
in winds so strong last may
i felt needed
as we had slipped away
confused
confined
left within the clutter
clouded and consuming
trembled
marks masking misgivings
another darkened day
i stare into the ether
eternally gone astray
noting
what if this is it
nothing
languid, amiss
it remains
a mess
life
she no longer stays
Published 27th Sep 2021
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27th Sep 2021 8:14pm
hi there dearest Tim this is a hauntingly sad and passionate write
I feel the pain of the write...
I feel the pain of the write...
11th Oct 2021 10:31pm
Thanks Brenda, these feelings come and they go so it is best to write them out.
