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Rebirth
A poem about the above
I would like to do again
There is something about rebirth
That is so hard to explain
Could it be written,
And expounded upon
In a poetry competition
As an answer to a question
Rebirth indeed is unusual
To others of different faith
It’s not a practical
Belief to believe
But to talk of rebirth
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf
So can we have a competition?
With rebirth as a theme
Could we call other’s attention…
To life, lived after and again
I would like to do again
There is something about rebirth
That is so hard to explain
Could it be written,
And expounded upon
In a poetry competition
As an answer to a question
Rebirth indeed is unusual
To others of different faith
It’s not a practical
Belief to believe
But to talk of rebirth
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf
So can we have a competition?
With rebirth as a theme
Could we call other’s attention…
To life, lived after and again
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5th Apr 2013 4:10pm
Re: Rebirth
5th Apr 2013 4:12pm
"But to talk of rebirth
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf "
Amen to that! and yes to the comp. :)
Red
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf "
Amen to that! and yes to the comp. :)
Red
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5th Apr 2013 4:25pm
INDEED:) LIFE LIVED TO FEEL A 1000 HAVE BEEN SAVORED!!!
WONDERFUL Dear Grace:)
WONDERFUL Dear Grace:)
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5th Apr 2013 4:47pm
Yes, thats true. We never know about life cycles. Thank you Soul for reading and commenting.
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5th Apr 2013 4:34pm
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5th Apr 2013 8:17pm
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5th Apr 2013 10:41pm
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6th Apr 2013 1:57am
"But to talk of rebirth
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf"
Oh Grace, that part alone touched my heart deeply, and strikes a chord with me. This whole poem was magnificent, actually, and written in a very profound, yet light-hearted manner that makes it quite approachable to the reader. Well done, dear friend, well done indeed! :)
A chance to live
Another life once again
To turn a new leaf"
Oh Grace, that part alone touched my heart deeply, and strikes a chord with me. This whole poem was magnificent, actually, and written in a very profound, yet light-hearted manner that makes it quite approachable to the reader. Well done, dear friend, well done indeed! :)
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6th Apr 2013 2:21am
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2013 4:46am
well done grace
pondering too
Strider
pondering too
Strider
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